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This was originally going to be titled 'Rich Girls: Two Of 'Em' but I figured this was a more appropriate title. There have been quite a lot of parts in this series including: The Intro, New Beginnings, The College Life, Hospital Woes, The Simple Life and Newlyweds. I hope you enjoyed and read those parts first before reading on with this one. Thanks a lot. Now please read on.
"Mr and Mrs. Price? Oh thank God I have been looking for you everywhere! Should have came to the house first huh?" I don't know how she knew our names, but she seemed alright, so I greeted her warmly and she began to speak again. "First of all I would just like to say welcome to Caldwell Island... I have no idea why it's called that apart from it's an island off the coast of Caldwell. Second, thankyou for buying one of our seaside beach homes... I hope you like it... it may not look like much now, but after you have been living in it a while... I'm sure it will look lovely. My name is Eleanor Caldwell... yes my father owns the whole of Caldwell, I work in realty that's why I am here." She stopped and took a deep breath, I gave her a questionable look. "Oh! Here are the keys! I can't believe I almost forgot... if you need me, just call I live right next door you see." She said pointing to the house next door. "I'm nearly always available... not too many people moving here you see. Well bye then!" I know I should have been more grateful for her help, but she was much too cheerful for this time of the morning. The living room only consisted of a sofa and our new desk And the kitchen looked like it had been lived in by some sort of hippy We had a make-shift bedroom... I won't show you the bathroom... it's disgusting. The walls were shabby and the floors were cold and dusty. And there was a spare room, that we had decided would be our babies nursery. But as I stood outside watching the gulls bob along the water, and the breeze blowing the sea air across my face, all my worries were gone and I didn't care about the state of our new house! We were going to make it beautiful! I was already happy... the happiest I have ever been in my entire life... who knew the sea could be so perfect? The best thing was, I wouldn't be left at home alone anymore... since Frances' promotion he just draws up accounts and thanks to our trusty laptop... he can just work from home! And trust me, I still spend plenty of time in my favourite place in the whole world. On the bed in Frances' arms. That was all about a year ago now. I would tell you about the prgenancy, but you know... it just consisted of me eating and sleeping and eating... not very exciting... but now I am perfectly happy with my gorgeous husband and our babies. Over the past year, Frances' money has gotten us so far, we were able to improve the house miraculously before the birth, and we have become one of the most envied families in the neighbourhood. The bathroom is now fit to be used, it's actually my favourite room in the house... but that's because it kept me company in the long hours spent on the toilet, during the pregnancy. The kitchen and dining area has become a much more comfortable living space. And this is our living room, perfectly beachy and summery. Our bedroom is still a small mess, but it doesn't matter at the moment. And I have given myself a whole new look! I am so totally a brunette... why didn't I work it out before? Do you like my new look? I am so totally a beach babe too! So you want to meet my babies don't you? Come on then follow me! I wasn't exactly being truthful to you before... this is my baby girl Francesca... but she is the second born. I had twins you see. And this is my first born... Ellie. Frances took to the girls like a duck to water. We knew they were his daughters... twins run in his family... something he neglected to tell me... but whatever... even if they weren't his I still think he would have treated them the same. I mean, he is still their dad. Christopher doesn't ever come to check on them... not that I'm complaining. I woke up the next morning with fear pumping through my veins...
"Frances? Your mother... she's going to want to come and see the girls isn't she?"
"Yes, but you have nothing to worry about... I'll be here for you, she won't be able to beat you with her purse again." I looked at Frances.
"But she said if I come near you ever again..."
"Don't listen to her Bonnie, she doesn't control us... she's just my mum." I figured the conversation was over and headed to the girls to sort them out. I just hoped she wouldn't live up to her word. After I dealt with the girls and put them back to sleep, I took a well deserved break, sunbathing on the deck, when Frances announced that he would be out for the day, finding new things for the girls. "Bye honey, I'll be back later... look after the girls while I'm gone!" I gave him a cheesy grin... I just couldn't help it, we were the perfect family, with no problems and only the usual threat from the mother-in-law. I went back to working on my tan when I heard footsteps... At first I assumed it was Frances coming to give me another kiss. But the as the footsteps got louder I realised that they belonged to a woman... heels you know. So I looked up ready to greet Eleanor and got the surprise of my life as I looked at the redhead standing in front of me. "Bonnie! I have been speaking to Frances' mother." And sure enough Gwen came strutting round the corner of my house clutching her purse defiantly. "She has been telling me some things... and I... I want to know if they are true." I could see she was trying her hardest to hold back the tears, and I felt sorry for her, I was ashamed for what I had done.
