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"I never meant to hurt anyone I just wanted to be loved. I am not a Devil Woman I am a fallen Angel"

"I never meant to hurt anyone I just wanted to be loved. I am not a Devil Woman I am a fallen Angel" It was Friday night, Friday 13th March. It had been a long week . A week that I had moved into a new town a new job and a week that my girlfriend of six months had ended our relationship. She had phoned me earlier that day to say that a long distance romance was not what she was looking for and in the short time I had been away had found somebody else. I was in no mood to go home to an empty apartment and found myself propping up the bar at a club next to the office. It was a quiet evening so I spent most of the time talking to Jan the waitress. She had plenty to say so I let her do all the talking... I decided to have one more drink for the road and that's when I saw her. Where did she come from , how had I missed her . I'm sure she was not sitting there when I went to get my drink... Sitting on a stool by the bar was the most stunning raven haired girl I had ever seen. I sat down next to her and forgot all about going home . We sat at the bar for hours and just talked . It felt as if I had known her all my life. Her name was Scarlett. The bar was closing so we made arrangements to meet to following night. The next several hours were agony. I thought about Scarlett all day. My desire to be with her again was like an unscratchable itch. By seven I was dressed in my best suit. And boy was I glad that I had made an effort as Scarlett looked even more stunning than she had the previous night... The evening went well and after our meal we stepped onto the dance floor. Scarlett held me close and I was hypnotised by her deep dark eyes ... I kept looking into her eyes and I could have sworn they were changing colour, perhaps it was all the wine we were drinking or the smoky atmosphere... She started to flirt with me . I was delighted and flattered that a beauty like Scarlett enjoyed my company. Perhaps I was sending out all the wrong vibes.. We hugged . It was so good to feel human contact after the stressfull week that I had experienced... Scarlett suggested we went back to her place. Call me old fashioned but that was not the way I liked to handle my relationships. My way was to get to know a girl , go out on a few dates, before jumping into bed. I told her so and she said " I'll have you another time , I can wait" She kissed me gently and walked away , smiling as she left me to pay the bill...
I thought that would be the last I saw of her as even though we had been talking most of the night I realised I did not know much about her, exept for her name and she had her own appartment a few blocks away. That's why the following day I was so surprised to see her at my door. I invited her in and asked her how she knew where I lived... She said " Well you told me last night when we were dancing" I was slightly confussed , perhaps I had told her , after all, the wine had been flowing freely all night. "Well I'm here now" she said "Lets just have a good time." Ok, I know I said earlier on that I liked to take things slowly with a girl but one thing led to another and we ended up in my bedroom. She knew all the moves and was a great kisser. I felt powerless to resist her charms... It was mid afternoon but the whole room went dark. I could hear strange howling noises and the stench in the room was nauseating. What was happening to me, I felt as if I was falling deeper and deeper into a big hole. I must have had too much to drink last night, this must be one big hangover I was suffering... I must have fallen asleep . I woke up and Iooked at the clock, it was 10pm. I turned around and Scarlett was nowehere to be seen . It was almost as if she had not been there at all. I wondered whether someone had slipped a halucinogenic drug into my drink . I could't work out what had been a dream and what was real. Was I going insane... The following morning I took myself to the park . I needed space to think, to clear my mind. The club had been my first choice , but then thought the better of it as perhaps it was all the alcohol that I had drunk that was making me hallucinate. It was not very easy to think clearly as there was a girl on the swing laughing and giggling out loud. I called out to her. "Some of us are trying to have a quiet afternoon here" She came and sat next to me and apolgised for the noise and explained that swings just made her do silly things. I felt such a grump, after all this was a park , it was a beautiful sunny day and people were out to have fun. So I ended up apologising to her. Her name was Annie... Annie was completely the opposite to Scarlett. Whereas Scarlett was dark and mysterious, Annie was so open and bright. In the next couple of hours we talked and talked and I knew all there was to know about Annie, from the minute she was born to the present time. Boy could she talk, but do you know what, I listened to every word she said..

