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A girl's Story... :: Episode I

"How Everything starts..."

I want to thank all custom content creators. I want to thank Galilea for the wonderful house. This is my very first story so if you rate it and comment that would be very nice. Sorry for spelling mistakes. English isn't my first lenguage. Hope you enyoy reading my story!

A girl's Story... :: Episode I

"How Everything starts..."

I want to thank all custom content creators. I want to thank Galilea for the wonderful house. This is my very first story so if you rate it and comment that would be very nice. Sorry for spelling mistakes. English isn't my first lenguage. Hope you enyoy reading my story! My name is Jasmine DuJardin. I'm almost going to turn 13. And this is my diary... This is Jean, my father. He is from Veronaville but when he was 20 he came to study to Pleasantview. In Pleasentview's college, he meet my mother Alexandra. This is my mother Alexandra. She comes from Strangetown but like my father, she came to Plaesantview to study and here she meet him. And here it's where we live. A small house outside of Pleasantview. We rent this house. We don't have many money since my mother couldn't finish college and my father works cleaning bathrooms but we are okay. This is my room. It is small. It has one bed, one painting from Grandma and my teddybear. I can't ask more. Mom told me that She and Dad are saving money to buy an appartament at downtown. She says that I will have a bigger bedroom over there. At school I'm always alone because I'm poor and the girls say that that it's "SOOO NOT COOL" and then they start to laugh... When we move to downtown I'm going to change school. Maybe that will be better. Brittany Wright and Samantha Garcia are the girls that bother me most. These are Samantha and Brittany. Both are rich... and mean. They laugh at me all the time, everyday, every second, every week... I've always loved art. The children at my class think that I'm weird because none of them like it. The girls say that I'm a weirda and all what I do sucks. Sometimes it makes me so sad that I start to cry and the school call my parents... I hate when they do that because my father yell at me and tell me that I'm still a baby and that I will never grow up and that makes me even more sad. Friday, January 13th.

Tommorow it's my birthday. Tommorow I'll be a teen. Today me, mom and dad went to see an appartament. It was the cheapest we could find. §10.000. My dad didn't liked it at all because it stinked and everything was very old and shabby. My mother said if we buyed it, we would have enough money to remodelate it a little bit and it would look okay. Dad said okay. They bought it.
Next week we are moving. Saturday, January 14th.

Today was my birthday. I'm now a teen. Mom promised that everything would be better and that she would be always by my side. Dead or alive, she would never forget about me. Never. She gave me a little bird she did when she was a girl. I cried. I hugged her. She hugged me. We were both crying.

Today when I blew the candles, I remembered when I was a toddler. When I turned to a child. When I turned 5... Then a sparkle appeared. It was so bright. So beautiful. I will never forget it. When the sparkle disappeared, I turned a teen. Now I can go everywhere alone. But I'm still too young to go to parties and those stuff. Hopefully, now it will be easier to make friends. I can't wait till I go to my new school. Everything is getting better and better like mom said. Sunday, 15th January.

I hate my life. This is the worst day of my entire life. My parents just died. It's a weird story... There was 1 witness. She told me the story. Her name is Kaylynn Zaidi. This is what she told me:

"I was shocked. I've never seen something like that before. In the car there was a man. He had red hair. He looked drunk. Next to a tree, there was a woman, the one you call your mother. I saw next to her a man running away. She was shocked too. Suddenly, the man in the car crushed the woman and the tree. The other man runned away. After that I went back to my car and called the ambulance and the police. Then I closed my eyes. I couldn't watch." Now that I think about it, maybe my father was drunk. My mother was cheating on him. My mother was kissing or whatever with the man. My father saw them. My father was so angry that he tried to crush my mother and the man but the man ran away. He finished crushing with the tree too. He killed my mother and himself. It has sence. Now everything it's clearer... but I still have problems. Where am I going to live now? The appartament won't be finished till one week more. We rented the old house and now probably I will have to leave that house.
 Plus I just turned 13. I'm not old enough to live by me self alone. I don't have family. With who am I going to stay with...? :: TO BE CONTINUED :: I miss my parents so much but I know they are still with me and that they will never forget about me like I will never forget about them...

A girl's story... - EP 1

Feb 20, 2007 by Rejected.one
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    8 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 21, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:

    Good start...can't wait for next part.\:rah\:

    On Feb 21, 2007 wrote:

    Wow the sotry really spun around, I was wondering what is the cheat to go school with them.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 21, 2007 wrote:

    \:eek\: really want to know what's going to happen Good job!

    On Feb 23, 2007 wrote:

    one of the best i've read so far.. EXCELLENT.\:rah\:

    On Feb 24, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    omg shes in a serios situasion hmmmm maybe she could go to socail services and tell them what happened cant wait for more\:D

    On Feb 24, 2007 MoriaG wrote:

    good story

    On Feb 25, 2007 fallen_simangel wrote:

    nice story!^^

    On May 3, 2007 stripedpenguins wrote:

    how did you get to school with them anyways it was a good story

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