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On Aug 31, 2007 Raiderkap wrote:
WOW!!!!
On Aug 31, 2007 wrote:
Such a lovely....wholesome...tale
But I'm with Cinderella...that young thing was YUMMY
On Aug 31, 2007 andi and grim wrote:
awww does it have to end
On Aug 31, 2007 wrote:
Wahh that's an awesome story! XD Maybe you should make another,like The Little Mermaid or Rapunzel or Snow White or etc
On Aug 31, 2007 atangki wrote:
Heehee! I hope to read more of your fairy tales!
On Aug 31, 2007 albaby wrote:
5.o!! 5.0!! OHMYGOSSSSH, THE END ALREADY??? OH NO!! I WANT MOREEEE!!!! heehee, i hope you'll write more fairytales!! This is so hilarious! I love ur cinderella!! GO GIRL! PS. The royal messenger is HAWT!
On Aug 31, 2007 wrote:
Excellent! I can definity see what some more of your fairytales would look like! Great part, I can't beleive it's over!
~Eidleflower
On Aug 31, 2007 cariadbach wrote:
Love your sense of humour. A great twist on a traditional fairy tale. I liked the narrator, good job the story ended or she would have been sooo sloshed if she had drunk any more of those cocktails on the bar
Great screen shots too. Top marks from me
On Aug 31, 2007 spooneroon wrote:
great story!!!!!
cant wait to read another one!!! 
5.0
On Aug 31, 2007 dark_jean wrote:
Superb!!!!!!!!!!!
On Aug 31, 2007 floydine wrote:
Great story!
On Aug 31, 2007 wrote:
great and funny
5.0
On Aug 31, 2007 wrote:
really really really good
i like it
.......5.0
On Aug 31, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:
Freakin' funny!
The funniest part was when Cinderella fought with the godmother for the wand & changed her gown into a bad girl attire. Made me laugh like mad! The godmother's gown was gorgeous & I love how the way you made the narrator sit at the ber with to tell the story. Cool strategy. Hope you'll make more stories!!
On Aug 31, 2007 Ikaridasu wrote:
haha awesome, you rock! sucha kick ass story. MAKE MORE!!
On Aug 31, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
LoL!! That was hilarious!!! Please make more!!
5.0
On Aug 31, 2007 *Joyful* wrote:
Awesome
I'd like to read more of your stories 
On Aug 31, 2007 R.Quest wrote:
This truely cracked me up..... Again Really twisted.. thanks for sharing
On Aug 31, 2007 animcfly wrote:
another 5 haha made me giggle all the way such a great story..and no problem about the names, kinda weird i know them myself, im such a nerd
you really should do more
xxx
On Aug 31, 2007 MMs_Fan_01 wrote:
I agree with other simmers you should definatley make more fairytales
On Aug 31, 2007 iron mum wrote:
That's the best version of Cinderella iv'e ever heard
I loved it.
Thank you.
On Aug 31, 2007 kisekiai wrote:
haha nice ending there
On Aug 31, 2007 Paiige[Missing Since: Unknown] wrote:
Ahaha loved it
On Aug 31, 2007 Paiige[Missing Since: Unknown] wrote:
GRRR forgot to press the frikin rating thingybob
On Aug 31, 2007 freescarlett wrote:
It was very funny and the pics were so great! Thanks for sharing. I hope to read soon another of your stories.
On Aug 31, 2007 Ileeya wrote:
Terrific! This is the best one yet! I love the narrator getting sloshed at the bar, and even more than that, love the fact that Cinderella didn't even end up with the prince after all that! Your screen shots are amazing - beautiful expressions on Zayury's face as she tells us the story, or tries to, anyway. I hope 'Zayury's Fairytales' becomes a series with other stories, too. I love the recolors of the men's ponytails.
On Aug 31, 2007 binky13 wrote:
Really great story.
Love your sense of humor. 
On Aug 31, 2007 mini me3393 wrote:
Haha! That was a great story! I found myself smiling the entire time. ^^
On Aug 31, 2007 kaykay52812 wrote:
thats funny!
its deffinitly(?) a twist on the regular one. i like it.
On Sep 1, 2007 iceswan wrote:
On Sep 1, 2007 wideopeneyes wrote:
BWAHAHAHA!!! That was a fantastic ending. Thanks for posting your story!
On Sep 1, 2007 ariesit wrote:
On Sep 1, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
LOL, that was so hillarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On Sep 1, 2007 Sk8Iowa wrote:
It was very cute and funny. 5.0!!
On Sep 1, 2007 tdyannd wrote:
On Sep 1, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
WOOOOOOOT! I agree with Cindy, that royal messanger is....
......
Great twist. LOL! 
