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Hello and welcome to the next part in the Rich Girls saga. Sorry for the delay, but I had to think for a while where I wanted to go next, because I already know how I want to end it... it's just hard to decide the little details. I'm afraid that the delays are going to get more frequent however, as I have started my final year at school and really need to get a B in english so that I can go on to do journalism... Anyway in the previous part Bonnie just gave birth to her fourth child...
The parts to this story include: The Intro, New Beginnings, The College Life, Hospital Woes, The Simple Life?, Newlyweds, Eyes Wide Shut, Waking Up, Truth Hurts, Passing Judgement, Lost, Lies and Deceit and Surprise!.
The parts to this story include: The Intro, New Beginnings, The College Life, Hospital Woes, The Simple Life?, Newlyweds, Eyes Wide Shut, Waking Up, Truth Hurts, Passing Judgement, Lost, Lies and Deceit and Surprise!. A few developments have occured since our last meeting. "Haven't they Victor?"
Yes well I guess they have... "Bonnie do you not feel stupid talking to this camera?"
"Not at all why would I feel stupid? It's my hobby, and I need someone to finish my diary for me... perhaps you could do it, if I go first..."
"Bonnie, I didn't know you were so morbid... anyway since the girls aren't coming over tonight, how about we go out to dinner?"
"You know we can't! What about Lionel?" Sometimes he is just so stupid, anyway Lionel! You haven't met him! Come and see. Here's my little angel, Lionel. He likes pink. You should see him fight over those pyjamas, everytime we try to give him a different colour he wails until he gets his pink back. Victor says I spoil him by giving him his pinkness, but he wouldn't be Lionel without it! But he just has one little problem... he's terribly shy. He doesn't really like anyone besides me, he's Ok around Victor but it's quite lucky I am a full-time mum because otherwise Lionel would be balling his lungs out day and night, and I would feel guilty for leaving him. Victor has enough to support us financially, so there really isn't any point in me working. This is his birthday picture... wasn't he so cute! We enjoyed celebrating his birthday, just me Victor and Lionel. I wished that his sisters could have been there but Frances wouldn't let me take them. I called them frequently, but it wasn't enough. I was just putting Lionel down so that he could play with his favourite jigsaw when the shrill sound of the doorbell rang through my ears, I wondered who it could be... we didn't usually get vistors. I just hoped Frances wasn't going to try and get me to sort out Francesca again, it hadn't gone so well last time. I couldn't believe my eyes as I forced open the door against the bitter wind. "Francesca? Is that you?" I stared at her as she slowly turned around, confirming that it indeed was her. "What are you doing here? Ellie said..."
"Yes Ellie has been telling me a lot of things about you... I came to see if they were true." I stayed silent to allow her to continue. "Did you really have to let us go, was it against your will? Ellie told me that dad got custody and we had to be removed... is it true." I smiled, against my better judgement. But I wanted to tell her the truth, I couldn't let her hate me for the rest of her life.
"Yes Francesca... that is what happened. I did my best to fight for you but the judge ruled against me... I'm sorry I made you leave the way I did, but it was hurting me as much as you.""
"Oh Mum! I am so sorry... I thought you hated us." Tears fromed in her eyes as I watched her with a watery smile. She suddenly opened her arms wide as if to hug me... but quickly pulled away again as if realising what she had done.
"I really have to go mum. If dad catches me here... I am going to make his life a living hell! Bye" She turned on her heel and ran down the street... My stomach plummeted as I realised that I may have turned her against her father too. Victor stepped up to me as soon as I got back inside.
"Come on honey... get dressed up. I want to take you somewhere nice." He gave me his million dollar flash of a smile again. "I'm sorry Victor I really don't feel like going out tonight... besides we don't have a babysitter. I have a lot of things on my mind right now, I'm really not in the mood." I began to walk up the stairs and see Lionel when Victor stopped me. "You care more about Lionel than you do about me these days! We spend hardly any time together... we haven't made love in such a long time!" He went into a huge rant about how the baby was ruining our relationship. "You spend so much more time with him... If things don't change soon Bonnie, I am going... I don't know what I am going to do, but it won't be good for either of us!" He finally finished and I stared at him with a bored expression, how could he be so selfish? "Of course I spend more time with him... if you spent some time with him, perhaps I wouldn't have to! It's hardly my fault that you're at work all the time and I do recall it being you who managed to get me pregnant in the first place!" I yelled furiously at him. "Bonnie. That baby..."
"His name is Lionel, and I would appreciate it if you acknowledged him as such."
