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Welcome to the last part of the 'History...' series. I appreciate all those who have followed me to this point... and thank you for all of the support you have given me. Don't worry as most of you already/probably know I have more stories on the way... more Rich Girls, Pressure To Be Beautiful... two more episodes. And also The Truth Behind The Myth... my Goth story. I hope you have enjoyed this series thus far, and hope you like the way it ends.

Welcome to the last part of the 'History...' series. I appreciate all those who have followed me to this point... and thank you for all of the support you have given me. Don't worry as most of you already/probably know I have more stories on the way... more Rich Girls, Pressure To Be Beautiful... two more episodes. And also The Truth Behind The Myth... my Goth story. I hope you have enjoyed this series thus far, and hope you like the way it ends. Agatha caught sight of her daughter as she cautiously entered the house, she hurried over to her immediately and held her in her arms.
"Oh, Lolita, where have you been? I've been so worried. Do you know how worried me and your father have been?" Lolita looked into her mothers teary eyes, before looking back down at the floor.
"I'm sorry mummy, but it wasn't my fault... I was forced to leave, I thought that you would be following soon." "Who forced you to leave?" Agatha asked as she straightened up... but her voice trailed off as she caught sight of an unexpected guest. Paula entered the house looking ashamed and concerned for Lolita.
"I forced her to leave Mrs. Bates." "You kidnapped my daughter?" Agatha's face contorted with rage as she spoke, spit flying from her mouth in all directions.
"Mummy, it wasn't her fault! It was that horrible Lilly..."
"Lolita, please go to your room... I don't want you to hear this! You don't have to lie for the evil lady."
"But mummy..."
"No buts, just get upstairs... just wait till your father gets home and hears about this!" Lolita hung her head and stomped angrily upstairs. "Just who do you think you are? Kidnapping my baby! You wait here, I am calling the police right now!" Agatha screamed in agony at the pain of finding her daughters kidnapper. Paula, was startled... Agatha could not call the police, there was so much she had yet to do. She began to think widly, she could run? No. Talk. That would be the best way to slow her down.
"Agatha. I assure you, you don't need to call the police... I have returned your daughter safe and sound... please, I just rescued her from the real kidnappers!" "Of course there is a reason to call them! You just told me that you took my daughter! And what is this real kidnapper business? You honestly think I would believe that." Agatha shook her head and stepped towards the phone once more.
"Mummy, believe me." Agatha turned around in surprise facing her daughter. "It wasn't her it was some Lilly woman, and Paul... he locked me in a room, but he said he really didn't want to but he had no choice... then Paula, she came and took me away from the house and brought me back home. Please mummy... believe us." Lolita closed her eyes and prayed her mother would see sense. Agatha, succumbed to her daughters pleas and approached her.
"Of course I believe you Lolita, but you're sure this woman saved you?" Lolita nodded
"Yes she was the one who saved me mummy. Please, just let her go?"
"Of course, Paula I am so sorry... but please get out of my house before I change my mind." Paula hurried off down the street as fast as her feet could carry her. A few months later... Lolita had just blown out her candles when the tell-tale sound of a new e-mail, rung through the kitchen. "Ooh, look here Lolita, we have been invited to Carol and Paul's wedding... how exciting!" Marcus turned around unexpectedly and bumped into Lolita who fell into a seat opposite her mother.
"That doesn't make any sense... why would we be invited... sorry Lolita, accident."
"I don't know why, but who cares? A wedding! How romantic. Which reminds me... when are you going to marry me?" Marcus quickly changed the subject pointing at a squirrel climbing up a tree. "Lolita, will you hurry up and get down here? We're going to be late for the wedding!" Agatha shouted up the stairs.
"Alright I'm just coming! God. Anyone would think the world was gonna end just because we miss someone's wedding... we hardly know these people." Lolita muttered to herself. "Well thank God for that! I thought you were never going to be ready in time. Now come on... I don't want to miss the wedding." Lolita tramped unwillingly down the stairs... wishing nothing more than to get out of the silly frock and go out with her friends.
"I hate weddings" she muttered under her breath as she walked to the car. They arrived at the wedding later, the bridegroom was already there greeting his guests... though the bride was out of sight. The two teenagers, Lolita and Eddie caught each others eyes almost immediately. And they began to chatter.
"Hi, I'm Edward and you are Lolita right?"
"Er, yeah. How did you..."
"Well, I saw your picture in the paper a while ago, about how you escaped those kidnappers..."
"Well, I don't like to talk about that."
"Oh, I'm sorry. You know, my family has had some bad things happen to them too."
"Really?"
"Yeah, like this one time..." Edward and Lolita walked off together. Paul waited patiently for his bride to be. And he stared intently at his guests, trying to seem calm, who in turn gazed up at him in admiration. Carol began to float down the aisle... this time the marriage was real... the divorce had come through and no-one was going to ruin her special day. Well, Lilly showed up, of course. But instead of causing a scene she smiled and waved at Paul and sat down quietly in the back row. Carol and Paul recited their vows, staring into each others eyes. The crowd around had tears in their eyes as they watched this magical exchange. The ceremony ended with a kiss, one that befitted the entire situation, full of warmth and love. Carol caught sight of Lilly as she broke away from Paul and practically ran down the aisle to greet her. She pulled her into a hug.
"Thankyou for making it, I am so glad you could come..."
"Don't mention it... well I really have to get going before someone sees me." Lilly ran off into the trees and out of sight. "So, Lolita... wanna go somewhere a bit quieter?" Lolita giggled and they ran off into the trees. And with a sudden burst of inspiration, Marcus dragged Agatha under the arch... and they too exchanged vows. They were married. However Lolita and Edward were missing the ceremony as they shared their first kiss. I thought this quite a befitting end to the story as everything fits into place and therefore it is a happily ever after. I hope you enjoyed it and I realise that it got a bit weak towards the end... I don't think I am good at these happy endings!

