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Welcome to the next part in the Rich Girls series. Instead of saying anything apart from listing the previous parts I am going to let you get right into it. So the parts from the beginning are: The Intro, New Beginnings, The College Life, Hospital Woes, The Simple Life?, Newlyweds, Eyes Wide Shut, Waking Up, Truth Hurts, Passing Judgement, Lost and Lies And Deceit. I think that's all of them.
"Oh, hi Vannessa... is Victor there? I really need to talk to him." I looked at Vannessa, she did nothing but stare into a particular spot just beyond my shoulder... I waved my hand in front of her face. Nothing... "Vannessa?" She shook her head and looked up at me smiling. "Sorry. Must have dozed off there for a second. What was it you wanted?" I looked at her for a second and burst out laughing...
"Oh... Victor. Is he home?" I said in between fits of hysterics.
"Yes. He's in bed, it might take a while to get him up, but if you wait in the living room... he'll be down in a minute." I followed Vannessa into the house and headed to the living room. I sat there for a while... a long while, just wondering what Victor would say when I told him. Whether he would offer me help or just throw me out into the street... I was beginning to sweat with worry, he could easliy chuck me out of his life if he wanted. I meant nothing to him in my current state. I was about to get up and run when he entered the room. He looked extremely tired and he stumbled over to me, he had no shirt on... and I found I couldn't look at him, I felt awkward.
"Hi Bonnie." He said sleepily "Did you get my flowers." He quickly stifled a yawn as I nodded still unable to look at him. He sat down next to me, clearly confused as to why I was here at this time of the night and not even speaking to him.
"So, what did you want?" He asked, trying to ease me into conversation. I took a few deep breaths looking out of a nearby window watching a cat struggle with the bins, before I managed to find my voice and say something. "Victor I'm pregnant." I winced "I have left my Gwen. It seems she is still in contact with Frances... I need some help. Do you think you could help me? I know that we barely know each other, but I feel really close to you. Please I would appreciate anything you can do to help." Frances reaction was not what I expected... instead of a stern look I received a shocked and piteous one. There was a small glint in his eye and I caught a glimmer of excitement... and then he shook his head and spoke to me. "Bonnie. I can help you, and I will help you. I care about you too much, I can't have you living on the streets." I smiled at him and relief spread from my fingers to my toes and I barely heard anything else he said as the thought of being helped and safe with Victor filled my head. "There's a small house just down the road... that would be suitable for you... and it has a lot of extension possibilities." I carried on smiling at him, my eyes glazed over. "Bonnie are you listening..." I suddenly awoke to his pleas, and began to listen. "Are you alright?"
"Yes of course... I am just so grateful for your help. We are going to have such a great time together." He looked at me awkwardly and disappointment filled my stomach.
"You do know that I won't be living with you don't you... there's a nice house up the road, I'll pay for it, but you need to start a life for yourself. Get a job, at least until you can't work." "Oh yes of course I knew that." I laughed unconvincingly. "I think I can handle that... thanks for your help Victor. You will come and see me though, won't you?"
"Of course I will!" He laughed "I want to make sure that you are getting on Ok... I just want you to be able to help yourself, instead of relying on other people to get you out of tight spots." He smiled again and my eyes glazed over for the second time that night. As you can obviously tell, it didn't take long for me to get adjusted to my new surroundings. Victor was right the house was perfect. A few weeks later, while I was making lunch in my worn-in kitchen, many sharp taps sounded on the front door. I wondered whether it was Victor, excited to be seeing him for the third time this week, I quickly hurried to the front door only to have my excitement plummet back down into the pit of my stomach. There stood Humphrey Montgomery. He smiled warmly at me and let himself inside... I closed the door, stunned and confused. What was Humphrey doing visiting me? I turned around and he was sat on my couch... he was clearly here to have a conversation. I didn't want to make it obvious that I knew anything about is family... so I was about to head back into the kitchen to get my sandwich when he stopped me.
"Bonnie. Please sit down we need to talk." Something about his man frightened me. He was forceful and powerful. I sat in the chair in the corner by the Tv. Humphrey waited for me to get comfortable before speaking again.
