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Hello and welcome to the next part of Rich Girls. There are many parts to Bonnie Winston's story including: The Intro, New Beginnings, The College Life, Hospital Woes, The Simple Life?, Newlyweds, Eyes Wide Shut and Waking Up. I hope you read and enjoyed those parts first before going on with this one. Thanks!
"Just answer the question Annabelle, when did you find Ellie?" Annabelle took a deep breath before she began.
"Well, it was Connie who came and called by the house one day..." I was expecting visitors anyway... there was a man from some giant diamond digging thing wanting me to buy their diamonds. Anyway yeah... so I got a surprise when I opened the door and saw Connie standing there. She was holding Ellie, of course I didn't know that she was yours at first. So I asked her what she was doing here and told her that you had moved away a while ago.
"I know where Bonnie lives Annabelle. It's you I have come to see." she said. I didn't invite her in, well I had important business matters later on. She handed me Ellie and told me a few things. "Like what?" I interrupted. I mean how many is a few? I had to know what they were. Well she told me that you and Frances had had twins and that you couldn't handle looking after them both. She told me that you had requested for me to look after Ellie until you were ready to take her back. I refused at first, I mean mum wouldn't have been too happy... But I trusted her and I thought I was doing you a favour so I took her. Connie had a driver waiting in a black car, I wondered who it was, but I couldn't really make out a face. I think it was a man though. I pondered what she had said for a moment before letting loose.
"You trusted her? I thought you knew me... I mean you are my sister! How could you think that I would give one of my babies up? And then you kept her for all that time? Never even came to see how I was getting on or anything!" All these questions, all this lying made my blood boil... I had been deceived on so many levels. "Doesn't anyone care about me?" Ellie screamed and burst into tears. "I thought you would be happy to see me mummy. But you're more interested in the person who has looked after me for the past three or four years." She let out a small sob before rushing indoors. I watched her go and was about to get up and follow her when Annabelle stopped me. "What?" I asked, I wanted to go and console my daughter.
"She has Francesca to cheer her up... and don't you want all of my answers to your questions?" I sat there and waited for her to answer, but she was still looking at me enquiringly.
"Yes I do." I said reluctantly.
"I trusted Connie because she used to be your best friend... she was your bridesmaid. I wasn't about to suspect her! I thought you might need some help, how was I supposed to know different, I know that being a first time mum is supposed to be hard... but with twins? It had to be extra difficult... and I hadn't seen you in a few years so I had no idea that you were not in need of my help." I didn't say anything, and even if I had wanted to I wouldn't have been able to my throat was stuck, so I just stared at my feet. But Annabelle showed no signs of stopping.
"I kept her for all of that time because I thought that was what you wanted... Connie told me you would come and get Ellie when you were ready, so when you didn't come I just thought you still weren't ready. I didn't come to see you because I was looking after Ellie, and if I wanted to come I would have to bring her and I thought that you might not be ready. And you never came to see me either Bonnie." I felt as though I had slapped around the face, she wasn't speaking harshly, but I could hear the disappointment in her voice and felt extremely guilty. I kind of wish she had slapped me round the face, it probably would have felt better. But I had too much dignity and I wasn't going to admit to being wrong so I flared up once more.
"Even so! When you came to tell me that Courtney was dead and I told you everything you must have realised then that I was missing my eldest daughter... yet you still neglected to tell me that it was you that had Ellie!" Only after I had said it did I realise that I had just made a fair point. But Annabelle was smiling, yes smiling! My blood was reaching temperatures that I thought impossible, my veign was throbbing in my temple so hard that I could hear it.
"I didn't tell you because I thought it would be more of a surprise." she chirped. But my frown didn't falter and she took a step back looking bewildered.
"Do you not think. That I have had enough of surprises? I had my daughters stolen from me. Nice surprise" I said sarcastically. "Then I have Francesca returned on my doorstep. Another great surprise. And then, Frances leaves me. The best surprise of all though, is that you were the one who had Ellie all along!" I took a few harsh, deep breaths before looking into Annabelles' eyes again. At which point she turned around and ran inside. She locked herself in her bedroom after that, and she wouldn't come out (not that I put too much effort trying to coax her out of there.) I approached Ellie cautiously, although she seemed perfectly happy.
"Ellie, can you go and get your things together? We are getting out of here." I didn't know where we were going to go but I couldn't stay in a house with Annabelle for much longer. I grabbed Emily and bundled all of the girls into a taxi as fast as I could... I didn't want Annabelle trying to stop us. The last I saw of Annabelle as we left was a glimpse of her head in the upstairs window. We arrived back at our beach house... we hadn't sold it after all. We didn't need to when we had Miss. Moneypockets. I was worried though, I thought this place might have too many bad memories for me to live perfectly happy. And since Frances' cheques had stopped coming and we had lost our financial backer I was going to have to get a job... and a nanny. But I realised that something was wrong straight away... there was something so different about this place. The girls were jumping up and down beside me, excited about seeing their new home. I reluctantly agreed to let them have a look around and headed in myself afterwards. It was then that I realised what was wrong... all of our furniture was gone! How had this happened I ha donly been gone 24 hours, if that. I heard muffled voices coming from the kitchen and headed towards it. As I got closer I recognised Frances' voice and was about to rush in and welcome him home when I recognised another voice... his mother Gwen. She didn't sound too happy with her son.
