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Hello and welcome to the next part of Rich Girls (why do I always say that?) I hope that you enjoy this part as much as the others, and will continue reading to the very end. The parts to this story (from the beginning) are: The Intro, New Beginnings, The College Life, Hospital Woes, The Simple Life?, Newlyweds, Eyes Wide Shut, Waking Up, Truth Hurts, Passing Judgement and Lost... at least I think that's all of them. Well I hope you read and enjoyed those first before contuing with this one... I don't want you to get lost.
"Nevermind. You have to get out of here! I have nothing to say to you!"
"Bonnie. Why are you whispering?" Clearly Frances didn't mind being overheard.
"Because I am." I stated defiantly. "I don't have to explain myself to you... leave me alone!" I didn't realise how childish I sounded.
"Bonnie. I am not going to leave until I have spoken to you." I bared my teeth, my brain ticking... if I just pretended to listen to him, that might suffice... and then hopefully he will leave as soon as possible. I said nothing, but pushed him through the front door and sat down impatiently. I slumped down on the furthest end of the couch... I didn't dare look at him for fear that he would see that I still loved him.
"Bonnie? How are you?"
"How do you think I am?" I replied stiffly. "You have ruined my life. Our childrens lives! So. You really think they are happy with you?" I continued to stare at the wall... but felt Frances sit down next to me. "Well, after your little escapade... the children are happy with me. Francesca hates you now, I wonder if there is anything you could do to fix it." He said slyly, staring at the same point on the wall as me.
"Oh, you're funny Frances! Funny you never showed me that side of you before we were married!" I said sarcastically. "You know I can do nothing because I am not allowed near them. Now if all you came here for was to taunt me... then you can get out RIGHT NOW!" I got to my feet shaking with rage, my hands balled into fists.
"I said GET OUT!" I screeched. Frances held his hands up as if to surrender. But it didn't stop me trying to attack every part of his body as he headed towards the door. "YOU DISGUSTING PIECE OF FILTH! I'M SICK OF LOOKING INTO YOUR SMUG FACE. GET OUT!" Frances fumbled with the doorknob, but I continued to shout and scream. I hadn't realised that Gwen had entered the house because I had been screaming so much. She frowned at Frances who was stood as bold as brass right in front of her.
"What are you doing here? Trying to cause Bonnie more grief as you corrupt her children... rubbing it in? Well Frances Leslie Price... I have had it! You will not torture Bonnie anymore!" And without waiting for Frances' explanation she began to swing her bag wildly. She beat him furiously, I saw snot flying from her flaring nostrils as she ferociously continued to hit every inch of his body. He howled in pain and I tried to stop myself from giggling, he scowled at me when I caught his eye and I ceased immediately. Frances left the house at a run... I smirked and called after him.
"I still care about you Frances... there is something inside of me that won't let go. But I just want you to know, that it can only hold on for so long before I rip it out... I can't go on like this Frances, and if you don't fix this you will have lost me forever." I cried out for him one last time... and then turned back inside. "You don't think he actually paid attention to that mush do you?" Gwen asked sceptically. I shrugged my shoulders.
"I have no idea, but if he did... I sure hope he thinks straight. My heart can only be broken so many times Gwen, sometimes I just feel like I can't go on. Right. Anyway I am going to take a shower." I said, holding my head high and showing I still had some dignity. I sat in front of the Tv for most of the rest of the day... even with Gwen around, making herself busy, asking more questions... I didn't want to do anything. Frances had made a bad day worse. What had happened last night and why had Victor just run off early this morning? I could call him? But I don't want to seem desperate, and I don't want him to think that I am calling because I want to do it again some time. Once again Gwen's voice intruded my thoughts. "So how did it go with Frances last night?" What is she on about?
"Gwen. I didn't see Frances last night. I saw him this morning don't you remember?" Gwen looked at me oddly.
