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Welcome to the first part of Rich Girls, or maybe the whole story, depends how much time I take. It would be a good idea to read the Intro to get an idea of the characters and the family. Enjoy...

Welcome to the first part of Rich Girls, or maybe the whole story, depends how much time I take. It would be a good idea to read the Intro to get an idea of the characters and the family. Enjoy... Hi again, it's me Bonnie Winston, I have just returned from the night of the year, commonly known as the prom... it wasn't bad, actually I had quite a lot of fun... even though Frances was gone. I was all alone, well apart from Connie who I spent the night with. Thank God for friends! Anyway I have to report to dad now, let him know that I am home safe, I'll tell you what happened when I get back up to my room. I walked into the kitchen and there was my father waiting to give me a huge hug.
"I'm home" I announced loudly, (I like a lot of attention)
"How was your night sweety?" My dad asked, slyly, I know he want the ins and outs of everything that happened
"I'll tell you later, I'm tired now" I said sleepily adding a stifled yawn to make it seem more real, in actual fact I couldn't be more awake, I had the most amazing night you see... well hold on I'll tell you in a second. Right, well now I am ready to tell you everything. Me and Connie arrived fashionably late as usual (being the richest girls in the school) we made a big fussy entrance, I feel sorry for Connie but I have to say I looked much better than she did. I'll show you the photo, hold on a second... She was awfully pale, I'm her best friend, I warned her that she should go on the sunbed for just a few minutes. I also told her the dress was too dark, but she wouldn't listen. But in the end it didn't matter what we looked like, we both ended up having a great time. There were some people that came from, like, nowhere looking gorgeous and we all mingled on a huge scale rather than the previous high school seperations. It felt quite good to be treating people of a lower social standing than me as an equal. I felt... normal. But I know I can never be a normal teenage girl, and my time has run out. I am moving away in a few days, to start my University days, get a degree and 'try' and be normal... but in the end I'll just have to come back here and take over the family jewels. Anyway, so yeah a really cute guy, who I have never seen before, comes up to me and he asks me to dance. Obviously I said yes, we got dancing and chatting and I found out that we are going to the same University. We might not be doing the same course, but hopefully I will see him around campus! I can't tell you how much I want to be able to do 'normal' things... and I know what you're thinking, you think I am a spoilt little rich girl who has no idea how lucky I am. Well let me tell you something, Money can't buy happiness. Rich people have horrible pressures in their lives that they don't want aswell you know! Going off course again, anyway I am going to get some beauty sleep now... and I gotta start packing tomorrow. I'm leaving... spreading my wings. Living my own life I can't wait. We sat down to breakfast a few mornings after, I was all ready and packed and I was shaking with nerves. I would be leaving in a few hours, I would finally be free of the confinement that I had lived with for my whole life, if only for a few years... I would be free.
"Well this is it honey" my mother stated "your big day... are you excited?"
"Of course, but I am a bit nervous."
"There is nothing to be nervous about my dear, you are perfect in every way, people will like you and you have Connie to keep you company." That was easy for her to say, she had no idea what it was going to be like, or what it was like to make friends when they are all so put off by my high social standing. But I smiled and nodded in agreement, so that I could get out of the awkward situation as fast as possible. I have left my house for the last time now and I can already feel the binds of my mother loosening. This is going to be good. Less pressure from the family as I go through my courses, they don't really care how well I do as long as I come and carry on the Winston line. It's about time, I am just going to meet Connie and then begin my new life at University. Let's go! I know it is only ten pages but, I couldn't move the photo album with Bonnie as she went to college and figured that I would upload this now so that you can catch a glimpse of what is to come. The next part will be out soon, and I hope you will read that one aswell. It will be longer I promise!

Rich Girls: New Beginnings

Jun 25, 2007 by S.Cains
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    39 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jun 26, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    Oh thank god, I've been waiting AGES for this part, I honestly thought you weren't going to continue. Anyway, it was brilliant!!\:D Your sims have the most amazing eyes, where did you get Bonnie's eyes??I wish i could give this more than just 5.0!!\:o

    On Jun 26, 2007 Shannen124 wrote:

    Good story. I wish it were a bit longer. but hey? Thast's up to you! Good story... How do you come up wif such good ideazz? i am about 2 write da 1st story, anjd cant fink of nofin..
    Cya!
    Good story!
    KEEP WRITTING!! :P

    On Jun 26, 2007 atangki wrote:

    Great! I can't wait for the following parts! \:D\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jun 26, 2007 marizza82 wrote:

    Excelent part!!! It wasn't that short, I've seen shorter !!Keep it up\:wub\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Jun 26, 2007 Nono_Girl wrote:

    haha!There are 11 pages!!!!\:rah\:

    On Jun 26, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:

    That was so great!! I'll be waiting to read the up coming parts!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:D

    On Jun 26, 2007 slime wrote:

    i dont care how many pages there r its still grat and i cant wait till next part 5 points WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jun 26, 2007 wrote:

    Nice. I liked it but I still think she is a spoiled rich girl yet.\:D

    On Jun 27, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    Very interesting character! Paris Hilton wants to live the "real" life or something close to it. Beautiful shots and promising story -- keep it up!!\:rah\:

    On Jun 27, 2007 wrote:

    This story was brilliant, a few mistakes here and there, but your writing is progressing beautifully, I only hope for the best! I also do agree that the character reminds me of the more stable version of Paris Hilton! (lol)

    keep up the good work,
    Just2Cute \:D

    On Jun 27, 2007 itachigirl wrote:

    it was 11!\:D we all make mistakes,no biggie,jessie\:D

    On Jun 27, 2007 itachigirl wrote:

    just so you know im not calling you jessie im leaving my real name\:P

    On Jun 27, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Nice story. \:\)

    On Jun 27, 2007 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\:nice little story \:D like to meet that boy\:D

    On Jun 27, 2007 SimsBarbie wrote:

    Very beautiful shot of Bonnie in the cab off to Uni. I bet her college life will be quite interesting. I look forward to it!\:wub\:

    On Jun 27, 2007 Devalyn wrote:

    great story, I'd like to know what happens next\:\)

    On Jun 27, 2007 MissJay wrote:

    5.0! Can't wait for the next part!

    On Jun 27, 2007 wrote:

    5.0 can't wait til the next part! luv your stories!\:rah\: \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Jun 27, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    My story is short, too, so I can relate. I liked it, and will be looking out for the next part. \:\) \:\) \:\)

    On Jun 27, 2007 wrote:

    good story! where did u get the body for the mother\:D

    On Jun 28, 2007 tsimsgirl wrote:

    Dude that was pretty boring but i know u will improve so I can't wait for next part because I know it will be exciting. (ok story)\:o \:o \:o

    On Jun 28, 2007 lexiann123 wrote:

    Sorry but yeah it was a little boring.But I love it!!!\:D \:D \:D

    On Jun 28, 2007 wrote:

    Nice story! I love da pictures too \:D

    On Jun 28, 2007 ragemacsika wrote:

    Nice story \:\)

    On Jun 29, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:

    \:\) I thought it was great. Stinks that you can't write more in Uni. but hey I'll wait for the next part. Great job! \:rah\:

    On Jun 29, 2007 GFitz wrote:

    I really love the way you set up your shots. Very good and interesting beginning. Look forward to the next part.

    On Jun 29, 2007 DevilsOtherGF wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On Jun 30, 2007 vmceldrew wrote:

    ok story could have been longer but thats ok...like you said it wasnt ur fault great job keep writing!

    On Jul 1, 2007 mcjessica2004 wrote:

    \:\)

    On Jul 5, 2007 wrote:

    Goodlooking girls, I didnt think it was a guy writing this story till I went to your profile page. You have a sensitive streak, nice to see in a guy\:rah\:

    On Jul 9, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:

    short, but good

    On Jul 21, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    Great story, now I go onto the next one. \:D

    On Jul 24, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:

    Interesting! Great job!

    On Aug 3, 2007 bflosweethart wrote:

    great story \:\)

    On Sep 17, 2007 emmy27 wrote:

    wow i just loved everything about it , can't wait for more \:rah\: \:D

    On Oct 7, 2007 agaumer wrote:

    A bit on the short side but the screenshots work very well. I very much like your use of first person for this story, you have a lot of potential as a writer.

    On Oct 21, 2007 sunny33 wrote:

    She's going to college\:rah\:

    On Oct 27, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Well, I am trying hard to feel sorry for her at times, but she's not making it too easy \:P now I'm off to read the next chapter! And just for the record, I like her more than Paris Hilton...

    On Jun 16, 2008 lulu15 wrote:

    I've always loved your sotrys. I just reread all of them and nothing has changed. They are so amazing. Perfect in every way. Keep up the great work.

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