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This is the final part of my beloved Rich Girl, Bonnie. More to come soon however, perhaps Frankie, Ellie, Emily or Lionel. One of them will be the one's to continue the legacy. If you have only just come into this story then I would advise you to read all the other parts first which can be found on my profile page. But if you don't want to read all of that then there is my new story 'Numb' and I am going to try and finish 'Hardly Perfect' as well. Anyway enough rambling, and on with the story.

This is the final part of my beloved Rich Girl, Bonnie. More to come soon however, perhaps Frankie, Ellie, Emily or Lionel. One of them will be the one's to continue the legacy. If you have only just come into this story then I would advise you to read all the other parts first which can be found on my profile page. But if you don't want to read all of that then there is my new story 'Numb' and I am going to try and finish 'Hardly Perfect' as well. Anyway enough rambling, and on with the story. I led her into the lounge and sat a comfortable distance away, watching her as she sat. She was still smiling.
"Well Bonnie, I am glad to see that you are OK and gradually getting over your break-up. I had heard that you were getting married again and was disappointed when I heard you broke up with Victor. What was it this time?" I reared up at once, how dare she sound so exasperated? She knows nothing! "For your information, I wasn't in love with him and I thought it cruel and heartless to pretend I was."
"So you still love Frances?" I moved my mouth but words couldn't come out. Annabelle pursed her lips in a silent 'oh'.
"No it's not like that! It's just that love is such a strong word, I just miss him that's..." I sat there for a while, wondering if I had registered the sound I though I had.
"I think you'd better get that Bonnie." Annabelle gave me a blan look and I headed out into the hall. I had almost reached the door when a huge blur rushed past me. It turned out to be Emily and she wrenched the door open, leaving me standing in a state of cold shock as I looked on in the emotional embrace. "Dad!" Emily squealed as she wrapped herself in her father's arms. I looked on as Frances looked up at me surprised at the look fo grief across his stricken face. He turned and stumble toward me, I could tell that he hadn't been drinking though, I couldn't quite place what was wrong with him.
"Bonnie." He sobbed. "My... my, she just... she just died." My mouth dropped as Frances came closer. He pulled me into a tight hug as he sobbed into my shoulder. Not knowing what to do I held him back. I felt such relief there, his arms were neither cold nor uninviting and I melted into him once again. The coldness in my heart (which must surely have been growing cobwebs) flickered into life once more and warmed my entire body. "Bonnie who..." Annabelle came bustling into the hallway. And her lips once again formed a silent 'oh'. "So it's not like that huh?" She asked looking at our two figures just leaving their entwined state. "I thought you weren't in love with him?" She gave me a knowing smile to which I replied.
"So Annie what did you really come here for?"
"I just came to see if you were here, whether you were OK. And it seems you are so I will be on my way... perhaps I'll be seeing you soon." She left and I led Frances into the kitchen. Emily followed us and sat sown at the table expectantly. Silence ensued.
"Well?" She suddenly burst out. "Are you getting back together or what?" I waited a while before deciding to send her away before me and Frances even discussed it.
"Emily I really think you should go and play with your brother, me and your father need to talk... alone."
"Fine!" Emily heaved a deep sigh and scraped the chair legs across the floor as she stomped across the floor and left the room. Frances turned to me, but I wasn't really paying him any attention.
"Bonnie, I..."
"Shhhh"
"But I..."
"Shhh." I listened hard. "Emily, I know you're still there! Go and play with your brother." Another heavy sigh.
"FINE! This house sucks!" I turned to Frances listening this time and looking into his deep green eyes. "Bonnie I am really sorry to just burst in here expecting sympathy. I know that hurt you, but I am truly sorry. I still love you Bonnie and I want you back. You are the only person I can turn to because I know you are the only one who can help me, it's not the death of my mother that has brought me here. I know that I am here because of you... I can feel it inside me, blazing bright like a fire. I need you." I know how he feltm I felt exactly the same, but what would I say? "Frances. I feel it too, I have never stopped loving you. It just took me a while to recover. I need you too Frances." I clasped his hand and felt my heart beat a little bit faster. I remembered our night geomoetry then, and I knew looking into his glowing green eyes that I loved him again. "Aha! I knew it." Emily giggled as she entered the kitchen again, she had clearly been listening despite the amount of times I had told her to go away. "I'll go play with Lionel now." I rolled my eyes as she left. "Bonnie, I don't expect you to be able to completely forgive me. But I hope you will try." Frances gave me a wide smile that I quickly returned. He stroked my hand lightly and let the other disappear under the table. And he quickly brought out a velvet box. I stared at it.
"As we spend more and more time together, as we grow old together, I want you to try and forgive me for what I have done to you. I love you completely and I want us to all be together, as a family."
Frances opened the little black box and slid the ring onto my finger. I said nothing, I just stared at the ring on my finger.
"Bonnie will you let us be together? Will you marry me... again?" "Well Frances, I dunno..." I looked into his eyes and burst out laughing "of course I will marry you... again. But you have to promise that you won't hurt me again." I knew he wouldn't but I had to make sure. And a short while after that and we were getting married once again, except this time it wasn't in the snow and it was in the comfort of our own back yard. Ellie managed to make it, but unfortunately Frankie was too drunk to come. As Frances slipped the ring on my finger, I felt giddy, I think I almost fainted. I guess the celebrations were what got me through it. And obviously Frances' embrace... perhaps, just a little. I approached Ellie, as soon as I left the arches.
"Ellie, how are you... I'm so glad that you are off the drink and could make it today. Er, how's Frankie?" Ellie looked downcast as she began to tell me some news.
"Well, she's got worse... drinks a lot more than she used to. Mum I am so sorry I got her into that mess, you didn't deserve what we put you through and she doesn't deserve to be stuck on that horrible substance." "It's Ok Ellie. She'll fix in time, I'm just glad that you are off it now."
"Yes well it's all about taking the necessary steps. First you have to admit you have a problem, and then..." Yes well, the night went pretty much as you'd expect although being as old as I was, I couldn't be up partying into the night. My hair was greying fervently and those lines that are a sign of age began to deepen heavily. And as I lay there on our wedding night, I felt it. The comfort and support that only Frances could give me. I felt our night geometry. I died that night, but I continue to watch over my family, and will continue to follow them and tell you their stories... in time. Thanks for reading Rich Girls. This is the end. Thankyou to those who followed right until the very end. There are more stories to come before more on the rest of the Price family; Numb and Hardly Perfect will be finished soon... I hope. Then I will follow all of the children on their journey. Thanks again for reading.

