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Hello and welcome to another episode of Pressure To Be Beautiful. I am your host Elizabeth Manning and in a few moments you will find how the girls have been faring without Monique.

Hello and welcome to another episode of Pressure To Be Beautiful. I am your host Elizabeth Manning and in a few moments you will find how the girls have been faring without Monique. The finale is drawing closer (next episode) where we will find out which of these girls has become a new fashion icon. I thank you for your votes and hope you will continue to vote for your favourite in the run up to the finish line. After all, our models need your votes to win. And to gain or lose your support I am going to show you what the girls have been up to since yesterday. So, let's take a look. For the first time in the house, the girls were not all sat around the table at breakfast time. They were all snuggled up together and chatting in the bedroom.
"Feels weird without Monique, doesn't it Rachel?" Marissa asked.
"I guess, but I knew what she was like from the beginning... I hated her." Marissa smacked her forehead with her hand.
"Oh yeah! I keep forgetting you watched the show!" She stammered. Nina and Bianca were sat on the floor at the end of the bed listening.
"Yeah, Marissa it does feel different... it's like the Pressure To Be Beautiful has been lifted right of my shoulders!" Nina sniggered "Now that she's gone all I see is a house full of friends, with a little friendly competition... it doesn't really matter who wins anymore... we've all come this far. And to me, we're all winners." Rachel squirmed in her seat as if she did not belong. Bianca laughed.
"Yeah right Nina, you're as desperate to win as we are! You can try and smooth it over as much as you like. You know you want to win." Nina buried her face in her hands... at first the other girls thought she was crying... but she suddenly lifted her head and let out a shriek of laughter, which all the other girls joined in on. Marissa was dragged to the bathroom a few minutes later by Rachel. She looked disgruntled as she straightened herself up, and watched Rachel squirm as she tried to say something. "Marissa, do you ever feel like you don't belong here?" Rachel asked.
"Rachel, what are you talking about?" Marissa said impatiently
"Here. Do you ever feel like this isn't where you're supposed to be... the other girls don't like me... and the things that they say. They just make me feel so uncomfortable..." She trailed off as Marissa gave her a stern look. "Rachel." Marissa said, placing her hands on Rachel's shoulders. "Now don't think me rude or anything..." Rachel shook her head. "But you really have to stop whining to me over every single thing. These girls are my friends, and I can see what you are trying to do... you're trying to alienate me from the group again, though I don't know why - Just stop Ok? I don't think I will be able to handle it much longer." Rachel hung her head, swaying from side to side nervously. "I'm sorry Marissa. I just don't get how you found out... not that it's a bad thing you did." she added quickly.
"I guess I am just a good judge of character." Marissa said coldly.
"Yeah, I guess..." Rachel slunk off looking like a beaten dog and Marissa shook her head with disappointment. Marissa hurried out of the bathroom behind her.
"Rachel, wait!" Rachel grinned and stopped allowing Marissa to catch up. "I won't tell the others what you have been up to, but only because I want this to be a fair competition... and I don't want you to be singled out. It's the final tomorrow and soon we can put this whole experience behind us." Rachel pulled Marissa into a quick hug.
"Thankyou, thankyou!" She said breathlessly. "I just thought, that me, being the new housemate... I had to cause some rivalries and things didn't I?"
"No, you didn't." Marissa scolded. "You knew exactly how each of us housemates were going to react from watching us. And you used us... you used me." Marissa walked away, the look of disppointment evidently clear on her face. Bianca and Nina were still sat in the bedroom chatting.
"I wonder where those two went..." Bianca said curiously.
"Probably Rachel being her attention seeking self." Nina replied. "There's just something about her that I don't trust."
"I know what you mean, she just seems to be clinging onto Marissa... perhaps that is all that is keeping her in the competition?" Bianca mused. "Probably. She is just too shifty... I can't trust her, and she hates us two!" she added as if that settled the matter.
