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Welcome to newlyweds. Another part about Bonnie Winston. There are many parts to this series including: The Intro, New Beginnings, The College Life, Hospital Woes and of course The Simple Life? If you haven't read those I would advise you do so, I doubt it would make this part confusing but it would help with understanding the characters. Thanks.
"So Frances, are you heading into work today?" I really hoped he wasn't, we could do lots of fun things today.
"Er, yes Bonnie, I really need to sort out my clients accounts... he has a court case coming up in which he needs to present a record of them... I'm really sorry." he added seeing the disappointed look on my face.
"No, no it's fine." I understand he needs to get this done, hopefully he will get promoted after all his hard work. I gave him a reassuring smile, and changed the subject. "I had a thought earlier today, Bonnie."
"Oh and what was that?" I love it when Frances thinks, he always comes up with something genius.
"Well, I think my mother might be a bit disappointed that we didn't invite her to the wedding..."
"I didn't say you couldn't invite her Frances... that was your decision." I really don't care about his mother, she has hated me since we were children. "But why were you thinking about her anyway, she lives a couple of hundred miles away... right?" She had better not be moving back here. It's bad enough dealing with Courtney, let alone Frances' mum. "Yes she does live a hundred miles away, I just thought that she is going to find out about our wedding... and she might come here for a visit... when she does find out." I looked at him suspiciously.
"You wouldn't have anything to do with this 'visit' would you Frances?" He looked at me innocently.
"What visit? I didn't say she was coming, I said she probably would..." he quickly wolfed down the rest of his breakfast and hurriedly got ready for work. I followed Frances into the bathroom and gave him a peircing look as he brushed his teeth.
"Your mother isn't coming to Caldwell is she Frances?" He stopped brushing
"I don't control what she does Bonnie, I have no idea if she is coming here or not!" I looked at him incredulously.
"Even if she does come Frances, we don't have anywhere to put her. This is a one bedroom house! That means no visits from your mother!" Frances quickly turned on me.
"I don't know why you have such a big problem with my mother! Just because you have had such a big problem with yours! Doesn't mean it will be the same with mine! Besides, she is your mother now as well. So you had better get used to it." Tears formed in my eyes. Frances has never raised his voice to me before. I just stood there stunned, unable to move. "I'm going to work." Frances turned on his heel and stormed out. I didn't move from where he had left me standing until I had heard the front door slam shut, and then his car door. I listened as his tyres screached in the driveway and he pulled away driving speedily to work. I just hoped he would be Ok on the icy roads. I began to clean the breakfast things away... I had to do something to get rid of the feeling he left me with. I was numb, I could hardly feel what I was doing. He frightened me, we had had our first fight as a married couple... over his stupid mother! I'm sorry if you don't understand what the big deal is... but you haven't met his mother! And hopefully you won't have to. I went outside and stared into the frozen pond... looking for signs of life, though I knew there would be none. The snow started to fall in huge clumps, but I couldn't feel the cold. The tears froze to my face, and I just ignored it... it didn't matter. I had hurt Frances, I didn't mean to, but I had to fix this... perhaps my marriage was already in danger. And that's exactly what his mother would want. I'll speak to him later... perhaps he will forgive me? I collapsed into the snow sobbing. Why did I always do this to myself? Why do I manage to create this barrier around me, which stops me and the people around me from being happy? It seems I manage to freak myself out with everything, and that, in turn affects the people around me. I should stop being so selfish and start thinking of Frances and his relationship with his mother. I suppose she can come and visit if she wants to... It seemed that now was a good a time as any to go skating, the ice on the pond was solid. The wind blew against my face and the cold bit at me... my cheeks were rosy, but I was determined to get on the ice. I pulled my skates on and pushed myself out onto the ice... I immediately felt it buckling beneath my weight... I tried to scream for help, but I don't think anyone heard me as I was pulled under the ice. I struggled to get back to the surface, but my clothes were too heavy, the ice had already frozen solid over the top of me... I thought that was the end as I struggled for breath, under the freezing cold ice. But I woke up in bed, what seemed like a few hours later. Frances was by my side looking worried, I smiled at him and began to apologise for what I said about his mother, but he cut me off and buried his face in his hands and told me how sorry he was for shouting at me.
"I didn't mean to make you so upset that you would try and kill yourself!" Kill myself?
