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Welcome to my first story: Finding The Real Me. Enjoy!

Welcome to my first story: Finding The Real Me. Enjoy! I awoke that morning, as usual, at 6am, preparing for another day of the family from hell. I searched through my wardrobe, looking for something decent to wear that my mother would 'approve' of. Finding a skirt and jumper that wasn't half bad I put it on and went to make breakfast for my family. We always have every meal together, no matter what. If my father is late home from work, we wait; if I haven't done my homework (which I should have done), we wait; if my mother needs to finish something first, well you get the picture. How silly of me! I haven't introduced myself. This is me, Margaret Linch, or Maggie for short. And... ...This is my family; my father Charles and mother Dorethy. Unfortunatly I ended up with the wrong family when, whoever it was, decided to put me with these two. They are extremely strict, and don't believe in electronics such as mobile phones or computers. I think maybe I was swapped at birth. The 'fun' around here includes playing the piano or violin, and painting. As you can see, although my parents insist on doing those things, my father still doesn't appreciate my piano playing. Returning from school later that day, I go upstairs to complete my homework. I have to finish my homework as soon as I get home from school. You may think, "that's alright! You can do whatever you wish later in the evening!" Not with my family. After my homework is done, I have to do two hours of ballet and violin practice. When that is out of the way we have a meal and spend some 'family time' together. That usually involves me sitting in the living room and my parents talking politics or business. My mother often tells me off for not doing things correctly or by the way she wants it done. I don't fully understand why we have to live this way. It is so old-fashioned! It isn't all bad though, but you'll just have to wait and see... Thank you for reading! Comments on how to improve, etc, would be appreciated greatly.

~ SuperStar94

Finding The Real Me - Intro

Nov 7, 2008 by SuperStar94
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    17 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 7, 2008 SuperStar94 wrote:

    Sorry about that one fuzzy picture! I hope you enjoyed the story \:\)

    On Nov 8, 2008 RyanLicious wrote:

    poor girl! \:\( xd

    On Nov 8, 2008 mooshier wrote:

    it will interesting to see where you take her when she gets out on her own \:\) I like it!

    On Nov 8, 2008 Etnik13 wrote:

    I like this story. I can see that it will be great! Please let me know when the next part is out.

    On Nov 8, 2008 tykijones wrote:

    great story plz write more

    On Nov 8, 2008 jaydeybailey001 wrote:

    Maybe you could add a cute emo boy or something
    great story!!!
    \:D

    On Nov 8, 2008 cep1247 wrote:

    Great begining!\:rah\: Although i feel bad for the girl!\:\( Keep writing, definite potential!!\:D

    On Nov 8, 2008 Etnik13 wrote:

    Eh. I am against the cute emo boy idea.

    On Nov 8, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    that was good! and i agree with etnik13 on that subject.....but great story!! \:rah\:

    On Nov 8, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    Nice intro!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 8, 2008 ProwlerTylo wrote:

    Very nice, keep up the good work.\:\)

    On Nov 8, 2008 Thera_M wrote:

    Well this iws kind of tale as "dear diary", but i like it so far. Lets see what next part will bring!
    If u would like to id be happy if u ll let me know when it ll be posted out! HAve a nice day!"\:D

    On Nov 10, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    sp great...super duper good stuff

    On Nov 10, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    Great start! Off to read the first part \:D\:rah\:

    On Nov 10, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    you could do with turning your picture quality up \:D other than that great \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 12, 2008 charray wrote:

    Really good story \:rah\: \:\) \:\)

    On Nov 23, 2008 scrapbookin wrote:

    Great story! \:wub\:

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