"Well, Lionel is weird. He is not right, I can see it and you can see it... boys don't wear pink and play with puzzles. He's going to grow up exactly the same, and I am going to be known as the guy with the gay son!" My nostrils flared and I could almost hear the sparks flying around my head. "So what! What does it matter what he is? You don't even know if he will be gay!" Victor gave me an incredulous look, but I wasn't going to stop there. "He could just be a feminine young man... besides we are his family! If he is gay, he will need our support through the hard times! I will be there to support him even if you won't." Lionel's crying echoed down the stairs and I gave Victor one last furious look before hurrying up the stairs to take care of Lionel. I was sat on the bed a short while later, trying to read. Unfortunately I kept being distracted by thoughts of Victor's stupidity, which heightened as he entered the room and got dressed in his pyjamas. He slowly sat on the bed next to me letting out a deep sigh... I flicked a page furiously as he began to speak.
"Bonnie. I'm sorry for being so..."
"Insensitive? Obnoxious? Selfish? Arrogant..." I didn't get any more words out as he interrupted me, but I would've if I could've.
"I get it, you're angry with me... but what if he is?"
"I told you downstairs what I would do... you can't even tell though, he isn't getting any closer to going through changes, and he probably won't realise himself... now I am going to sleep before you make me angrier." I put the book down and pulled the covers over me, pretending to sleep. It was at times like this when I wished I had Frances, with his arms wrapped around me, keeping me safe. Our night geometry had not faded from my mind, and I knew it wouldn't anytime soon. Whenever me and Victor argued (which was becoming more and more frequent as I spent more time with Lionel) I would imagine me and Frances together again, living happily with our three girls and Lionel too. I spent the most of the next day upstairs out of Victors way playing with Lionel. I thought of what had happened the previous night and a hot, pulsing anger filled my head once more. Lionel cooed and dribbled and I pulled myself out of it, shaking my head... I smiled at Lionel and let him play with his puzzle. Victor walked in right then, I turned my back on him to help Lionel with his puzzle, when Victor quickly said my name.
"Please, I think we need to talk." He looked at me pleading, I snorted.
"There's nothing to talk about... Lionel's gay remember?" I turned my back on him and showed Lionel where one of the pieces went. "Just because he's different, doesn't make him imperfect... there is no such thing as perfect." I turned back to face Victor, and was stunned to see him kneeling on the floor.
"What are you doing down there? Get up. Get up." But he just grinned at me stupidly.
"Bonnie... I'm really really sorry for making you think that I hated our son, I don't. It's just been so hard for me, with you paying all of your attention to him." I placed my hands on my hips looking at him sternly. This didn't seem like a very good apology. "Bonnie, I couldn't dream of being without you... please. Marry me?" I opened my eyes wide in shock. I didn't say anything as he pushed a diamond ring into my face.
"Bonnie? Whatever I said last night, can we just forget about it? I didn't mean it and I am proud to be Lionel's father... whether he is gay or not. I will support him through everything." My mouth dropped as I saw my reflection in the diamond. Did I want to marry Victor? He was supportive of me, he had enough money to keep our family happy for the rest of our lives... but did I want that. I had no idea but I didn't want Victor to hate me if I said no, or I'll think about it. So I leaped into his arms, crying.
"Of course I will marry you Victor!" Victor let out a laugh and I felt guilty for maybe giving him false beliefs, I had no idea whether I would go through with it in the end.
"Just wait here Bonnie, I am just going to get something." He set me back on my feet and scurried off down the stairs. I sat and waited with lionel, showing him where to put the pieces. I listened intently as their was a knock at the front door. I listened as Victor went to open it, and I listened to the deep voices that ensued.
"Bonnie!" Victor called. "You had better get down here... you have some. Visitors." He put a lot of stress in the last word and I picked Lionel up and carried him down the stairs with me. "They're waiting just outside... do you want me to take Lionel?" I was surprised by the gesture and refused before I considered it.
"I can cope thankyou." Victor sidled away, clearly dreading the moment when I would see the person on the other side of the door. Frances was here again! With the girls! What was he trying to pull this time?
"Hi Bonnie. I would like to talk to you, girls if you just head inside." Emily looked at her dad smiling.
"For the first time ever, dad. I love you, you are actually managing to do one thing right."
"Dad, sorry for all the black." Francesca said. "It's past now, I'm not sad anymore."
"Right girls. Thankyou. Please get inside so me and your mother can talk." The girls all filed inside. "So this is the new one is it?" he asked, I suddenly woke from my stunned state.
