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This is part 2 of the Richards family story. At the last chapter we see john had a big deal and met natalia!

This is part 2 of the Richards family story. At the last chapter we see john had a big deal and met natalia! On of john habit is reading book. He prefer to read book in the bed but this time he thinking about natalia not the book! He thinks about what is the best way to have relationship with natalia! John thought the best way is have an excuse from natalia by call her! He hop that natalia answer the phone? after some ring? He explain every thing to natalia that was only for fun and I don?t want to transgression in your privacy I?m sorry about that. Natalia accept his excuse and john arrange a dating whit natalia in a restaurant! Natalia accept so john must prepare him self for first date! John wear his best suit to have date whit natalia! He start to gussy up and wear his sunglasses! does it fit to him?! Wait natalia I?m on my way to your house! Finally they arrive at the restaurant and john speaks to the woman about seat! John: What do you want honey?
Natalia: hmm let see I want filet magnon!
John: ok I will have filet magnon too... waitress!
 John: Please bring us two filet magnon.
Waitress: ok I will bring it soon.
 Natalia: why you ask me on date?
John: because I want excuse you!
Natalia: you know that isn?t right behavior?
John: yes but it?s for fun I don?t want to look up your life!
Natalia: ok let?s change topics?
John takes a risk! Propose natalia in front of people
Natalia wasn?t know to do she was surprised and immediately answer john!
 YES natalia said! (it's unusual!) They played billiard as engage gift!!!! John plays unfair! Start and don?t let natalia play (lol)! They went on picture booth to have a picture from their dream date! It?s midnight lets leave! We have a big day tomorrow! Let?s sleep John always wake up soon! John want to have some exercise so he decided to call over servo, order the breakfast then continue exercising! Jack please make me a dish of pan cake! While servo was prepare the food ? John is exercising! 1?2?3 1?2?3!!! Let?s go to the kitchen I hop servo does the right job! Now let?s eat! Now change the cloth and ready to another business day! John after a little gussy up Prepare him self for a next day. (hit the pedal!) John thought business is going to be hard and he needs some assistant to help him whit law so he called a lawyer! John arranges a meeting in his office at 4 PM! This is one of my best cars. I recommend you to buy this car. As a royal customer I give you 10% discount on this great car! After sell almost 5 cars during 8 hour john realized that the time is 16! Ok I will be there in few minute. I hop the road aren?t so crowed! Jack: Hello ms smith I have a meeting whit Mr. Johnson.
Smith: Yes Mr. Johnson are waiting for you in his office.
Jack: Thank you.
 John: Hello jack thank you for your time
Jack: Your welcome john
Jack: I want a lawer that does my importing law so I thought you are only person who I can trust you!
John: Ok explain more
Jack: As you see my business are going to be large and I have no body to help me whit works so I thought you are the best man!
John: Ok we have some price for a mouth you must pay me $10000 so I can help you!
Jack: All right I will pay you in cash ate mouth start! I will make a file for you in my computer. Nobody can find the file in my computer it has powerful security system! Thank jack have a nice day! Good bye Ms Smith! I must talk to Steve about the car lot I should put him as a manager! Where are you Steve I have important offer for you! Listen to me Steve I had an offer for you I want you to be a manager of this car lot because I have some important work that I need to do them so I don?t have enough time to be here! Ok Steve I will put you in your home?s door!! John now must prepare the wedding ceremony so he called bartender, orchestra and natalia! the wedding are going on and everybody like it. Finally the got married. It?s dining time all guest include groom and bride are eating! Now they can enjoy at fun room! Now john and natalia are married and both have some new task! The honeymoon is the special part of wedding! Finally they arrived at their dream vacation house! They enjoy their vacation by watchin TV (!) suddenly the phone rings! Hello john
-hello john everything is change during your vacation. A man who names is William just opened for business and have lower price than you so nobody will buy from your shop. On the other hand you have some dept that all of thing you have are taked by government. You have some other dept that you must pay.
-what I must do?
-listen john if someone says your place can get reward of $50000. So you must hide.
-I will take place in Jefferson house for a while.
-who is he?
-he is my trustful car dealer. Thank you for reading my second part of my story
If I have some other spelling or grammar mistake I hop you excuse me!
At last I want to have special thanks to everybody that I use their custom contact in my story!

The Richards Family part 2

Oct 29, 2007 by behrad
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    10 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Oct 30, 2007 AshGreg wrote:

    awsome story cant wait to see the next one\:D \:D

    On Oct 30, 2007 sallyhails wrote:

    ooooo looks like John has got himself into a little bit of trouble, looking forward to the next part, keep going\:rah\:

    On Oct 30, 2007 trolzgirl wrote:

    great\:D

    On Oct 30, 2007 qvisn wrote:

    Good part, well done, lets see how john gets out of this.\:D

    On Oct 30, 2007 mangooo1 wrote:

    Nice part, keep writing! Just a tipp for you: use the 'Plumbbobtoggle' and 'showHeadlines off' cheats so the green diamonds and the thought bubbles won't bother the readers \;\) See ya!

    On Oct 30, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    Oh, boy. \:o \:eek\: Looks like John has a rival. \:wub\: Cute how he and Natalia got married. \:\) I agree with mangoo about those tips, and do you know how to get the pictures less blurry? Go to Options, or the "..." icon in your game, click on the Camera icon, and make the Snapshot Values on HIGH. \:\) And if you want closer pictures, press "tab", then "z" to zoom in, "x" to zoom out, and fiddle around with the rest of the letter keys to see what you can do, like "a", "s", "q", "w", "d", and "e". Anyways, good story! \:rah\:

    On Oct 30, 2007 Dirtdevill wrote:

    You did a good job, it's a verry nice story, so keep on writing! I see that you've already got tips about the 'Plumbbobtoggle' and 'showHeadlines off' cheats. You could try them, it makes your pictures looking much more better as they already are. The picture off the vacation lot is georgious! I also like Johns outfit with the sunglases verry much! Did you know that he does look like one off the man in Black? He looks so cool!!\:wub\:

    On Nov 2, 2007 insane-night-queen wrote:

    Great! You're doing very well with this! As I said, work some more on your spelling and grammar but you're doing really well.

    On Nov 3, 2007 Charmed-one-Tammy! wrote:

    Love it!!! Very nice and trendy XD

    Tammy xxx

    On Mar 20, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:D

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