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Lorna was finally blessed with two gorgeous children a boy (Tyler) and a girl (Garnet)
Louise: "What the hell are you talking about you mad woman! I don't know what you're talking about!"
Lorna: "Yes you do! I never forget a face, you are the one that adopted Lola and Morgan! Now I want to see my daughter!"
Louise: "Ok I'll tell you the truth! I am not the one who adopted your children, in fact I'm not sure they were adopted at all..."
Lorna: "Now what are you talking about you told me!" Louise: "Yes I know and I'm sorry, but I am a private detective, lawyer and friend of Susan" she burst into tears "she believes that there is some fowl play involved here, and so do I!"
Lorna: "So where is my child?"
Louise: "I believe that they are still in the simcity orphanage"
Lorna: "You believe a lot of things! I'll tell you what I believe, I believe there is about to be fowl play involved! Goodbye Helen!"
Louise: "Wait! My name's not Helen! And if you kill me there will be more evidence to incriminate you!"
Lorna: "Don't you see all the evidence is planted at Sam, he did everything! Not me I just sculptured him into being my puppet! HE does everything I say, even kill the woman he loves! So this will be the ONLY evidence on me, but I'll find some way to pass it on. Now Goodbye!" And That was the end of Louise's interference. Lorna found Lola and Morgan and brought both of them home (only because Lola refused to go without her sister) much to Lorna's annoyance. She couldn't wait for them to meet Sam and they couldn't wait to meet the rest of the family, they were already aware that they had a brother and a sister. They were extremely excited. Lola was the main attraction, fitting in immediately with the family. However, Morgan was left to the side watching, she was rather shy, but she had noticed something else. She was extraordinarily different from the rest of the family, she had not counted on this. Morgan noticed that everyone in this family had blonde hair and she felt extremely out of place, she just hanged around away from the mass of people as she was shy and watched as Lola was reunited with the family... Or at least she did, until Garnet came and gave her a hug, she felt the happiness and warmth eminating from her, and soon felt it too, she was now one of the family Meanwhile, Susan farted. And then got to wondering where Louise had got to, she said she would only be a couple of minutes, they had been working extremely hard to try and find evidence. and it was doubly hard since Susan had taken to giving up, from the talk with Lorna, but Louise had persuaded her that Louise was a manipulative liar, and could not be trusted. There was a knock at the door, very unexpected but also very welcome, or was it? As Susan got up to open the door, it was rudely flung open and Lorna made her entrance! Lorna: "Hello there, Susan. Just thought I'd let you know that i tracked down, Morgan and Lola. They are at home with me right now, getting re-acquainted with their father and meeting the rest of the family."
Susan: "And you're telling me this because"
Lorna: "Because I know, Susan. I know that Louise your dear friend was spying on me, finding evidence to put me away. But don't you see? I'll never be gone! This is my family now! Erina has moved on and so should you before you get yourself into trouble" Susan: "Shut up! Erina did not move on. YOU KLLED HER! and I am going to put you away. nOW WHERE IS LOUISE?!"
Lorna: "Oh, that skimpy little friend of yours, well I have taken care of her. She will not be interfering in my affairs again."
Susan: "You killed her too.. you little..."
Lorna: "I don't hink you want to finish your sentence Susan. I want you out of here. I'll be back here at 6 pm tonight and if you're not gone by then, well you get the idea, just leave Susan, or you will suffer the same consequences as your dear friend!"
Susan: "What did you do with the body."
Lorna: "As if I'm going to tell you that would be giving you evidence you stupid wretch! Just heed what I said and you will live to tell the tale. I guess, i won't see you later. Bye! Later that night at 6pm and Lorna found out that Susan had indeed left the motel. Now she had got rid of everyone who would get in the way letting the world know her's and Sam's secrets. But not really, Susan had left the motel as she had promised. But she promised herself that she would not leave Lorna alone, she was going to find out what happened to Erina and prove that Lorna was the serial killer of simcity. So she snuck around the back of the family home and waited until they were all asleep, before she stole in, to find... ... No not Lorna, but... ... Morgan!
Susan: "Hello there Morgan." She said brightly.
Morgan: "Hello, who are you, please don't hurt me, just take what you want and get out!"
Susan: "Oh you seem to misunderstand my intentions Morgan... You see I am your aunt, Susan."
Morgan: "Oh come off it! You honestly trying to tell me that you are my mothers sister."
Susan: "Oh you do not know your mother Morgan."
Morgan: "What! what are you talking about? Of course I know my mother she is right down the hall."
Susan: "That's where you're wrong, Morgan, your mother was killed. Her name was Erina, you have an extreme likeness to her don't you know."
Morgan: "I don't understand! Why are you telling me this?"
Susan: "Because your "mother" killed her! that's why" Morgan: "What?! You can't just go around saying things like that, you know."
Susan: "I'm not just saying it! She isn't your mother can't you tell. Haven't you noticed your difference to the rest of the family?"
Morgan: "Well yes but I thought nothing of it."
Susan: "Does Lorna treat you differently to Lola?"
Morgan: "Well yes, she kind of despises me, and adores Lola, but I guess that's because she is much more beautiful than I."
Susan: "No Morgan it's because she see's your mother in you. And she gets scared every time she looks at you."
Morgan: "So, my mum was a brunette?"
Susan: "Indeed, now though, I need you to sneak off with me now!"
Morgan: "Why do you need me?"
Susan: "I need some help in incriminating her"
Morgan: "What can I do, i don't know anything"
Susan: "You have your DNA, that will be proof enough to give her a motive for killing your mum. Now hurry can we please go?"
Morgan: "Yes I am just coming, hold on." They snuck off into the night.
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17 Comment(s) posted so far
On Mar 20, 2007 S.Cains wrote:
I know it went a bit fast. but I hope you enjoyed it nonetheless. Thanks for all the custom content. And look out for the real final part. Thanks. Sam xxx
On Mar 21, 2007 wrote:
There were some really great custom cotent in this story! It's getting really good...
On Mar 21, 2007 wrote:
Oops, I spelled content wrong
...oh well!
On Mar 21, 2007 KhandiKane wrote:
susan better get a backbone and deal with that woman before she does something to her. waiting for number 10
On Mar 22, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Another cliffhanger! Good work, can't wait for next chapter!
On Mar 22, 2007 BBKZ wrote:
really nice story
On Mar 22, 2007 S.Cains wrote:
sorry about the farting comment, i just thought the picture looked funny and my crude humour well... anyway i was going to delete it i guess i forgot haha Sam xxx
On Mar 22, 2007 sims2rox4me wrote:
GReats tory and can't wait for more
On Mar 23, 2007 sandybvv wrote:
On Mar 24, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
On Mar 24, 2007 josh1092 wrote:
Im glad she told Morgan the truth now they have to find evidence about Loise.
On Mar 25, 2007 wrote:
This is getting more and more interesting eachtime around.
On Apr 16, 2007 Jodie1oddie wrote:
Neat!I Like The Bit Where Susan Farted Hilarios! 5.0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 If I Could
On May 25, 2007 nanapon wrote:
i loved morgan's "what???!!!" face..lol
(oh and just a little note to the comment above, 5.0000000....(etc) would still be just 5.
On May 26, 2007 wrote:
well I loved this part and the two comment above me really cracked me up
you people are funny! And this part was really good and a little humurous with Morgan's face and the farting 
so I'm off to read the next one beacause it's too short!! 
On Jun 30, 2007 justvex wrote:
This story keeps getting interesting, and the twisting of the story is great that is what i love about it.
On Jul 11, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
Well done! I loved the face Morgan had in Picture #18, the next to last picture!
