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Welcome to my new story 'History...' There will definitely be a sequel because I have already thought of a title. So enjoy and look out for the next Part (if you want to obviously)
Melissa: "So Lilly, what do you do?"
Lilly: "Well, I just sit around the house all day, don't have time for a job, housework is a full-time job. Besides Marcus would prefer it if I didn't have a job right now because of my 'condition'"
Melissa: "And what condition would that be?"
Marcus: "So Lilly these cheese sandwiches are great."
Lilly: "What are you talking about? You don't have one!"
Marcus: "Oh, yeah right" As Melissa left, she wondered what Lilly's condition was, since it was obvious that Marcus wanted it to be kept a secret. As she got into her car she thought she heard something behind her, she checked and nothing was there. She was just starting up the engine when she heard a scraping noise, she flicked her head round quickly, where was the sound coming from? She was just about to get out and check when something grabbed her from behind... later that night Lilly went to the garden to check that the garage had been locked up, when she saw Melissa's car in the drive... what was she still doing here? She had better not be snooping around. But then she saw the car door was open, and there were scratches all the way up the car! Who would have done this? This is an Aston Martin! That was when she noticed something else... Someone was laying on the grass just past the car... Lilly grabbed the body and hauled it inside... Marcus: "Who is it?"
Lilly: "It's Melissa!"
Marcus: "What the woman who came to visit earlier?"
Lilly: "Yes"
Marcus: "We have to call the police!"
Lilly: "No, we'll be questioned and I don't want Jennifer to be put through that, I don't even want her to see this person."
Marcus: "You're sure she's dead?"
Lilly: "Yes take a look at her!" Marcus: "What happened to her?"
Lilly: "How am I supposed to know?"
Marcus: "Where are we going to put the body?"
Lilly: "The sandpit?"
Marcus: "Yes... Great idea... let's put the body in the sandpit where Jennifer plays, so she will never see it... That makes sense."
Lilly: "Well you do it then!" Lilly did not like this at all, but the thing that frightened her the most, was the cut that she saw on the other side of Melissa's face. It matched her own! In the morning Lilly dragged herself out of bed and hopped in the shower to cleanse herself of last night's memories. As she was enjoying the feel of the hot water on her bare skin, she thought she heard something... a clanking sound... it was getting louder, as if the source of the sound was moving closer, it was getting louder and louder... it sounded like it was right in front of her... and suddenly the shower stopped.
Lilly: "What? Great! Now I have to call a plumber!" She was just covering her scar, when she remembered that terrible day years ago... She was on her first date with Paul Richardson, her first love, well at least he was... While he was pushing Lilly on the swing, someone grabbed him from behind and dragged him off into the woods without making a sound, because she only noticed when she had felt no pushes. She turned around and he had gone. She went traipsing off into the woods looking for him... But he was nowhere to be found... and that was when it happened, the attack... Lilly: "Who's there?... I know someone is there, I heard the door creak."
"Lilly? Is it really you? I never thought I would see you again!" Lilly: "Paul? Oh my god Paul!"
Paul: "I have been trying to find you for years, ever since I found out you had survived the attack in the woods."
Lilly: "Paul I thought you were dead!"
Paul: "Nope, I'm definitely alive. And God I have missed you, you haven't changed a bit, you're still as gorgeous as ever."
Lilly: "As are you. I can't wait for you to meet my husband, Marcus. I've never told him about you but he will still be excited to meet one of my old friends."
Paul: "Trust me, he won't want to meet me."
Lilly: "Why not?"
Paul: "Married men don't usually like being confronted with their worst fear, their wife's first love, doesn't really bode well you know?"
Lilly: "Don't be silly you have to stay for dinner." So that was that Lilly: "You head downstairs, while I sort myself out ready for dinner."
Paul: "Okay" So he sat and waited in the living room till Lilly was ready which didn't take very long. Lilly joined him watching TV and they began catching up on old times, soon enough they were cuddling as if they'd never been apart.
Lilly: "I really have missed you Paul, what happened to you in those woods anyway?"
Paul: "Even I don't know, I was just dragged off into the trees, I wasn't attacked like you were though, but why did you leave?"
Lilly: "I was scared, i needed to find somewhere where nobody knew me."
Paul: "Riverblossom Hills, the perfect place, till someone finds you haha."
Lilly: "mmm yes." ...
Lilly: "Paul, I can't I'm married..."
Paul: "So you would if you weren't married?"
Lilly: "Paul, stop it! I am going to go and make dinner." She made some amazing Pork chops, she was a great cook! And everyone enjoyed them, well everyone except Marcus, he didn't show up for dinner... strange. After she had tucked Jennifer into bed she went back into the living room with Paul to wait for Marcus to return from work. Paul: "Lilly? I don't think he's coming home tonight..."
Lilly: "But why woouldn't he? I didn't tell him anything about you..."
Paul: "Maybe he has to do business?"
Lilly: "But he should have called me!"
She stormed off. Paul: "It's going to be Ok Lilly, you have done nothing to ruin your marriage, he will be home tomorrow... I promise.