"I know, but what can we do? Marissa won't hear a bad word said against her and we can hardly do anything when she is always at Marissa's heels."
"I know, I guess that all we can do is to wait until eviction tonight... although I have a feeling she will survive it." Marissa began to lecture Rachel as Nina came into the kitchen, bustling around and preparing lunch.
"Rachel. You have to be more considerate to the rest of the group. At least make an effort to be friends, it could help you in the competition you know."
"I don't care about the stupid competition anymore." Rachel sulked bluntly.
"Rachel don't be like that. Of course you care... you could be in that Finale!" Marissa tried to boost Rachel's confidence, but she was getting no reaction. Bianca joined Marissa and Rachel at the table while Nina bustled around serving them cheeseburgers.
"Hi Bianca." Rachel said, with no feeling at all. Bianca was surprised so much at this greeting (usually Rachel just ignored her) that she said nothing but just stared at her. Nina, however smiled at Rachel... it was nice of her to make an effort at least. And when Nina served Rachel her lunch, she was pleasantly surprised when Rachel said thankyou very politely. She had even lost the cold, flat tone in her voice.
"Your welcome!" Nina replied.
"What's got into her?" Bianca mouthed but Nina just shrugged, probably relieved at the change. The girls spent the rest of the day enjoying a game of Marco Polo in the pool. They giggled and splashed around like little kids. At least they had stopped fighting and talking behind one anothers backs. Well, the time for the shoot is almost nigh (they will be modelling outerwear). And it is time for one of our models to leave us forever. Then the other girls get to strut their stuff. So without further ado, lets gather the girls on the couch. Well girls, someone's time is up and you are about to do your final photo shoot... well one of you will have more to come. So without stalling the inevitible... Bianca, I am sorry, but once again. You could be leaving us tonight. Marissa you are safe from the eviction tonight. Nina. You are safe from the eviction tonight. Which means, that you, Rachel are also in danger of being evicted tonight. The next person to leave Pressure To Be Beautiful is... Bianca! Please if you just wait here, for the girls to finish their photo shoots. Then you can say your proper goodbyes. Ok?
Bianca gave a silent nod. First up is Marissa, sporting a combination of denim, hardly practical for snowy weather... but. Marissa's shoot consists of making a snowman... Very expertly I might add. Next up is Nina, showing a nice choice of browns. Nina is being unruly and destroying Marissa's snowman. And having a snowball fight! And last is Rachel, who is choosing complimentary shades of pink. Here is Rachel in her first shot, getting hit by one of Nina's snowballs. And here is her second shot in which she is dodging a snowball. Right, Bianca it's time for you to leave... please say your goodbyes. Bianca pulled Marissa into a hug.
"I'm sorry that we weren't friends from the beginning." Marissa whispered. While Rachel sat with a strange expression on her face.
"Wait!" she shouted. "Does Bianca really have to leave? I mean, I don't want to be here anymore... can I leave and then Bianca can stay?" All the girls looked at her in surprise.
"No, Rachel it doesn't matter, I think that I am ready to leave now anyway." Bianca said
"No. I want to leave! Am I allowed?" If you are sure that is what you want to do, then yes you can leave and Bianca can stay. Rachel quickly stood up. And made for the door,
"BYE!" She shouted hysterically. Bye Rachel! Nina rushed at Bianca pulling her into a bone crushing hug.
"How good is this!" She squealed. Bianca emerged from the hug coughing and spluttering.
"Well... it was definitely a surprise." Bianca said. "You know, I don't think it was that much of a surprise" Marissa shouted over the squeals of delight. "I always knew she had some good in her." "Yes, but you always manage to see the best in everybody don't you!" Nina shouted before hitting Marissa with a pillow. "PILLOW FIGHT!" Bianca roared and they all joined in having one huge pillow fight. And that is where we end our show tonight, Ladies and Gentlemen. I know all the votes have been messed up now that Bianca is still in, but I would like you to continue voting for who you want to win. Remember I would like to vote for who you want to WIN, looks like the girls are happy after this episode. I hope you tune in to the next episode, to see who has won Pressure To be Beautiful. Look out for Pressure To Be Beautiful Episode 7 (Finale). Elizabeth out!