"I know that you have found out a few things about my family, Bonnie." I opened my mouth to say something, but he stopped me. "Don't ask me how I know, that is not important... but I want you to stop meddling before somebody gets hurt. Do you understand me?" My hands were shaking as they were placed neatly in my lap... "I said do you understand?" I nodded my head... how could I say no when he was threatening me? "Well. I'm glad we have that sorted out. I'll see you sometime... perhaps when Victor invites you round for dinner. He likes you, you know." I nodded and watched him get out of his seat and head towards the door. Before I could stop myself I was on my feet and shouting at him.
"You can hurt me all you like. But I have a few things to say to you! I know that Victor isn't your son! And I know you only took him in to replace your missing daughter! How do you think she feels? Alone and lost without a family! Has that thought ever crossed you mind? You make me sick! I have had my daughters taken from me... it hurts just to think about it! How could you just give up on seeing her ever again?" It all burst out of me, and I realised what the consequences of my actions would be only after I had finished... I cowered back into the corner. He took a few steps toward me and I let out a small whimper... but as he got closer I saw the hurt that filled his eyes... and I felt extremely guilty for everything I had just said.
"Do you not think that everytime I think about it, it hurts too?" He was practically whispering. "My daughter was taken from me too... I did try to find her. It doesn't tell you that in any of the articles you have read because they thought me dead at the time. Now if you don't mind. I will be leaving now." I watched him leave... his head hanging low, and I felt an extreme pang of guilt and pity. Why didn't I realise... he was as lost as his daughter. I invited Victor over for dinner that night, using the excuse that I wasn't feeling well enough to go and have dinner round at his place. When really, and obviously his father scared me so much I didn't want to be in his company. "Hi Victor" I said walking up to him and giving him a quick kiss. We weren't an item yet, but it was getting there.
"Hey babe." He wrapped his arms around me. "So what's for dinner?"
"Well, I hadn't actually decided, I thought we could choose together." He smiled as he pulled away.
"How about a chinese?" He suggested. Takeaway? Well I suppose.
"As long as we get a bottle of wine." He grinned again and pulled me closer to him. We cracked open the bottle of bubbly and chowed hungrily on the chinese. Talking in between mouthfuls.
"Victor. Your dad came over today..." I told him warily, I didn't want to upset him.
"Oh yeah? What did he want? I hope he wasn't too rough with you." He said jokingly. I forced a laugh. I lifted the chopsticks halfway up to my mouth and stopped.
"He wanted me to stop meddling in your families business... he threatened me." Victor looked shocked and looked down at his chinese food.
"I think I've lost my appetite... I'm going to..."
"No don't go! I'm sorry, I'm sure he was just joking." I wanted Victor to stay with me... I felt safe with him. "So have you got a job yet?" Victor asked. Thankful for the change in conversation, I told him that I was still looking. "I'm really sorry about my dad Bonnie. I'm sure he is just frightened of his past... perhaps you should stop meddling. I know now that they aren't my real family, we are all Ok... just please, for me. Stop?" I nodded. I hated the thought of the missing daughter and how she might not be Ok... but anything for Victor. A few drinks later and we were at the point we had been on our first date. I was stumbling around giggling like a little school girl. While Victor was pouring more drinks and almost falling over himself. I roared with laughter when he slopped wine down his chin... and got excited as it trickled slowly down his muscular torso And I lay back comfortably as we got ready to spend the night in each others arms. But before we got any further Victor pulled away from me.
"What's wrong?" I asked confused and hurt, hastily pulling the blankets over me.
"I have to tell you something Bonnie."
"Now?" This wasn't exactly the perfect of times.