"What do you want this time Frances? Why have you brought the girls here?"
"Always on the defensive huh?" he smirked. "I want you to take care of the girls, you are a much better parent than I am." I listened hard, trying to catch a hint of sarcasm. But there was none. "But what I would really like more than anything, is your forgiveness Bonnie." I was surprised by Lionel, who quickly squirmed in my arms to face Frances properly... for the first time he felt comfortable in front of a stranger.
"I don't understand Frances. My forgiveness for what?" I tightened my grip on Lionel so that I wouldn't drop him. "I want your forgiveness for everything that I have done. Normally I wouldn't care, but I have loved you since we were young, and I still love you now. I just don't want you to have bad memories of me..." I frowned, trying to catch him lying to me... but he was being sincere.
"I-I... I forgive you." His eyes were full of relief and I could tell he wanted to pull me into a hug.
"Can I ask you a question though?" I nodded. "Do you still have feelings for me... I have tried to let go of you Bonnie, but I can't. You are always in my heart. I just want to know if I am still in yours." "What are you asking of me Frances?" I had to be sure, I couldn't hide my feelings... but I didn't want to hurt anybody... or risk losing my girls again. I looked into his bright, green eyes.
"Please Bonnie... I want a second chance." And that is the end of this part. I know it was short considering the amount of time I have taken on it, but I have been busy with a different story, which is going to be very long. I haven't worked on a title yet. It will just be done in one huge part. Anyway I have started school again too so that's also why it took a long time. Thanks for reading and I hope you will look forward to the next part, where Bonnie will give Frances a second chance or take another chance on love with Victor. I would love to hear your opinions, and thanks to the custom content makers. That's Francesca by the way, although she will probably be referred to as Frankie in the next part(s) I have a feeling the next part will be the final part. (Of Bonnie anyway) I have a few ideas for what I want to happen to the children. The Twins in particular, and then Lionel.
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On Aug 19, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:
Yay!!!
On Aug 19, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
Awww Francesca looks so much prettier now! I'm glad that she isn't all depressed anymore. And I don't know what Bonnie should do. I really don't trust either guy. Frances has put her through so much...but Victor just seems odd. But he did make a good decision letting the girls stay with Bonnie. Maybe now her life will become happier. Great part...and take your time. It's better to get good grades, and have a good story, even if it takes longer! ^^
On Aug 19, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:
CLIFFHANGER!!!! Oooh that was another good one!
But man... I have no clue who Bonnie is gonna end up with, or who I would really wanna see her with 
Well I can't wait for the next chapter! I know it'll be great! And good luck with school! I go back in about a week~
On Aug 19, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Wow! What a decision Bonnie has to make? I myself would be a little leary of trusting Frances; but, I guess for the girl's sake.
Great screenshots as usual! 5.0+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
On Aug 19, 2007 tesasims wrote:
On Aug 19, 2007 atangki wrote:
Francesca is so pretty! I'm so glad she got rid of all the black! Once and for all I hope.
This is a great part! I had a feeling Frances would come back to Bonnie. LOL. But what about Victor? She told him she'd marry him just before Frances was at the door. LOL. 
Oooooohhhh... Honestly, I don't know who is the better guy for Bonnie. LOL. I have seriously no idea about what is to happen next. But I hope Bonnie makes the right decision for everyone. LOL. 
And by the way, I'll be looking forward to that long story of yours. 
And the stories about the twins, and Lionel. 
Oh yeah, I hope Lionel doesn't turn out to be gay... He's such a cutie.. Lol. 
But hey, I've read a lot of your stories (I think I've read every single one), and reading all that, I know you make unexpected things happen. 
LOL. 
Wheee... This comment is my longest yet.. LOL. 
On Aug 19, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:
Definitely a 5-Star series!!!!!
Oh no what's Bonnie gonna do now. She already said yes to Vic,,
I really want Bonnie to be happy. Shes been depressed for a VERY long time. Can't wait for more!!! 
On Aug 19, 2007 wrote:
i think she should marry victor!! lol!! great story
On Aug 19, 2007 wrote:
AHHH! lciffhanger. You know you are pure evil. But an awsome story-writer. When i read i jsut screamed...hoenst.=P Can't wait for the next part!
On Aug 19, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
Aww, she got the girls back!!*dances around*
I had a feeling she would get them back. Frances has hurt her so much in the past, but she still loves him. What about Connie, the Bonnie Wannabe!!! Where's she in all this!! Why would he do all that stuff to be with Connie, and then want to be with Bonnie all of a sudden?