"Bonnie, you called Frances and asked him to come over at three in the morning. Don't YOU remember?" WHAT? Perhaps then I had remembered things wrong... what if Victor hadn't taken advantage of me being drunk at all... what if... Frances! I boiled with rage once more, I stood up suddenly making Gwen jump and spill soapy water down her front and practically ran to the phone.
"Gwen are you sure that I invited Frances over?"
"Yes. I'm sure!"
"What time did he leave?" but I had a feeling that I already knew the answer.
"Bonnie, are you alright? He left when you screamed at him to get out."
"So he was here all night... but then who rang the bell?" Gwen didn't answer, she clearly had no idea what I was talking about. I was getting so confused, why would Frances ring the bell if he had stayed all night? I picked up the phone and dialled Victor's number... I wanted to thank him for bringing me home.
"Bonnie, who are you calling?" Gwen asked with a worried look.
"Victor. He brought me home last night, I just want to say thankyou..."
"Bonnie you can't call him!" What was she on about, I can do what I like. I looked at her defiantly and held the receiver to my ear. She scowled as she heard someone answer on the other end.
"Hello. Is that Vannessa? Hi. Do you think you could get Victor for me? What he's not there? Ok thanks Vannessa, I'll call back later... do you think you could tell him that I called? Thanks." I put the receiver back and faced Gwen. "What was all that about Gwen? Why am I not I allowed to call Victor? We like each other, of course I can. Besides you were the one who set me up with him! He can help me get over my depression, and the sooner that happens the sooner I get my girls back. Don't you understand Gwen? This is my way out!" But Gwen didn't look at me she stared at the wooden floor.
"Gwen?"
"Bonnie. Victor isn't the nice man you thought he was... you called Frances over here to comfort you when you realised that Victor had taken advantage of you."
"No. Victor wouldn't do that to me!" Gwen looked at me apologetically.
"Bonnie. I heard you... he took advantage of you, and Frances came over and stayed with you all night, comforting you." I felt the familiar sensation of the world falling down on my shoulders. I sat on the front steps, letting the rain wash over me... The tears ran down my face and I watched the sun go down and the darkness appear as it painted a black coat against the sky. I thought of Victor and how smug he must be feeling now that he had used me and got away with it... "Well, he wasn't going to get away with it... I was going to go down the beach tomorrow and consort with some other guys" I told myself "yes show him what he is missing out on." I brushed myself off and headed inside. Still feeling used and hurt, I cried myself to sleep... dreaming of Victor's annoyed face as he watched me flirt with the guys on the beach. Frances turned up and I kissed him in front of Victor whose face contorted with rage as he stepped up to Frances... I arrived at the beach rather early the next morning... I wanted to catch Victor on his early morning work out. He wasn't here yet, so I looked around for a really cute guy and spotted the one who was flirting with Marissa the other day. I went over to him (no problem in getting a head start before Victor arrives)
"Hi, I'm Bonnie." He gave me an odd look.
"I'm Max... er, is there something you want?"
"You know, you look so hot in those tight, white shorts..." I said seductively, slowly wetting my bottom lip.
"Oh, well er... thanks. I bought them the other day." Ok... why was he acting so nervous, any other guy would be putty in my hands. I suddenly caught sight of Victor and continued flirting with Max.
"You know I would just love to rub oil into those lovely muscles of yours..." I said smoothly, while gently stroking his chest.
"Er... you know. I think you have got the wrong end of the stick here. You see... I'm not into women." I let out a silent "Oh"
"Don't worry I'll play it cool, I'll see you later." I looked up at Victor and saw him smirking. "Why were you flirting with Max?" He asked as I walked over to him, I really wanted to say a few things... that is what I came here for after all. "I just want to say, Bonnie that I had a REALLY great time last night... so do you want to do it again sometime?" I looked at him feeling repulsed and rather sick. The blood rushed to my face as I filled with anger.
