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I first want to give a big thank you to all the creators of the fantanstic custom content I used. It really adds varity and spice to a story.
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On Aug 18, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:
So far so good... keep it up! Yeah i'm the 1st to comment!
On Aug 18, 2007 Daishi wrote:
great job i wonder what is going to happen next
On Aug 18, 2007 wrote:
please make the next one longer. It was great
On Aug 18, 2007 tinkerbell7716 wrote:
great story. can't wait till the next chapter
On Aug 18, 2007 halla07 wrote:
verry nice !!
On Aug 18, 2007 kisekiai wrote:
i hope she didnt do all that just to get heartbroken..
5.0
On Aug 18, 2007 wrote:
Great job!!! Can't wait for more
On Aug 18, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:
On Aug 18, 2007 muge91 wrote:
Great Job!!
On Aug 18, 2007 wrote:
Very nice, I love fairy stories!
~Eidleflower
On Aug 18, 2007 RIDance wrote:
Uh oh! What's going to happen to her?!
On Aug 18, 2007 JessicaGGGi wrote:
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On Aug 18, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:
wowowwow! coool!
5.0
On Aug 18, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
Great one! looking forward to the next! I also am curious to know all the cc you used... they look wonderful.... and that dress... so DARK!
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On Aug 18, 2007 Little Seer wrote:
Excellent. Looking forward to the next part. Cheers
On Aug 18, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
That was so good!! Poor Rose, what could happen!!
But the dress is really pretty, so thats a big plus.
Lyllia looks so cool, where did you get her dress? You could totally tell she was evil!! Great part. I am gonna keep an eye out for the next part. 5.0!! Oh, and congrats on getting the feature spot..again!!
*-Dannii-*
On Aug 18, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
I can't imagine what that woman is thinking of doing. But Rose sure is happy!
I'm worried. This doesn't look too good!
On Aug 18, 2007 candy820 wrote:
another good chapter but I do hope the next one is longer.
On Aug 19, 2007 insane-night-queen wrote:
Brilliant! You're very good at this!
On Aug 19, 2007 iiL0V3y00H wrote:
it was very good I can't wait to read the next one well great job so far!xoxo
?Jessica Harbor
On Aug 19, 2007 kidnumber48 wrote:
Great shots and the dark spirit Lyllia does look truly evil. How do you get sims to stand in water like in shot 4?
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On Aug 21, 2007 cornelia757 wrote:
really good story. wow. pictures are truly fan-tas-tic!
On Oct 25, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Great story !Thanks !
On Nov 19, 2007 lj_tralala wrote:
Nice story and very nice costumes!