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I give many thanks to all the wonderful custom content creators! Especially to the following for making my story possible!

Cyclonesue, Lianasims2, IcedMango, Sussisogoodsims, lliella, Rosesims, Serasims, lildebbye75, and you very kind readers for motivating me to continue with this story!

I give many thanks to all the wonderful custom content creators! Especially to the following for making my story possible!

Cyclonesue, Lianasims2, IcedMango, Sussisogoodsims, lliella, Rosesims, Serasims, lildebbye75, and you very kind readers for motivating me to continue with this story!

After doing all her cleaning and chores Cinderella would go to her room and look out the window. She had a great view of the beautiful castle in the village from there! She would wonder about the prince that lived there. It was rumored that he was a very handsome prince! I'm going to get me some...mmmm...ha ha ha!

CINDERELLA! You promised you would behave yourself! Remember PG13! Cinderella meant she would get some 'supper' little boys and girls, just supper..okay? Lets continue... A couple of days later an invitation to a ball was delivered to their home by a royal messenger! He presented the invitation to the mean stepmother. One, Two, listen up! The prince is looking for a bride and he wants to meet all eligible demoiselles! That is why he is hosting this ball! Wicked stepsisters One, and Two jumped up and down with joy! Now one of them would get to marry the prince! While they celebrated, Cinderella had a dreamy...?! Where's Cinderella? Mean Stepmother! Yes?

Where's Cinderella?
I don't know, Two have you seen Cinderella?

Mom, she was standing...
over there... I don't know where she went? What's that banging? Do you ladies hear that moaning?! OH NO! C I N D E R E L L A !!!!!!

GET DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW!!!!
Alright, alright!! I'm coming! Jeez! Maybe YOU need a little stress relie...

CINDERELLA!!
QUIET!! Considered yourself on a "DIET" from now till the end of your story, do you understand?! You are giving me a headache! FINE! You are giving me a pain much lower...#$@#...

THAT'S ENOUGH!!
Ladies and gentlemen, I am mortified... please excuse the interruption and let's continue with this "lovely" fairytale... While they celebrated, Cinderella had a dreamy look on her face wondering what she would wear to the ball? Cinderella, maybe if you finish all your chores you could go with us my dear! The day of the ball arrived! The mean stepmother and wicked stepsisters were ready to go! Cinderella was still washing dishes so she was left behind... Good-bye Cinderella, ha ha ha! Too bad you didn?t finish, ha ha ha! They think I didn't finish my chores, ha! There is only one way to make an entrance...SOLO baby! Ha ha ha!! Thank-you for reading this chapter! I will have the final chapter of this story in a couple of days. I have to take something for this headache right now. I must prove to my family that I am calm, cool, and collected! I will not beat the c.... out of a certain character! I am in control! Smile!

ZAYURY'S CINDERELLA part 2

Aug 29, 2007 by Zayury
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    48 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 29, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    Fabulous story. Good Job \:\)

    On Aug 29, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:

    Hehe that was fab! Again, very funny, & I'd like to read more...\:cool\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 Emerald_Lexus wrote:

    Very nice story, can't hardly wait for the following chapter. \:wub\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 wrote:

    Great!! Can't wait for the next part.....

    On Aug 29, 2007 wideopeneyes wrote:

    LOL! Great chapter. Can't wait to see what trouble she gets into next! \:P

    On Aug 29, 2007 andi and grim wrote:

    haha just as funny as the last \:wub\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 JJJJusteee wrote:

    Very funny story \:D I like it very much!\:\)

    On Aug 29, 2007 atangki wrote:

    Well written! \:D\:rah\: \:rah\: Great! \:D\:rah\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 albaby wrote:

    hahaha, cinderella is sooooooo...... uh.... i cant say it! PG 13 RULES!!! anyway, i love it! (as always) please continue, ill wait for the next part!!!! 5.0!!

    On Aug 29, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\: ...LOL...great part, love the pictures!\:D ~Eidleflower\;\)

    On Aug 29, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    Nearly missed this story as I have been away a few days. What an excellent way to tell a story. Love Cinder's attitude and the patience of the narrator , very witty. Top marks\:rah\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:

    \:D Fantastic! I loved the scene when everyone looked for Cindy and ahe was very occupied with the deliveryman! Brilliant! I wait impatiently for the next part!

    On Aug 29, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    OMG!!LMAO!!That was just as great as the first part!! Once again, I commend you for your AWESOME writing style. It was so funny, I nearly peed myself!! See what you do!!\:mad\: \:D LoL. 5.0\:cool\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 amandabxx wrote:

    Love it! Your so talented! \:wub\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 binky13 wrote:

    Very funny and cute story. I hope you make many more. \:wub\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 Sk8Iowa wrote:

    Haha, very cute! Can't wait for the next one.

    On Aug 29, 2007 animcfly wrote:

    wooo another great chapter..and just for the record the step sisters are called Anastacia and Drisella =]
    sorry lol
    great great great story cant wait for more!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 29, 2007 kaykay52812 wrote:

    THATS PRETTY FUNNY. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE.

    On Aug 30, 2007 wrote:

    lol, good story

    On Aug 30, 2007 tdyannd wrote:

    I still love it! You're very funny! \:D

    On Aug 30, 2007 kisekiai wrote:

    nice story so far, its pretty funny \:P

    On Aug 30, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:

    Very engaging, well told!\:\)

    On Aug 30, 2007 Wigwog wrote:

    Fab! You should carry on with this lovely tale, what a dirty girl Cinderella is!!

    On Aug 30, 2007 Paiige[Missing Since: Unknown] wrote:

    Loved it\;\)

    On Aug 30, 2007 wrote:

    o Zayury this is sooo good sweetie! cheered me right up \:\)

    On Aug 30, 2007 Eve70 wrote:

    \:rah\: LOL! Even better than part 1 ! I can't wait to see what she gets into at the ball! I know there's no telling what you'll have her doing next. Girl, you are a hilarious, talented story-teller! This reminds me of how my characters refuse to co-operate with me! I hope you continue to write because you give me much needed laughs! Another 5.0. Great screenies by the way. Where did you get the hair that One, Two, and Wicked stepmother had when they left for the ball?\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Aug 30, 2007 Dr-X56 wrote:

    LOOL\:P

    On Aug 30, 2007 Ikaridasu wrote:

    lmao! AWESOMEEE!! You're so funny! this is great, keep writing! \:D \:rah\: \:D

    On Aug 31, 2007 lildebbye75 wrote:

    ROFL, I needed a good laugh and your story really gave it to me. My husband thinks I've lost my mind because I'm over here crying I'm laughing so hard..."consider yourself on a DIET" hilarious!!!!! How she slipped up stairs in a blink of an eye, OMG I was dying. "Only one way to make an entrance..." the line is genius and only means trouble that girl is soooo bad (You gotta love her). I can't wait for the next part. As always you're brilliant at what ever you do. YOU GO GIRL!!!!!

    On Aug 31, 2007 Ajoya wrote:

    That darn Cindy is so Promiscuous! \:P Are you sure her name isn't Cindy Loper?\;\) \:P Great Job Hun, more please!\:D

    On Aug 31, 2007 pepp_pattie wrote:

    \:wub\: LOL! Great job! \:D

    On Aug 31, 2007 R.Quest wrote:

    OH another great funny twisted tale.. just love it....

    On Aug 31, 2007 freescarlett wrote:

    I loved your story, it's too funny. You're very talented and have a good sense of humor \:\) . I'm going to read the last part of your story now. \:\)

    On Sep 1, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    LOL, such a diff. perspective of cinderella. \:\)

    On Sep 1, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Wow, EXCELLENT STORY! \:wub\: IT! Wow. So funny! \:P \:P \:P \:D

    On Sep 2, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    I loved it, looking forward to the next part. \:\)

    On Sep 2, 2007 Redkandies03 wrote:

    5.0 lol on the supper part i cracked up so hard and im at work so thats not good lol\:D \:o \:rah\:

    On Sep 2, 2007 Alyosha wrote:

    LOL... this is great! \:rah\:

    On Sep 2, 2007 Linasmultrollet wrote:

    hehehe\;\)

    On Sep 3, 2007 loverien wrote:

    LOL! That was so funny! I haven't checked in for a while & I almost missed it. Now I'm going to read Pt 3!

    On Sep 3, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:

    I loved it!! How pn earth did Cinders manage to get upstairs without anyone noticing?? I love the narrators interaction with the characters it makes it so much funnier!!! \:D \:D 5.0 I LOVED IT!!! \:D

    On Sep 6, 2007 Nyell wrote:

    lol, This is just... wow! One of my favorite stories in the site. I love your sense of humor\:D \:D \:D 5.5 of course

    On Sep 10, 2007 Nina_lorien wrote:

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA \:D \:D \:D I LOVE IT!!!!!!! This remake of Cinderella's story is the best ever!!!!!! It's great when they don't know where Cinderella is hehehe naughty girl LOL. Adore this story. Five stars!

    On Oct 11, 2007 Cyclonesue wrote:

    I've just been asked what I'm finding so funny at 5am in the morning, so I expect my partner will be reading soon too! This is just BRILLIANT writing! \:D Sue

    On Oct 20, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    Again, unbelievably good. Brilliant and beautiful and so...looking for a word that's acceptable here no NOT that one...

    So good. Period.

    On Oct 30, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Supper?! hmm, so that's what you kids call it nowadays \:P I love this, I always knew she was a... eh... supper-person?! Can't wait to see what happens next, and since I'm so late, I don't have to! \:D

    On Nov 8, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Great story !

    On Nov 8, 2007 sunny33 wrote:

    it was great!!!!\:D \:D \:D

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