"Yes. Now. It's just that the last time we were this drunk... I did take advantage of you." I looked on in shock, waiting for him to continue. "and well. The reason I didn't tell you was because. I cared about you and I didn't want to ruin everything we had... I was ashamed of how I had treated you. I'm sorry." This meant that Gwen was right about everything, and she hadn't lied to me! How was I supposed to apologise for that? But it also meant that this baby wasn't Frances'. The relief washed over me like the sea on sand... and I smiled!? I found I didn't care and I hastily pulled Victor back onto me, and we had an amazing night. I woke up early the next morning and found my bed empty. Had Victor done it again? Why did I keep falling for him and his sex tricks? I felt the tears burn my cheeks as diappointment flooded through me. I was angry at myself for letting him trick me again... but I guess I had to move on. Time to go looking for a job. I stepped into the kitchen to get some breakfast, before my little job hunt. I thought pancakes would be good today. And there was Victor cooking pancakes for us both! Everything seemed alright again as I saw him standing there. I grinned from ear to ear just watching him... and didn't realise how long I had been standing there until he cleared his throat.
"You checking me out?"
"Haha, funny. So what if I was?" I saw him smile, but when he turned around his smile was gone and he was staring blankly out of the window. "Bonnie. My mother is here." I followed his gaze and looked out of the window... and sure enough Beatrice was outside.
"Do you want me to go and let her in Victor?" I didn't really want to, but if me and Victor were to make a go of our relationship I had to make some effort with his parents.
"If you wouldn't mind. Please don't tell her that I am here, they don't really approve of you." I raised my eyebrows. "Surprise, surprise" I said under my breath "Beatrice!" I greeted warmly. "Victor isn't here if that's who you are looking for..."
"I'm actually here to see you Bonnie." She interrupted. "I hope you will forgive the intrusion."
"Of course, please have a seat." I got nervous again... Beatrice didn't scare me nearly as much as Humphrey but I didn't want to be scolded by her either. "So how can I help you Beatrice?" I asked sitting down opposite her. Had she come to warn me off of Victor and her family? Or was she just merely wanting a nice conversation... she did seem nice when we were introduced... but why had Victor been afraid that his she would find him here? "Well, Humphrey tells me that you have told Victor that we are not his parents. I must thankyou for that." She said sternly with a hint of sarcasm. "We loved him and didn't want him to find out. Actually ever since he met you he has become... distracted. You have been a bad influence and I want you to end it with him." Beatrice looked at me with a mocking, patronising smile on her face. "I don't want to give the neighbours something to talk about so I thought we would deal with this quietly... how much do you want?" "What?" She was offering me money?
"I don't want your money! Me and Victor like each other very much and you won't change that with your money." A flicker of anger crossed Beatrice's eyes, but she quickly regained her composure and smiled again.
"Well. I also know that you have found out about our missing daughter. And that you feel a burning resentment for my family now that you know."
"I don't anymore... I feel realy bad for what I said to Humphrey... I didn't mean to. It's just that my girls..." "I understand Bonnie. There is something I want to tell you though. I am glad you didn't take the money." I looked at her startled... this didn't make any sense. "You see I know what Victor is like, obviously... I watched him grow up. I wanted to make sure that my daughters feelings were true." I folded my arms and my eyebrows became one as I looked at her confused. "You see, Bonnie. You are my daughter... you are the missing daughter... Humphrey saw it the first time we met you. You belong with us Bonnie... with Victor." Beatrice stood up, giving me a sly look. "He's in the kitchen isn't he?" I nodded embarrassed. "Think about what I said Bonnie... and when you're ready, look us up. Goodbye Victor." She called through the kitchen door. A muffled reply came back through and Beatrice left with a satisfied smirk on her face. Over the next few months me and Victor got closer and closer... but I couldn't make up my mind... my parents, people I had never known, were wanting to make up for lost time. But I couldn't do it... I couldn't bring myself to go and see them. My real parents were the ones who took care of me... I didn't want anything to do with this new family... I told Victor so, and he smiled... I know he was thinking. I just wish I could read minds. A few days later, Victor pulled me in for a little snuggle on the couch.
"I've thought of a solution to all of our problems." I smiled gleefully, awaiting this solution. "Let's get out of Caldwell... this place has closure issues for you... with your girls so near you can't let go. And your parents are preventing you from living your life to your full potential because you feel guilty. Let us go to Pleasantview... or Riverblossom Hills." It was a good plan and I couldn't wait to start a new life with Victor... but going away from the girls would be like IT. I would never see them again. "So what do you think?" He asked pulling me in closer. I wasn't sure, but I didn't want to lose Victor. And I wanted to be able to have a fulfilling life of my own.
