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This is the story of Gethin Jonas. A very lucky man. Hope you enjoy.

Many thanks for the custom contents.











This is the story of Gethin Jonas. A very lucky man. Hope you enjoy.

Many thanks for the custom contents.











I remember getting up this morning, having my shower and going off to work. I remember picking up a cup of coffee from the hospital canteen . My first job of the day was to go up to the X Ray department and sort out some loose wires on one of the scanners. I remember thinking that some of the wires looked worn... If I can remember all this, why is it I'm lying in a bed. I can see bright lights, I can hear voices but I can't move. I seem to be glued to the bed , why can't I move a muscle.
People are talking but I don't understand what they are saying. Here they go again...

UP 350, STAND BY, CLEAR.
It sounded as if I was on a hospital ward...
Why are they all rushing around . They don't seem to be able to hear what I am saying to them.

And then the pain started. I felt as if my chest was being crushed....Whooa whats happening to me now....
I looked down and there seemed to be another person lying on top of me. I know that hospitals are short on beds but sureley people don't have to share beds.
This guy seemed to float above my bed. He seemed to be coming out from my body.
What the heck was happening to me.
Was that coffee I drank drugged , was I halucenating.
I could see a bit clearer now.
This man came to the side of the bed , he seemed to be able to hear me . He had the same face as I did the same hair the same eyes , it was like looking in the mirror, exept everything about him was white. White hair, white teeth, white wings.
Oh jeepers did I just say wings. I must be going mad.
"Who are you , what do you want" I said...
"My name is Angelo , I have come to take you home. Hurry we can't be late , the gates will be closing soon."
Gates, I though I don't have gates, I have a nice blue door to my house , no gates where I live.

He was getting quite aggitated . " Quick get yourself out of bed and follw me" ...
I tried to get out of bed it was such hard work. It was as if I was fighting to stay where I was. You know the feeling you get when your mum is calling you to get up for school but all you want to do is stay there, in your warm bed...

Angelo said "Just relax , let yourself go , dont fight, just come with me, we must hurry"
I managed to get myself out.
I could see sunny skies, I could hear birds singing, this must have been one trip I was on.
It was then I heard the voices again , everything seemed to be urgent.

400, SHOCK , CLEAR....
I looked up , I could not understand what was happening , I was still on the bed but I could also see myself walking towards the door with Angelo.
It was then I saw her face . She was talking gently to me.

"Come On Gethin you can do it be strong,
fight , don't give in."
I suddenly felt panicky
"Angelo I don't want to go with you I want to stay here. Wherever I am supposed to be going I don't want to go , Im not ready to go.
Angelo said
" If it is written in the big book that your time has come, you have to go . Look it says in the book July 15th, 12:40 Gethin Jones. So I'm sorry you have to come with me.
Wait....wait ... did you say Gethin Jones , my name is not Gethin Jones , look at my wrist band , my name is Gethin Jonas. I think you have got the wrong person , look oh please look... Angelo looked so disheartened .

"Oh I am going to be in so much trouble , this was my first solo flight , and I have messed it all up. I have gone into the wrong body, what will I do."
I felt a warm feeling come over me . For the first time today I knew exactly where I was . I was in a hospital bed and I was fighting for my life. I realised where Angelo wanted to take me, and I was not ready to go I was going to stay here where I belonged. I was going to fight, be strong , not give in.... "Angelo leave me here , go and find Gethin Jones, he will be waiting for you . I am not ready to go with you . Leave me here and I will see you another day , hopefully I will see you much later in life. You go, go and find the right person, make everything right...

I felt rather mean saying this but as Angelo had said if your name is in that big book ... you have to go. And obviously it was not my time to go....

There was a bright flash of light and Angelo disapeared as quickly as he had arrived...
Everything around me became quieter, less rushed, The light became dimmer. I could hear a voice saying.

HE'S BACK WE HAVE A PULSE, WELL DONE TEAM...
The next three days I spent in a drug induced sleep, everytime I woke up this is the face I saw. Nurse Lilly Low.
Over the next few days she tended to all my needs. When she spoke to me I realised it was her voice I had heard when Angelo was trying to take me home.
It was her voice that had literaly brought me back down to earth...
She helped me put together all my lost memories.

That day I had gone to work.
My first call was to the X Ray department to fix a broken scanner. The wires were worn and as I tried to fix them I had electrocuted myself...
My heart had stopped beating. I was a lucky man as I had been taken straight to the emergency ward.
At one time they thought they had lost me but I had beaten all odds and survived....
Lilly looked after me for several weeks .
We grew very close, but Lilly was adamant it was a nurse - patient relationship , nothing more...
Two weeks later I was fit enough to go home.
It was Lilly's day off and she came to help me into the taxi.
She said " I'm off duty for the next week, so shall we see what happens"

My heart missed a beat....
I still can't tell you what exactly happened to me that day on the hospital bed.
Did I see Angelo or did I imagine it all.
I know at this very moment in time life is going just as I want it to.
No disrespect to Angelo but I hope if he was real I don't see him again for a very long time , a very very long time........

THE END......

A Lucky man.

Apr 22, 2007 by cariadbach
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    134 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    Loved all the special effects, well told I was almost there with him\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:

    wow! good stuff! 5.0 nice spcial effects, did you do them with photoshop? \:D \:P \:D

    On Apr 22, 2007 monmel wrote:

    Good story \:rah\: Nice pictures \:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    good\:D

    On Apr 22, 2007 floydine wrote:

    Great story!\:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 kidnumber48 wrote:

    I thought it was quite homoerotic with all the topless guys hanging out with each other. Will the angel be taking over from the Grim Reaper?\:D

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    Very, very cute

    On Apr 22, 2007 Devalyn wrote:

    Cute angel! It must have been hard work to get all the cc! The effects are so good, wow!\:D

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    \:\)

    On Apr 22, 2007 ukiyo wrote:

    Great story. Thanks for sharing it! \:D

    On Apr 22, 2007 bebitza wrote:

    Great work! Great story \:rah\: Yep nice effects \:P Where from do u have Angelo??? I want him!!!! :P

    On Apr 22, 2007 sweetcharming wrote:

    Really great story\:D and also great special effects!\:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 S.Cains wrote:

    I loved it!!! \:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 LillyKP wrote:

    good work

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    everything was great except one thing- if the angel was wrong and that wasn't the right person, then howcome he looked like Gethin (I mean the angel)???

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    What a lovely Angelo\:wub\: brilliant story\:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:


    In Angelo land you can do anything\:P \:P LOved the story , brilliant\:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    Brilliant story , very original, love the special effects\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:

    \:P \:wub\: nice story,interesting plot! I loved it!!! \;\)
    have you planned any further chapter?... Id love to read them!!! \:D
    (...maybe about Gethin&Lilly's life together...!!! G. may meet Angelo again...\:ph34r\: )

    thank you for sharing this pretty story! \:D
    take care \;\)

    XXX \:cool\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 rhoni wrote:

    nice story, I enjoyed it!\:\)

    On Apr 22, 2007 cat_on_a_mountain wrote:

    nice story i love itjavascript:smilie('\:D');

    On Apr 22, 2007 chardonnayonedge wrote:

    Very nice recreation of a near death experience! Beautiful screenshots! Never really realized the difference one vowel can make!!!!\:D Talk about a fatal grammar mistake!!!LOL!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 rons_pigwidgeon wrote:

    Great story!

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    ìt`s a really great story...i love it...\:D \:wub\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    good story\:\)

    On Apr 22, 2007 wrote:

    Wow , one cool story\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 22, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:

    Beautiful story with great visuals!

    On Apr 22, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:

    P.S. I love the custom content and how you created a realistic hospital setting. Well done!

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    Liked that a lot , very cretive screenshots\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    You must have taken ages to create the pictures , good job all round\:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:

    A few minor spelling errors (I'm one to talk...LOL!)great screenshots and effects!!\:\) Well done!

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    Brilliant pictures, lilly was a beauty, great work

    On Apr 23, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:o Apologies for the spelling mistakes /typos. I check and double check and they still appear! I'm afraid of editing as once I pressed the wrong button and everything was lost!!!! Bear with me as I think in Welsh and then translate into English. That's my excuse and I am sticking to it\:D \;\)

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    Dont worry we all make spelling mistakes I gave you a 5.0 just for the pictures\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 simari wrote:

    Wonderful pictures. Nice story\:D

    On Apr 23, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:

    Yeah it has very cool special effects and the idea is so simple yet so appealing, it was like what happened to him was the best thing that could have happened to him

    On Apr 23, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    very cute \:\)

    On Apr 23, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    whered you get Lilly's hair, its so cute! \:D

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    A good story , well told . I thought the pictures were very creative , very entertaining.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    An interesting story,well illustrated , \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    Wow great effects, liked it\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    A simple idea but well thought out. I loved the amazing pictures. How did you do them please\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 Kimbelle wrote:

    lovely story!

    On Apr 23, 2007 StroupkovaZ wrote:

    Wonderful pictures. Beautiful story with great visuals! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 saralou.davies wrote:

    Great tale, a bit short but still good \:\) I liked the hospital equipment, where do you get that from?

    On Apr 23, 2007 estatica wrote:

    Loved your story, as always! The CC you used is awesome and those guys in heaven must be working out too! \:wub\: I hope Gethin enjoyes his second chance \:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    Lovely picture, great idea\:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    Short and sweet brilliant story and screens\:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 sandybvv wrote:

    great story!!!

    On Apr 23, 2007 andymc2470 wrote:

    awesome story\:rah\: \:wub\: \:D

    On Apr 23, 2007 R.Quest wrote:

    wow really nice and unusual story.. I really enjoyed reading it. Great shots as well

    On Apr 23, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:

    Interesting story!\:D

    On Apr 23, 2007 rhiannon32ga wrote:

    \:rah\: Very unique story idea with wonderful photos to back up your story. Thanks so much for sharing the story with us, and congrats on being the featured story of the day! Happy simming ~Rhiannon32GA

    On Apr 23, 2007 jerif wrote:

    \:D Good job, nice screenshots!!

    On Apr 23, 2007 wrote:

    unique and quirky good story\:rah\:

    On Apr 24, 2007 natwang wrote:

    Short but nice!!\:D

    On Apr 24, 2007 LIUBlueJeans wrote:

    Good story. Nicely done.

    On Apr 24, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    Beautiful writing and perfectly photographed. Not that I'd expect anything less from you! Very nice looking sim guy, too \:wub\: . You know you always get top marks from me. \:rah\:

    On Apr 24, 2007 fallenangelohio wrote:

    Great job on the background and screenshots. I enjoyed the storyline as well. I hope there's more to this.\:D

    On Apr 24, 2007 wrote:

    I loved the story.I woud give it a ten if I could. And I JaneDoe95 loved it to. And JaneDoeNo.1 loved it as well.

    On Apr 24, 2007 wrote:

    \:wub\: JaneDoe95 I can't get my sim's pictures out of my game. But I just wanted to give you smilies\:o

    On Apr 24, 2007 Gelika wrote:

    It is simply mad.\:rah\:

    On Apr 24, 2007 wrote:

    First time for me to do this so I hope its in the right place. Simmple but brilliant piece of work very effective. I loved it\:rah\:

    On Apr 24, 2007 OgdenGroves wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Apr 24, 2007 caclark wrote:

    great\:rah\:

    On Apr 24, 2007 vanessa190371 wrote:

    good story

    On Apr 24, 2007 wrote:

    He is a gorgeous sim and love the hairstyle

    On Apr 24, 2007 wrote:

    Cute!!

    On Apr 24, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:

    You deserve a much higher mark than what is showing...well done all around!!\:\)

    On Apr 24, 2007 lavendersim wrote:

    \:rah\: wonderful story, well told! I admire your editing talent!

    On Apr 24, 2007 wrote:

    HI! i'd really LOVE to know where you got all of the hospital items from, the drips, monitors, wall charts, clothes...All of it! lol \:D

    Absolutely GREAT story and brilliantly made! \:P

    Catski

    On Apr 24, 2007 wrote:

    i really hate this infact i puced 3 times a day and u must seem like a baby 2 me!

    On Apr 24, 2007 petskittleskitten wrote:

    Very Cool story!!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 24, 2007 MoriaG wrote:

    (¯`*?.¸(¯`*?.¸(¯`*?.¸ Great Story ¸.?*´¯)¸.?*´¯)¸.?*´¯) you did an excellent job on this story. i love the pictures and the hospital setting. i love the angel. i thought it was funny that he got the wrong person but happy for gethin that he gets to stay a little longer!! i loved it!!!

    On Apr 24, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:

    Great use of custom content, and very well written, would love to see more of his life with Lily & maybe eventually see the angel again LOL he is hot LOL

    On Apr 25, 2007 kisekiai wrote:

    nice cute little story

    On Apr 25, 2007 JoshBryceland wrote:

    Cool nice work

    On Apr 25, 2007 Minxy01 wrote:

    Very Nice story... \:\)

    On Apr 25, 2007 kyleechris wrote:

    \:D Nice story

    On Apr 25, 2007 SimsBarbie wrote:

    Beautiful. Tho, Angelo made a mistake, it was all part of the big picture to bring Gethin and Nursy together. Miss Nurse is soo pretty.

    On Apr 25, 2007 BuckinghamAlice wrote:

    Great story! And he is hecka sexy! \:D

    On Apr 25, 2007 shimmeringcat wrote:

    Very interesting story. \:D

    On Apr 25, 2007 manuela55 wrote:

    nice i love it\:D \:D \:D

    On Apr 25, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:\) I have had great fun writing these stories over the past few months. This is going to be my last for a while. To those of you that have shown genuine support and given very encouraging comments , I thank you very much. To those who have not only you know the reason why! TSR is a great site so I shall pop in often. Take care , be happy\:D \:D \:D

    On Apr 25, 2007 tonymark wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: Angelo was hot, nice effects.

    On Apr 25, 2007 Jasmine206 wrote:

    Very neat effects and wow, I love the way you wrote it. You pulled me right into the story! Great job! \:\)

    On Apr 25, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    Maybe it was him because his heart stopped beating.

    On Apr 25, 2007 Downunder2006 wrote:

    WOW,I love the screen shots,and the story line was great.\:wub\:
    Thank you for sharing
    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 25, 2007 Becca182 wrote:

    Great work. \:cool\:

    On Apr 25, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:

    Hmm, short but sweet, Maybe you could do a part 2? Loved the special effects! And Angelo is \:wub\: !!

    On Apr 25, 2007 emmy27 wrote:

    \:rah\: really good story i loved the special effects \:D

    On Apr 25, 2007 xsarbearx wrote:

    nice story.

    On Apr 26, 2007 enchantmentsisters wrote:

    Very interesting with beautiful screenshots! \:D

    On Apr 26, 2007 RIDance wrote:

    crazy.

    On Apr 26, 2007 EnchantedRose wrote:

    Wow i love this story. Beautiful Job.\:wub\: 5*

    On Apr 26, 2007 Gelika wrote:

    Nice story.\:rah\:

    On Apr 26, 2007 nanceketeer wrote:

    Really nice job! \:rah\:

    On Apr 26, 2007 BBKZ wrote:

    I love X-rays \:D great story!

    On Apr 26, 2007 wrote:

    I liked this story very much\:D

    On Apr 26, 2007 kurtsdrrtgrrl wrote:

    \:rah\: Hey I am diggin the story. Good job!

    On Apr 27, 2007 wrote:

    \:wub\: its really nice

    On Apr 27, 2007 Svenv12 wrote:

    COOL\:rah\:

    On Apr 27, 2007 Jubilant wrote:

    That was a cute story. \:wub\:

    On Apr 27, 2007 wrote:

    This was yet another very nice and well written story of yours. Yes, I read most of them, even though I probably didn't comment on any of your stories before. Great sceenshots, too. Was this really your last story? I sure don't hope so.

    On Apr 28, 2007 greeksim wrote:

    Great work! Thanks for sharing it!...\:rah\:

    On Apr 28, 2007 md198 wrote:

    That's was a brilliant story\:rah\: Original stroyline, well done!

    On Apr 28, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\: great story

    On May 1, 2007 wrote:

    Cute story , sexy angelo\:wub\:

    On May 1, 2007 chardonnayonedge wrote:

    Oh darn...last story for awhile...I will miss reading your stuff. You are one of the names I look forward to. Enjoy your break, and I hope you don't make it too long. -chardonnay

    On May 1, 2007 wrote:

    Good Story! and Good Effect! \:rah\:

    On May 2, 2007 djhappie wrote:

    Wow wonderful Story ! Ty for sharing !

    On May 3, 2007 tesasims wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:rah\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On May 18, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\: Great graphics

    On Jun 1, 2007 wrote:

    Some cool looking guys in that story\:wub\:

    On Jun 5, 2007 wrote:

    All your stories are different , love them\:rah\:

    On Jun 19, 2007 wrote:

    Aww, cute story \:wub\:

    On Jun 21, 2007 Downtimegirl91 wrote:

    a good idea\;\)

    On Jul 5, 2007 wrote:

    A fun story , different, I like it\:rah\:

    On Jul 10, 2007 wrote:

    Great looking guys\:cool\:

    On Jul 21, 2007 sims4me wrote:

    Great story! \:D

    On Jul 23, 2007 wrote:

    cool story like the special effects\:rah\:

    On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:

    He was avery lucky man, interesting story\:rah\:

    On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:

    Funny and different \:rah\:

    On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:

    A very lucky man and a nice looking angel\:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2007 wrote:

    Cool looking guys, liked the story too\:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2007 wrote:

    Great idea for a story\:rah\:

    On Oct 22, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Wow! Stunning pictures, the visuals here are amazing. Especially screenshot number 3,4 and 9 where the spotlights are "surrounding" her \:wub\:

    On Oct 30, 2007 qvisn wrote:

    Your stories are getting a rebirth. I loved this one too. I hope thats the Angel that comes for me. WOW, he is beautiful. Wonderfully original. 5.0\:wub\:

    On Oct 31, 2007 wrote:

    \:\) Refreshingly different

    On Oct 31, 2007 wrote:

    Stori da iawn\:D

    On Oct 31, 2007 wrote:

    Cute story\:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 7, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Nov 9, 2007 wrote:

    hot looking angel\:P

    On Nov 9, 2007 wrote:

    Such a different story\:rah\:

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