And Victor....well, Victor is just..odd, if that makes any sense!! Francesca looks so much prettier without the red hat, but I'm not saying anything about her black hair and clothes, because I like that stuff, but I'm more of a skater!! Aww, baby Lionel is so cute, I had a feeling it would be a boy because you didn't tell us in the last part, and you waited a while to tell us in this part!!
I wonder what poor Bonnie will do, after all, she could have her night geometry back!!! Poor thing, her world is getting more and more twisted!!
: Great part!!! I really look forward to reading the next one!!! 5.0 for you.
*-Dannii-*P.s. Sorry this comment turned out to be so long.
On Aug 19, 2007 marsali wrote:
please give victor a chance but keep the girls no no not frances
On Aug 19, 2007 kaykay52812 wrote:
maybe she shouldnt chose either guy, frances would hurt her again, and victor, well, theres something fishy about him. im glad she got her girls back, shell be happier now. good luck in school!
On Aug 19, 2007 sandybvv wrote:
dont give frances a chance!!! he doesnt deserves it!!! please dont give him a chance!!!
is Lionel France's? he looks exactly as frances, and he has nothing from Victor!!! lol!!!
Please Sam, i beg you, dont let her go with Frances a gain!!!!
On Aug 19, 2007 wrote:
can i just say how amazing your stories are. i in a way want her to give frances a second chance but then victor is also a nice man either way i cant wait for your next part and also looking forward to your new story. anyway keep writing great stories 5 out of 5 (would be a higher point but it cant get higher)
On Aug 19, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
Lionel is the cutest little thing!
On Aug 19, 2007 wrote:
Awesome Part! Btw where did you get Bonnie's hair from? I don't know. I thinksomething fishy is gonigon with Frances, i'd slap him round the face...but thats juts me =P
On Aug 19, 2007 tinajean1 wrote:
Don't have her give Frances another chance, just in case he pulls that crap again, can't wait for the next part, I've read them all and it's a great story.
On Aug 19, 2007 converse02 wrote:
I as well beg you not to make her get back with Frances!!! NOO!!
Please let her stay with Victor... he deserves her so much more!
Great part. 5++
On Aug 19, 2007 maxi king wrote:
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On Aug 19, 2007 aimeeisasimnut wrote:
Great part. I think she should give Victor a chance. If he gets along with the girls and Lionel then they can be a really good family. She should not give Frances another shot! I know she loves him but once a cheater always a cheater. He was never faithful to her and Bonnie deserves to be happy for once!
On Aug 19, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
I don't trust Victor. I really don't. There's something about Frances I like.
But I do think there's something fishy going on with both guys. 
I want to find out who's sincere and who isn't. Please don't keep me waiting! I like cliffhangers, but they're like Frances. They are fun and interesting, but they drive you nuts!
On Aug 19, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
Besides, WHAT would Frances have up his sleeve now? He exacted his revenge on her for getting drunk and cheating, and she hasn't done anything to annoy him yet! I don't think he's planning something, but Sam, you probably might prove me wrong.
On Aug 20, 2007 wrote:
Ah! I love this! I hope that Bonnie chooses Victor. I hope she chooses to take care of the girls, too. I think she will though! But you do put an amazing twist on things. Frances needs to go play in traffic! I still don't like him. Except the fact he's offereing custody to Bonnie. Good Frances. But besides that, he's a butt.
On Aug 20, 2007 wrote:
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY MUST ALL BABIES LOVE PINK?!?!? JK GOOD STORY!!! BONNIE SHOULD TOTALLY STAY WITH VICTOR! IF SHE GIVES FRANCES A SECOND CHANCE, ITS TOTALLY GOING TO BE A IKE AND TINA TURNER DEAL!!!! LOL 5.0 WONDERFUL!!!!
On Aug 20, 2007 wrote:
I have to say, I wouldn't pick either of them, if I were her. They're both fishy, can't be trusted.
On Aug 20, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:
Lord I wish I could write like you.
My thoughts: Victor is a putz! I don't trust him. And OMG how he talked about a precious baby! Who cares if the boy is gay?! He is still a beautiful child. (where'd ya get his great hair? hehe)
I can't help it. Through all the crap Frances pulled, you can't help who you love and it is and always will be Frances for our lovely Bonnie. Yay for getting the girls back.
On Aug 20, 2007 fairyofdeath wrote:
i dont like eaither there both pigs
On Aug 20, 2007 Stephie12 wrote:
I really love this story. Please don't let Bonnie choose Frances. How can she trust him after all that he has done to her?
