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Hi, I'm Hannah Trembel. My life isn't that bad. I just happen to run into a lot of bad luck.

Hi, I'm Hannah Trembel. My life isn't that bad. I just happen to run into a lot of bad luck. I go to a wonderful private school; everything's great about it. Except for my grades. They say I'm a D away from getting kicked out. I did have a boyfriend, but my mom made him so nervous that he didn't think he could come around the house anymore. When I finally asked him to go steady he broke up with me, which was not what I expected. My best girl friend April. She's pretty and popular, just don't get on her bad side. We talked about everything. The subject came up about boys and I just let loose my story about Jake breaking up with me. When I told her about Jake, my old boyfriend, she got mad. Who messes with her friend and gets away with it? Mom had been sick lately, but it still came as a shock when the Grim Reaper came around asking for her. She was buried outside the house and I cried over her all the time. With the main source of income gone I had to get a job, so I chose one in law enforcement. Mom had some good life insurence, but the bills were pilling up and getting harder to pay. For mourning I decided to dye my hair black, since I didn't have that much money for newer clothes. I wasn't exactly happy with how it turned out, but it wasn't for style anyway. Mom always wanted me to go to college, and so I worked out everyday hoping to increase my chances for a good scholorship. I searched for colleges all around the area. Sim State University seemed the best choice for me. It was local and had a pretty good academic record. I called a cab and got into it slowly. This is the last time I would see my cute lavader paint. I was ready to move on. It was hard this is where I grew up with my mom and had all my memories. Time for college.

Hannah Trembel: Beginnings

Apr 5, 2008 by binky13
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    14 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Apr 7, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:D

    On Apr 7, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    \:rah\: very nice

    On Apr 7, 2008 seelindarun wrote:

    Great beginning chapter! \:rah\:

    On Apr 7, 2008 Lily Fairy2 wrote:

    She has a zit *giggles*
    Good story I like it, it has a lot of promise, please carry on!

    On Apr 7, 2008 Gumby_Girl wrote:

    great start \:rah\: well done \:\)

    On Apr 7, 2008 tasha4ever92 wrote:

    good start, i like it. a little rushed but good, \:lol\: shes got a zitttttt\:P

    On Apr 8, 2008 varrnas wrote:

    OOOOO Pimples! Shes got pimples, good story!

    On Apr 8, 2008 Srecana wrote:

    nice, nice, nice! \:D LIKE IT! \;\)

    On Apr 8, 2008 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Apr 9, 2008 crazy chicka wrote:

    I'am looking forward to the next chapter!

    On Apr 10, 2008 artrui wrote:

    \:D

    On Apr 27, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks !\:\)

    On May 25, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:\) \:\) \:\)

    On Jan 1, 2010 DJ cicus wrote:

    Cool beginning, simple and the pictures are great \:\)))

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