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Hello and welcome to the last episode of Pressure to Be Beautiful, I hope you have enjoyed the journey with me... your host, Elizabeth Manning. It's been an exciting trip and today, tonight one of our models will win the competition and walk away with some extreme modelling opportunities and a bundle of cash.

Hello and welcome to the last episode of Pressure to Be Beautiful, I hope you have enjoyed the journey with me... your host, Elizabeth Manning. It's been an exciting trip and today, tonight one of our models will win the competition and walk away with some extreme modelling opportunities and a bundle of cash. And as you can no doubt see, I have dressed up for the occassion... halfway through this episode the first runner-up will be evicted leaving the last two girls to stoke for a while before announcing our winner. No shoots today people, just announcements and the girls... speaking of which. Let's see what they're up to. Bianca was up as early as seven, bouncing up and down on the sofa, screaming... her lungs were sure to burst... the windows were close to shattering.
"I'm in the final!" she was screaming "One of us is going to win!" It would be surprising if nobody could hear her, but Marissa and Nina were in bed. Marissa entered the lounge, looking slightly groggy, but still smiling slightly at Bianca's continuing celebrations.
"Bianca" Marissa said croakily, clearly sleep hadn't properly left her yet. "do you think you could quieten it down now, you've been at it since six this morning!" She said it happily but the smile had now left her face. "Oh stop being such a spoil sport" Bianca snapped as she obliged and stopped bouncing around.
"I understand that you're excited Bianca, but me and Nina were sleeping when you started screaming." Marissa's tone was getting shorter by the second.
"Well, I'm not stopping you. Go back to bed! Way to go and ruin someone's moment Marissa." Biacna turned away and folded her arms aggressively as Marissa turned and left the room sighing.
 Marissa joined Nina, who was making breakfast, in the kitchen.
"I can't believe her!" Marissa exclaimed, frowning.
"You know Marissa I kind of think you are taking this way too seriously, she's just excited... let her use all her pent up energy, it saves wasting it on being angry with each other."
"Well, we're excited too, but you odn't see us running around the house screaming." Marissa retorted immediately. "We're all different, Marissa." Nina said patiently, turning her back on Marissa and headin to the stove. "That's why there was so much rivalry, we were all too different. Bianca has different ways of showing excitement, just like we have different ways of showing anger... or sadness." Marissa stood there for a while, trying to think of something to come back with. "I can't believe you're defending her! She's being totally unreasonable! Screaming at six in the morning." Marissa quickly stifled a yawn before continuing. "She wakes us up in the early hours of the morning expecting us to be bright and cheerful? I am not an early bird!" Marissa exclaimed. "Marissa, perhaps you should go and catch up on some sleep? I can put your breakfast in the fridge for later? Maybe after you have a little sleep, you won't be so... cranky." Nina said not looking at Marissa but focusing entirely on her pancakes. Nobody said anything for a while but Nina suddeny heard stomping and the slam of a door indicating that Marissa had indeed gone to bed. Nina sat down to a quiet breakfast, listening to the yells and whoops from the lounge. Smiling slightly, she began to think of her family, and her little sister doing exactly the same as Bianca on the couch in their living room. Nina thought of her mum and how proud she would be feeling... A loud crash sounded from the lounge that woke Nina form her reverie. Her forked clattered onto the table as she dashed into the lounge. Nina ran into the lounge and discovered Bianca lying on the floor.
"What happened in here?" Nina exclaimed, looking slightly bemused at the whole situation. Bianca sat up suddenly holding her head, as dizziness threatened to knock her over again.
"I was jumping around on the sofa's... and I fell off... banged my head on the floor." Bianca stood up wearily, her legs shaking. Nina supressed a giggle.
"Are you ok?" She managed to ask, sounding concerned.
"Oh, yes I'm fine... but I think I won't be jumping around anymore!" Bianca laughed and Nina joined in. "Thank God for that!" Marissa snarled as she entered the lounge. "Nothing like a little kharma is there?" She snapped with a little hint of sarcasm in her voice. Bianca looked down at her feet embarrassed, why did Marissa have to be a witness to this? Marissa stepped over towards Nina.
"I apologise Nina for being so cranky with you earlier... I had no reason to snap at you, it wasn't your fault."
"I accept your apology Marissa, I understand why you were a bit cranky... but don't you think you should apologise to Bianca as well?"
"No I don't!" Marissa snapped. "She was being very disrespectful, after all. It's a Sunday.. the day of rest." "What are you doing Marissa?" Nina asked
"What do you mean?" Marissa barked.
"Are you trying to tell us that you aren't always nice or something? Now the show is almost over and the votes are being counted as we speak you think you can just treat us how you want? You think you've won this show don't you. Well, you're showing your true colours now Marissa! Let's go Bianca. Nina and Bianca headed to the bedroom leaving Marissa standing alone looking stunned. Well, well, well. Anyway it's time for the first eviction... the model/housemate with the least votes to win is now going to be voted off. I have gathered the models/housemates in the lounge in their usual seats. Well girls. It's time. One of you will be leaving the show and won't be in the running to win... obviously. So without letting your nerves get the better of you... the last person to be evicted is... I'm so sorry Bianca, it's time for you to leave. You, Marissa and Nina... one of you will be the winner. Please say your goodbyes to Bianca, as she leaves this house and goes back to her normal life. Nina got up and pulled Bianca into a quick hug.
"Good luck Nina. I'll see you soon." Nina pulled away.
"You will?"
"At the reunion silly! We all get together, it'll be fun, anyway..." She made to give Marissa a hug, but halfway there, she stopped and turned around. "Bye then." She added shrilly before leaving the house. Goodbye Bianca! "I guess it's just us two then." Marissa said stiffly. "Yeah, I guess." Nina replied meekly. "Marissa, what happened?" Marissa looked across at her darkly.
"I have no idea what you're talking about." She answered quickly.
"Why are you suddenly being so hot with people? You're desperate to win this competition aren't you?" Marissa looked down at her toes. "All through my childhood, I was told, by my sister, that I would never amount to anything. She was the smart one, the pretty one, the one with all the boyfriends. I just wanted to be able to do something for once. You have no idea how hard it is, when you're ignored by the rest of your family... while your twin sister can do no wrong." Marissa broke off, choking on tears that had begun to run down her face. "No you're right. I don't know. But you have already beaten her, and there's no doubt that both us are both going to get modelling contracts, coming so far in this competition. It'll be good for their businesses. Trust me." She added. "You're right. I have already done something that Nikki couldn't. And we could easily get some future work." Marissa hastily wiped away her tears. "Well, good luck... I think that's what we need." "Exactly, it's nearly time... one of us is going to win a huge pile of cash... I can't wait. I'm so excited, my stomach is churning and I've gone all light-headed." Nina squealed. Well, Ladies and Gentlemen, it is time to reveal... THE WINNER OF PRESSURE TO BE BEAUTIFUL! Girls, you know the score... one of you is about to win the prize money, the other, goes home with nothing. Good Luck. And there you have it... Marissa wins the prize money... and thus ends The Pressure To Be Beautiful. However... let's see Marissa's main shots... to remind us of why we voted for her. Her swimsuit shot. Her formal shot. Her Everyday shot. Her outerwear shot. See you soon, thanks for voting. I might do a reunion... I'm not sure yet. But look out for other stories from me. One more thing I hope the people who do the other model stories take my advice and do something different... to help progress their story further. Thanks a lot readers and voters... I appreciate the support and thanks to the Custom Content makers for making my stories a lot less bland.

Pressure To Be Beautiful: Episode 7 (Finale)

Aug 4, 2007 by S.Cains
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    35 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 5, 2007 wrote:

    A very good ending\:D So glad you did well with this, I love your stories\;\)

    On Aug 5, 2007 atangki wrote:

    Great! See, I read your stories everyday. haha. \:D LOL. Great work! \:D I hope to read more of your stories soon! \:D\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 sandybvv wrote:

    \:rah\: YAY \:D great story\:D love all the parts... for a moment i really thought i had made a wrong decision voting for Marissa... for a moment i really thought she had been nice all the time just to win the competition!... LOL... im glad she had a reason to be a little bit upset... she was just nervous thats it.!!! so happy she won!!! Nina deserved to win too... im sure she (nina) will get a great job...

    maybe we can see what happens with them in another story!! lol\:D great job, as always\:D\:rah\: give you 10!!!

    On Aug 5, 2007 sandybvv wrote:

    forgot to comment on your pictures!!! SO BEAUTIFUL SHOTS!! \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:

    W00TNESS!! \:D

    On Aug 5, 2007 converse02 wrote:

    Boo!! Marissa won!! \;\) Eh I wanted Nina to win but oh well... great series, hopefully there will be a reunion!!\:P

    On Aug 5, 2007 wrote:

    no i wanted nina to win

    On Aug 5, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:

    Yay! I always liked Marissa! Nina was a close second in my mind, though. You always do great stories! \:D I think I've read all of your series. Hehe.

    On Aug 5, 2007 wrote:

    loved it!

    haha i didnt know you were actually going to take my advice to make marissa less boring! ;] keepp writing i love all your storiesss!

    On Aug 5, 2007 susieQ123 wrote:

    thanzs for sharing loved it I am glad marrissa won hope you do reunion \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 marizza82 wrote:

    Yay !! Marissa is the winner !! Woo hoo !!! I would love a reunion !!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    YAY! She won WOOOOOOOO!\:D \:rah\: 5.0

    On Aug 5, 2007 Kikowiko wrote:

    YAY!!
    Love the teary eyes shot!
    very well done!!
    many thanks \:\)
    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 djcryssiec wrote:

    i loved you stories... are you going to do another one soon?

    On Aug 5, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:

    ahhh thanks for letting me know \:D very appreciated ANNNDDD im super happy at marissa winning\:D what a lovely girl thanks for your wonderful mind and sharing your storrrrries with everyone\:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    Yay \:D 5 points \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 aimeeisasimnut wrote:

    \:rah\: Marissa won!! I really liked your take on the model series.\:wub\:

    On Aug 6, 2007 dealer_day wrote:

    wonderful job!!! thanks!!

    On Aug 6, 2007 itachigirl wrote:

    thanks for sharing sam looking for marissa in the future\:D 5.0

    On Aug 6, 2007 wrote:

    Yeah! I hope there will be a reunion, that will be fun. \:D

    On Aug 6, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Hey! I could have sworn I commented!....Whew! I thought for a moment there that Marissa was EVIL! \:eek\: But she's just got a problem. Glad she won! This was a great Modeling series, and I can't wait to read more of your stories! \:D\:D\:D\:D\:D\:D

    On Aug 6, 2007 Hellfrozeover wrote:

    Thought Marissa was going to get a bit psychotic there but it must have been nerves. Great series! Completely different from all the other modelling stories out there\:\) . Again, 5.0! HFOxx

    On Aug 6, 2007 MissJay wrote:

    Love it!!! 5.0 Very different!

    On Aug 6, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:

    BRAVOOOOO!!!\:rah\: \:D \:wub\:

    On Aug 6, 2007 MaskedRaider wrote:

    Very good... but there seemed to be a slide missing near to the end, as it went straight from the winner is... to 'and so marissa wins'. It showed a shot of her face, but no writing. I still think Nina should have won... \:P

    On Aug 9, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:

    Very good conclusion...nice series!\:rah\:

    On Aug 10, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Aug 10, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    Courageous on your part to take on this kind of thing! Very well done, particularly the interactions.\:rah\: Top marks from me.

    On Aug 12, 2007 Dead Rock wrote:


    Aw, i kinda wanted Nina to win,

    but Yay for Marissa!

    LOL

    Great work done on the series!

    (PS: Sorry for not being able to find the Story, :P)

    On Aug 14, 2007 Female_Redd wrote:

    That was a wonderful ending.. Great job\:wub\:

    On Aug 17, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:

    satisfying!\:\)

    On Sep 7, 2007 JLounge wrote:

    Great story with a nice reunion! Congrats!\:D

    On Sep 10, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Good story ! Thanks !\:\)

    On Oct 26, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    I was so shocked at Marissa's evil side \:eek\: Great way to end this and I'm sure that Marissa will make it big in the modellingindustry!

    On Jan 23, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:rah\:

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