Rich Girls: A Bonnie End

Sep 23, 2007 by S.Cains
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    47 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Sep 23, 2007 S.Cains wrote:

    I know it was short and probably not what you were expecting but I am sorry if you didn't like it. I just liked the way I had decided to end it and I stuck with that. \:D

    On Sep 24, 2007 jemjamjar wrote:

    Yes was a little short but the content was good, Look forward to the next part.

    On Sep 24, 2007 SC707 wrote:

    Loved It! Amazing! Spectacular! I can't find the right word to describe it \:\) Im gonna miss Bonnie \:\( You've done such a great job with this series, you should be so proud of yourself! \:D

    On Sep 24, 2007 Daishi wrote:

    Bravo bravo bravo, im happy that she got to have a full day of happiness and be in the arms of the one she loved when she passed. It was a wonderful story and i enjoyed every chapter of it, thanks for sharing \:D

    On Sep 24, 2007 atangki wrote:

    I loved it! \:D Great work! \:D\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2007 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\:I loved it,nearly got me crieng then,a lovely end!!!!!!! \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2007 susieQ123 wrote:

    i really enjoyed thanz for sharing xx i am glad it was short coz you did not drag it out xx\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2007 Zenta889 wrote:

    wow, she died on her wedding night?! Perfect ending! I absolutley loved it =)

    On Sep 24, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Such an amazing ending. I \:wub\:ed it. Wonder why my story hasn't come out yet? \:confused\: Anyways, perfect ending, can't wait to start geting addicted to your newer stories! \:D

    On Sep 24, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:

    *twitch* Bonnie died?\:wacko\: I loved Bonnie!!\:wub\: Anyways nice story Sam. I'll still be reading it.\:D

    On Sep 24, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:

    Wow what did Frances do after she died?.... Please I NEED to know !!!...\:rah\: \:rolleyes: \:cool\:

    On Sep 24, 2007 animcfly wrote:

    \:\( aww im so sad its all over...but i cant wait for the other generations now, its guna be soo great looking forward to it!
    \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:

    Dead on her wedding night? You are cruel! The kids'll probably say how Frances dealt with it after won't they?