"I think it's a great idea! But I don't think I could leave my girls behind... they'll be getting so much older now and I barely know them. It's not fair! I just wish i could see them at least once." I was sick of crying over the same thing, but I couldn't help it... I couldn't forget... I didn't want to. "Bonnie. Don't cry... trust me, after this it will all be over. You'll forget about the girls and we'll live... (however cheesy it sounds) happily ever after." I giggled and let Victor shower me with kisses. "I'm excited about this baby Bonnie. Me and you are going to be parents." I nodded, I knew what he was saying made sense, but I just didn't think that when the time came that I'd be able to do it. But the time came much faster than I expected. I was starting to show now... and me and Victor were waiting patiently for the removal van when we got a surprise from someone we both recognised sprinting towards the house, someone who only caused pain and hurt to the people who loved him. Frances was running up to the house.
"Bonnie... don't go! Wait!" I looked at Victor who shrugged and headed inside. I waited for Frances to get up the stairs and catch his breath before interrogating him.
"What do you want this time Frances?" I asked in a bored voice. "You can't hurt me anymore... I'm over you and the girls... well." I looked at Frances strangely he was looking at me smiling, again. I was about to wipe the smile off his face when he began to speak. "The girls are the reason that I am here Bonnie. It's the twins' birthday party later on... I know me and you haven't exactly been on speaking terms. But I want you to be at the party, for the girls... it would mean a lot to them, it would mean a lot to me as well." What? Ah, well I wasn't going to fall for his stupid trick. "Ooh, nice try Frances. If it had worked I am sure it would have been very funny for you to see. I'm sick of you taunting me! Leave me alone." Frances glanced quickly at my hand.
"Bonnie. You still wear our wedding ring?" I looked down surprised... I hadn't even noticed that it was still there.
"W-well... you don't deny it was a trick then?" I said, quickly changing the subject. "Of course it's not a trick Bonnie... I really want you to be there. Just come and see the girls even if it is one last time before you rush off and start a new life with Mr. Big. Please Bonnie I beg you." I had never seen Frances so helpless and was surprised that I had said yes before I realised what I was saying. Frances left saying that he would see me later... and I rushed inside. I flew into Victor's waiting arms and told him that I would be seeing the girls again. He acted happy, but I saw when he pulled away that his eyes were filled with disappointment.
"What's wrong?"
"You know why he is dong this don't you? He's making you see them this one time so that you won't want to leave, he is just trying to torture you some more. Please see sense Bonnie... don't go to the party." "I thought you'd understand Victor. The girls mean so much to me... I can't pass up this chance, even if he is doing it to torture me. He can't be though, the girls will want to see me after this, surely." Victor shook his head.
"I'll call the removal company... tell them that there's been a change of plan." I looked pleadingly at him... why didn't he understand how important this could be for me?
"Will you come with me?" "
"No, Bonnie... I'll be waiting for you when you come home." I was going to beg him, but I saw that it was no use... he turned away to the phone. I went to get ready for the party. I arrived at Frances' place later on and he greeted me at the door.
"Hi Bonnie. The girls are just getting ready at the moment... do you think that you could just wait in the living room for a while, so that it is a surprise?" Ok. Things were getting weirder and weirder... first Frances invites me to the twins' party, then he is polite...
"Yes, no problem... this way?"
"Yeah. Thanks Bonnie... for coming." I smiled, but I could not get rid of the confusion that was clearly showing in my eyes. I entered the living room and had to put my hand over my mouth to stop me bursting out with laughter. The living room was pink and flowery... clearly not Frances' taste. Or was it? I had a little fun thinking of Frances buying pink carpet and wallpaper, before I noticed someone over by the pot belly stove. I had no idea who it was, but clearly Cornelia didn't live here anymore.
"Hi. I'm Bonnie Wins - Montgomery... you are?" The woman didn't move for a second, but I could have sworn I heard a giggle. "Bonnie. It's me." The woman said turning around and smiling... Who? "Bonnie stop playing dumb... it's me Connie."