On Sep 1, 2007 Emerald_Lexus wrote:
This was truly hilarious version of Cinderella, very funny..
On Sep 1, 2007 lildebbye75 wrote:
The expressions on your face as you went from tipsy to completely buzzed were too funny, great job capturing the perfect pics. "...no back off my skin..." once again you had me dying with laughter. My sides hurt girl. Love the wand tug of war and all the sarcastic comments that followed...FABULOUS!!!! The ending was great, looks like Cinderella got her happily ever after, after all. Great Job my friend hope you keep it up. I would love to see your twist on other fairy tales. What a great ideal you had to do this
you're brilliant.
On Sep 1, 2007 caroltaboada wrote:
On Sep 1, 2007 pepp_pattie wrote:
Thank you for a very entertaining Cinderella story!
On Sep 1, 2007 xtamadea wrote:
you put cinderella to a whole new perspective. LOVED your twists on the story
On Sep 1, 2007 jabire wrote:
On Sep 1, 2007 sara_87 wrote:
Great story! Good work!
On Sep 2, 2007 ulker wrote:
AWESOME story
On Sep 2, 2007 Redkandies03 wrote:
On Sep 2, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
LOL! Hiccup! That was sooo hilariously hilarious!
Hiccup! 
On Sep 2, 2007 P44P wrote:
Loved all 3 parts of the story, you made me laugh so much i fell off my chair, 30x's
On Sep 2, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
Lovely, AGAIN! Loved it!! Cinderellas choice in clothes, I didn't mind the Black one!! But the one she went in it's a bit slutty!! But brill story!
On Sep 2, 2007 Daishi wrote:
On Sep 2, 2007 Eve70 wrote:
On Sep 3, 2007 loverien wrote:
More! More! More! That was great! And so very funny! I really liked the narrator. She was hilarious, too! I would enjoy seeing more fairy tales reenacted like that.
On Sep 3, 2007 wrote:
excellent take, and I love how you told it in three parts, well done!
On Sep 3, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
Fantastic ending! Love the humour and your shots are fantastic! Take a bow!!
On Sep 3, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:
I loved the bit with the fairy Godmother and the Prince, "Aggh Cinderella there's no music please I can't breathe" SO FUNNY!!!!! Please do more, like Snow White or Sleeping Beauty, I'd love to see Rapunzel!! Brilliant as always and please let me know if you're gonna do more I want more of these they're so hilarious!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On Sep 4, 2007 Ajoya wrote:
Zayury SPLENDID JOB!!! I knew that you could do it!!! I'm already ready for the next one!
On Sep 4, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice, thanks for sharing.
On Sep 4, 2007 dizzzy7777 wrote:
That was the best story I have ever read.I loved it.I hope you make more.
On Sep 5, 2007 McGowan722 wrote:
That was some story all right!! I have to say I loved how you did it. It is always good to see a different way to write the stories. My stories seem like nothing compared to some I have been reading. GREAT WORK!!!!!
On Sep 6, 2007 Nyell wrote:
Excellent...
Will you do another one?
On Sep 6, 2007 Nyell wrote:
Oh, sorry, forgot to rate (5.5)
On Sep 8, 2007 Nik-Noo wrote:
I love what you did to the story! Very Original!
On Sep 10, 2007 Dr-X56 wrote:
HAh! She diserved it! ( cinderella)
That's just awesome.. i loved the end... I watched Shrek the Third other day.. prince charming wanted his happy ending.. but hey! The step sister's.. well you can immagine.. hahah
I do hope you keep up with another story,can't wait to buy Bon boyage.. getting new fresh and tasty ideas.. Harr harr..
See ya soon! And i love the Asian look.. ( How do yo do it!? Im from asia aswell,but never getting the right look! )
On Oct 11, 2007 Cyclonesue wrote:
I loved this, and I hope you do more! Very, very entertaining!
Sue
On Oct 20, 2007 eshuff wrote:
Ok, finding something large and explosive that might be lying around and setting it off because IT IS SO GOOD!!!!
Love it!!!
Everything, the incredibly lush shots and well, what can I say...
Sleeping Beauty better wake up and grab her prince.
On Oct 30, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
Yeah Cinderella, way to supper! Hope the Prince made a prinup before the wedding. You should really keep on writing stories, these are hillarious
On Nov 8, 2007 sunny33 wrote:
ha ha so FuNnY
On Nov 9, 2007 sunny33 wrote:
On Nov 11, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Great story !
On Jan 3, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:
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On Apr 9, 2008 zmajce wrote:
lol! you are Great, I mean you did prove....yourself
Love the story!
On Oct 1, 2008 cpyle822 wrote:
Great Job
On May 4, 2012 goodie2shoes wrote:
That was most certainly worth the re-read. XD