Pressure To Be Beautiful: Episode 6

Aug 1, 2007 by S.Cains
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    On Aug 1, 2007 atangki wrote:

    I want Marissa to win! \:D \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: Great part! I never though Rachel would volunteer herself to exit Pressure to Be Beautiful. LOL. \:D

    On Aug 1, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Marissa has got to win! She's always been my favorite! MARISSA TO WIN! MARISSA TO WIN! \:\)\:\)\:\)\:D\:D\:D Hahahaha, Rachel was extremely scared of this modeling thing. She wanted to leave sooo badly. Marissa is beautiful and stylish and kind. She deserves to win....Oh,right. First to comment! WOOOOHOOOO!

    On Aug 1, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Whoops! Shouldn't have made that comment so long. Shouldn't have taken so long. I wasn't the first to comment! Waaah! Kidding, I don't mind! \:P

    On Aug 1, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:

    I like Marissa as well, I also want her to win...\:rah\:

    On Aug 1, 2007 susieQ123 wrote:

    marissa to win x are you going to do somthing else when this is finshed if so will you let me know what your working on coz i would like to read it. thanz good part.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 1, 2007 marizza82 wrote:

    I'm glad that Rachel left. It would be unfair to the others if she won. Marissa the winner !! Woo hoo !!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Aug 1, 2007 wrote:

    I don't really want Marissa to win, I'm more of a Nina fan, but I don't care for Bianca...and I loved the twist at the end!! Great job\:D\:D

    On Aug 1, 2007 Hellfrozeover wrote:

    Lol I'll have to go with everyone else and vote Marissa. Another great part! 5.0!

    On Aug 1, 2007 Valgrida wrote:

    Great story! Must read all episodes!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 1, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    I think Marissa should win. She is kind, pretty and has a great fashion sense. I'm not surprised that Rachel backed out, she just wasn't cut out for all this modelling business. But that meant Bianca could stay. I've been on and off about Bianca for awhile, but she was really good about having to leave, very accepting. I'm glad she stayed. And Nina, well, she's nice, but the way she went over to the girls in the other episode, it seemed like she was doing it so she woudlen't get voted out. Yet I still like her. But, yes, Marissa should definitly win. Great part, I really liked it. I give it a 5.0 and let me know when the Finale! is done. Oh, and I noticed that there was like no spelling mistakes. Well done.\:D

    On Aug 1, 2007 MissJay wrote:

    I think Marissa should win also. I think Bianca should at least get runner up.

    On Aug 1, 2007 Carina94 wrote:

    Great story\:wub\:

    On Aug 1, 2007 wrote:

    I vote for Marissa too. \:\)

    On Aug 1, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:

    I know I haven't voted before. But it's never to late to start, right? \:D I definately vote for Marissa. Also, could you tell me where you got their eyes? \:wub\: I absolutely love them. You always write great stories! Keep up the good work! ^^

    On Aug 1, 2007 wrote:

    I like 'em all, but Marissa should win. She'd be a good role model, even though she ain't real.

    On Aug 1, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:

    Yeh, I think Marrisa should win. Keep up the good work! I love the custom content you use!

    On Aug 1, 2007 sandybvv wrote:

    YAY im happy RAchel is out\:D actually i was kind of sand that you said Biaca was leaving.. yes i know, i wanted her to leave so badly.. but now i do like her, i mean, she does deserve to be in the final!!!! she has been there all this time and it would have been pretty unfair if Rachel won over her... lol\:D i still want Marissa to win!!! cant wait for next part@!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: give you a 5

    On Aug 1, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:

    Hmmmm, since Bianca didn't do a shoot, then I guess I'll vote for one girl......MARISSA! I liked her outfit the best and her shoot was pretty good.\:D

    On Aug 1, 2007 Kikowiko wrote:

    Marissa! Marissa!Marissa!!!
    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 1, 2007 aimeeisasimnut wrote:

    Like always I want Marissa to win! Bianca and Nina both seem a little shady.

    On Aug 1, 2007 itachigirl wrote:

    marrissa should win\:D

    On Aug 1, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    Marissa to win \:D \:D

    On Aug 2, 2007 wrote:

    Marissa should win. \:D

    On Aug 2, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    I find myself totally unable to vote -- models in general scare me, so whoever you think is best, that's fine with me! \:D

    Your shots are really beautiful.. I love the blinds, and the characterization is very very good. Good luck with the models!!! Top marks from me!\:rah\:

    On Aug 2, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:

    ahh my golly gosh what a twist and a half MARISSA TO WIN!!

    On Aug 2, 2007 laura bunny wrote:

    Loved it!Marissa is myu fave!\:rah\:

    On Aug 2, 2007 wrote:

    marissa should win and bianca should leave foreva

    On Aug 2, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:

    \:wub\: well.. this will be an haaard decision!!! \:ph34r\:
    I loved the episode, and it felt so strange when Bianca was voted out that I was just happy when Rachel proposed to leave instead.. somehow,it just felt right. (Eventually,she arrived late,I dont think she deserved to win..it would have been too easy!:P)
    now,get along with my vote..
    Im still stuck with
    *Marissa* \:D
    I just love her - it's hard to believe that she's always so gentle, kind and caring (with everyone!) and she doesnt ever think bad of anyone, but still..
    plus, she had the most lovely oufit among the girls, so... \:ph34r\: [I loved the hairstyle, too. for once, Nina wasnt so gorgeous!]

    well done, Sam.
    take care.

    PS_I just read the other comments.. I loved the eyes that you use too,so if could tell me where you got them..
    *and* : it seems that everyone has voted Marissa,so far! \:D Im expecting from you some kind of twist and surprise, in the next episode... \;\) it cant be so obvious and easy! \:P \:D

    *have a nice day*

    On Aug 2, 2007 wrote:

    really good\:D \:wub\:

    On Aug 2, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    MARISSA TO WIN!\:rah\: 5.0

    On Aug 2, 2007 MaskedRaider wrote:

    Nina to win please - marissa is too perfect.\:\)

    On Aug 2, 2007 wrote:

    \:D Fantastic!
    I want Marrisa to win!!!
    Can't wait til the next story is out!
    \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 3, 2007 wrote:

    loved this episodeee.

    Nina should win, marissa is too perfect and stuff LOL i mean if i was in a competetion like that i would be talking behind backs xD!

    On Aug 3, 2007 lablover05 wrote:

    I love this series and i wished it wouldn't end!!! Nina gets my vote. She's so pretty and down to earth, but i totally loved Marissa's outerwear!

    On Aug 3, 2007 Dead Rock wrote:


    LOL.

    Judging from all these comments,

    seems like everyone wants Marissa to win!

    Okely doke, well.


    I think Bianca is quite pretty,

    but i'm so sad to see Rachel leave!

    Aww. And Marissa iz way t0o nice!

    It might be a bad point for a model, though.

    Not sure about Nina.

    Good Luck!

    On Aug 4, 2007 suedehead wrote:

    Nina to win!!!! \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 converse02 wrote:

    I dont want Marissa to win, bleh! She seems too goody goody... I want Nina to win or Bianca! Im glad she stayed!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 ~!Hawaiian Ginger!~ wrote:

    Another good episode. \:rah\: I vote for Marissa.

    On Aug 5, 2007 Nattynat wrote:

    I'd like Nina to win, she seems to be the best model. Can you tell me where you got the eyes and clothes? they're beautiful!\:\)

    On Aug 6, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Very nice. Well done. \:\)

    On Aug 13, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:

    \:rah\: good story

    On Sep 5, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks ! Great story ! \:\)

    On Oct 26, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    I know it's too late to vote now, but still I'd like to share my opinion. Marissa: Too nice (there must be something fishy with her...), Bianca: Very shifty and seems unreliable, Nina: No spine, she seems too weak to make it in the modellingbusiness. Still, I like Nina the best. At least she seems real! Great story \:D

    On Jan 20, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:cool\:

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