"Connie, now isn't really a good time..."
"Really? Well, I think it's the perfect time!"
"Well let me get dressed first and then we can sit and talk, how does that sound?" She was pondering my suggestion, when Gwen interrupted. "Oh, I think now is the perfect time to discuss it... don't you Cornelia?" Gwen screeched.
"Bonnie, I really have to know, did you... sleep w-with Christopher?" I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. I couldn't lie to Connie, she had to know what she was letting herself in for with him even if it did mean our friendship was over.
"Connie, I am so sorry..." The rain began to fall as tears dropped down Connie's face smudging her mascara, she really should get the waterproof stuff.
"Connie, I didn't mean to... it was an accident..." Her face contorted with rage
"How can you, sleeping with my fiance be an accident? You were married Connie, you were perfectly happy... why did you have to go and ruin my life as well as your own?"
"Connie, I haven't ruined my life, and I didn't mean to ruin yours, if you'll just let me explain..."
"Explain what? How you were feeling so unsatisfied with your own husband that you had to move on to mine?"
"No, Connie, that's not what happened! Please..." "You know Bonnie, I think we have had enough of your lame excuses! I am glad that Frances has left you and now I want to see my grand-daughters!" I looked at her incredulously.
"Er, me and Frances are still together" I said quietly "and I will not permit you anywhere near my daughters in your mood." I finished flatly.
"Why, you little..." But she didn't get to finish her sentence, as I reached for her throat and began to throttle her.
"I - LOVE - FRANCES. - AND - NOTHING - YOU - DO - WILL - EVER - CHANGE - THAT - YOU EVIL - LITTLE -" This time I had to eat my words as with one almighty kick, I stumbled backwards and into the railings which crumbled beneath my weight and I went plunging into the depths below. All I heard as I tumbled into the water was...
"Quick, grab them and let's get out of here!" And that was the last time I ever saw my girls as Gwen and Connie bundled them into a taxi... and screeched off into the night. I was powerless to stop it... I was powerless against everything. I dashed inside and called the police as fast as I could, my lips and hands tremnbling. I was frightened for my girls... the police said that they would rush over immediately to ask some questions, meanwhile I had to wait for Frances to come home. The police arrived almost immediately, but I refused to answer any questions until Frances returned. Frances came home and I leapt into his arms.
"To what do I owe this pleasure?" I leant into him and cried as hard as I possibly could as his eyes fell onto the policeman and woman. We turned our attention to the policewoman as she began to speak. She looked extremely professional with her hair pulled into a tight knot, and her sincere expression... the lipgloss caught my eye and I was slightly purturbed.
"Oh, I was just at a party..." she must have seen where I was looking "anyway I understand that your two baby daughters are missing" I nooded fervently "There names are?"
"Ellie and Francesca" I replied "but I don't see how knowing my childrens' names is going to help you find them. I know who took them it was Gwen Price and Cornelia Lafingston! Please you have to get my babies back... you have to get them back" I repeated sobbing tears down the front of Frances shirt. "I'm terribly sorry about her..." Frances stepped in pointing at me "please go on with your questions."
"Do you know who would have a reason for kidnapping your children?"
"Cornelia would since I slept with her husband, she might think the baby is his... and Gwen, Frances mum would since I cheated on him and she hates me..."
The policewoman was scribbling away in her notepad.
"Bonnie, I find it really hard to believe that my mother kidnapped our children."
"Frances! She thought we had split up, she doesn't know we're still together! Please listen to me, they pushed me into the sea and kidnapped our babies, I am telling you... I saw it happen!" "Please calm down Mrs. Price... I assure you, we will find your children, we just have a few more questions to ask you..." The policewoman shot him a meaningful look and he closed his mouth and hung his head in disgrace... perhaps the police weren't allowed to get emotionally involved? And on and on these questions went, I felt barely alive enough to answer them. Thankfully Frances was by my side helping me to answer... eventually the police left with some photo's of my babies and left to 'headquarters' or whatever. I was exhausted and emotionally drained... I was almost about to collapse. I knew I wouldn't be able to eat and so, I just headed straight to bed, angry at Frances for his lack of support about my accusing his mother. Our night geometry had gone back to the way it was at the beginning of our relationship, with Frances supporting me, rather than the other way around. I felt safe in his arms, yes... but I couldn't help but fear for my little girls' safety... they weren't in the arms of their father. I fell into a deep depression after that day... I felt like I couldn't go on. Frances was always there to support me, but I don't think he felt the same emptiness that I did. I let the water run down my body, trying to cleanse myself of the sorrow I felt inside... this would be the first of many attempts today. I cried all of the time... I couldn't help it as I look into their empty cribs... my daughters should be sleeping here, under my watchful eye. I burst into hysterics and once again hurried off to the shower. It was like the emptiness of the crib was a symbol of my heart... empty and cold. Not towards Frances, just the fire inside extinguished from so much hurt. I collapsed onto the sofa whenever I felt I couldn't go on... I just stared into space with the Tv blaring... "why had we moved away? I have no friends here to help me move on... Well, unless you count Eleanor next door" I laughed to myself... "I suppose I could call her... no she barely knows us, she would probably think of me as some sort of weirdo." Why was I laughing, I should be sobbing... it doesn't feel right that I am happy, when my girls are unhappy... but are they? "I DON'T KNOW" I screamed inside my head. I was losing it and if I didn't pull myself together soon, I knew I would lose everything... even Frances. I received regular updates from the police... well you could call them updates but really they're just informing me that they still haven't found my girls. They still haven't found Frances' mother, she must be on the run and Connie... they're not really looking for her since they don't believe she had any motive for kidnapping my child. I know better. They were both here, and unless Gwen took both of my girls then Connie has one too. I will have my children back and I insisted on it so much that I had Frances build an extra room upstairs where the girls would be when they came home. This is our beach hut now... but nothing is working me out of my depression, if anything this room has just made it ten times worse. I realise that this... video diary is the only thing that's keeping me going. I'm slowly and gently slipping away into a world of nothingness. Well I was until I realised that I was expecting again. "Expecting?" Frances had asked when I told him.
"Yes Frances, I am pregnant again... now I totally understand if you don't want this baby, I mean I'm not exactly prepared for it either..."
"My God! Bonnie! This is it! Our chance to live happily ever after! This is our child and I am never going to leave you alone looking after the babies again!"
"Are you saying I am not capable of looking after children?" I asked hysterically
"No that's not what I am saying I am just telling you that I am going to be here for you, helping you look after our child." I sighed in relief... well at least now we'll have to decorate the girls' room. I'm still not ready to move on, but if it manages to coax me out of my depression then I am all for it! Over the next few months, me and Frances finally had a bedroom. We had lost the girls' previous nursery to extend the master bedroom. Frances supported everything I did, and we were finally regaining some sense of happiness, I had begun to forget the meaning of that word, but as the birth date drew nearer, we were full of deep anticipation... as we waited and waited for the birth of our third child. I spent most days relaxing, there was the occassional twinge here and there as I felt the baby move... but as the date drew nearer, my depression came back as I began to remember my two girls more than ever before... the way they cooed and dribbled, their toothless grins as I cuddled them... I had to get out of this place, it was full of memories... most of them bad. I hated to keep running from my past, but letting it catch up with me was like letting a balloon blow up in my face and losing all sense of being. We were all up and ready to go when an unfriendly pain went stabbing from my back to my stomach. I held my breath trying to hold it in, but it was too late, the water sloshed at me feet and I could feel the baby ready to leave my womb and enter the world... I couldn't let it yet, I wasn't in the right state of mind... We had to leave my past behind before I could move on.