"Er, no you're not... the Connie I know has red hair, blue eyes and paler skin... I have no idea who you are." The woman shook her head bemusedly
"It's me Bonnie... I have some contacts in, I have been going on the sunbed and I died my hair... I promise you I am Connie." I stood there stunned for a few moments, thinking of what to say... but I was saved by a major distraction in the form of Emily running towards me. "MUMMY!" I quickly pulled her into a bone crushing hug, kissing the top of her head frantically.
"I've missed you so much!" I whispered. "So, so much." I kept hold of her, I was scared to let her go.
"Mummy... you're hurting me." I loosened my grip and let her pull away from me. "Why did you make us go away mummy? Don't you love us any more?" I shook my head, feeling the tears wash down my face.
"Of course, I love you! I - it's just that I wasn't feeling very well... I didn't want to make you go away. I love you so so much... do you forgive me?"
"Of course mummy... does this mean that I can go home with you today?" I would have loved for that to become a reality, but I was once again saved the trouble of answering her question by an older figure hurtling toward me. I pulled her in to an arm wrenching hug and then held her at arms length to examine her.
"Ellie, you look fabulous... you're so beautiful." I pulled her back into a hug. "I am so sorry for what I did... I didn't mean to make you hate me. I love you and I have missed you so much." I felt her sobbing into my shoulder as I held her tight, supporting her as she vented her emotions upon me... what are mothers for? She eventually pulled away and smiled at me, tears still streaming down her face.
"Mum, it's Ok. I know why you made us leave. I know it wasn't your fault... I looked up a few things on the internet. And I don't hate you, I have missed you as much as you have missed me... I don't like it here, dad doesn't understand any of us. Getting you to come here is probably the only thing he has ever done to show he cares about us." She looked up at me still smiling.
"What about Francesca... does she?" "She won't come down to see you." Ellie said quickly as if hoping it would hurt less. "She doesn't forgive you... I told her about custodial rights, but she still doesn't understand. She's sitting in her room." I looked at Ellie wondering whether it would be worth it to go and see her sister. "You could try... I don't think it will do much good." She said as if reading my mind. But I had made my decision... I left the room and headed up the stairs, following the dull thud of music. I found her in her room, sat on her bed listening to her extremely loud music... which wasn't much to my taste. But then neither was Francesca herself. She had dyed her hair very dark, and wore unappealing lipstick, accented with over the top make-up and dark clothes.
"Francesca?" She turned the music up louder. "I'm sorry." I said as I stepped forward. She turned the music off... and looked me up and down, before getting off her bed. "Pregnant again? You do that when your children go missing don't you? Have another, it doesn't matter, it'll just replace the one you just lost." I began to cry as I was scolded by my eldest daughter. "I can't believe you just dumped us here with dad! He doesn't understand any of us... You've ruined my life! Look at me! This is because of you... I'm a terrible person because of you! I don't speak to people... I'm depressed BECAUSE OF YOU!" She went on for a while, just yelling at me, blaming me for all of her problems. I remember when I was like that once... but how could I fix her? I let her finish and then made my way back downstairs... I couldn't speak to her in that state. "No luck then?" Frances asked. "I thought you might have been able to get through to her... since you used to be like that."
"Frances don't. She's depressed. I have ruined all of your lives. I think it best if I go..." I looked resignedly at Ellie, trying to apologise wordlessly.
"You will come back and see us won't you mum?" I nodded, unsure of what else to say... Emily quickly ran up to me holding her arms out. "Mummy. Please let me go with you... I don't want to stay here with dad... please let me come with you." I didn't take her hands I couldn't. Tears welled up in my eyes as I looked down into her pleading face, watching her heart breaking slowly.
"I'm sorry." I choked and ran out of the house. I left at a run and reached the low garden wall... bursting into tears and collapsing on the ground. A lot of things Francesca had said were right. I had ruined their lives... I had ruined everything. My ability to see them, the way that we should have been able to understand each other, without saying anything. That was gone, I had lost all trust... everything... again. So here we are, me just about ready to have my baby... Victor still taking care of me. He's my rock. I felt a small kick and grinned touching the place where I had felt my baby move. But there was something trickling down my leg... "What was that?"