He is a first class jerk, and so is his mother! Maybe Bonnie shouldn't choose Victor or Frances, and just raise her kids on her own. But if she chooses someone, please let it be Victor.
By the way, where did you find Victor's hairstyle? Great Story
Can't wait for the next one!!!!
On Aug 20, 2007 Lailey01 wrote:
Helloooooo...another great story! I think Bonnie should choose Victor because that Frances guy is definetely a jerk and has messed her and her girls around HEAPS and Victor...not so much=] I like it how the girls are all back in the story and Lionel is cool, gay or not! Besides...Victor is hotter and has values! Keep up the absolutely incredibly amazing stories!
Love Lailey! Xo (By the way, I think this is my longest comment and...where do you get all your super cool custom content from?) 
=)
On Aug 20, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
I don't want Bonnie to forgive Frances
I don't trust him. And Victor....he's so weird....I'm glad that Bonnie got the girls back
Maybe she's ment to be single forever
On Aug 20, 2007 MissJay wrote:
I don't think she should trust Frances again. Just be happy with Victor or happy alone, but not with Frances.
On Aug 20, 2007 tank08093 wrote:
ABSOLUTELY NOT FRANCES! I dont really care for victor either but if she has to be with one please please PLEASE dont let it be frances. Frances is a dunghead!! I hope the baby doesnt some how turn out to be frances, that would be a good twist but i wouldnt like it! I love this story!
On Aug 21, 2007 halla07 wrote:
nice
On Aug 21, 2007 wrote:
Nicely done!
On Aug 22, 2007 bflosweethart wrote:
urrr i don't really know what to say but it was a FANTASTIC STORAY!
On Aug 23, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Good story, I loved it.
On Aug 23, 2007 candy820 wrote:
I'm just glad she got the girls back.Please don't kill Bonnie off That just wouldn't be fair some how. 5.0 here
On Aug 26, 2007 niki14 wrote:
WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I JUST LOVE THIS STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please make more parts !!! but not only 1 !!
On Aug 26, 2007 Paiige[Missing Since: Unknown] wrote:
Awww Lionel is the cutest little thing liek EVERR
! heehe i think yu should make Victor & Frances have a fight and whoever wins gets Bonnie
Luff xoxo
On Aug 26, 2007 Paiige[Missing Since: Unknown] wrote:
Lurvee this story btw
On Aug 27, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
Good and engrossing chapter
On Aug 29, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:
What a Cliffhanger and a Big Big descision for Bonnie to make.... I wouldn't trust Frances again if it were me and I wouln't want to risk loosing my girls again... but we must think of Lionel too, would it be fair to take hime away from his father (unless there is something you forgot to mention about who Lionel's father really is?). Can't wait to read the next chapter
On Aug 29, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
I loved this part! Even if it was short,I think it was just right, since it was full of events... :P
Im totally in love with Lionel (aww...such a sweet name),from the very first screenshot...
you did a great thing putting Francesca in the last picture - otherway, it would have been difficult to recognize her in the following chapters!
Yet, I dont really know what to say about the story... I mean: it's too good to be true!!! First Victor's mad at Bonnie about Lionel...and then he wants to marry her. And suddenly, Frances arrives (with the girls!!!) and reveals he's still in love with her, after all. After cheating on her, and stealing her babies?! sure...
Besides, it seems to me that the whole thing it has been organized by Victor - he said to Frances "Wait for me here, I have a surprise for you", didnt he?!
btw, the proposal screenshot - with the ring on Bonnie's finger, it absolutely amazing...
Eventually, I think Bonnie should stick with Victor. Dont ask me why, though (I dont have any idea in first place!)
Anyway, Ive already decided how the story is going to end, so...
PS_yes,please! Id love to read more about the twins and Lionel
...good luck with everyting!!!
On Sep 3, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
Enchanting summer tale, you did a credible job!!
On Sep 9, 2007 wrote:
really cute, I think she should stay with Victor though he seems much more trustworthy
On Sep 16, 2007 ppunkprincess wrote:
uhh, its hard I cant pick,
well, she has loved Frances all her life, but I dont know if she can trust him... and she trusts Victor, plus loves him... oh well, grest story
cant wait to read the next part
On Oct 9, 2007 agaumer wrote:
Looking forward to the next part
On Oct 28, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Great story ! Thanks !
On Oct 28, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
Aw, this was a nice "feelgood"-chapter, I'm glad the girls are back with their mother. Your writing is very good, you'll be a great journalist I'm sure