Lilly: "I know I'm probably just over-reacting, as usual." ...
Lilly: "Paul, I have already told you I can't"
Paul: "Ok I understand... it's just I have never stopped loving you Lilly, i have been waiting till I found you again."
Lilly: "Oh come here!" That was when things got steamy! As she slept Lilly had memories of her first kiss with Paul. She felt she had done the right thing, in fulfilling their fantasies, and her dreams were peaceful and guilt-free. Next morning Lilly woke up, exhausted and feeling unwell, the guilt had now overwhelmed her. What if Marcus found out? What if Jennifer found out? It would be the end! She ran to the toilet to lose the pork chops from last night. Lilly: "What are you doing? Get dressed! What if Marcus comes home?"
Paul: "It doesn't matter, just because I am not dressed doesn't mean you slept with me."
Lilly: "Paul, last night was a..."
Paul: "Don't say it was a mistake, because you know it wasn't. We still love each other, even after all these years, I still love you, you know?"
Lilly: "Yes i know you do, but I can't just give up on my family!"
Paul: "Are you saying if you didn't have a family you would be with me?"
Lilly: "Paul, i wish you would stop asking me those sorts of questions! And you know I would..."
Marcus: "Lilly? Is that pancakes I smell?" Paul: "Fine! I'll go and get dressed, but it's for you, not him."
Lilly: "Ok... quick go! Yes honey it's pancakes, would you like some?"
Marcus: "Yes please my love."
Lilly: "You'll never guess who came to visit last night?"
Marcus: "Who?"
Lilly: "My best friend from childhood, Paul"
Marcus: "It's a shame I missed him..."
Lilly: "Oh, you didn't he is still here... he didn't have anywhere to go, he's been looking for me... Pancake?" Paul: "Hi, Marcus, it's good to finally meet you, i have heard so much about you."
Marcus: "Yes, you and Lilly been catching up on old times have you?"
Paul: "Yes I am glad she has finally settled down, your daughter is beautiful and your house is amazing!"
Marcus: "Thankyou, I... we designed it ourselves."
Lilly was wolfing down her pancakes wishing to be out of this uncomfortable situation as soon as possible.
Marcus: "Lilly you haven't said much, how was your night alone with Paul."
Lilly: "Er... rather enlightening."
Marcus: "Really? What did it show you?"
Lilly: "Just how much I missed you last night, you didn't even call! You could have been in danger!" Lilly stormed off.
Paul: "I had better be going, tell Lilly I said thankyou for the pancakes."
Marcus: "Yeah, whatever, see you soon." Marcus: "You slept with him didn't you!"
Lilly: "No of course I didn't!"
Marcus: "yes you did! I could tell by your oddness at breakfast! How could you do this to me? After all I have given you, this is how you repay me?"
Lilly: "What do mean? after all you have given me? I would have been able to provide for myself had you not forbidden me to get a job!" Marcus: "How many times have I told you that I love you and want you to be faithful to me?"
Lilly: "I don't know, but enough to times to get it into my head, that's why I have been faithful"
Marcus: "you have not! Why do you keep lying to me?"
Lilly: "I am not lying! Where were you last night then? Out with some woman you met in a bar?"
Marcus: "How dare you accuse me of such things!" He lost control and hit her Lilly: "That's it Marcus I have had enough of you! And I am sick of you beating me! You've done it one too many times, I am not frightened of you anymore and I don't love you anymore!"
Marcus: "Lilly I know, i am so sorry, I don't know what happens to me, and I know you wouldn't have an affair... I'll get some counselling, whatever, just please don't leave me, i love you too much." Marcus: "Please. Don't leave me..."
Lilly: "Marcus... I... No! Marcus! I don't love you anymore! Now get your therapy I don't care anymore, you won't be hurting me or Jennifer ever again!"
Marcus: "I never touched Jennifer..."
Lilly: "You don't need to touch someone to hurt them Marcus! That's something you need to learn, now just please go!"
Marcus: "Lilly..."
Lilly: "No Marcus, how many times? Just leave, before I call the police."
Marcus: "But this is my house..."
Lilly: "Not for that, for hitting me, there are laws against that you know. Now go" Lilly: "Paul, can you get over here please, i just kicked Marcus out and I need your help and protection."
Paul: "Sure i'll be right there, i would do anything for you, you know that." And that is the end of this Part... mainly because i am about to go to bed, but anyway. Remember there's a murderer to look for although I focused mainly on the relationships in this part, that's why it is called 'history...' well anyway look out for the next part it will be called 'Is Destined to repeat itself' Hope you enjoyed the story and thanks to all the custom content makers, especially to who made the mirrors for the floor, one of my favourites ;) Please rate and leave a comment. here is the reflective flooring if you didn't notice it before ;) it is from www.muranomobilia.com
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45 Comment(s) posted so far
On Apr 20, 2007 wrote:
It was amazing!
On Apr 20, 2007 wrote:
O YA, FIRST ONE, O YES.....WHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
sorry...