The sun went behind a cloud and I felt cold. I felt as if I was being watched and I turned around... Hiding behind a tree was Scarlett. Was she stalking me , how did she always know where to find me... She was angry with me and started shouting. " I dont like to share my man , you are mine , nobody can have you if you are mine" She was starting to freak me out. Was she one of these obsessive women you hear about. How was I going to deal with this... Annie came to the rescue. She assured Scarlett that we had just met and we were friends not lovers. Scarlett seemed to listen to Annie and she started to calm down, tears began to roll down her cheeks... I cant bear to see girls cry so I gave her a hug. It was a lovely sunny day but Scarlett felt so cold to touch... Annie went back on the swing and I went to push her. When I turned around Scarlett was gone. She had a habit of dissapearing into thin air... That night I went back to the club and asked Jan if she knew where Scarlett lived. She gave me the address. Flat 6, 66 , Palace Road. It didn't take me long to find the place. It was a tall dark building, it gave me the creeps. There was an intercom system on the door so I picked the phone up and before I even buzzed, the door opened. It was as if I was expected. I went into the elevator and strangely enough instead of going up to the sixth floor it went down...
 The room was dark exept for a roaring fire. There was a faint smell of musty decay. Scarlett was lying on her bed in a black gown. She spoke in a deep husky voice." I have been expecting you , Im glad you came, come and join me... I was starting to get rather nervous about the situation I was in, so I said " It a bit too early for bed" I was trying to make light of the situation and had a stupid grin on my face. Scarlett seemed to glide off the bed and came and stood next to me... She went down on one knee and begged me to go and lie on the bed with her.
"Lay next to me and love me one more time" she said in a gentle voice.
It was as if there were two people inside her . One minute she was the gentle girl I met in the club, the next was as if she was possesed... I was begining to get angry and told her that I was not going to be as weak as I had been the other day and was not going to end up in her bed. I was not her plaything... " You are mine and I can do as I please with you " she answered, her voice getting deeper by the minute... I stepped back in fright as a yellow glow surrounded Scarlett. It was then I decided that I was in deep trouble. I was begining to seriously belive that Scarlett was not human... I felt a force draw me towards Scarlett and the flames , I knew I should resist and not let myself be pulled into the flames... Red hot flames bellowed out of her mouth, she kept beconing me into the fire... I tried to resist but the force was too great, I just walked into her arms and into the flames... Scarlett gave the most blood curdling howl and pushed me away... Her normal voice had returned and she screamed
"Get away , get away as fast as you can , I can't hold it back any longer." " He wants your soul but I won't let him have the one I love"

The heat in the room was unberable. I thought I was going to pass out... The next thing I knew I woke up in a hospital bed. I had been found roaming the streets confused and shouting about a fire. My only injuries was a bump on the back of my head. I thought I would have some burn marks on my hands , but there was nothing to be seen. They kept me in for 48hours observation and then I was sent home.
My thoughts turned to Scarlett, what was real and what had been a dream. Was she trying to harm me or had she just saved my life... The next few weeks were a blur.
Annie came to visit me daily and we would spend hours in the park. There was no sign of Scarlett and I was begining to think that my mind had been playing tricks on me. Had I been disturbed about my failed relationship. Had the new job caused too much stress. Perhaps I had imagined it all... Weeks turned into months and Annie and I spent most days together. I had started to put on weight. I put it down to being content with Annie.
She made me feel happy and safe. That afternoon I asked Annie to marry me...
 The wedding was planned for September 13th. It was a beautiful sunny day. Annie looked stunning in her golden gown. The church was adorned with flowers . I had invited a few friends but Annie had said all she wanted was me by her side. We were about to take our vows when the church doors flew open... It was Scarlett she looked menacing and the whole congregation stood in silence... She came and stood by Annie and myself and looked up and pleaded " Please let me have him , I truly love him, he was promised to me"... "Please let me take him, I love him as I have never loved before" She started to lift off the floor and was engulfed in yellow flame. She pointed towards me and said " If you will not come to me willingly I am not allowed to take you" I looked at her and saw her eyes pleading . I was begining to weaken... Then I closed my eyes and shouted with all my might " Be gone with you evil spirit I do not want to be with you" The flames became higher , the church became as cold as ice and Scarlett gave out an almighty howl.. She fell to the floor and beggan to shudder. She looked up at me and said " Im sorry try to undersatand , forgive me . I shall always be with you" She stumbled to the floor, the church fell into darkness and Scarlett was gone... Annie and I did not get married that day, it seemed wrong to carry on. Annie has gone traveling for a while , she needs time to think. I dont blame her as I am sure she thinks I am insane. I have moved from the city into a cottage in the country. You see I found out the reason for my weight gain.. On December 13th , I dont know how or why but I gave birth to a beautiful little girl called Raven. It was all like a dream, or a nightmare I can hear some of you say. I went to bed early one night as I felt unwell. Had some most dreadfull pains , passed out and when I came round there was Raven lying next to me. We moved here so that people never find out the truth about her birth. Raven grew up into a happy child always laughing and having fun. When I look at her I see her mother and wonder what I will tell her when she starts asking questions...
 She has her mothers eyes . When I looked into them it made me realise how much Scarlett had loved me. She must have known that setting foot on sacred ground would have killed her. Yet she came into church to try and make me go with her. I wonder what would have happened if I had given in and gone, would Raven still have been born. So many unanswered questions... I decided to build a shrine in memory of Scarlett. It was a place I would go to often to try and get some answers to all these questions, but they never came... The years went by and Raven grew into a confident youg girl I would often find her down at the shrine talking to her mother. She never asked what had happened to Scarlett ,it was as if she already knew... She would run down there to tell Scarlett everything, talk about her grades her friends , everything and anything. If Raven went missing I always knew where to find her. We both seemed to find great comfort from the shrine... Raven would often sit and think of what might have been . Would our lives have been different if Scarlett was alive. She had an old head on young shoulders. I often heard her talk to her mother when she tought I was out of the room. She would often say" Dont worry I will look after daddy , you can rest now " As Raven grew older I could see more and more of her mother in her . I could see that she had inherited some of her mothers supernatural powers . She was such a gentle and caring child I was not worried, as I knew she would put these powers to good use and never abuse them. Deep down I belived that Scarlett was good and had somehow been led astray by a force that was much stronger than her... Quite often at night I would look out of the window at the shrine I had built. It must have been the trick of the light playing on the water but I often thought I could see Scarlett... The years have past by quickly. Annie never came back . She wrote to me from New Zeland and said that she was going to settle down there. I didn't tell her about Raven . I didn't see the point as I doubt whether I will ever see Annie again. Raven and I are happy together. I sometimes miss adult company but at the moment ,at this stage of my life the only female company I need is my daughter's. Even though some times I feel there is someone else in the house looking after us!

To be continued..........

Devil Woman

Mar 22, 2007 by cariadbach
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    On Mar 22, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:\) Hope you enjoy my latest story. I read them over and over to sort out the typos etc and always find them once the story is published\:mad\:
    Thanks to all the artist for the custom contents.

    On Mar 22, 2007 BriannaSun24 wrote:

    Wicked Story \;\) , good work!

    On Mar 22, 2007 keara1995 wrote:

    i liked it are u making another plz do i loved it\:wub\: i give u a double rah rah\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 22, 2007 estatica wrote:

    Wow, great plot! I like your writing and those special effects look impressive! Well done!\:rah\:

    On Mar 22, 2007 debs5477 wrote:

    It was different, I liked it very much :-)

    On Mar 22, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    Cool! \:D

    On Mar 22, 2007 rons_pigwidgeon wrote:

    That was fantastic! What caused hat glow around Scarlett and Raven?

    On Mar 22, 2007 slime wrote:

    very very good i cant wait till the next part \:D \:P \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 lia2223 wrote:

    Your story was really good & it was like nothing I've seen over here. Can't wait to read the next part! \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Tuesdai wrote:

    It was awesome but she really didn't seem like the devil\:rah\: But the little girl did\:D

    On Mar 23, 2007 Mausi45 wrote:

    Great story \:D

    On Mar 23, 2007 wrote:

    Very interesting! I can't wait for the next part!\:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Jasmine206 wrote:

    Great story! I'm glad Scarlette didn't try to harm him. Very interesting! Can't wait for the next part! \:\)

    On Mar 23, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:

    wow. wonderful, his girlfriend took her sweet time to make him know where she was. As for scarlett she is so very misterious, hope the girl gets more easily on her relationships

    On Mar 23, 2007 sweety_nia wrote:

    Awesome story I loved how you turned Scarlett from demonic to a good-hearted person \:rah\: can't wait for more!

    On Mar 23, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:

    \:cool\: wow,this was a really well-written story!!!\:wub\:
    I really enjoyed it,and Id love to read the next chapeters!!! \;\)
    thank you for sharing!!! :P

    On Mar 23, 2007 wrote:

    I really like the story. Reminds me of something...\:wacko\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    Very very very well done!! Reminds me of the Mermaid Chair, where the mermaid says she didn't fall from grace, she dove... anyway, I love it!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Deanna73070 wrote:

    Great story!!! I can't wait to read the second part. You're a terrific writer!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:D

    On Mar 23, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:

    Excellent writing, story development, special effects and screenshots! Great work! I can't wait to read more, it's really intriguing so far!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Small Town Sim wrote:

    wow... was that weird! but engrossing... loved your shots and decor-- can't wait to find out what the heck will happen next! \:eek\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Silvenight1 wrote:

    Nice one, but a trifle disconcerting. I liked it.

    On Mar 23, 2007 Dead Rock wrote:


    Um, pretty good.

    On Mar 23, 2007 Gelika wrote:

    Wonderful story. More please.

    On Mar 23, 2007 MagySims wrote:

    Wonderful and great story\:rah\: \:P \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Alyosha wrote:

    good job!

    On Mar 23, 2007 floydine wrote:

    Great story! I'm looking forward to read the next part!\:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 BBKZ wrote:

    what a fantastic story!! I love it!! \:D\:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 roshi_ali wrote:

    graet story, every one has right to be loved even wicked one too. i am waiting for the next part. please post it soon. you have done a great job. \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 wrote:

    Ooh! The birth took me by surprise. Can't wait for the continuation...

    On Mar 23, 2007 caclark wrote:

    great story

    On Mar 23, 2007 vanessa190371 wrote:

    great story

    On Mar 23, 2007 wrote:

    \:D Just love your stories they are so different. i wonder what is going to happen to Raven , cant wait.

    On Mar 23, 2007 Palina wrote:

    Excellent story...Thank you for sharing!!!\:cool\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 wrote:

    \:\) Loved it , I felt quite nervous reading as I did not know what was going to happen next, great story.

    On Mar 23, 2007 wrote:

    \:D Just one word BRILLIANT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    On Mar 23, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:\) Thanks to madri and decrypter for your comments , cant get on to your guest book to write a comment.

    On Mar 23, 2007 TyffanyRotten wrote:

    Really cool story, hope part 2 comes soon \;\)

    On Mar 23, 2007 wrote:

    it`s a really really good story...i love it...i`m wating for part2...\:D \:wub\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Nono_Girl wrote:

    COOOOOOL!!!!Great!Supoer!Fantastic!Fabulous!!How did you make them do those move,like the little girl sitting on the chair with her hands on her knees and how did Scarlett burst into flames?Please tell me!

    On Mar 23, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:

    woo! \:D

    On Mar 23, 2007 Marylyn Linney wrote:

    Great story and Raven is one of the most beautiful girl I've ever seen... \:wub\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Zela wrote:

    How did the man give birth to the child? How did you make them glow like that?
    That was a good story... I like the supernatural feeling to it. I am looking forward to reading part 2

    On Mar 23, 2007 sweettoothlady wrote:

    great story. Can't wait to read the next part

    On Mar 23, 2007 Wigwog wrote:

    \:\) \:\) \:\)

    On Mar 23, 2007 monmel wrote:

    Great story \:D and beautiful pictures \:wub\: Great work \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 Nikouchoco wrote:

    Good story ! I'm waiting the next part. \;\)

    On Mar 23, 2007 sandybvv wrote:

    love the pictures!! great story, very different and creative!!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 savanabonita wrote:

    Gorgeous story\:rah\: Extremely interesting\:rah\: Great job\:rah\: Waiting for the next part!!!!!!!!!

    On Mar 23, 2007 reeree00 wrote:

    \:D that was a good story

    On Mar 23, 2007 iron mum wrote:

    I loved it, I can't wait for the next part.\:D

    On Mar 23, 2007 kamyelena wrote:

    whooaaa...creeepy\;\)

    On Mar 23, 2007 foxysensei wrote:

    Great job! I loved it. you write very well, and your story is fascinating. I can't wait to read the next installment... when will it beeeeeee?????? \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Mar 23, 2007 wrote:

    GREAT story! I loved it! \:D How is it possible for the male sim to have a baby? I saw that in another story I read to...but i never understood

    On Mar 23, 2007 R.Quest wrote:

    Great story .. And I know of one way to get a male sim pregant.... one with a hack and another without... Loved your pictures too \:o

    On Mar 23, 2007 MoriaG wrote:

    .?:*จจ*:?.A.?:*จจ*:?.FIVE.?:*จจ*:?.STAR.?:*จจ*:?.STORY.?:*จจ*:?.

    On Mar 24, 2007 morena26 wrote:

    Good Story... I really like to read stories here. \:rah\:

    On Mar 24, 2007 wrote:

    What an amazing story! And the fire behind scarle and all the supernaturaleffects look so good1\:rah\:

    On Mar 24, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:

    Hmm interesting looking forward to the next instalment

    On Mar 24, 2007 camarossz28 wrote:

    great story! \:rah\: \:D

    On Mar 24, 2007 greeneyes197332 wrote:

    Hi
    That was a great story , hope you make a second part to it. keep up the good work and thanks for a great story.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:D

    On Mar 24, 2007 sweetcharming wrote:

    wow...that's a great story!\:D \:wub\: I don't want to wait for the next paaaaaart!!!\:rah\:

    On Mar 24, 2007 laurapink11 wrote:

    Wow, great story! \:rah\:

    On Mar 24, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:D I can't get into some simmers guest books so if I have not said thank you for reading shall say it now ........THANKYOU\:D

    On Mar 24, 2007 wrote:

    Crumbs! I mean - CRUMBS!! That was one hell of a story (geddit?!?!) Great stuff, I'm spooked!!

    On Mar 25, 2007 chardonnayonedge wrote:

    This was a really great story. I really liked it! \:rah\:

    On Mar 26, 2007 lilqueennbri wrote:

    I liked it. Good job.\:D

    On Mar 26, 2007 elvizog wrote:

    I just say that this is a really amazing story \:rah\:

    On Mar 27, 2007 wrote:

    def a 5

    On Mar 27, 2007 wrote:

    5/5

    On Mar 28, 2007 Born2sing101 wrote:

    Hi great story can u tell me where u got Scarlets hair thanx\;\) \:rah\: \:D

    On Mar 28, 2007 wrote:

    came back to rate

    On Mar 29, 2007 jerif wrote:

    \:\) Wow! Great job

    On Mar 31, 2007 elocinpage wrote:

    WOW! This was awesome!

    On May 14, 2007 wrote:

    I agree awzome\:D

    On May 15, 2007 wrote:

    Great story , had you written some of your stories when the rating was off\:rah\: \:rah\: cause there is no rating by some of them.

    On May 16, 2007 S.Cains wrote:

    That was a really good story. I am definitely going to read the next one. That Scarlett was actually freaking me out! \:rah\:

    On May 16, 2007 S.Cains wrote:

    Forgot to rate. 5! \:rah\:

    On May 16, 2007 wrote:

    spooky\:wub\:

    On May 25, 2007 wrote:

    it's different and a little crazy, but it's a good sort of crazy \:\)

    On Jul 4, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:

    You are an amazing writer\:rah\:

    On Aug 3, 2007 Ajoya wrote:

    WOW....Now I can't stop reading \;\)

    On Oct 8, 2007 missbama wrote:

    How creative! I love it!

    On Oct 22, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:

    This story is so different from your previous ones! I like the complex character Scarlett!

    On Oct 30, 2007 qvisn wrote:

    WOW, what cani say. Brilliant work. Are you a witch? \:wub\: 5.0

    On Nov 11, 2007 ShoLeigh84 wrote:

    Wow that was really gripping! Was Scarlett good or bad, loved the way you wrote her! I'm off to read the second part ASAP! \:D\:D\:D

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