"NO I DON'T WANT TO DO IT AGAIN... YOU TOOK ADVANTAGE OF ME WHEN I HAD HAD TOO MUCH CHAMPAGNE. I THOUGHT YOU WERE DIFFERENT! BUT NO YOU'RE THE SAME AS ALL THE OTHERS, JUST A WOMANIZING PRAT! STAY AWAY FROM ME!" I snarled... he disgusted me and I still felt repulsed by myself over what had happened. "Bonnie, is that you... my god it is! I haven't seen you in ages!" I turned and looked into a pair of big, brown, beautiful eyes.
"Bonnie, who is this?" Victor asked tentatively. "Is this another one of the men you have on the side?"
"No, I'm Christopher, Bonnie's friend from University... we were quite close." Chris turned to me instead. "It's great to see you... me and Clarissa are a couple now... she got mature so I was like Hell Yeah! How's life been treating you?" I suddenly let out a howl, and the tears began to fall thick and fast... But I didn't want Victor or Chris to see me like this so I ran off the beach, not bothering to change, got a cab and went back home. That had not turned out like I planned. I arrived home again and went straight to my laptop... I searched for the dirt on Victors family, I wanted to know Victors' history... past relationships, job history... everything. But as I was looking I found out more than I needed to know. Beatrice and Humphrey were not his real parents and Vannessa was not his sister... I wondered if he knew this. But I hated him too much at that moment to care. I searched for more information on Vannessa and her parents. And what I found out surprised and angered me. A few years ago, the Montgomery's (Victor's fake family) faked their own deaths to escape a bloodthirsty brawl that had been going on for centuries. Unfortunatley for them one of their daughters went missing... so they took in a foster child, his name was Victor. How could they just forget about their poor little girl so easily... my girls had been ripped away from me and yet I don't go taking in the less fortunate! I hated the Montgomery's and I wanted to march over there right now and say what was in my mind. However Gwen's presence and eagle eyes prevented me from finding out more and I decided to go to their mansion later, when it got dark. I wanted to find out how they could replace their daughter... They were lucky. I had lost all of my girls... they hadn't even tried to find the missing daughter. I printed off a few pages from the article and shut the computer down then headed up to my room to dress up for tonights meeting. I waited for Gwen to fall asleep as darkness fell. The rain was still pounding against the slim glass. I don't know why but I really wanted Victor to know the truth about them, what they did... how he was just a replacement. But then I thought, why let his "parents" know that Victor knows... I should tell him alone and let him decide what to do... that way he feels in control and if I play it cool he could tell me everything about that little girl. I sat on my bed for a while, just thinking about how I was going to approach Victor tomorrow, especially after my outburst at the beach. I sat thinking of ways to apologise while exhaustion set in and I soon fell asleep. I woke up before Gwen, so I could reach the phone unheard. I dialled Victor's number which was still fresh in my memory and waited for someone to answer.
"Hello?" The heavenly voice spoke.
"Victor! I really need to talk to you... do you think you could meet me?"
"Bonnie. I don't know why you're mad at me. But I think we really need to talk, clearly this relationship is taking too much of a toll on you... I think we should call it a day." I opened my mouth to say something but words could not express how I was feeling... I felt as though my stomach had dropped to the soles of my feet. "No, no no. That's not what I want. Please I really have to talk to you. Will you meet me?"
"Well if that's not what you want... then what DO you want? All that stuff at the beach yesterday..."
"That meant nothing" I lied "It was just Gwen getting into my head that's all. Please meet me." There was a long silence but I didn't dare break it in case he got impatient.
