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After a restless night Piper is the first one up and is making coffee for everyone.

After a restless night Piper is the first one up and is making coffee for everyone. She pours herself a cup of deliciously strong coffee Phoebe also and early riser has helped herself and sat down looking pensive, waiting for Piper to sit before giving her the news.
Phoebe - "Inspectore Trudo came to see me last night, about Cole." Piper - "Oh, I thought he was off the case." Piper - "What did you tell him?" Piper - "You didn't say anything did you? I mean you can hardly say you need to consult your crystal ball! He's gone thats all you can say. Right?" Phoebe - "Well I didn't say I was a witch if that's what you mean! I vanquished him and now he doesn't exist!.... He's gone. I told him I don't know where he is and that's all I could say..." Piper - "Sorry, i'm just feeling a little tetchy, are you ok? I have to go to P3 tonight and set up for the party will you be working all day?"
Phoebe - "Mmm."
The phone started to shrill in the background.
Phoebe - "I'll get it." Phoebe picks up the phone as Piper leaves the room, Phoebe - "Hello?".... "Oh hi, Elise yeah I'll be there soon, okay I know interviews at two. Yeah on my way. Bye." Phoebe hangs up muttering about interviews and being late for work, Piper - "Hey, before you go don't forget to pick up a present for Paige's birthday party tonight, starts at eight ok?" Phoebe - "Party right, umm yeah I have to miss lunch to get it but I'll be there." Phoebe - "You could pick it up for me seen as your here all day anyway. Please!" Piper watches Phoebe leave after agreeing to buy the present, then makes her way upstairs for her purse. Feeling a strong wind start behind her Piper spun round freezing the room as she did so, Leaving a demon frozen in the middle of the room, Mean while haveing arrived at work Phoebe was in the middle of a call, Phoebe - "I told you inspector I don't know where he is. If I see him I will let you know. Ok.!" With her column due in this afternoon she rushes to put in the last response. Dear Lost In Cleaveland.......Hmmmm Paige orbs in, and takes a seat whilst Phoebe finishes up her column. Leave and..........Hmmm, walk away from all you........ Phoebe - "Hi, whats wrong sis?
Paige - "Nothing much, Leo sent me out early this morning to find my charge who seems to have dropped of the radar."
 Paige - "He didn't want to be found I presume cos everywhere I have been he isn't there, what should I do? I have only been a White Lighter a week and my charge has vanished." Phoebe - I could try and get a premonition. Have you got anything of his?"
Paige - "At the manor yeah I have his files from the court." Phoebe - "I'll come with you and work from home the rest of the day." Paige orbs them both out after Phoebe tell's Elise she is going home. Meanwhile Piper is running through the house shouting for Paige and Leo to help. Heading for the Book Of Shadows in the loft. The demon unfreezes in the hallway, Paige and Phobe arrive as Piper goes into the loft noticing her haste they follow to the book, ..... After finding the spell they need to vanquish a shapeshifter, they start the chant.....
"When in the circle that is home,"
"Safety's gone and evils roam." "Rid all beings from these walls,"
The demon starts to shimmer into the room as the sister's chant, "Save sisters three, now hear our call."
The demon is trapped by a field of energy as the sisters continue the spell, After repeating the spell three times the demon yells out in agony, Demon - "Arrrggghhh....." Smoke starts to cloud round the demon as he dies, before showering the room in sparks, The sister's have vanquished another in a long line of enemy's.

I hope you enjoyed this story I do have a lot more to do for the next part. I hope you will be kind as this is my first story. Please rate and comment below. Thank you.

The Halliwell's Chapter 1 - Paige's Birthday

May 3, 2007 by Saffronzoe
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    26 Comment(s) posted so far

    On May 3, 2007 Nyell wrote:

    Interesting story. I'll be back to read more when you upload it!\:\)

    On May 3, 2007 Nyell wrote:

    Sorry, forgot to rate\:o

    On May 3, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:

    \:D \:D \:D it was nice and funny to read a story about the Halliwell's sisters!!! really enjoyed it. \;\)
    did you created on your own, or did get inspiration from an episode of the TV serie? \:\)
    anyway, I'll read any other thing you'll publish! \;\)
    ps. ...maybe Phoebe it's not very looking-like...? \:confused\: ...just a personal opinion, though. \;\)

    On May 3, 2007 jeyca wrote:

    Love the Manor--it's so like the real thing! And Phoebe's office too. Just a friendly suggestion: there are Charmed Ones out there that look more like the characters. Other than that, great start! \:rah\: Hope to read more soon.

    On May 3, 2007 priestmere wrote:

    Great job on the manor.

    On May 3, 2007 wrote:

    very nice. Lovely shots

    On May 3, 2007 wrote:

    \;\) I think u should make them look more like the real charmed ones and make the characters more like them. I loved charmed ones on TV but this is very different. Anyway, I loved the special effects - like the orbing idea and the freezing. But I think there is defienetly room for improvement. I'll be happy to check out the next part and see how it develops.

    On May 3, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:

    VERY GOOD 5.0!!\:D i really like the green/blue top she was wearing!! \:D

    On May 3, 2007 sandybvv wrote:

    \:o interesting!!!\:D good job!!

    On May 3, 2007 marizza82 wrote:

    I looooove Charming and it was nice to see a story for them !!! Your screenshots are great \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: 5.00

    On May 3, 2007 Saffronzoe wrote:

    I am very sorry they dont look like the charmed sisters i will try and find some sims who do thank you for being really kind with my first upload. Saffron

    On May 3, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:

    Very good...great screenshots as well. 5.0

    On May 4, 2007 monrae001 wrote:

    My cousin's name is Cole. (: He looks like the demon. C:

    On May 4, 2007 GFitz wrote:

    I love the custom content and the Manor is very good!\:rah\:

    On May 4, 2007 atangki wrote:

    I like it. \:D I'll be waiting for the following parts. \:\)

    On May 4, 2007 jadestar5425 wrote:

    \:P Nice job!

    On May 4, 2007 jadestar5425 wrote:

    \:P

    On May 5, 2007 Fierstarr wrote:

    Good job. I like how it followed actual events from the show... I also love (\:wub\: ) the special effects. I am more partial to Paige with auburn hair though lol.

    On May 5, 2007 dorcam wrote:

    real good one. I like the TV serious of Charmed, but now we don't get it since I live in Malta. I'd like to read the stories about them, and maybe some time I'd buy the DVD's.

    On May 6, 2007 EnchantedRose wrote:

    Great story cant wait to read more\:\)

    On May 6, 2007 sweetheartwva wrote:

    love the manor. charmed is my favorite tv show. i think on mts2 there are the sisters. cant wait for the next part.

    On May 6, 2007 biatch1965 wrote:

    \:\) \:D \:D

    On May 7, 2007 wrote:

    4.5 well done,I appreciated this story/chapter.

    On May 8, 2007 emmy27 wrote:

    \:D really cool i like Charmed really cool manor too thanks for sharing \:rah\:

    On May 28, 2007 wrote:

    Can't wait to see the rest. It was good for a first attempt. well done.\:rah\:

    On Jan 9, 2009 wrote:

    \:wub\: Loved reading this maybe you willbe back soon with another. \:rah\:

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