binky13 / Stories / Michelle's Life Pt. 1: Growing Up
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I'm Michelle Liardo and this is, well, my life starting out from when I was a teen.

I'm Michelle Liardo and this is, well, my life starting out from when I was a teen. This is my mom Diana. It's been just us for as long as I can remember. Even when I was younger she never talked about my dad. "Are you sure you're okay with the move?" my mom asked for about the hundreth time. "Yes I'm fine," I said. My mom felt so bad about having to move me right as I was going to high school, but she had a new job. And although she wouldn't admit to me I knew that the rumors about my father were finally starting to get to her. She was my like my best friend though and whatever was good for her was good for me. I hugged her to reassure her about everything when suddenly we were ripped apart. I was shocked when the Grim Reaper arrived my mom looked in perfect health to me. "Diana you knew this day would come your time is up let's go." I found out later that my mother had sold her soul to have a beautiful daughter and watch her grow up, and now that I was a teen her wish was complete and her soul belonged to the Grim Reaper. But at that time I was clueless and in complete shock all I could do was cry. Later that day I made a little gravesite for my mom, tulips were her favorite flower so I made sure to plant them around her grave. Months went by and every night I visited her grave. I felt so helpless I could do nothing. I was also angry at her. There was some reason she died if she had an illness or something wouldn't she tell me? What secret was she keeping from me? And then just before school I calmed down and realized I had to get on with life. I needed to sign up for school, find a job to pay the bills, and try to do what was best for me. I knew that was what my mom would want. And that's what I did. People here were so nice when they learned I was new and school was a snap to fit into. Also I found a little job in jounalism after school, it wasn't much but the bills weren't much either. And so that was the first tragic incident in my life, unfortunately it wouldn't be my last.

Michelle's Life Pt. 1: Growing Up

Aug 10, 2007 by binky13
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    20 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 11, 2007 wrote:

    Very good, quite exciting\:D\:D Loved it!!

    On Aug 11, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    A good idea for a story , shall look forward to seeing what happens in Michelles life\:rah\:

    On Aug 11, 2007 Kquest2477 wrote:

    im waiting for chapter2!!!\:D \:D \:\) \:D \:rah\:

    On Aug 11, 2007 djcryssiec wrote:

    nice, i like it

    On Aug 11, 2007 wackywitch70 wrote:

    i like it I hope you write more.

    On Aug 11, 2007 Hanefcik wrote:

    \:\) Great intro! I can't wait for the next parts!

    On Aug 11, 2007 wrote:

    good story

    On Aug 11, 2007 heyunome11 wrote:

    Good Job I can't wait for more!

    On Aug 12, 2007 fuschiafan94 wrote:

    its ok, a little too cartoonish for me, what with the grim reeper and all. the basic plotline is good, though, it just needs some more dialogue and better pivtures. other than that, its okay. A for effort!

    On Aug 12, 2007 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\:nice start \:cool\:

    On Aug 13, 2007 DarkMoon689 wrote:

    Nice intro.\:\( .. Let me know when you post the next chapter\:P

    On Aug 15, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Nice story... well done. \:\)

    On Aug 18, 2007 Zayury wrote:

    That was so sad when she lost her best friend...her mother \:\( Both mother and daughter are very pretty, I loved their makeup and hairstyles! Very good story! \:wub\:

    On Aug 23, 2007 Murphy75 wrote:

    nice story so far...

    On Aug 23, 2007 andi and grim wrote:

    its a bit short but has a good story line

    On Aug 26, 2007 xoxopinkprincessxoxo wrote:

    short but good 4.5

    On Sep 18, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks !\:\)

    On Oct 6, 2007 wrote:

    5.0

    On Nov 14, 2007 lildebbye75 wrote:

    good intro, can't wait to see what happens.

    On Sep 16, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    I really like this story idea. The sims are really beautifull and the screenshots of them are really cool to

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