"Bonnie what's the matter?" A searing pain shot across my stomach as a bucketful of water shot out from inside me, sloshing at my feet. I yelled aloud.
"VICTOR, TAKE MY HAND!" I took Victors hand and squeezed it until it went blue as the baby forced it's way out from inside me. I had felt this pain before, but never as bad as this! I was sweating and panting as tears of pain and happiness welled in my eyes. After all of my effort I gave birth to a healthy baby. And this chapter will finish here... I hope you enjoyed it. I actually am quite happy with this one. Thanks for reading and sticking with this story up till now... I only hope you will continue to stick with it until it is finished. Thanks again and thaks to the custom content makers, who make all of our stories and games a better experience.
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On Aug 14, 2007 wrote:
On Aug 14, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:
Wow, yet another AMAZING chapter! I knew it! I knew Bonnie was the missing daughter! I feel kinda bad though, I was sure Gwen was lying, but she wasn't, but at least Victor is taking care of Bonnie and his baby. I can't wait for more!
This is absolutely one of my fave series ever! 
On Aug 14, 2007 slime wrote:
sorry i havent commented your other chapters i read them but i just didn't leave a comment but im leaving a comment on this one 5 points WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
On Aug 14, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
You didn't even say if it was a boy or a girl! D: And my jaw seriously dropped when I saw Francesca. I knew she was sad about her mom...but not THAT sad.
I really want Bonnie to get her girls back. And just ditch all boys and live alone with them. 
On Aug 14, 2007 wrote:
haha. i thought she was the missing daughter:]
On Aug 14, 2007 Daishi wrote:
lol i thought bonnie was the missing daughter. yet another great chapter to this story, bravo. is the baby finally a boy?
On Aug 14, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:
On Aug 14, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:
Another excellent chapter
Bonnie drinking wine while she was pregnant
I really want Bonnie to get her girls back, Bonnie should try to get custidy of her girls. How can you end the chapter without telling us if she had a boy or a girl??? I had a feeling that she was the missing daughter and I'm glad that she knows. Can hardly wait to read the next chapter, I'm going on vaction on wednesday and will likely miss the next few chapters
On Aug 14, 2007 halla07 wrote:
On Aug 14, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:
I Knew it!!!!!
On Aug 14, 2007 atangki wrote:
Loved this part! And btw, the baby's adorable! Hope it's a boy this time..
LOL. 
On Aug 14, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
I knew that Bonnie was the missing daughter !!!! Awww, the baby is very cute !!! I hope it's another girl
On Aug 14, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
Aww the baby is so cute. I guess we're gonna have to wait until the next chapter to find out whether it was a boy or girl and his/her name. I was just thinking how alike Vannessa and Bonnie looked. OMG, Connie looks like a Bonnie clone, except for the contacts. Great [part, so many twists and turns. 5.0
On Aug 14, 2007 susieQ123 wrote:
loved it thankz xx really good part
On Aug 14, 2007 wrote:
I reckon that the baby is a boy, and why doens't Bonnie just go to the court and say that she is mentally stable again, then she can get the girls back along with the new baby. Is that what's going to happen, give us all some kind of hint... PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!! 5.0
On Aug 14, 2007 maxi king wrote:
On Aug 14, 2007 wrote:
If we got a hint, there would be no surpirses!
Awesome story, good plot, great characters, 5.0! (And I usually don't like this kind of stories)~Eidleflower
On Aug 14, 2007 fairyofdeath wrote:
cool
On Aug 14, 2007 animcfly wrote:
wow...is all i can manage, such an awesome part and believe me im sure guna stick with this story till the end its so awesome, my fave by far thank you for entertaining me so much
On Aug 14, 2007 MissJay wrote:
Wow...I had a feeling she was the missing daughter. I'm gald she got a chance to see her girls but Frances only wanted her to because he couldn't get through to Francesca.