A Wedding And A Return

Jul 26, 2007 by S.Cains
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    On Jul 27, 2007 wrote:

    I think you did lovely\:D I like happy endings\:wub\:

    On Jul 27, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:

    I like happy endings, too. Albeit I still don't get why Lily had asked Marcus if they knew each other when they were younger. Maybe you explained it and I just didn't think about it enough. But I'm kind of sad that this series is over. It was amazing. \:wub\:

    On Jul 27, 2007 atangki wrote:

    LOL. You did great, as usual! \:D\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 27, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:

    I think you did a great job with this happy ending!\:rah\: I'm looking forward to reading more of your other stories though\;\) \:D

    On Jul 27, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    I think your happy ending are really good. . .when the story actually gets around to having a happy ending!!Haha\;\) I'm sad that the History... series is over, I mean, it's been on TSR longer then I have!! Why did Carol ask Lily to come?\:confused\: After all, she did try and steal Paul from her? And where was Jennifer in all of this? I loved the way Edward and Lolita got together in the end! So cute\:wub\: This was a really good ending. 5.0\:D

    On Jul 27, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:

    Yay! A happy ending! Hopefully you can get some of your other stories finished now! I hope so! I've been waiting for your stories!

    On Jul 27, 2007 Hellfrozeover wrote:

    You brought the story to an end very well\:\) . It's good that everyone managed to put the past behind them for the wedding. 5.0!

    On Jul 27, 2007 wrote:

    You write some good stuff but its all a bit too girly for me. You need more adventure and action in your stories, not all these tears and tantrums! ,but that is just my opinion\:P

    On Jul 27, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:

    \:cool\: \:P ...it was lovely. I appreciated it even more, because I know that this is the very end of a long, long story, and it meant a lot to you... \;\) so I guess it must have been hart to quit. \:P and, I know!, you dont really like happy endings, do you? \:D \:D \:D
    you did a great job, though. \:wub\:
    Im already enjoying 'Rich girls' and 'Pressure to be beautiful' so I dont think Ill miss the 'History' serie... (*but* I wont complain, if you would decide to do few episode on the adult life of Lolita and Eddie... if they are meant to be together, of course!!! :P)

    have a nice day, see you around \;\)

    On Jul 27, 2007 itachigirl wrote:

    \:D great job!the ending wasn't that bad5.0

    On Jul 28, 2007 imdadsbugg wrote:

    Good Job!! This was the best series i've ever read! Don't be so hard on urself. the ending was great.

    On Jul 30, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Good story. Thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Jul 30, 2007 wrote:

    I'm glad there was a happy ending for all. \:wub\:

    On Jul 31, 2007 MissJay wrote:

    5.0 I thought is was a very nice ending!

    On Aug 4, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Yaaaaaaay!!!!! I \:wub\: happy endings. I've been following this story since....well, actually I just read the whole series today! LOL! \:D Great story, can't wait to read more of your stories!

    On Aug 5, 2007 converse02 wrote:

    A happy ending, that seems like a first, =D but I really liked the History series great job. And I also like you rich girls series too keep up the great work!! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 4, 2007 iiL0V3y00H wrote:

    where did you get her lip stick its kute? I LOVE THE STORY GREAT JOB!

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