"No Frances, you've got it all wrong" I croaked "I wasn't trying to kill myself, I was just skating... I fell through the ice." "That doesn't matter now... all that matters is that you're awake."
"Frances, what have you done to your hair? Don't cry I'm alright now." I cooed.
"Bonnie, don't you know how long you've been asleep? You have been in and out of the hospital countless times. They said you had caught pneumonia, but you never stayed conscious enough to realise..."
"Realise what Frances?"
"Bonnie, the snow is gone... the birds are chirping and the trees are blossoming... you have been asleep for 5 months now... you missed christmas... everything. That's why my hair has got out of control... I'm so glad you're awake Bonnie!" He cried and wrapped his arms around me, sobbing into my shoulder. At first, I was all weak and all I could do was laze about and watch Tv. Frances took very good care of me, waiting on me hand and foot. He felt guilty for the whole me falling through the ice thing, although I told him countless times that it wasn't his fault and I was just looking for some fun. But in a few days I was right as reign. It felt really good to be back to normal... I think Frances appreciated too... if you get my drift. I was even fishing! Well, trying to fish... I wasn't that bad when I actually managed to stay on my feet. But I had really come out here to think, I had to repay Frances for his help in looking after me... I know he's my husband but I'm still grateful. I know... I'll make him a nice lunch. It was when I was serving the nice lunch when something out of the ordianry caught my eye... a purse. "That's not mine" I thought. I'd like to see where Frances explanation for this would come from. I don't know why, but I felt something odd going on, the purse was just the icing on the cake. Frances was getting more distant, blaming his work for our lack of being together. "I've been through this once before" I told myself "it turned out I was wrong and Frances hadn't done anything" I snapped out of it and called Frances to eat. "Frances, whose is that purse?" I asked suspiciously with an accusatory tone to my voice.
"Bonnie, there's no reason to panic, it's just my mothers! If you can't trust me, maybe we should call it a day? I mean every time something happens, you jump to conclusions and assume that I am cheating on you or whatever! I'd like it to stop, Bonnie... please!" My jaw dropped with every word he said but I quickly snapped it shut when he had finished. I slammed his plate on the table and sat in front of the Tv. Not really watching, but staring into space, thinking. What on earth had made him so defensive? Yes he could have told me that it was his mothers, but he didn't have a reason to go off on one... did he? Frances was coming over, but I decided to just ignore him... I couldn't look at him, not after what he just did.
"Bonnie? I'm sorry, I had no right... I shouldn't have shouted. Forgive me?" I looked at him, perhaps he was right.
"But I don't know if I can trust you... Relationships are built on trust, but I don't know if I can..."
"Bon-bon... You can trust me. That purse belongs to my mother, she popped round when you were resting. She is staying with Annabelle at the moment, while we sort out our relationship. We can sort it out Bonnie, I want us to sort it out. And I swear to you, I would do nothing to hurt you... especially cheat. I don't have it in me to be able to do that Bonnie. I can only love one person at a time." I smiled and snuggled up to him.
"I know." We managed to sit down and have lunch in a somewhat awkward silence... the occassional few words: ("This is delicious honey" and "you look nice today") Neither of which was I really impressed with. Even though, he had told me who owned the purse I still had this feeling that he was lying to me... It was like I didn't want myself to be happy. I was just taking the trash out after tipping away the remains of lunch, when I felt quite light-headed. Was this my pneumonia coming back? "Please say it's not" I said to myself. I began to head back inside, I needed to lie down. I suddenly saw stars flash in front of my eyes, before falling to the ground. I wasn't down there for very long but I still needed rest. What had happened to me... I held my head in my hand and tried to think... but it hurt too much. It's stress. I thought, it has to be... I have been stressing myself out over his mother and that damn purse. That's what did it. My head was spinning. I felt drunk. It was a strange sensation just lying there. I dozed for hours before finally falling asleep. I awoke the next morning, the dizziness was gone and I wondered what had caused it... was it the stress? I hopped into the bath hoping for a nice relaxing wash to clear my head, when the doorbell disturbed me from enjoying my aromatherapy. This had better be good! I was very surprised to find an extremely young and beautiful woman on my doorstep.
"Hi, I'm Yvonne, Frances' work partner..." funny Frances never mentioned he worked with this... Yvonne.
"Yes, can I help you?" She began to look behind me into the house.