    On Sep 24, 2007 wrote:

    Oh, wow, she died on her wedding night?! Poor Frances! I'll miss Bonnie, but it was a lovely ending.

    On Sep 24, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:

    Good for you with sticking with your own conceived ending, though it was a touch sad..\:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2007 kaykay52812 wrote:

    thats sad, that she died on her wedding night. im glad that she ended up happy though.

    On Sep 24, 2007 tesasims wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Sep 24, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:

    WOW... she died on her wedding night\:eek\: I feel sorry for the kids, I wonder how they're going to take it\:confused\: I thought it was a good end to a great story\;\)

    On Sep 24, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:

    WOW.\:rolleyes: Bonnie died on the night of her wedding... I i love\:wub\: the part! I read the whole enchalada!Can't wait for more sotries! YAY!\:D\:rah\::\:\)\:P

    On Sep 24, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:

    You are a truly gifted writer. I'm pretty sad to see Bonnie's life come to an end (especially on her wedding night...poor Frances!). I'll definately look out for your other stories! ^^

    On Sep 25, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:

    OMG.... that was the most AMAZING ending! \:wub\: I am so sad that Bonnie died! I loved her!! But that ending was definately powerful! \:rah\:

    On Sep 25, 2007 lablover05 wrote:

    OMG! Bonnie died!!! I can't believe it! I read it and then I didn't really think about it and thought i read it wrong so i went back and read it again and it was the same! OMG! im sad now. But AWESOME story and look forward to more on the children!!!\:\)

    On Sep 25, 2007 MissJay wrote:

    At least she died happy... \:\(

    On Sep 25, 2007 PimpShorty0828 wrote:

    Your great... I can't believe she died! \:\(

    On Sep 25, 2007 itachigirl wrote:

    Aww so sad\:\(I wanna cry it's so sad 5.0\:D \:D

    On Sep 26, 2007 heyunome11 wrote:

    Oh my god. I love all of your stories! there so touching. Rich Girls was yet another good serries! I love all of your custom creation! where do you get it all?? just wondering.
    Well bye and have a goood day!!\:D
    hannah.

    On Sep 26, 2007 kisekiai wrote:

    I loved this series with all its ups and down I still feel kinda sad for Bonnie. great story

    On Sep 26, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:

    I really loved this story! I can't wait to follow the girls through their lives. It was sad that she died when she was finally happy; but I guess that's life. Excellent screenshots as usual!

    On Sep 26, 2007 puppy_eyes_20 wrote:

    That was a great ending I was wondering if you could tel me where to get those eyes

    On Sep 26, 2007 wrote:

    Gee, that was a different ending...nicely done!\:cool\:

    On Sep 26, 2007 fairyofdeath wrote:

    awsome it was realy good

    On Sep 27, 2007 jerif wrote:

    \:wub\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Sep 28, 2007 Wigwog wrote:

    Awww! Sweeet!

    On Sep 29, 2007 loveisparanoid wrote:

    \:wub\: awwe great story. The ending was pretty sad though. I can't wait to read your new stories!

    On Sep 30, 2007 sar612 wrote:

    Cool Story\:cool\:

    On Oct 2, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:

    \:wub\: \:rah\: \:D

    On Oct 4, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Great story, keep up the good work. \:\)

    On Oct 9, 2007 agaumer wrote:

    Great ending \:\)

    On Oct 27, 2007 100%Gawjuzz wrote:

    gr8 story! it had eveything a story needs! ur excellent!

    On Oct 28, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Ah, what a great ending, although I didn't want her to take Francis back after all he put her through... Bad man, Good story!

    On Dec 10, 2007 giada92 wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Dec 14, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:

    good job\:rah\:

    On Dec 16, 2007 sweatshirtlover2 wrote:

    wait, she died on her wedding night??? i'm confused.

    On Feb 18, 2008 lulu15 wrote:

    gorgeous, I LOVE UR ABILITY TO WRITE SO BEAUTIFULY!!!

    On Feb 23, 2008 Giddye wrote:

    I can't believe see died, it's the saddest thing ever. It's so unfair, Frankie didn't see her parent re-unite! What about Lionel? Will Frances even love him at all? And Frances after all this, what is he going to do now that she's "gone"?

    That was an absolutely great ending, but I'm greedy \:mad\: and I want to read some more...

    On Apr 2, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:D

    On Jul 3, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:

    I'm so depressed now and its only 11 am....loved the series\:rah\:

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