On Apr 20, 2007 wrote:
On Apr 21, 2007 bec71 wrote:
Great storys...as uaswal I just love youre storys!They are so misteriouse!!5.0
On Apr 21, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Great screenshots and special effects. Great start...can't wait for next chapter. 5.0
On Apr 21, 2007 atangki wrote:
great! please make the story long.. very long! hehe. I really like it a lot! The screenshots are wonderful and the characters are very kewl! LOL..
I'm waiting for the next parts.. 
On Apr 21, 2007 slime wrote:
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO VERY GOOD 5 POINTS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
On Apr 21, 2007 Dead Rock wrote:
Pretty good!
No comments, though.
On Apr 21, 2007 wrote:
Nice! I look forward to some more.
On Apr 21, 2007 wrote:
Excellent story I got a bit confuse but now i understand it 5.0
On Apr 21, 2007 wrote:
FANTASTIC! The story was very good! I got a little confused, but I caught on instantly! I am so proud of you, and am praying for a sequel!
Hoping 4 more!
Just2Cute
On Apr 21, 2007 chardonnayonedge wrote:
Very well done!!! Beautiful job, and well written! I am looking forward to more.....
On Apr 21, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
whose murderer should we be looking for?
is there a reason for there is Jennifer in the last screenshot?
and Lilly is pregnant, isnt she?! (by the way...Lilly is stunning!!!
really interesting and well written story,Ill rate it high!
On Apr 21, 2007 lilqueennbri wrote:
That ws really good. I hope Marcus during the divorce say that Lilly killed the woman they buried .
On Apr 21, 2007 DIDA wrote:
it was ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!!!can't wait for part 2!!!!5.0!!!!!
On Apr 21, 2007 bebitza wrote:
Wonderful
and exciting 
On Apr 22, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:
Wow! This is an incredible story. The skins are beautiful, each screenshot is perfect. Those gashes on her face looked so real, I actually winced. Great beginning and introduction of characters. I'm looking forward to reading the second part.
On Apr 22, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:
Great story and it's v. mysterious.
On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:
that rocked!!!!!5.0
On Apr 28, 2007 MoriaG wrote:
Good Story but what happened to melissa. i love the slap mark, made it look authenic. and the cut and scars look good too. it went alittle fast, first she loved her husband, then the old boyfriend (who i thought was dead) showed up and boom she brakes up with the husband!! WoW!!! i would have liked more detail, but it was good. off to read the next part.
On Apr 28, 2007 sandybvv wrote:
wow.. great story, im glad she kicked him out!!! good for her!! i hope paul will be nice to her
On Apr 28, 2007 fallenangelohio wrote:
Great story! You did a great job with the background, screenshots and the storyline. Looking for part 2 now!
On Apr 28, 2007 Devalyn wrote:
Nice job! But things happened too fast - she loved her husband at the start - and then this guy comes and it's over?
On Apr 28, 2007 BuckinghamAlice wrote:
Very intriguing! I liked it a lot. Great screenshots! Now I'll be reading the next part.
On Apr 28, 2007 wickedgalaxia wrote:
Good
On Apr 28, 2007 monrae001 wrote:
When I was reading the 18th slide, my dadwas outside doing yardwork, and bumped into the house, and made a loud thud. I almost screamed. XD Great start.
On Apr 29, 2007 waltertheweeniedog wrote:
On Apr 29, 2007 wrote:
Great story enjoyed reading Thanks for saying read pt1 first... lol...
On Apr 29, 2007 Sk8Iowa wrote:
Great story! 5.0!! And I was always wondering where everyone got their perfect wood floors from! Thanks! I'm about to read the 2nd part now.
On Apr 29, 2007 kaz160290 wrote:
love it! whos the killer???
On Apr 30, 2007 Penguina wrote:
Awesome beginning.
On Apr 30, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:
Beautiful and absolutely amazing, specially the makeups that makes scars and marks on the face, the story is very well done, let me see the next part
On May 5, 2007 Kimbelle wrote:
Very good Story... again!
On May 5, 2007 plushies_lovergg wrote:
Woow I loved it!!! The people were beautiful, and the scars, were awesome!!!
On May 16, 2007 Jubilant wrote:
Loved the handprint, nice detail. I don't trust Paul, I think he is a faker. Off to the next chapter.
On May 16, 2007 Jubilant wrote:
Forgot to rate.
On May 20, 2007 miaRavenFallen wrote:
It was so exciting
On May 22, 2007 Bigred72 wrote:
I have loved reading all of your stories. This one is great so far. I am off to read the next ones.
On May 25, 2007 nanapon wrote:
her scars and slap mark really make the story fun to read! gives it detail!
On May 30, 2007 MissJay wrote:
I'm loving it already. on to part 2! 5.0
On Jun 11, 2007 Llyriel wrote:
Great use of custom content! Nice pictures!! I can really tell you put a lot of effort into getting your hands on the stuff you need!
On Jul 5, 2007 Maiviastorm wrote:
On Jul 5, 2007 deniseariane wrote:
really nice
On Jul 7, 2007 toczka wrote:
great!
On Sep 17, 2007 Salt n pepa wrote:
this is a great story wow very good