"Ok. Where?" I told him to meet me in the park where no-one would hear us. I made my way through the hedgerows... wondering if Victor was actually going to show up. I was getting quite frantic and paranoid, well until I almost ran straight in to him as I turned another corner. I walked straight over to him. "Victor, I have something really important to tell you." I fumbled in my purse. "It's about your parents" I said pulling out a few pieces of paper. I was about to lay them out in front of him when he interrupted me. "Please, Bonnie. I need to tell you something first. You said that I took advantage of you when we were drunk. I swear to you I didn't." He held out his hand, urging me to take it. He then led me over to a nearby bench. "You wanted to go back to your place... so that's where we went. You were practically falling over, so I carried you to your bedroom... And then, I said goodnight... and I left. I left and I didn't come back till the next morning to see if you were alright." He finally looked at me and I gave him a small smile. And then something clicked, but before I could apologise for jumping to conclusions he continued. "When I came over Frances said that you were still sleeping and that I had best come by later. I really wanted to see you, but then Gwen arrived and told me to go home... She didn't want me disturbing you." But if Gwen knew that Frances was there... then why did she act so surprised when she came in? And why did she start beating him with her purse?
"So, er... you wanted to tell me something about my parents?" Victors heavenly voice rang through my ears once again. "Oh er... yes. It's just that they - they're not your parents Victor! I was looking you up on the internet... I just wanted to find out if you make it a habit seducing beautiful women." (Like myself) "and then I found out about the Montgomery's and their feud with some other family... and they lost a daughter when they faked their own death... they replaced her with you." I finished somewhat dramatically, but I don't think I achieved the desired effect. "You mean to tell me that my parents' daughter is still missing and I... I was just adopted to help them forget?"
"Yes. Victor that is what I found out." I smiled at him apologetically, but his face was expressionless.
"What does it matter? I still had a family and better that it was them rather than some poor family. I have had a really good start and I appreciate everything that they have done for me." He stood up ready to leave, but I managed to compose myself and made him stop. I was furious with Victor now.
"It matters because that missing daughter could still be out there! Lost and alone... with no family. Just like you would have been without the Montgomery's! We need to find her and reunite her with her family." He gave me an incredulous look like he didn't believe what I was saying, like I was out of my mind.
"It has nothing to do with me." He said stubbornly. "And nothing to do with you... I know you need a hobby since you have no family now, but reuniting their long lost daughter... that's a bit of a big project. Maybe you should take up some pottery classes or something... read a book." Victor turned on his heel and left me there standing stupidly in the hail. I arrived home a short while later, not realising how I had even gotten there. Things had not turned out how I had wanted them to... but at least Victor knew. I wish I could read his mind... I had accused him of taking advantage of me, I should have handled the situation more carefully... what if he never spoke to me again? What if the relationship was over? I felt a cold, clammy feeling come over me... I felt sick, really sick. Perhaps I was getting the flu? I woke up, what appeared to be a few days later with Gwen fussing over me.
"You have some flowers Bonnie. Victor left them a while ago. The doctor has been round a few times to see you... it seems you're in for a rough few months, but it doesn't matter, you've been through it before... besides. I can help you now." Gwen smiled cheerfully and pushed me back onto the bed when I tried to sit up.
"Gwen, what are you talking about... a rough few months?" Gwen smiled even more broadly.
"You're pregnant Bonnie. See what becomes of people who mess about with alcohol? You should be more careful in the company that you seek. Victor was a bad decision... I only hope that there aren't many more of them." Pregnant? Again? It's not Victors. Is she completely clueless? It had to be Frances'! This couldn't be happening to me. Gwen tried once again to push me back onto the bed, but it was needless... I had fainted. I came around late that same afternoon, the scent of red roses now filled the room. I knelt down beside my bedside table and smelt the roses. Oh God. I wanted to run over to Victor's right away and thank him... but there was a note. He apologised for his rude and insensitive behaviour... Frances had never sent me roses... was this right? Comparing the two? I don't know but whatever it was, it was making my heart flutter and the tears filled my eyes. "Oh Bonnie! I thought I could hear you moving about I'm so glad you are awake. We have a lot to talk about." She saw me crying and her face turned from an excited red colour to a concerned pinkish glow. "Oh Bonnie." She pulled me into a firm hug, I could feel her heartbeat. "Tell me what the matter is." I sobbed silently for a moment.
"It's Frances' baby. Not Victors.. how could this have happened?"