"Oh, is Frances there? Only I left my purse here the other day and I was wondering if I could have it back?" It was her purse? Frances has lied to me? I could not believe it.
"Yes of course. Let me just get it for you." I hurried inside and brought her purse back to her. "Frances has been telling me all about you... I am so glad to see that you are better." She didn't look pleased.
"Thankyou so much, Frances should be at the office... if you see him do you think you could tell him that dinner will be at seven?"
"Yes... definitely. I'm going there just now, maybe I'll see you around?" She sauntered off, and I pulled a face behind her back.
"Maybe I'll see you around" I mocked in a sickly voice. Ugh. I sat and waited for Frances for what felt like hours... probably because it WAS hours. I didn't get up to eat, go to the toilet... nothing. I just sat and waited. I didn't cry... I had cried way too much over this same situation, and now I was just sick of it. I didn't want our marriage to be over, but if he is constantly sneaking around, it's not much of a marriage... not to me anyway. I sat as the darkness surrounded me. It had to be past seven now... he could have at least called me to say he wouldn't make it home for dinner. It was at this time that I moved. I reached for the phone, deciding to call Connie, I needed her right now. She would know what to do. I dialled the number and was extremely surprised to find that Connie was out.
"Sorry Bonnie, she's not here right now... she had to go to some meeting to show off her designing portfolio. I could come over, to er... talk if you want. You seem kinda upset?"
"No, it's Ok Christopher. I... I'll be fine." Would I? It didn't matter! I didn't want him coming over, I didn't want to have a feeling of no control as I looked at him... he was gorgeous. I wouldn't be able to control myself.
"Bonnie. I'm coming, you need to talk to someone I can hear it in your voice. I'll be over in a minute." He hung up and that was the end of the conversation. I panicked, what would I do? What would Frances do if he came home and found Christopher here? After all the times I had accused him of cheating, he'd be able to get me back! But he had cheated this time, I had to tell someone. Christopher pulled me into a hug as soon as he arrived... I have to say, receiving a hug from Christopher was like receiving a hundred from Frances.
"So Bonnie, what's your problem?" I began to tell him everything, from the disagreement about Frances' mother, the purse and the woman who came to pick it up. He listened intently.
"And those are my problems, what if he's cheating on me? Do you think he's cheating on me?" I finished.
"I don't really think it's my place to answer Bonnie. You should ask him."
"I already have asked him over and over again. What do I do now."
"I really have no idea" He smiled... and I cried. I felt so comfortable in Christopher's company. So comfortbale that I didn't reject when he clasped my hand. He sent tingles up my spine and I felt like an innocent school girl again. He made me nervous but excited. The tears welled up in my eyes and fell full force onto the table. Christopher leant forward and gently wiped away my tears.
"I know your frightened, Bonnie. But it's Ok, I'll be here for you. No one will find out, and you need me right now, you and Frances, I gather, haven't been intimate in a while, I can fulfill your needs Bonnie, just as you can fulfill mine." I was confused and hurt by Frances, this way I could get my own back on him... And it was at that moment that I, unkowingly went the rest of the way... and I kissed him. I'm ashamed of it, but I kissed him. I don't even know why I did it... Standing outside the front door in my underwear watching Christopher go home had to be one of the most sickening memories of my life. I stood there in disbelief, how could I have done this to Frances? Yes, he had done it to me, but I was never so easily thrown off course, I want sex to be a symbol of love, not just a fling or whatever. I couldn't understand why I had given myself to Christopher, when I only loved one man... Frances. I was in bed asleep by the time Frances came home, I of course wondered where he'd been, but being so ashamed at what I myself had done... I wouldn't ever dare to ask him. The morning came and along with it came Frances' departure as he left for work. I settled myself for a comfortable day in front of the Tv when someone unexpected walked through my front door. It was Frances' mother! She had an ugly little scowl on her face and was clutching none other than... The purse! My stomach plummeted, I had been so sure that Frances was cheating on me and it turns out that it was his mothers purse all along. I forced a smile and welcomed her into the house. I rustled up some omelettes and we sat down for a late breakfast.
"So, is my son treating you right?" Gwen asked with a glint in her eye. Did she know something about it?
"Well... yes." I said quietly.
"What's with the hesitation, if he is not being a good husband, you can tell me I'll sort him out!" I didn't know if I could trust her, what if she was trying to split us up somehow?
"Well, I have this feeling that he is cheating on me... with a woman from work"
"Frances? No, no my child you have made a mistake, he wouldn't do such a thing. It's what broke me and his father up you see, a straying husband." She watched me intently... I had to find out about the purse. "Gwen, did you leave your purse here the other day?"
"My purse? I have no idea child, my memory isn't like it used to be."
"It's just I feel like me and Frances are drifting apart, we don't speak anymore... and I'm scared of losing him... and now I have to apologise because I made a huge mistake." I began sobbing into my omelette. "Bonnie, what mistake did you make?" She asked like she already knew, but she couldn't possibly. Could she?
"I can't tell you, Gwen, I have to tell Frances first."
"Bonnie, what have you done? If you have done something to my son... I swear I'll... Just tell me Bonnie!"
"I slept with someone else! Ok?" I screamed at her, I couldn't believe I had just told her.
"You did what? You know I am going to have to tell Frances about his, Bonnie. He has a right to know! I can't believe you would do such a thing to such a caring young man..." "Please Gwen, you can't tell him, let me do it? Please."
"Why did you do it Bonnie? I would have expected this from any other woman but not you!"
"I was certain he was cheating on me, he kept lying to me, saying you left your purse behind... Then his work partner came to pick it up. I just found it so difficult to trust him, and then he didn't come home and I was just so upset..." I looked at her, begging.
"This is why I have always hated you Bonnie!" I was shocked "You have always been a drama queen, always letting dust fly, I wish you could have settled down with my son, but now... now your marriage with him is OVER!" She boomed the last word, and it just echoed in my mind for ages. "Gwen! Please don't tell him. You can't! You wouldn't!" I looked into her eyes but all I could see was burning resentment. I stood there, blocking her way to the door.
"Move out of my way Bonnie! Or I'll... I'll" And without warning she started beating me with the purse. I thought she was not going to stop until she had beaten all life out of me. I cowered in fear as the attacks kept on coming.
"BONNIE - YOU - WILL - NEVER - EVER - COME - NEAR - MY - SON - AGAIN. DO - YOU- UNDERSTAND - ME?" I nodded and eventually she put the purse down, and stormed out. Leaving me shaking in fear, I could feel the bruises forming already. All I could do was to crouch out of sight and cry miserably on the floor. I am so stupid... I can't believe I actually thought his mother was helping me. I should have known it was just a trick to find something out to break us up. This was it, I had lost him, the only man I had ever loved apart from my father was going to leave me... I WOULD be left alone... I curled up on the sofa and began to sob into the cushions, soaking them and me. But I didn't care! I DON'T care, I was frightened of how Frances would react when he returned home... I do love him, but what if he doesn't love me? I guess that's what I'm most afraid of... love. Maybe I thought it was impossible for me to be loved. And that's why I behaved in this self-destructive manner. Whatever I expected from Frances when he returrned, it certainly wasn't this!
"My mother came to speak to me today..."
"Really? Frances I... I'm so, so... sorry..."
"She told me this ridiculous story that you had slept with someone else! I told her where to go, and that she could never come and see us again! Why are you crying? Bonnie, it's Ok, I don't believe her... I love you." And he kissed me, now this was love. This was how I deserved to be treated, it had so much more feeling than Christopher and his hugs. I felt a fresh pang of guilt as I thought about this... Frances has a right to now, and I knew I wouldn't be free of the guilt unless I told him. I pulled away.
"Frances, we... we have to talk. Please sit down... this is important." He looked puzzled but we both sat down. "Frances. Your mother isn't lying to you... I slept with Christopher... I didn't mean to, I just... I..." He looked at me disbelievingly... but then saw the look on my face... his smile vanished.
"What do you want me to say Bonnie?" he snapped coldly
"I don't know, anything... nothing. Just say you still love me." I pleaded my voice getting caught in my throat "Please Frances, I love you... I was just... lonely... no it's not that I was lonely, it was your work partner..."
"My work partner? Yvonne? So you met her?" I nodded solemnly "Well, what happened?"
"She picked up that purse you said was your mothers! And I thought... I thought..."
"You thought I lied to you?" I saw his heart breaking through his eyes as he said this... but he wasn't crying. "Bonnie, that was my mothers purse! It doesn't matter that you don't believe me anymore... because we're OVER! I can't deal with all of this suspicion... it's driving me CRAZY! I AM SICK OF IT! WHEN WE SAID OUR VOWS AT THE ALTER, I MEANT THEM BONNIE! DID YOU?"
"Of course I did! And I honoured them as well as I could, until YOU started lying to me! I know you were seeing someone else while I was out of it Frances! I think it's brilliant that you can blame everything on your mother... she's as bad as you are! If it's over... then it's over. Please just leave me alone!" I stood up and got the dizzy feeling again... probably from standing up too fast... but then I felt it... the extreme pain in my stomach, the bile rising up in my throat... what was going on? I was going to be sick...
"Bonnie? What's wrong? Bonnie! Answer me!" My only answer was in running to the toilet. As soon as I returned from the bathroom Frances turned on me.
"Bonnie, will you please tell me what's wrong? You're not sick again are you?" I could tell he cared about me, but if I told him what I thought it was, I might lose him forever. Then again, I already had so there would be no harm in telling him. "Frances? I think... I think I'm preganant." he looked at me in stunned silence, before...
"How do you know? Is it mine?" All these questions, but I wasn't paying attention, I couldn't hear him. Me saying it made me feel so happy inside, like this could be my second chance... maybe Frances would take me back if the child was his. "Bonnie... is it mine?" I shrugged my shoulders. How could I know? "Let's get out of here!"
"What do you mean?" I stammered.
"Let's go! I don't know where... Bermuda... somewhere! I have to get away form all of this Bonnie. I love you... I don't want it to be over between us. Let's go away and have our baby, I can tell it's ours Bonnie. It's our solution, our fix! I have to get away... from Christopher, my mum, this house... everything. Say you'll come with me?" Well what's a girl to do? Of course I said yes! I love Frances... I am just so glad to have been given a second chance... and this time... I wasn't going to blow it! Thanks for reading another part about me... I hope you enjoyed it! There will definitely be another part now... I mean Bonnie is pregnant... Frances and Bonnie are finally moving away! I would like to know your theories, of what is going on... that is, if you're not entirely confused. :) I hope you will look out for the next part. A big thanks to the custom content makers and to you readers who support me and motivate me to write even more parts. At least I didn't leave it at an unhappy ending... huh?
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54 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jul 15, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:
Awesome! I really hope things work out between Bonnie and Frances! They both deserve it!!! Can't wait for the next part!
On Jul 15, 2007 atangki wrote:
This was long..
Great part! I hope to read more! 
On Jul 15, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
Good story! I didn't like seeing Bonnie cheating, though. Ah well it isn't my story. 5.0!
On Jul 15, 2007 simboy161 wrote:
Great story
I bet the baby will be christopher's. It would be a good twist. 5.0
On Jul 15, 2007 susieQ123 wrote:
It keeps getting better you have got me hooked cant wait to read more.
On Jul 15, 2007 wrote:
So lovely story.
I never tired to read it.
Good job!
On Jul 15, 2007 Valgrida wrote:
On Jul 15, 2007 Downtimegirl91 wrote:
wow awesome i can't wait for read more
On Jul 15, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
Great series! But maybe Bonnie did over-react a bit... Anyway, I hope to see the next soon!
On Jul 15, 2007 maxi king wrote:
On Jul 15, 2007 wrote:
Wow! What a rollercoaster of emotion that was!! I LOVED it
Great work, and your sims are beautiful
On Jul 15, 2007 wrote:
It just keeps getting better and better. I cant stop reading these
On Jul 15, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
Brilliant. I love this series.
Can't wait for the next part!!
On Jul 15, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:
Awesome!! This series is one of my favorites. And comming from a blueclarity fan, that's pretty good. Keep up the great work in your stories. We look forward to them.
On Jul 15, 2007 wrote:
I love this story!
On Jul 15, 2007 leifofdel wrote:
Enjoyed it, hope the baby is Frances's.
On Jul 15, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:
That was a great chapter
I really hope that Frances & Bonnie can work through their problems together. I can't wait to read more of this story
I have to ask you though, where did you get the eye colors for your sims??
On Jul 15, 2007 xrainbowcloud wrote:
awesome !
On Jul 15, 2007 nyvicious wrote:
cool story i hope and think the baby is her husbands being that she was feeling sick before she slept with the other guy. anyhow i loved it 5.0 all the way
On Jul 16, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
Another great installment!!!
On Jul 16, 2007 wrote:
A very good chapter, entertaining!
On Jul 16, 2007 RIDance wrote:
Another great story!
Good job.
On Jul 16, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:
WOW, it was great.
On Jul 16, 2007 wrote:
Great part! I really hope that they can work things out.
On Jul 16, 2007 wickedgalaxia wrote:
Great job!
On Jul 16, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:
Awesome as usual darlin! Great job! Seems to me that Bonnie has grown up a bit and i hope to see her grow up more. I adore her and Frances together and hope things work out for the best.
More! More! More! Bring on the chapters please.
On Jul 16, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
Such great emotion and storytelling, love your shots, too!
On Jul 17, 2007 tesasims wrote:
On Jul 17, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Super chapter; can't wait for the next part!!!!! 5.0++++++++
On Jul 17, 2007 eshuff wrote:
No, hun, you didn't leave me with an unhappy ending, although, good grief! What drama, and I don't have a heck of a lot of sympathy for Bonnie right now. Great shots, wonderful writing! I really loved it! And Frances is a hottie!
Top marks from me!
On Jul 17, 2007 Aloha Kay wrote:
Hmmmm . . . of course there will be a delima over whose baby it is and of course Christopher has to find out and let there be drama! In the end though I believe it will be Fances'
Great part!
On Jul 17, 2007 wrote:
Omg. this story is probably one of the best ive seen so far, so detailed, every page keeps you haning.. its great
On Jul 17, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:
my god she is one little messed up girl isnt she
but all up top story AGAIN you seem to keep out doing yourself 
On Jul 17, 2007 wrote:
I reckon she'll have the baby, it will look like Frances and she'll be reliefed, then as it gets older it will look more and more like Christopher. 5.0
On Jul 17, 2007 fairyofdeath wrote:
On Jul 17, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
Aww I hope the baby belongs to Frances.
Great story as usual.
On Jul 17, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:
great story!
On Jul 18, 2007 slime wrote:
very good and i cant believe Bonnie cheated but i forgive her she was jus lonely 5 points WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
On Jul 18, 2007 agnez_friik wrote:
nice. very dramatic
On Jul 19, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Good story! Thanks for sharing.
On Jul 19, 2007 sara_87 wrote:
Awww!!! It's a gorgeous story!!! I thought he wouldn't give her a second chance, I'm so glad this story has a happy ending!!! Brilliant work!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!
On Jul 19, 2007 sandybvv wrote:
wow... so many things happened in this chapter....hmm i agree with the Mother.. Bonnie is such a Drama Queen... i really hope the baby is France's that Chris guy he just took advantage of her... oh well i hope everything turns out well and hopefully Bonnie will stop being so dramatic...
On Jul 21, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
I collapsed into the snow sobbing. [and started making a snow angel] ^^
On Jul 23, 2007 MissJay wrote:
Yeah I was kinda mad Bonnie cheated. But she's like that I guess LOL. 5.0!
On Jul 23, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
I loooved
I think they may leave everything and everyone and escape somewhere ...tropical! (...but who knows... the orrible Mother may find them over there as well...!!! :P)
Christopher...he's an idiot!!! Poor poor Cornelia, she has no clue about being cheated on, has she?!
Frances...he's kinsa crazy. I mean: he changed his mind thousands of times!!!
the best screenshot... well, they were several, but the very best one: the horrible Mother beating the poor Bonnie with the purse...!!! hehehe
On Jul 24, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:
Fantastic story! I really like the plot and all characters, I also like it's being so full of different emotions! I love long stories, especially when they're interesting and well made, and thinking of another parts gives me chills! I think you did really great job and cannot wait for another stories of you! Take care and happy simming!
On Jul 29, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
Great, just great !!! I hope the baby belongs to Frances. Bonnie shouldn't cheat on him.
On Aug 6, 2007 wrote:
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On Sep 14, 2007 ppunkprincess wrote:
omg i love this story! the characters you make are nice...
hehe im gonna read every story of yours 
i love them 
On Sep 19, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
wow i loved it , i really didn't expect bonnie to cheat on frances though , can't wait for more
On Oct 7, 2007 agaumer wrote:
This is fantastic, it's like a soap opera. I'm loving all the twists and turns
On Oct 27, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
NO, BONNIE NOOOO!!! She who was so "go purty and wholesomeness", now the angel fell from grace. What a dissappointment! Not the story thought, that's great!
On Dec 6, 2007 giada92 wrote:
Fantastic