"FRANCES! THE BABY... IT'S COMING NOW!" Frances stopped loading the taxi with our possessions and hurried to me immediately... I don't know how he managed it but a few moments later I was being rushed off in the taxi to the nearest hospital. I returned home a few days later carrying my new baby girl Emily in my arms. I was actually expecting a boy, but was nevertheless pleased it was a girl. There was just something that wasn't the same... I thought I had everything I wanted, but I knew something was missing. I felt distant from Emily, I developed different feelings toward her than my first two children and barely took any notice of her... I let Frances do most of the work. He was still the perfect father, but there was just a deep, burning resentment inside of me that I could not get rid of... it hurt me and I know it hurt Frances, but I just couldn't shake it off... I couldn't love Emily the way that I loved Ellie and Francesca, there was just something different about her. He fed her... Washed her... And put her to bed... everything I should be doing to show the poor child I loved her, I wasn't. But it wasn't my fault, I had become so distant, and I couldn't help it, I cried into my pillow most nights, missing my girls. I could go to a psychiatrist, but I knew why I was depressed, I didn't want to take pills to make me forget... there was nothing I could do. I had considered some things while I lay dreaming in my bed, I rarely slept... it was just so difficult these days. I could put myself out of my misery, and I would have before now if I knew that it wouldn't ruin the lives of everyone around me... I could not let Frances feel what I am feeling. Frances still kept me safe while we slept and I felt sorry for him as I felt his disappointment in my coldness towards him and Emily. We didn't speak anymore, we had nothing in common... I tried to wake myself up, but it wasn't happening. How was I supposed to wake up when I felt so closed off from the world? My world had shut down and I was closing with it. Thankyou for reading this part... Don't be too hard on Bonnie, please! I love her to pieces. I hope you enjoyed it and will look out for the next part. Thanks to all the custom content creators and you guys for supporting me this far with your welcome comments. I promise the next part will start looking brighter. Sam
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63 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jul 20, 2007 wrote:
OMG!!! Kidnapped?!?! I don't even know what to say...it's a great update though
5pts:P
On Jul 20, 2007 kisekiai wrote:
I wish she would get her twins back
nevertheless, i love your stories
On Jul 20, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:
I really hope that Bonnie gets her twins back, that's so sad that they were kidnapped
I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter!
On Jul 20, 2007 flyinggrace wrote:
This story keeps getting better and better. I hope she gets back to herself and gets her babies back. 5.0
On Jul 20, 2007 agnez_friik wrote:
On Jul 20, 2007 susieQ123 wrote:
I cant wait for the next part will you let me know when its out please thanx
On Jul 20, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:
Nooooooooooooooooooo! Not the babies!
I hope they get back to their family.
On Jul 20, 2007 atangki wrote:
Wonderful! I hope they find the two girls..
On Jul 20, 2007 jenniegoldy wrote:
brilliant story as always! i do hope they get the twins back!
On Jul 20, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
Poor Bonnie!!!
Oh!! I HATE Connie and Gwen
This part was really sad, but really good!! Please let me know when the next part is finished. 5.0
On Jul 20, 2007 wrote:
really good story and great pictures....i like it
On Jul 20, 2007 AshGreg wrote:
i really hope they get the twins back but it was awsome can't wait to the see the next one
On Jul 20, 2007 Lailey01 wrote:
Another good story...bring back Ellie and Francessa! 5.0
On Jul 20, 2007 RIDance wrote:
Those poor kids. That's awful! I hope they are returned and Bonnie is happy again.
On Jul 20, 2007 maxi king wrote:
On Jul 20, 2007 LillyKP wrote:
Good story, I'm going back to check out the older parts.
On Jul 20, 2007 fairyofdeath wrote:
bring the girls home the motherinlaws so evil but i loved this part
On Jul 20, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:
Loved it! I can't believe Frances is Gwen's SON. Gwen has issues.
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On Jul 20, 2007 Moo100142 wrote:
the police ladys forehead is HUGE!!!
On Jul 20, 2007 wrote:
GIRL
YOUR MOVIE IS AWESOME!!
On Jul 20, 2007 kAY2287 wrote:
that was a great story, and can't wait for next part
On Jul 20, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
Nicely done, great plot!
On Jul 20, 2007 babygurlbx92 wrote:
On Jul 20, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
A very good continuing tale! Great chapter, great emotion!
On Jul 20, 2007 sandybvv wrote:
On Jul 20, 2007 itachigirl wrote:
Oh my gosh I cant believe they were kidnaped!geat job though
5.0
On Jul 20, 2007 wrote:
Its a great story. you did a very good job. let me know when the next one comes out
On Jul 20, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
Oh no! I hope they get the babies back and everything works out! This story is getting so sad. They made the house very gorgeous though. 5.0 as always.
On Jul 20, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
Very sad at the kidnapping part... I hope everything works out! Also, Bonnie loks weird brunett
On Jul 20, 2007 toczka wrote:
Good story
On Jul 21, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:
Awww!!! She better get the twins back!!! Great part! Oh and I like Bonnie's new look!
On Jul 21, 2007 Girlsims1 wrote:
Well done i love it but whats wrong with the sims uper lip it looks very strange !!!!LOL hey but good job and Well done!!! Love the work
and the house was very pretty Love it!!!
On Jul 21, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
This was a surprise! Hope she gets the girls back soon. Poor little Emily; lucky for her she has a dad to take care of her.
5.0+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Can't wait for next chapter.
On Jul 21, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
So sad
On Jul 21, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:
Wow, that's so sad. I hope she gets the twins back. She can't live without them!!
On Jul 21, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
Great! I REALLY hope that the Twins Come BACK!!!!
I H8 THAT OLD HAG!!!!
On Jul 21, 2007 rene2509 wrote:
Interesting Story ^^
On Jul 21, 2007 sara_87 wrote:
AWSOME!!!!
On Jul 21, 2007 rstorms wrote:
great story
On Jul 21, 2007 converse02 wrote:
ooh... how sad, this reminds me of a soap opera! haha its full of suspense and mystery and love!! wicked sweet!
On Jul 22, 2007 eshuff wrote:
I love the location and the house! Beautiful, sad, and wonderfully written! Top marks from me!
On Jul 22, 2007 deniseariane wrote:
if jour story continues to the way it does now jou do not have to worrie about people not wanting to read the next part, because it is great.
denise
On Jul 22, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:
awwww another great read. god im starting to feel sorry for bonnie now. she really gets the bad end of everything
give me a bit of hope pleaaseeeee something good has to happen.
On Jul 22, 2007 rbmhsmj wrote:
wonderful
On Jul 23, 2007 wrote:
A good read, well plotted, your shots are very good as well!
On Jul 23, 2007 xrainbowcloud wrote:
i hope the twins come back!!!
these stories are awesome
On Jul 23, 2007 Linuxete wrote:
Good story
On Jul 23, 2007 MissJay wrote:
Awww poor Bonnie! Hope she gets her other babies back!
On Jul 23, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
[Im deadly tired,I just want to head to bed,but I couldnt go sleeping without reading your last story...so]
I was just right!!! 
Gwen, yes: she do has the reason for kidnap them. Can we be sure that Frances has really no clue about her mother kidnapping the girls? he really doesnt knoe where they are? 
I love Bonnie to pieces either,but you do have to solve eveything you put up... but Im sure you'll do it,and doing it greatly.
can you believe that I commented the previous installment *before* reading this?!
anyway.I love Connie with her 'new and improved' hair (slightly lighter hair color) as much as I love the brunette version on Bonnie! She's lovely. Gwen... she's a real witch, isnt she? Despite what Bonnie said to the policewoman, I dont think Connie had any reason to kidnap the baby twins: since they're the proof of Christepher bing unfaithful, she should want not to see them at all!
...OK, I think I wrote enough...dont you think?!
On Jul 23, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
[sorry,I forgot to rate..:P]
AL
On Jul 24, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:
Well, I still don't believe in Gwen and Connie kidnapping the babies... Maybe it's that estate agent that has something to do with it? Great story, thank you for creating and sharing!
On Jul 24, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
I love it! Thanks for sharing.
On Jul 24, 2007 wrote:
Poor Bonnie! But excellent story, I loved it!
On Jul 24, 2007 tesasims wrote:
On Jul 24, 2007 wrote:
It sounds like postpartum depression. Poor Bonnie.
I hope she can get the twins back.
On Jul 31, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
GET THE TWINS BACK !!!!Ahem, I almost cried in this part...
On Aug 3, 2007 bflosweethart wrote:
i lvoed it
On Aug 12, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:
On Aug 12, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:
forgot to rate it Hehe
On Sep 19, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
LOVED IT , I really hope that something starts to go right for the family in the next part , can't wait for more
On Sep 25, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
I loved it can't wait for more
On Oct 7, 2007 agaumer wrote:
Great job, it's amazing seeing how far Bonnie has come from the beginning of the story.
On Oct 27, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
Oh, this is too exciting. I need to read the rest! Fingers crossed for Bonnie. Although she's not my favorite person (sim) in this world, I still think she deserves some happiness after all she has been through.