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Bad Bluebell 3

I hope you enjoy the third part of the story.

(PLEASE READ PART 1 AND 2 BEFORE READING THIS, THANKS)

Bad Bluebell 3

I hope you enjoy the third part of the story.

(PLEASE READ PART 1 AND 2 BEFORE READING THIS, THANKS) ** 2 WEEKS LATER **

Today's the day.

Zac and Nicola are coming to live with us. Bluebell got dressed straight away, she didn't want to miss the new arrivals. *DING DONG*

She ran to the door really happily. It was Zac and Nicola! Bluebell and Mistoline greeted the guests and brought them inside. Breakfast. "Sorry but my mummy doesn't have enough money to buy a bed.. You'll have to sleep on the sofa.. Sorry" said Bluebell worringly, she excpected Zac or Nicola to shout at her, that's what her mum usually does.

"Whatever" said Nicola.
 "Nicola, you must be more polite" said Zac. "Oh, don't worry about that. Zac do you have a job?" said Bluebell, RELEIVED. "Why, yes I do! I work Wednesday nights at a nightclub downtown" said Zac. "Cool, the only money my mum gets is the money she got when my daddy died and the benifit money she's getting for her bad back. She's lying about that though. But you should bring some money to us, right?" "Yes, we might be able to build an extension on this house so Nicola can have a room." "Cool" said Nicola.

Bluebell loved that breakfast. It was like a propper FAMILY breakfast. 6 YEARS LATER "Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday to Bluebell, happy birthday to you!!" "I wish... I wish hat I knew the REAL reason how my dad died" Bluebell thought to herself. .... Bluebell felt tingly.

She started to spin around and- Poof! She had turned into a teenager. For the rest of the night they all just partied. Zac rented a bar for the night. Bluebell thought this was a stupid idea. Mistoline LOVES to drink and drink and drink.

(BEHIND HER IS THE C0NSTRUCTION SITE OF THE EXTENSION ON THE HOUSE- NICOLA'S ROOM) Zac pulled her to him on the sofa.

"Babe, is there anyhting you want to tell me?" said Zac. "Like ... whaaat" ask MIstoline, very drunk. "I dunno, any SECRETS" said Zac. "Well" whispered Mistoline with the smell of alcohol in her breath "I did kind of KILL my last husband" "Ha... ha.... he's burried..." said Mistoline.

"Burried?" said Zac.

"In the baaaack gaaardennnn ofcourse" said Mistoline who suddenly fell asleep. Zac got up and rushed ot the phone.

He dialed the numbers 999. "Hello, police please" Zac whispered.

He stared to whisper things to the phone. The sound of loud sirens woke Mistoline up. A police officer came in and got her. "We have just had a phone call and we know you killed LIAM GRANGER, your late husband" "Now we are going to the police station" The police officer took MIstoline to the police car. They drove off.

But this wasn't the last time Bluebell would ever see her mum, would it? Nicola gave Bluebell a hug. "What am I going to do?" asked Bluebell, nearly breaking down into tears. "Let's run away" whispered Nicola.

"Ok" replied Bluebell.

The feeling of regret had already hit her. TO BE CONTINUED

[IN PART 4]

Bad Bluebell 3

Aug 24, 2007 by bingochao1
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    21 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 25, 2007 bec71 wrote:

    OOoohhh I thought she had killed her husband...\:\) Great story

    On Aug 25, 2007 wrote:

    Well,well,well,this changes everything,I think so.I would like to see consequences of their escape.I mean,to see what happens next.5.0

    On Aug 25, 2007 cmufreak03 wrote:

    It was good, but to me it felt rushed.

    Good job. \:\)

    On Aug 25, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    Aww you just had to have a cliffhanger! I can;t wait for more. \:D i give it 5 points \;\)

    On Aug 25, 2007 dqueen wrote:

    Great job! \:rah\:

    On Aug 25, 2007 andi and grim wrote:

    cool!

    On Aug 25, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    I KNEW IT!\:D \:D 5.0!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 25, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:

    I knew it! Not as good as your first part, but that's how sequels and following parts are, I guess. Kind of rushed, but great nonetheless! \:D

    On Aug 25, 2007 wrote:

    Wowza!! I still can't decide if I like Zac or not...he's better that mommy dearest, but he's not very parental is he?\:D\:D Great update!!

    On Aug 26, 2007 Charmed-one-Tammy! wrote:

    I thought she was a bad parent :|...
    Oh well thank goodness she didn't kill bluebell...

    Good story 4.5 \:\)
    Blessed be
    Tammy xxx

    On Aug 26, 2007 LillyKP wrote:

    I liked this part of the story.

    On Aug 27, 2007 xoxopinkprincessxoxo wrote:

    A hah I thought she did!!!!!!!!! 5.0\:wub\:
    Can't wait to read the next part

    On Aug 27, 2007 tanniew wrote:

    Great job \:D

    On Aug 28, 2007 wrote:

    great story cant wait for the next one to come out!!\:D \:\) \:D

    On Aug 28, 2007 sunshinegirl28 wrote:

    Is it called bad Bluebell because she is running away? Good story but it seemed kind of rushed.\:\) I was suprised that Mistoline didn't do any thing when Bluebell told about the money stuff though.

    On Aug 28, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Nice story, thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Aug 30, 2007 qvisn wrote:

    Great story,Bluebell doesnt seem to upset by her wicked mother being taken away.who can blame her.\:rah\:

    On Aug 31, 2007 Jubilant wrote:

    I did not expect the mother to spill her guts so readily. And Zac sure did turn her in quickly. Nicola is interesting, not caring that she has to sleep on the sofa because her father can't buy her a bed. I do hope Bluebell finds a better life.

    On Aug 31, 2007 kecr101 wrote:

    Save Bluebell! Save Bluebell!\:rah\: \:rah\: Where are she and Nicola going to go? I hope it turns out okay.

    On Oct 19, 2007 Eluna wrote:

    good

    On Nov 3, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Great story ! Thanks ! \:\)

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