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I first want to give a big thank you to all the creators of the fantanstic custom content I used. It really adds varity and spice to a story.
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On Aug 19, 2007 tesasims wrote:
On Aug 19, 2007 wrote:
loved it. hated it was so shortt. ;[
On Aug 19, 2007 swirlique wrote:
Wow that was a shock!!! Thats to bad he was killed
On Aug 19, 2007 albaby wrote:
the end already ?
On Aug 19, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:
That was impressive! But why did Jared had to die so fast?
& Lyllia doesn't seem evil enough but no matter, it was great!
On Aug 19, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:
great!






















































































































































































































hehe 5.0
On Aug 19, 2007 wrote:
That was incredible! I loved how Lyllia was not really evil, but had gotten her reputation because of the things she had to do. Oh, and if you're takin pics in buy mode, switch to build mode and go to the terrain covering tool. Put the smallest circle thing on the ground away from the action, press tab to go into cameraman mode, and take your picture. There should be no gridlines now. ~Eidleflower
On Aug 19, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
That was so sad!!! I love how it ended, but I wish Jared hadn't died. Great ending. 5.0
On Aug 19, 2007 JessicaGGGi wrote:
On Aug 19, 2007 Little Seer wrote:
Oh my gosh
you totally made an excellent fairy tale with all the elements, happiness, love, tragedy and a flip flop on what you thought would happen. An emotional rollercoaster! You rule! Thanks for your story I couldn't have loved it more. Cheers,
On Aug 19, 2007 hanzo11 wrote:
Is that the end? Please don't make it be the end, I love this story!!!
A 5.0 and please do another part. That woman is evil. I think there should be a fairy man and they have little fairy kids, cute! The evil lylia or however you spell it should get a taste of her own medicine. Hehehehe! I will stop babbling now.
On Aug 19, 2007 iiL0V3y00H wrote:
hey that was a great story I can't wait to read the next thing u write!xoxo
?Jessica Harbor
On Aug 19, 2007 shumain wrote:
very cute
On Aug 19, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
Lylia isn't evil! She just had to teach a lesson. Too bad. Poor Rose.






I hope that she finds a hot fairy guy who likes her and marries him.
On Aug 19, 2007 wrote:
Very nice!!!
Please write more!!!
On Aug 20, 2007 insane-night-queen wrote:
Ohhh... How sad! Poor, poor Rose!
On a brighter topic, you've written another great story chapter! Please write more!
On Aug 20, 2007 insane-night-queen wrote:
Oops, forgot to vote!
On Aug 20, 2007 dezzfarah wrote:
I really enjoyed the story and it was beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.
On Aug 20, 2007 Zayury wrote:
Very sweet and sad at the same time! Lovely pictures and story!
On Aug 21, 2007 cornelia757 wrote:
that was lovely that rose found her love but jared's death was sad. but that was a lesson to rose. yeah. pictures and characters are incredible!
On Aug 21, 2007 RIDance wrote:
Aw, that is horrible!
Good job though!
On Aug 21, 2007 Charmed-one-Tammy! wrote:
Absoloutly fab i love it
Blessed be
Tammy xxx
p.s. i have a mermaid costume it would be great if i could make a similar one act not a similar one, but about a mermaid who turned into a human just for a guy (i have no water stuff though and she can't exactly live underwater sims can't do that.
On Aug 21, 2007 wrote:
Nicely done!
On Aug 23, 2007 candy820 wrote:
Great story
On Aug 24, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice story. Thank for sharing.
On Oct 29, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Good story ! Thanks !
On Nov 14, 2007 lildebbye75 wrote:
I knew that Lyllia was trouble, she could have told her before she changed her. Great story. Good job.
On Nov 19, 2007 lj_tralala wrote:
Sad ending...good story anyway!