"Well that's all done then is it Frances? Are you going to leave the mother of your children nothing? Is that really what she deserves... you can't leave her like this! It's going to be hard enough on her finding a suitable nanny and getting a job. Why do you need all this stuff anyway?" Gwen was on my side? This was weird. "Mother, I am starting a new life without Bonnie and the girls... I stopped sending the cheques. She survived" he said brightly "They don't need me anymore. And I don't need them" he added quietly.
"You know that's a lie Frances! You love your daughters... and I know you still love Bonnie." Why was Gwen defending me? Or was it her grand daughters that she was defending? I wasn't ready to reveal myself yet and figured I would listen for a little while longer. "How could I still love her? After what she did to me I'm surprised I didn't kill her! But I decided to give her a second chance... we had our babies they got kidnapped. And then she neglected me! Someone she should be able to talk to..."
"Frances, a mothers love is different from a fathers. For the first time in her life she was loving others... then to lose that as her children got ripped away, you say you felt the same... but why would you? You knew you would be seeing your daughters again! It would be all part of your plan!" Gwen took a deep breath I knew she was getting ready for more. But what did she mean plan? What had Frances known.
"All these women that you have been seeing just to hurt her! And don't say it's to get her back for cheating on you... you had slept with dozens of girls during your relationship with her! And now you settle for Connie..." Connie? Had I heard right? "and you're just going to run away together, leaving Bonnie with nothing?" Gwen finsished shouting and there was a long silence. But my position was given away as Emily let out a loud gurgle... I heard hurried footsteps to the kitchen door and then Frances wrenched the door open. I pushed my way inside and stood by Gwen... she had defended me after all. I turned to Gwen.
"Is everything you said true?"
"Every word." Gwen snarled looking at her son like he was a piece of dirt. "He is going to leave you with nothing, the babies hadn't turned out like he had planned... you weren't supposed to get them back."
"But why would they want my babies? They could just have their own!" I didn't look at Frances... I couldn't." "Frances and Connie knew that that's what would hurt you the most. They wanted to hurt you for sleeping with Chris... but Frances is more disgraceful... his work partner? Yes he was sleeping with her as you suspected. I covered up for him, because I wanted him to be happy."
"But why did you tell him that I had slept with Christopher?"
"I didn't want you to hurt him" Gwen snapped "but he doesn't need you to do that. He hurts himself! He is ruining your lives... relieving you of all your possessions." "Mother. It's not like she needs them. Her sister can pay for everything! Let's get out of here... I'm supposed to be meeting Connie soon." I looked at Frances for the first time, and I saw hatred there. Pure, burning hatred. I was frightened but I wasn't going to let him rob us.
"I don't have Annabelle anymore, I fell out with her for having Ellie all of this time."
"Well you had better go and make up with her hadn't you... or you'll be out on the streets. With nothing." Frances said coldly. "And if that happens, I will take the girls off of your hands." His eyes narrowed to slits as he smiled maliciously. "Oh no you won't! Frances Leslie Price! You won't have her children and if she has nothing left after you leave her. I will look after her, I have enough money to support my daughter-in-law and my three grand children." I love Frances mother, she has made quite a change.
"Oh yes" Frances said sickeningly "I want a divorce Bonnie. See you in court? I will be fighting for my children!" I backed away, forcing Ellie's face away from her fathers... he wouldn't dare! Would he? Frances turned on his heel and ran. Not looking back at his youngest daughter. I thought he might have given me a second glance, though. I guess it really is over. That was when Gwen turned back to me.
"Bonnie, I am so sorry for taking Francesca... but I did return her... I thought you might forgive me. I am sorry for ruining your marriage. Will you let me make it up to you?" I looked into her eyes and saw Frances. But it wasn't evil like I had always known from her... she was being sincere and I had no-one else to turn to. "Of course I forgive you mum." Gwen smiled and pulled me into a hug. As we parted I saw tears glistening in her eyes.
"So, where are my beautiful grand daughters?" She asked hastily wiping her eyes. "Let's pick them up and we'll all go back to my place." I looked at my mother-in-law... we were friends. It was strange, but at the same time it seemed we had always been friends... well apart from the time she almost beat me to death with her purse. That's the end of this part. I am sorry that they are getting quite short. I'll try and make the next one longer. Don't you just love Gwen? Oh, and if you thought Gwen looked different I apologise... I forgot to clone her and she just disappeared so I had to start her from scratch I think I did a pretty good job. Anyway I hope you enjoyed it (it took me a while thinking about where to go with it) and I hope you will read the next part too. Thanks to you for supporting me with this story... and thanks to all the cc makers!
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On Aug 3, 2007 converse02 wrote:
dang. it just seems to get better and better. ur story rox xxhardxcorexx.
On Aug 3, 2007 kitfu11 wrote:
Woo first comment! Well that was very well written, but whoa! What an unexpected twist!!! I never saw that coming, and I have to say I'm kinda bummed Frances turned out to be a bad guy, but I can't wait for the next chapter!
On Aug 3, 2007 Aquaprinc3ss wrote:
OMG!! I wish Frances didn't do that I feel like swearing
I hope Bonnie will get a husband.
On Aug 3, 2007 bryk1984 wrote:
This story gets better by the chapter
I really can't wait to read the next one!! I hope that Frances & Connie get what they diserve.
On Aug 3, 2007 atangki wrote:
I HATE FRANCES! OOOOOOHHHH!!! I hope Gwen beats him up with her purse! LOL. I can't wait to read the next part!
On Aug 3, 2007 wrote:
woahh. i never suspected that!
i love your stories! Keep writing ;>
On Aug 3, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
On Aug 3, 2007 katlin194 wrote:
Wow!
On Aug 3, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
Death to Frances
How could he do such a thing ??Poor Bonie
I'm glad that Gwen changed !! Can't wait for more
On Aug 3, 2007 susieQ123 wrote:
loved it cant wait to read more
On Aug 3, 2007 animcfly wrote:
another amazing installment!
keep them coming there so awesome, my fave set!!!
On Aug 3, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
Oh Lord. The lieing, cheating, manipulating, thieving little so-and-so. Poor Bonnir. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
On Aug 3, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
Evil Frances! I hope everything works out for Bonnie.
On Aug 3, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
Poor Bonnie! I hope Frances gets what he deserves! Good part, but I won't be reading them for a while. Goin' to Ireland!
On Aug 3, 2007 MissJay wrote:
MAn I hope Frances and Connie break up and leave him heartbroken!!! Loved that part!
On Aug 3, 2007 pretty_baby wrote:
ahhh MY GODDD!!!!! HOW COULD HEEE!!!! thats so horrible goshhhhh im so hurt for bonnie now she just keeps getting it doesnt she
On Aug 3, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
I knew Frances couldn't be trusted.
But I'm glad that the twins are reunited, even though Bonnie left Annabelle. And Gwen was pretty awesome in this one. ^^ Yet another great part!
On Aug 3, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
GAAAAAAAAAAAH! Evil Frances! I wish I were in that story. I'd look all pretty and pretend to be in love w/ him, and then I'd help Bonnie get back at him. Too bad Connie's w/ Frances
. LOL! 
Gwen, she's so awesome! 
Hope to read more from you soon!
I
On Aug 3, 2007 bflosweethart wrote:
omg! i thought he was loyal!!! yo uare really good with that!
On Aug 4, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:
On Aug 4, 2007 sanl1210 wrote:
Oops, forgot to rate.
On Aug 4, 2007 wrote:
Oh, poor Bonnie.
Frances really did get terrible!
On Aug 4, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Well that was a surprise!!! Great chapter; can't wait for the next one!!!!! 5.0+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
On Aug 4, 2007 swirlique wrote:
wow that would really suck if that happened to someone in real life. (unless) Great drama she was really treated badly. Poor girl...
On Aug 4, 2007 tesasims wrote:
On Aug 4, 2007 RIDance wrote:
Frances sucks. He did a total 180, huh? Bonnie just can't win. Good job on your story!!
Rach
On Aug 4, 2007 maxi king wrote:
On Aug 4, 2007 fairyofdeath wrote:
awsome
On Aug 5, 2007 itachigirl wrote:
great job sam you rock
5.0
On Aug 5, 2007 Kikowiko wrote:
love it!!!
On Aug 5, 2007 djcryssiec wrote:
I love this story so thought I'd leave you a comment... amazing work
On Aug 5, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:
Poor Bonnie!
On Aug 7, 2007 ddw2luvsthesims2 wrote:
That is a shame someone would not want to see his ex-wife happy I mean she's the mother of his 3 children!
On Aug 7, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice story. Thank for sharing.
On Aug 7, 2007 wrote:
wow 5.0
On Aug 8, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
Another great installment, well done!
On Aug 12, 2007 sharon21075 wrote:
Holy crappoli! What a twist! Awesome as usual. You sure keep us on our toes. Loved it. I wanna kill that jerk of a boy. Yes boy, for he is surely Not a real man. = Great job, Sharon
On Aug 13, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
Well done as always! Amazing the effort you put into your tales!
On Sep 7, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Great story ! Thanks !
On Sep 15, 2007 ppunkprincess wrote:
how could Frances do such a thing? well, the story is awsome
and I LOVE the characters
oh and Bonnie's really pretty
lol
On Sep 25, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
Wow i absolutely love the way the story is developing , but i really didn't expect Frances to be behind it all
am seriously hooked lol can't wait for more
On Oct 6, 2007 Eluna wrote:
On Oct 8, 2007 agaumer wrote:
Gah evil twist! I hope Frances gets... something very bad
Nice writing and the screenshots are fabulous as usual 
On Oct 27, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote: