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Okay. Yes. Experiment IV: Chapter 7 has arrived.
Now, before you read... how do I put this? Okay, it's different. When you start to read it, you may think: woah, hang on a sec, when did this happen? Don't worry, just keep reading! Everything will be explained the more you read. The first few scenes may confuse you, but stick with it.

I did write a blog post of Chapter 7 and 8 on another website, but ignore those. They had literally no screenshots, but here it is... fully anotated! :)

ps: for you, margo!

Okay. Yes. Experiment IV: Chapter 7 has arrived.
Now, before you read... how do I put this? Okay, it's different. When you start to read it, you may think: woah, hang on a sec, when did this happen? Don't worry, just keep reading! Everything will be explained the more you read. The first few scenes may confuse you, but stick with it.

I did write a blog post of Chapter 7 and 8 on another website, but ignore those. They had literally no screenshots, but here it is... fully anotated! :)

ps: for you, margo! Tyke stared at Experiment IV. She still seemed 'rough' around the edges. Since he had 'saved' her, he found that the scars he had once programmed her to absorb had no longer done so, and every cut on her shiny skin stuck out like a sore thumb. He felt her previous skin was too human. He wanted her to look physically intimidating. She was his prize experiment. So, he changed her skin pigment to something only the elite could earn. At least she was safe in her maturation tank. He kept gazing at her. Perhaps she was becoming his favourite. Well, if he had one out of his several thousand other useless experiments. Experiment IV was so human – ever since she escaped from him. Although it caused him a lot of trouble with his employers, he was thankful that he finally had something to use. Tess had brought something new, something that Tyke knew he had been missing. That small touch of humanity that would bring the human race crumbling down at his feet. They would all beg to be like his children one day. Tyke turned as the alarm by the door beeped. Page forgot the passphrase to enter.. again. He pressed the button allowing his colleague entry. Page rushed into the room, “Sir!” Tyke snapped, “what is it, Page? I'm getting sick of having to let you in...”
“You've been in here, alone for... 5 hours. Are you okay?”
“Alone? I have Tess here to keep me company.”
“Tess?” “You know what I mean! Experiment IV!”
In response to this, Page jumped comically, “y-yes, Sir. It's just... there is increase brain activity in all of our other experiments. All 7,679 of them.” Experiment V chipped away at the brick by his bed, using the sharp spring he had retrieved from his bed. His childish skin itself was free of any cuts. No, he'd absorbed all of them. He'd hoped that he could hear more of the Masters' conversations if he made more holes for the sound to travel through. Although his supernatural hearing had assisted him this far, he wanted to hear the Masters' voice to be a high, crystal clear quality, to make him confident that he did not miss any important information. He heard a sudden sound behind him, which caused him to gasp and drop the spring. It fell with a loud clang. As he turned, he hoped that he hadn't been caught. He never had been, no, the young boy could easily slip the sharp spring into his bedding and stand up smartly. Alas, his fears were not fulfilled – luckily, it was only Sibby. “Sibby, you scared me.” “I know... sorry. Any other news on Tess?
The youth shook his head, “no, not today. Have you deployed the other news, though?”
“Yes, everyones ecstatic!” said Sibby, her eyes filled with excitement. Experiment V smiled, pleased with his work. He was the mastermind of this huge plan he had been developing for... since... he couldn't remember. At the age of 15 (so he guessed), he had already outsmarted a few of the other experiments that he saw, briefly, for a few hours of his day, in between military training. “Sibby, are you sure that everyone knows.”
“Affirmative. Fox has passed on the news.” He smiled at sibby, who smiled back. She was also the same age as him (he guessed this, too). She almost looked like a boy – with her military crew cut and boyish physique. All that military training had definitely payed off, as her arms were muscular and the definition of her muscles gleamed in the sun light from the small, barred window as she turned to leave. It was all coming together for Experiment V.

Experiment IV: Chapter Seven

Nov 7, 2011 by Rosaleena
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    On Nov 7, 2011 martoele wrote:

    Well, well Roosaleena! Am I glad to see that you plan to end at least this story!! \:\)  I will go back to the other parts to remember.... It's been so long ago.... \:confused\: 

    On Nov 8, 2011 Mangio wrote:

    I'm glad your continuing with the story.. \:wub\: Note, next time provide a short summary of details about the previous chapters \;\) I wonder if this 'experiment' is to make superior physically fit human beings??

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