"Bonnie what are you talking about? Of course the baby is Victors I told you what happened!" I pulled away and shook my head. "No Gwen. You don't understand! I spoke to Victor and he told me exactly what happened that night... and I know that it was Frances who took advantage of me." Gwen gave me a stern look.
"I think you are under estimating Victor... think about it. Frances would not have done this to you... he is repulsed by you for what you did to him, he can't even look at you. I'm sorry but I know my son." I folded my arms and my eyebrows almost became one as I frowned at her. "Of course!" I yelled how could I have been so stupid? "You know your son so well, because that's what these meetings were about! You have been seeing the girls behind my back... probably telling Frances every little thing, so that he and you will have everything! Well you can tell him it's impossible to spy on me now, because I won't stay here another minute." I screamed and yelled till my throat was sore, Gwen took advantage of my pause as she stepped into the firing line. "Where you gonna go?" Gwen asked in a bored voice. "You know as well as I, that I am not capable of all the things you just mentioned. But yes, Bonnie, I have been going to see the girls... and they are happy. And I have been telling Frances things, but only so he would feel guilty and take pity on you." Everyone I knew had deceived me in some way... who could I trust now? Where would I go? "I don't know where I will go Gwen. But anywhere is better than here, with little spies all over the place! You have a great cover story though Gwen, one good thing that will come of today, though, is that you will be able to have your grand daughters visit you. Now please leave my room so that I can get dressed and packed... you won't be seeing me again, well not if I can help it." I turned to the wardrobe and waited for Gwen's footsteps to fade into nothing. Then I turned around and fell in a heap onto the bed sobbing into the blankets. I took one last look at Victors roses. As I breathed in the scent of them, I felt my anger just slip away... though not enough to make me change my mind. The argument with Gwen and the sudden realisation that she had been lying to me all this time was the final straw. I was sick of her meddling and her spying. Sick, sick, sick. I had no idea where I was going to go, but Gwen could drown in the bottom of a lake for all I care. And that is the end for this part. I only hope there was enough drama and that it wasn't too confusing. There is something in the previous part which no-one picked up on which was rather surprising... but all will be revealed in the next part. Sorry this part took a while to come out, I went to see the new Harry Potter movie, so I spent a while lingering on that... anyway thanks for reading and I hope you will come back for the next part where we find out where Bonnie escapes to.
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On Aug 13, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
Woooooooot! First to comment!
Anyways, kind of a confusing part, but that's okay. What's going to happen to Bonnie? I want to find out soon! 
I hope Frances comes to his senses, or if he already has, makes things right with Bonnie. 
Another great part!
On Aug 13, 2007 atangki wrote:
Great part! It's nice to see Frances get beaten up by his own mother.
On Aug 13, 2007 leifofdel wrote:
Great as usual. Looking foward to more.
On Aug 13, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:
I've got a feeling that Bonnie is the lost child... anyway 5.0
On Aug 13, 2007 converse02 wrote:
idk... its confused me for the first time, everyone betrayed her, poor Bonnie...
Good part tho!
And i agree, I believe that she is the lost child.
On Aug 13, 2007 jenniegoldy wrote:
why are all your stories soooooo good? breilliant story as allways rate:5.0
On Aug 13, 2007 Daishi wrote:
You're still keeping me on the edge of my seat. I cant wait for the next part. Gosh shes had such a hard time, i hope that everything will work out for her in the end. Great Job!!!
On Aug 13, 2007 kisekiai wrote:
hmm I wonder if Bonnie is the missing daughter...
anyway, great job and I hope to see the next one soon
On Aug 13, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
OHMIGAAD!!! What a turbulent part!! Everything is getting deeper, and it seems as though the web of lies surrounding Bonnie has yet to unfold!! No wonder Frances was grinning. He was leering! But who is telling the truth. Poor Bonnie has to one to turn to, no one to trust! I've seen the Harry Potter movie too, still think the book is better!! And the 7th book, WOW!! Anyway, you always leave us when we want more. Great part! 5.0
On Aug 13, 2007 maxi king wrote:
On Aug 13, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:
Of course it was a good read as usual but this part was a tad "soap opera-ish". Anyway, you are doing an excellent job. Please keep the story going...I wanna know what happens to our lovely Bonnie.
On Aug 13, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
Hmm Bonnie Montgomery? Maybe that's why the dad looked at her sympathetically in the last story. He knew she was his daugheter. And I knew Gwen couldn't be trusted. Frances either. Poor Bonnie. Well, I'll be looking for the next part! ^^
On Aug 13, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
Oh my God, such an amazing part
Is it me or is Bonnie the lost child ??? I hope she and Victor have a happy life with the girls and Frances to jail
I can't wait for more 
On Aug 13, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
great emotion, well done!
On Aug 13, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:
LOOOOOVE IT!
It was kinda confusing though, with Frances and Victor and yeaa....Well, I still loved it!
On Aug 13, 2007 fairyofdeath wrote:
i hpe she gets the girls back and she ends up with victor
On Aug 13, 2007 wywoluver wrote:
On Aug 13, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:
OMG! That was an awesome part! But gah, cliffhanger! I never really did trust Gwen... she's sneaky looking! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work
P.S. Where did you get Bonnie's short brown hair? I love it!
On Aug 13, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:
This was a great chapter, I really feel sorry for Bonnie and her girls. I think that she is the long lost daughter and hopefully she escapes somewhere that she won't get spied on by Gwen or Frances. If you get the next chapter out, I'll read it when I come back from my vacavtion
On Aug 13, 2007 tesasims wrote:
Is Bonnie, Victors parents lost daughter? I feel so sorry for Bonnie.
On Aug 13, 2007 aimeeisasimnut wrote:
Great part! I think Bonnie is the missing daughter. In the last part you showed a picture of Victor's sister Vannessa and said "and this... is my sister, Vannessa.". Plus Vannessa and Bonnie look alike. At first I thought it was a picture of Bonnie but the clothes were different. Then you show a picture of them side by side. Great story!!!!
On Aug 14, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
I think I know what happens next ^^v
On Aug 14, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:
On Aug 14, 2007 candy820 wrote:
great story as always
5.0
On Aug 14, 2007 wrote:
you rock!
On Aug 14, 2007 albaby wrote:
WOW, i think you have hundreds of stories!! when did you start writing here in TSR?.
weeee. I'll start reading the Rich girls saga if i have time. Exams are killing me now. so bye. 
You are a gifted writer!
On Aug 14, 2007 MissJay wrote:
Love that part!!!! I wonder who's baby it is?
On Aug 14, 2007 MissJay wrote:
Forgot to rate....I wonder if Bonnie's the missing daughter.....hmmm
On Aug 14, 2007 bflosweethart wrote:
i love it! its so unexpected and shocking!
On Aug 15, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:
On Aug 15, 2007 dogges11 wrote:
lov it
On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:
A very entertaining installment!
On Aug 16, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Great chapter as usual! Can't wait for the next one. Excellent screenshots!! I kind of suspected that Gwen was up to something because she was way to defensive of Frances in the beginning. 5.0+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Glad you took time out to see the Harry Potter movie. I'm a big fan myself! Finished the new book in a day and a half. Thought it was a great way to end the series.
On Aug 17, 2007 wrote:
Aww, poor Bonnie. I figured that there was something up with both Gwen and Victor that we weren't seeing...
On Aug 19, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice story, I loved it.
On Aug 21, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
On Sep 26, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
great story , can't wait to find out more
On Sep 28, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Good story ! Thanks !
On Oct 8, 2007 agaumer wrote:
Better than a soap opera XD
On Oct 28, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
Woo... The world is just closing in on Bonnie... She should flee and live in a secluded lot in a neighbourhood far, far away. She really needs to get away from Frances and everyone else, maybe a desert island...
On Jun 30, 2008 arc1801 wrote: