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Hello and welcome to the FINAL part of The Secrets of Sam Cains. We left off with Susan finding out about Lorna's secret basement under the library... Enjoy...
Susan: "That doesn't matter now, I want you and Lola to try and distract Lorna so I can get in and snoop about."
Morgan: "I don't know about that Susan, she's dangerous what if she does something to us."
Susan: "She won't suspect a thing, she doesn't know we all went to visit Sam, and she doesn't know we have found one of her daughters, perhaps you could use that to distract her."
Lola: "What is she saying?"
Morgan: "shhh well I guess we could try, but if we get killed, I hope you feel guilty for the rest of your life." Morgan hung up.
Lola: "So what are we doing that could kill us?" Here it was. The library door...
Morgan: "Well here goes nothing"
Lola: "Except our well-being..."
They knocked Lorna: "Hello girls is there something I can do for you, or are you just trying to bother me. I believe I told you to stay away from the library."
Morgan: "Well, we have something important to tell you..." She nudged Lola.
Lola: "Oh yes, er we have found your other daughter."
Lorna: "What other daughter? I don't have another daughter?"
Morgan: "Well you do since I am not yours."
Lorna: "I don't know how you found this out but I want you to take me to her immediately." So they headed out, to Susan's flat. Susan waited in the bushes for them to leave, she was nervous and frightened of what she might find down there. But after she watched them leave she knew what she had to do and it had to be quick. She went into the library and immediately panicked. How on earth was she meant to find a way into the basement from here? It was full of books nothing looked suspicious or out of place. It seemed to be difficult a task, that's when Susan remembered it was Lorna she was dealing with. She wasn't witty or smart, it was going to be in an obvious place. She began pulling book after book off the shelves, looking for something distinct... Meanwhile Lorna, Lola and Morgan were outside Susan's flat, they had just knocked and were waiting for Stacey to answer. Stacey invited them in and offered them a seat which Lola took grudgingly.
Lola: "You're not a goth anymore then?"
Stacey: "I never was it was just an act to annoy my parents."
Lorna: "So you're my daughter?"
Stacey: "I guess, but I don't want you to be, I don't have an interest for someone who gave me up years ago."
Lorna: "I understand, but what I want I get, one way or another."
Morgan: "Like killing my mother you mean!"
Lorna: "Precisely, and what a great feeling it was to finally be rid of her, except I wasn't the one who did it I just got other people to do it for me."
Lola: "What?" Finally here it was! a lever.
Susan: "How obvious, what an amateur" Susan pulled the lever and lo and behold a staircase appeared in the floor. Susan carefully went down into the basement. Where she would find all of her answers. Lorna: "It's ok I'll go it's for the best."
Morgan: "No! Wait, please Stacey just give her a chance... Susan," She whispered.
Stacey: "Fine! I'll give you a few minutes to explain yourself"
Lorna: "Ok well it's not my fault, your father he swapped the babies and I tried everything I could to put them right again. I revenged myself on everyone after that. Except my children of course. Sam was a fool, he trusted me and believed every word I said, I did not love him anymore, how could I? So I got him to do my bidding, which he did like a faithful dog. i did not mean to get rid of you I just couldn't handle it when you were born, I was young and foolish please forgive me."
Stacey: "No." Susan made her way further and further down through the basement, she knew there might be no way out for her. but she had to find the truth. Susan was terrified when she walked in, course the bodies were in there. But it was like some kind of torture chamber. The bodies were ready to be ripped apart and modified to hide their identities. Susan had to get out of here now! She left the scary room and hurried back up the stairs, she was exhausted. But when she got to the top her way was blocked. No! Lorna could not have got back first. This was the end she was going to die down here alone. And what was going to happen to the girls? No! This wasn't going to happen! Lorna: "You have been very naughty girls haven't you?"
Morgan: "What are you going to do to us?"
Lola: "Nothing, she is going to be caught first, I have already called the police!"
Lorna: "What?! I am your mother!"
Lola: "You are no mother of mine! You killed so many people, ruined so many lives. Including mine! this breaks my heart but it's what you deserve."
Lorna: "Well, I suppose you're right... But I'll get you before I go!" Stacey: "NO!"
Lorna: "What? Who are these people, what are they doing here?"
Stacey: "Mum, meet my mum and dad, they are here to help me lock you away so you can never harm anyone ever again."
Lorna: "Well, i'm afraid someone already is being hurt.. Darling Susan who has been getting on my nerves these past few months is now locked in the basement, probably going to starve to death. Horrible end don't you think?"
Stacey: "We'll get her out. You are really stupid if you hadn't told us that we might have forgotten about her! So thanks." They all watched as Lorna was taken away, by the police. never to darken anyone's doorstep ever again. Just before they rescued Susan... Sam was released from prison the next day, he thanked his daughters for all their help in his release, but it was Susan he had most to thank...
Sam: "Susan, thankyou so much for your help, I could not have done it without you. I have just been so stupid, I don't know why I believed her..."
Susan: "It doesn't matter now Sam we are all ok now and I'm leaving tomorrow so you can spend the rest of your life with your daughters without my interference. At least now I know what happened to Erina, that's all I wanted."
Sam: "I know" Sam: "Susan, I..."
Susan: "Oh, come here..." They kissed, however, they weren't to live happily ever after for long... Sam was arrested the next day, for the murder Erina, Lorna had taken him down with her, she had only killed Louise and the secretary.
Sam: "Susan. I love you, please look after my children, I want someone who can be a good influence to take care of them. i know you love them Susan, I beg of you"
Susan: "I will, i love you too Sam. When will you be out?"
Sam: "i don't know but I'll do my best, good luck, Susan, and goodbye."
Susan: "Goodbye." So Susan was left to look after the children and start a new life with them. Sam was never going to be released, for his criminal acts were far from fixable.
THE END
I hope you enjoyed this series as it was wonderful to write and read your comments. Thanks to all the custom content makers who contributed to my story with their wonderful creations. And thankyou once again for reading. i hope you look out for more works from me in the future, and continue to enjoy my new stories. Sam
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30 Comment(s) posted so far
On Apr 1, 2007 lexique wrote:
i gave you a rating on the whole of the seies which was 4.0 it was very good, good storyline, great custom content, and excellent twists and turns, BUT i think this should be your last one for the time being. maybe in a month or so you could do a 3 part spin-off of their life 5 or 10 yers on. but leave it for now or people ill get bored and tired of it.
On Apr 1, 2007 wrote:
Excellent story, why did it have to end though?! I want to see more of what happens to them. But I didn't expect in the end where Sam fell in love with Susan. What happened to the 2nd set of twins, Garnet and the other one? Sam has 5 kids, 4 to the same woman, right? From what I can remember, yeah.
On Apr 1, 2007 josh1092 wrote:
Gosh this was soooooooooo cool please continue it with another title it will be sooooooo cool. I loved this part as well and hope you make another story like about the teens going to college.5.000000000000
On Apr 1, 2007 spooneroon wrote:
All the stories were great!!!! Why don't you make a side story with the 3 girls going to collage?
5.0
On Apr 1, 2007 elvizog wrote:
On Apr 1, 2007 wrote:
this was and AWSOME story!!!!
I wish it didnt end though.... :P
On Apr 1, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
On Apr 1, 2007 Dr-X56 wrote:
Loved it! Readed all of them.. Keep up the good work!
Hope u gonna make other stories.. i hope i hope and wish for it!
WEEE
On Apr 2, 2007 heyunome11 wrote:
That was really good!!
I am going to miss reading them though!!
On Apr 2, 2007 jerif wrote:
They are absolutely beautiful and I just love the pink VW Bug
On Apr 2, 2007 Zela wrote:
Keep writing! I didn't manage to read the first 3 parts, but I got the gist after reading the other parts and I can't believe it has ended! Is the a custom skin? I love their hair.
On Apr 2, 2007 airdrie wrote:
Great overall storyline. 14 parts is a bit long, though.
On Apr 3, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Great ending...the bad guys got what they deserved for once!
On Apr 4, 2007 wrote:
Wow, I didn't expect the two to fall in love. 5.0
On Apr 6, 2007 Mytort wrote:
awesome
great twists and turns
but did staceys parenats really want to get rid of her? Or did I miss that part?
On Apr 6, 2007 xjuicyxxfruitx wrote:
this was really good though it got pretty damn confusing!
its really awesome all the work you've done, i could never spend so much time on the same story. nice one
On Apr 10, 2007 lilqueennbri wrote:
YOu did a great job on the series. I will be looking oiut for your next story. Great job.
On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:
i hate it sorry
On Apr 24, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:
GREAT
On Apr 25, 2007 Anessa wrote:
Awesome story!
On May 12, 2007 wrote:
On May 21, 2007 zoem95 wrote:
Great Story!
On May 28, 2007 JuLaYa-K wrote:
This was so great!!!!! The best series I have ever read, everything goes well and nothing changes like faces or people(like some stories).
. I 
it and I am 
to see it go. (Figure out the smilies!!)
On May 30, 2007 MissJay wrote:
That whole series had a lot of twists and turns in it. 5.0!
On Jun 10, 2007 binky13 wrote:
Very interesting and long series!
On Jun 10, 2007 ladyjosey68 wrote:
I really loved the storys they where all great you really know how to write
On Jun 21, 2007 Downtimegirl91 wrote:
wow one of the beste stories i ever read
On Jun 30, 2007 justvex wrote:
Finally Sam got what he deserved.Love the entired story which carried lot of twisting. You have to read the entired story to get the essence of it. Great writing.
On Jul 1, 2007 wrote:
Wow, what a finale! Great series, lots of twists and turns!
On Jul 11, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
An amazing story by a great sims author! I'm going to read Susan's Story now! Thank you for sharing!
