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Hi! This is my first story. I'm sorry if there are any spelling mistakes in the story. English is not my first language. Enjoy the story!

Hi! This is my first story. I'm sorry if there are any spelling mistakes in the story. English is not my first language. Enjoy the story! Give it up for...Chips and Nora Board! And this adorable baby is their daughter Bella. This is Bella's brother, Bill-he's so little and cute! Awww...Bill with his father Bella with her mother...aren't babies so cute? Hihi, changing daipers, is it fun, Nora? Chip, you too? Yeez Poor Nora, she isn't good cook Awww, they're kissing! Nora, what are you doing? These must be neighbours! Chip went to work Nora greeted neighbours with a nod. She caught up with everyone! She's so nice Well, not everybody are nice! When all guests left, Nora went to bed. She was very sleepy... When Chip got home, he found vermins! He tried something but it didn't worked Bad for Nora! She stomped on the vermins! She's sick with flu! And so is Chip! She just called exterminator and a nanny for Bella and Bill. Say hello to twins's nanny! She's crying because of vermins. She just can't forget them... Oh, exterminator came...Finaly Haha, this is NOT cute! :D Same here...:D Nora put Bella in the crib and took a quick shower... ...while her husband took a long bath. They're dancing! Oh, twins's birthday...Bella first Bella as a toddler, isn't she cute? Bill's turn... Nora cheering... Here he goes! Bill is cute too, isn't he? The end of part 1! Again, I'm sorry for any spelling mistakes. Hope it wasn't too boring. Stay tuned for part 2! If you liked that one, ofcourse! In part 2 twins will be toddlers. Please rate and comment!

The Board Legacy-part1

Sep 8, 2007 by Sara1993
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    10 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Sep 9, 2007 binky13 wrote:

    It was nice. I like the Board family. Next time if you put up the walls it looks more realistic.

    On Sep 10, 2007 lexiann123 wrote:

    I liked this alot Sara! GREAT job!\:D \;\) \:rah\:

    On Sep 10, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Very good! \:\) I liked it, but if you made it more detailed and put your camera settings snapshots on high, it'd look less blurry and everyone would comment! \:D I liked the funny expressions on their faces! \:\) Nice job!

    On Sep 10, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Good story, I loved it. Keep up the good work. \:\)

    On Nov 16, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks for sharing !

    On Nov 21, 2007 Teycheq wrote:

    wow...\:D i love it..\:D great and fantastic..\:D\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Feb 1, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:\)

    On Feb 14, 2008 lukehather wrote:

    oh right, is this your new story!

    On Feb 14, 2008 lukehather wrote:

    Must be more detailed, yeah definately! But a 1.0 for that

    On Jul 4, 2008 cpyle822 wrote:

    I do hope you continue writing, I do agree with some, put a little more detail into the characters, other than that a very good story premise. \:D \:cool\:

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