On Aug 14, 2007 wrote:
Gosh, i bet something else is going on with Francesca...I mean honestly she is like 100/10 depressed. O.o Maybe something is happening at Frances house...i hope he and Connie die in a fire or something...>_> -wink wink-
On Aug 14, 2007 bflosweethart wrote:
wow i think she should just go single and take care of her kids she would be much happier! thx for the story loved it
On Aug 14, 2007 converse02 wrote:
I think she should have just left, she's always falling for Frances' plans... rawr!
But great chapter.
On Aug 14, 2007 kisekiai wrote:
poor Bonnie
All Ellie wants is her mom, it's not fair to her and the fact Francesca doesn't love her isn't Bonnie's fault
I'm sick of Frances
On Aug 14, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
REally great story, can't wait to see what you write in the next part
On Aug 14, 2007 aimeeisasimnut wrote:
Another great chapter!!! I can't wait for the next! I am totally hooked on your stories!
On Aug 15, 2007 candy820 wrote:
I loved this chapter. but you didn't tell us is she moved away. I hope frances sees the error of his way and gives the girls back to her.Since they were saying they hate it there with him. and they want to be with her.
On Aug 15, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:
another great part!
On Aug 15, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
another great installment!
On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:
Great, another interesting installment!!
On Aug 15, 2007 wywoluver wrote:
An amazing chapter. I hope Bonnie can get her girls back soon. Can't wait to read the next chapter when it comes out.
On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:
i really hope its a boy!! Bonnie should totally get her girls back!! they need her!! THAT BABY IS THE CUTEST SIM I HAVE EVER SEEN!!!!! lolz 5.0!!!
On Aug 15, 2007 tesasims wrote:
On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:
wow.. all the chapters are ecxellent
i like francesca 
and i agree with her, altough she doesn't understand with Bonnie. i see Bonnie didn't really care she found her parent. that's kinda weird. 
but, oh well ;D can't wait for the next part 
On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:
sorry for the spelling
i hope you can understand this ;D
On Aug 15, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:
Wow! Love it! I didn't get to finish it yesterday cuz there was something wrong with the computer. Was the baby a girl or a boy, I think it was a boy, anywayz can't wait for the next part.
On Aug 16, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
This is such a good series! I
it! It's driving me nuts wondering if it's a girl or a boy. Poor Francesca, it's a mini Bonnie! Can't wait to read the next chapter. 
On Aug 16, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Another great chapter! Excellent screenshots as usual. Can't wait to find out if the baby is a boy or a girl. He/She has beautiful eyes and it's hard to tell.
5.0+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
On Aug 16, 2007 wrote:
omg O-O francesca..
I would of never suspected her to go goth.. lmao that scared me a little bit.
5.0! great storyy
On Aug 16, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:
On Aug 16, 2007 bailey2U wrote:
Awsome story keep them coming
On Aug 16, 2007 1princess4u wrote:
Drinking while PG..not good at all....dont like things like this
...other than this...another great part...love it... 
On Aug 17, 2007 wrote:
Poor Francesca. Frances is definitely acting weird...and I do have to wonder if Victor's as nice as he seems.
On Aug 18, 2007 wrote:
very good! i hope bonnie ends up with her children and victor!
On Aug 19, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
Yay! I knew Bonnie was the missing daughter since I found it out! But you could at least say if the baby was a boy or girl! Hmph!
Oh well!
On Aug 19, 2007 kaykay52812 wrote:
whens the next part coming out?? oh, and i would also like to know where you got bonnies hair. i like it.
On Aug 19, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice story, I loved it.
On Aug 21, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
On Sep 16, 2007 ppunkprincess wrote:
wow, its very surprising that Bonnie is the missing daughter...
and Francesca is goth...
but the story is great and also I like long stories 
hehe
On Sep 24, 2007 Junior_bad wrote:
nice story, the sims are very good
On Oct 9, 2007 agaumer wrote:
Oy, drinking while she's pregnant... I have a lot less sympathy for her now
On Oct 20, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Good story ! Thanks !
On Oct 28, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
I sort of had the feeling that they were her real parents, but I sort of brushed it off... Bonnie looks very young for a mother of four, I must say. Her girls are stunning though, just hope they'll get a more stable life...