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This is Prince Akmal Ihab which translates into perfect gift. Hope you enjoy...
Once again many thanks to all the custom creators...
Once again many thanks to all the custom creators... King Akeem Abdul was a wise king.
He ruled over a prosperous land.
A land where people lived in harmony and never wanted for food or water. He had won the respect of all his people by being a fair and just king.
Despite all this Akeem was a sad and lonely man.
His wife and son had died at childbirth. He had married his young bride , a beautiful princess and his whole life was complete . The day his bride and child died was a day that a part of the king also died.
His dreams and his hopes for the future had all been taken from his grasp... Anisha was the kings loyal servant. She had been at the palace since a young child and had grown up alongside the king. She knew him well and felt the sadness that she could see in her kings eyes.
Anisha's favourite place was the palace garden . Here she grew exotic fruits to tempt the kings appetite and beautiful flowers to brighten up the palace.
Anisha had a special bond with the king and since the death of his wife several years ago had spent many a night comforting her master... The King would spent countless hours giving thanks to his Gods for his countrys well being. During all his years on the throne he had never asked for anything for himself.
He had asked for food for his people , he had asked for rain when there was drought . He had asked for his wife to be spared pain, but he had never thought once of himself.
One day he was feeling so lonely he went down on his knees before his God,
" My dear God I have been a faithful servant throught my reign, grant a selfish man one gift, one wish before its too late"... That night Akeem went to bed thinking how foolish he had been asking his God to help him. His God was there to be thanked not to be asked favours and gifts.
Akeem had a restless nights sleep...
A face appeared and Akeem heard a voice,
" Akeem you have been a wise and generous King. You have looked after your people well. I will grant you what you wish for, you may have one gift so choose wisely",
Akeem was afraid of being in the presence of his God, afraid of choosing unwisely.
" My God I ask of you one thing , bring my wife back to me."
" I can not grant you that gift, it is forbidden to bring the departed back to life , they must not be disturbed from their place of rest"
"Then please let me have a child of my own, a child that I can love and share my life with"
" Akeem your gift will be granted"... Akeem awoke startled and afraid.
Was it a dream or had his God appeared before him that night.
He tried to put the thoughts of the previous night behind him and carried on with his day...
Several weeks passed and no gift appeared... The following morning much comotion was heard down in the palace garden.
Akeem looked out of his window to see Anisha waving her hands in the air and shouting
"Your Majesty come and see what I have found in the garden, hurry master come quickly".
Akeem had never seen Anisha in such a state before , she was like a woman possesed.
The king hurried into the garden... And there he found placed beneath the orchids a baby, a beautiful baby boy.
"Master some one must have placed him there during the night. Are we to keep him and look after him or are we to search for his mother"... The king picked the baby up in his arms.
Anisha looked into his face and saw a sight that she had not seen for several years. The kings eyes shone and a warm smile came across his face.
" Anisha this ia a special baby , he is a gift from my God, this child shall be known as my son, his name will be Akmal Ihab" Let the whole of the land know that a prince has been born"...
The next few weeks the king did not let Ihab out of his sight. He fed and bathed him . Comforted him when he cried .The only servant that was allowed to help was Anisha, she cared for the baby when the king slept.
The whole country celebrated the birth of the new prince. It made the people glad to see their king happy once more... Ihab grew into a contented child always happy in his fathers arms... The years went by and Ihab and his father were unseprable. Anisha was always by their side. The king had realised that he could not bring Ihab up alone and Anisha became his governess.
Ihab sat on the throne next to his father and attended all the council meetings with the elders.
His father wanted to teach him to become a good king as he would have to take over the throne one day... Ihab had brought so much happiness into the life of the king... There was also a srong bond between Ihab and Anisha. She tought him all there was to know about the plants in her garden , the animals in the forest.
Ihab seemed to make all the people that came across his path happy... Ihab grew into a fine young man, the king had taught him well.
He valued the respect that he was given by the people and loved his country .
He was at one with nature and was often found out in the garden or fishing in the forest lake. Akeem often went with him on his fishing trips.
"My son I need to talk to you, the time has come for me to choose a bride for you. We have three princesses visiting during the next few days. You must be married by the end of the year and then you must become King. It is the law of the land"...
Ihab was loyal to his father and welcomed the first princess.
Her name was Malena , she was the youngest of the three. She was nervous and wanted to please the prince.
They were both ill at ease with each other . She talked about her family and how she wanted to travel to see the world... Serena was the second princess .
Ihab could not get a word into the conversation , she had so much to say.
She liked fine clothes and jewels and wanted to marry a prince that would buy here many gifts... The third was Laila. She was very quite and Ihab found it hard work to even get her to smile... When all the princesses had departed Ihab sat down and wondered which one his father would choose.
Deep down he knew he did not love any of the girls . He had to obey his father, it was the law of the land .
Perhaps love was something that would follow once he became friends with whoever his father chose... It was early one morning when Ihab went into the palace kitchen to look for some bread. He was going fishing and wanted to take some food to sustain him for the day.
It was then that he first set eyes on Adiva new servant girl.
She turned around startled,
" Forgive me your majesty I did not expect to find anyone here so early" Ihab could hardly hear her words, he was being drawn into her big dark eyes. He had never before seen such beauty.
He felt an urgency within himself , he needed to know all there was to know about this girl.
"Stay and have some bread with me , stay and keep me company on this fine morning" " Your Majesty I am not allowed to sit with you , I am but a servant, I will find you some bread but I must not stay"
" Then I command you as your prince to stay" I do not wish to eat alone"... They sat side by side to eat their bread.
Anisha felt very uncomfortable , hoping none of the other servants came in and caught her.
Ihab spoke gently to her about his fishing trip and about all the animals he saw in the forest.
Gradualy she became more at ease and found that she was actualy listening to what the prince was saying and at one time even dared to ask a question... By the time dawn had broken the two were talking to each other as if they had been friends for life.
They shared palace secrets and found they had a lot in common despite their different upbringing.
"I must go your majesty, before I am found here with you"
"I will see you again tomorrow Anisha, I shall think about you every moment until we meet again."
The prince went off fishing with a happy heart... They met in the palace garden as often as possible . Their love for each other growing daily.
Anisha knew it was wrong of her to meet the prince in secret but her love for him was becoming so strong she could not resist... "Anisha I feel so much love in my heart for you , I want the whole world to know. Today I will tell my father about you . Our meetings will no longer be a secret, no longer be something we have to hide"... "My Ihab I have the same feelings for you . My heart is ablaze with love , but my love, it can not be , we have to be satisfied with what we have . We can not expect more."... Anisha stopped,
" I must leave some one is approaching" but it was too late. The king had heard all that she had said... " My son tell me I am not hearing this conversation , tell me this is not true."
"I am sorry father I can not lie to you Anisha and I love each other .
" This can not be you are promised to another , your wedding is arranged , it can not be changed"...
" Father I can not marry another when I have so much love in my heart for Anisha. Before I met Anisha I was willing to marry whoever you chose and learn to love her, but this can not be ,now I have found true love."
I am sorry your majesty to disobey you but I can not marry another"... Akkems heart was broken . It was the first time he and his son had quarrled , the first time they had disagreed. Akkem raised his voice.
"I am your king and you must do as I bid. It is the law of the land that no prince shall marry a servant. Anisha must leave the palace and you will marry at the end of the year. I have spoken.
With that the king turned on his heels and went back to the palace leaving Anisha and the prince in tears... The King was not happy with his decision. He remembered the love he had for his wife. How could he deny Ihab from having the same feelings.
He called a meeting with the elders.
"I call this meeting to change some of the existing laws, one in particular ,that a prince may not marry a servant."
There were gasps of breath as all the elders heard the kings request...
Back and forth the discussion went between the elders.
Some agreed that times were changing and a prince should be allowed to marry the person he loved. Others disagreed and said old values had to be kept to breed good stock.
The discussion went long into the night. By break of day the chief elder spoke.
"Your majesty , it has been written in the law books for hundreds of years and thus it will stay, The
law on this occassion will not be changed"... The king ushered the elders away... He did not want them to see their king, a grown man cry.
Akeem felt as if he had betrayed Ihab. Since coming into his world Ihab had given the king so much pleasure, shown so much unconditional love. Now his son would despise him forever if he made him loose Anisha... What was he to do... Adiva had been listening to the king and the elders. She had waited for the king to stop crying and walked in.
" Excuse me your majesty , I need to talk to you. Please forgive me for what I am about to tell you, I had not meant to decive you.... Adiva and the king spoke for hours, the king was shocked with what was said.
" I must find a way to help my son , help him find happiness, I can not let him waste his life away thinking what would have been. Will I be able to do this Adiva"
" Master you are our king , you can do anything you please... The king sat up most of the night devising a plan. In the morning he called for the prince.
" Tomorrow I shall be leaving to make arrangements for your wedding . I will be away for several months and I will need a servant so I will be taking Anisha with me".
It saddened Akeem so much to see the hurt on his sons face , would he ever be forgiven...
The kings horse was saddled and all arrangement made for the journey. Adiva came to bid him farewell.
" Remember my king you must be strong, Think why we are doing this"...
Akkem allowed Ihab to say goodbye to Anisha. It warmed his heart to see them together but he knew what was to be done.
"I will never forget you Anisha, my love for you will never die"
With those words she was gone from his world forever... " My son you will understand one day , hopefully you will forgive me".
Akeem felt so much love rush through his body , so much love for this boy he called his son.
He was begining to have second thoughts about the plan, but he knew he must not falter now, It must be done... The weeks went by slowly for Ihab. He missed Anisha's voice, her touch.
He also missed his father. It was the first time they had ever been parted.
He had been angry with his father to begin with, but he knew it was not his fault, There was some things not even a king could do.
He had Adiva to keep him company. He never tired of her tales... Ihab would take himself down to the lake for hours.
He would sit and think what might have been . His love for Anisha was still strong... How could he love another , could a man love two women, all these thoughts rushed through his mind as the day of his wedding grew nearer... Weeks turned into months.
The king sent word that the day of the wedding had come. He would be arriving back with the chosen princess.
Adiva went out to let the village know that the celebrations were to commence. This was going to be the biggest wedding the palace had ever seen... Adiva changed into her finest gown, she was going to enjoy this day. The wedding guest started to arrive.
Prince Ihab was dressed in his wedding finery.
Anisha looked upon him with pride . He looked so handsome so grown up . He was still a little boy in her heart... The trumpets bellowed " Make way for the king , the king is here.
Ihab was standing at the altar waiting for his bride. He had convinced himself that all would be well.
This was just a small sacrifice he had to make .
Even though Anisha was not by his side , she was still in his heart .
He turned around to see which princess his father had chosen...
It was then his heart soared like an eagle... Walking down towards him was his father. King Akeem Abdul, and there by his side was his beautiful, beloved Anisha.
Were his eyes playing tricks on him. Was this what happened when your heart was broken.
There was a fanfair of trumpets.
The king announced,
" Let me present to you all gathered Princess Anisha Latia , future Queen of our land... Anisha stood beside the altar not able to take in what was happening all around.
She had gone away thinking that she would never see Ihab again . She had been taken to a strange town and stayed in a large house with the king. There she was taught to read and write, how to dress in fine clothes how to wear the finest of jewels. She had not lifted a finger in the kitchen since the day she left the palace.
She had been told of the kings plan to make her " fit to be a princess" and then taken back to the village to marry his son... " I thought this day was never to be , am I dreaming or is it real, Is it really you Anisha"
"It is me my love , I have so much to tell you, but now is not the time... The marrige took place in the forest by Ihab's favourite lake... The crowd cheered as the prince took the princess in his arm and kissed for the very first time the love of his life... The king looked upon his son and his new bride with pride in his heart.
At long last he was able to repay the prince for all the love and kindness he had shown . What a lonely man he would have been without the love of his son.
What a naive king he had been to belive that Ihab had been a gift from his God. True he had been a perfect gift but not from his God but from a woman who had loved him dearly from...Adiva! Adiva had been heavy with child when she heard the King ask his God the gift of a son. A few days later she gave birth to a baby boy and hid him in the palace garden. She was afraid that she would be sent away for disgracing the king. She knew the king would accept the baby as his own beliving he was a gift from his God.
She could not keep her secret when she saw how unhappy her son was at not being able to marry Anisha, she knew what it was like not to be with the person one loved.
The king had agreed to take Anisha away, then return pretending she was a princess. It did not seem right that Ihab could not marry the one he loved especially as he was not a true royal himself... The people of the land never found out the truth . Everybody accepted their new King and Queen.
King Ihab was a much loved king the same as his father had been.
Adiva moved into the palace to live, she was happy to be near her son and Akeem.
Ihab was overwhelmed with joy . He had found his bride and mother all in one day.
And true to fairytale stories they all lived happily ever after...
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On May 24, 2007 cariadbach wrote:
On May 26, 2007 Nyell wrote:
Great story, I really enjoyed it. Your screenshots are amazing. 5.0, keep up the good work!
On May 26, 2007 sweetcharming wrote:
What a wonderful story
The shots are great and I think you really love CC 
I will look for your next story, 5.0!
On May 26, 2007 mayskaya wrote:
Great story! And screenshot awesome))
On May 26, 2007 foxysensei wrote:
Truly, very engaging and interesting. Your writing was lovely and flowed nicely. It was confusing when Adiva and Anisha's names got mixed up a lot. Easy to do as an author if two character have similar names. I once wrote a story about jackie an dJulia and kept muddling them up! It was a surprising twist that he was Adiva's baby, although it was a bit hard to swallow since the screenshots of her beforehand were full-body and thus one assumed she wasn't pregnant. In retrospect I can understand that those pictures were obviously taken of her long before the pregnancy, but facial shots may have made it more convincing. You say "She was afraid that she would be sent away for disgracing the king." It leaves the suggestion that this could actually be his baby, as there seemed to be a suggeston of something more between the king and his servant. Costumes, scenes and screenshots were just amazing, definitely the best looking storyboard I have seen here. Well done. I'm giving you 5.0
On May 26, 2007 marizza82 wrote:
On May 26, 2007 paige_turner wrote:
Well, no big surprise really, Adiva being his mother I knew that when she found him, but I wasn't expecting the king to pretend Anisha was a princess, I thought maybe they'd run away or something. Very sweet story, well told.
On May 26, 2007 ladymorgain wrote:
Nice Story, the clothes and the enviroment are beauty
On May 26, 2007 wrote:
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On May 26, 2007 dannybond1990 wrote:
Awww that was awsome. Good job!
On May 26, 2007 AdGurl wrote:
Beautiful Story! Beautiful Pictures! I can't believe I read it all. It is the first Sim Story I ever read all the way through. Great job.
On May 26, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:
Great story!!
The scenery and clothing is excellent. - I love your stories Cariadbach, well done! 
I'm gonna give you a 5.0 
Keep making stories. You really did a good job in making this story. It was truly a wonderful story.
On May 26, 2007 binky13 wrote:
Such a beautiful tale!
On May 26, 2007 shamansky wrote:
On May 26, 2007 D2Diamond wrote:
Absolutely incredible story!! You really did a great job! The pictures look great, and the story is fantastic! - Diamond
On May 26, 2007 eshuff wrote:
gorgeous. flat out spectacular!
On May 26, 2007 Small Town Sim wrote:
great job!
On May 26, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
Jane, a real triumph! Wonderful use of CC as always, your screenies were beautiful, a lovely rendered fairy tale, well done!!
I love happy endings!!
On May 26, 2007 candy820 wrote:
I really like this story and the screen shots. a 5.0 here
On May 26, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
Ihab is gorgeous, and I just *knew* when Akeem took away Anisha that she and Ihab were to be married,no matter what...!!!
On May 26, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:
That was truly an amazing story. Great Job! I'll maybe dream about it tonight. lol
On May 26, 2007 photoman299 wrote:
Awsome story
, even thought there were a few typos...
heep the stories coming.
On May 26, 2007 photoman299 wrote:
Sorry, i ment to say KEEP the stories comeing
On May 26, 2007 chardonnayonedge wrote:
I have heard this tale before. You did a wonderful job bringing it to life. I absolutely loved the cc!!!
On May 26, 2007 wrote:
That was amazing. The story was fascinating and well-written, the scenery and costumes were beautiful, and really, I couldn't ask for more. Bravo!
On May 26, 2007 dorcam wrote:
Good story, although I got mixed up with Adiva and Anisha too, but it's a very nice story
On May 26, 2007 estatica wrote:
Beautiful, beautiful story! The sets and costumes are stunning, and the characters are very convincing. They remind me of the fairytales I used to read when I was a kid. I really think this is your best story so far!
On May 26, 2007 Daishi wrote:
On May 26, 2007 SofijaDosen wrote:
This is great!
I love fairytales!
On May 26, 2007 GFitz wrote:
As always a wonderful story and very well told. The CC is wonderful and your shots were perfect!
On May 27, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
On May 27, 2007 simari wrote:
What a great story! The shots were beautiful! Just an all around great job
On May 27, 2007 erisema wrote:
Great story and images. Loved it!
On May 27, 2007 BriannaSun24 wrote:
Wonderful job with custom content, and beautiful story...nice twist with the prince's true parentage at the end
! 5 Stars.
On May 27, 2007 charey wrote:
On May 27, 2007 PhotoSigs wrote:
Exllent story,amazing screen shots,it deserves a 5
On May 27, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:
Wow it is so very touching, I loved the scettings and the animals on the walls (aside of the unicorn), I was very touched by the reference to his lineage and of the loving concern of his father, it was all very amazing, one of the most beautiful things I have read here in a lot of time, and I have read very talented pieces of work. And I am also impressed you managed to tell this in a single installment, wonderful.
On May 27, 2007 atangki wrote:
Great story!
On May 27, 2007 kaytaa wrote:
Beautiful story, but it annoyed me that you switched the female names halfway through.
On May 27, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:
Beautiful story, very well written
and great use of custom content 
On May 27, 2007 ragemacsika wrote:
Great story
On May 27, 2007 poohbear7882 wrote:
Excellent story! Definitely deserving of a 5!
On May 27, 2007 courtneybooker wrote:
Well done! One of the best stories I have seen thus far!!
On May 27, 2007 Devalyn wrote:
Sweet fairytale!
I loved the beautiful shots too!
On May 27, 2007 wrote:
You did a fantastic job!
It was really amazing. I can imagine how much you did!
All these beautiful screenshots! Wonderful!
On May 27, 2007 Sugar wrote:
A truly engaging story, wonderfully told. The costumes and backgrounds, especially the gardens were excellent. Where did you get those beautiful costumes from? A very enjoyable story, I love it, thank you. Sugar
On May 27, 2007 wrote:
awesome twist and i loved the costumes plus such an original story 5.0
On May 27, 2007 molli17 wrote:
On May 27, 2007 kidnumber48 wrote:
It's nice to see a different kind of story on the front page for a change! The scenery is perfect, the costumes are perfect, the writing is perfect. It must have taken a long time to make this. 5.0 points. Well done!
On May 27, 2007 wrote:
That was absolutely brilliant great cc and very good storyline definitely 5.0
On May 27, 2007 xxxlolaxxx_star wrote:
What a lovely story. The costumes and setting were both wonderfully done!
On May 27, 2007 wrote:
Wonderful story! I love the costumes especially. Great job!
On May 27, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:
woah, cool story and long message up there!! ^^
On May 27, 2007 Nono_Girl wrote:
One of the most wonderful stories I've ever read!I loved the whole decor and the clothes but what I loved the most was that in the end everybody got what they deserved.Everything pulled into place nicely!Bravo!Excellent work,well done,I can't praise you enough for this great story
:P
On May 27, 2007 fallenangelohio wrote:
Great story! Adiva I figured was his mother, but I liked the father making the servant into a "princess". Hope you do more or was it raining again?
On May 27, 2007 itachigirl wrote:
0-o
On May 28, 2007 laura bunny wrote:
Wow!Amazing story!Lovin your cc!Well done!
On May 28, 2007 sexyelle wrote:
On May 28, 2007 rons_pigwidgeon wrote:
What a beautiful story!
On May 28, 2007 minsmusic wrote:
What a feast for the eyes! Gorgeously shot - really beautiful screenshots, excellent use of CC, and I really enjoyed the story. I thought for a minute there was going to be a part two, but well done in making it complete in one installment. Congrats on making it to the front page too.
On May 28, 2007 embrisa wrote:
Great Story!
I enjoyed it 100%. Agree with others, only the names of the two women were confusing, but not enough to take away from the story.
The costumes were great and very well done for that time period.
Thanks for the great story. Can't wait to read the next one you come up with!
On May 28, 2007 Iceanna wrote:
Such a sweet story..
On May 28, 2007 floydine wrote:
Great story!
On May 28, 2007 samost wrote:
WELL done!
On May 28, 2007 dogz wrote:
That was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!
On May 28, 2007 Baby_Cat wrote:
Wow, great story!
On May 28, 2007 PatPB wrote:
Loved it!
Al I can rate is a 5.0 but you surely deserve a 20!
On May 28, 2007 MMs_Fan_01 wrote:
Very nice custom content!
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
Your screen shots have progressed so much since your first story, this is truly beautiful
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
The whole thing is just amazing, wonderful screenies, Bravo
On May 28, 2007 cadiva wrote:
I rarely comment on stories but I just had to say what a lovely one you've written here. It's such a refreshing change to read a story where everyone has a nice life and it all works out okay in the end. There were some great screenshots, a clever twist and excellent use of custom content.
On May 28, 2007 lilbit4 wrote:
what a good story
I did like that you gave us the whole story at once.you had some realy nice screenshots
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
A beautiful tale with excellent custom content , you must have worked hard . I forgive the little change in name . It happens to me all the time
Keep up the good work. You deserve front page status
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
Just love the cc you have used makes the whole story very exotic a 5:0 from me
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
weird
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
That was just one of the best, really enjoyed the pictures and the story, am a sucker for happy endings
On May 28, 2007 AudreyMay wrote:
What a sweet story!
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
Loved it
On May 28, 2007 cariadbach wrote:
On May 28, 2007 sheneiney wrote:
5.00000000000000000000000000
Great story! it was so original and like none of the other stories i've read. the prince's eyes are sooooooooooo beautiful! where did you download them?
~thanks
On May 28, 2007 greeksim wrote:
What a story!....
mazing work!....
On May 28, 2007 wrote:
It was a pleasure to read , your pictures just keep getting better. Don't worry about the name thing, it did not spoil the story. Great work as always
On May 28, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
What a heart-warming tale, well done! Loved it!
On May 29, 2007 SimsBarbie wrote:
very nice. colorful....lovely ending. Thank you for sharing.
On May 29, 2007 wrote:
Brava!!! Wonderful story...ooooh I sooo envy you your talent
On May 29, 2007 wrote:
Love this sort of story, you did a great job with the screenies
On May 29, 2007 wrote:
I have read all your stories , each one is different from the one before. The pictures in this one are beautiful. Brilliant
On May 29, 2007 wrote:
Took me back to the days when my mum read to me
Beautiful pictures
On May 30, 2007 napyhead wrote:
Loved it!
On May 30, 2007 Kismyname wrote:
This story was very touching. The pictures were great and it was well written. Great job!
On May 31, 2007 Hazy13 wrote:
That was very good. Love faerie tales etc and this was a joy to read. it was the picture that got my attention and stayed with it. Refreshing to see differnet content and setting.
Well Done.
On May 31, 2007 sadie7684 wrote:
Great story and pretty screenshots too!
On May 31, 2007 wrote:
Perfect Story and pictures
On Jun 1, 2007 wrote:
On Jun 1, 2007 wrote:
colourfull screenshots, good story
On Jun 2, 2007 wrote:
that was yet another great story, Great Job!!!
On Jun 12, 2007 wrote:
Came to your page to see if you had any new stories and found this one , your best yet
On Jun 13, 2007 Pink_Princess wrote:
Nice pics!
On Jun 13, 2007 wrote:
Not been on this site for a while glad i came back to find your story
On Jun 13, 2007 Llyriel wrote:
Absolutely lovely! It was a great story (I love fairytales) and the custom content was so well chosen. My eyes were glued to the screen. ^_^ Really nicely done! Probably one of my favourite stories to date. ^_^ Definitely your best yet! Which means there's more goodness to come right?! Anyway, I felt so sad for the King initially, and happy when he found his son. I didn't think Adiva was the mother, even though it crossed my mind. When the princesses were introduced I thought the first one would probably be the one. Anisha was soooo beautiful, I knew the prince would fall in love with her. But I didn't know how they would make it work. I thought it would turn out that the first princess had disguised herself as Anisha to see how humble the prince was. ^_^ Anyway, more soon please! ^_^
On Jun 16, 2007 wrote:
Brilliant pictures, I just loved it all
On Jun 17, 2007 Zayury wrote:
On Jun 17, 2007 wrote:
I nearly missed this one , don't know how. Beautiful shots, nice work
On Jun 20, 2007 wrote:
Hadn't been to your page for ages , love this one such beautiful picture
On Jul 5, 2007 wrote:
Such beautiful pictures, my eyes were glued to the screen
On Jul 10, 2007 wrote:
Who would think that such beautiful shots could be made with pixels
On Jul 10, 2007 wrote:
"Anisha had a special bond with the king and since the death of his wife several years ago had spent many a night comforting her master..."Hey,what is the meaning of this?
I'm so happy that Ihab had married with Adiva.The story is fine,but...it's kind there's something "missing" to it.I don't know what.4.0
On Jul 18, 2007 qvisn wrote:
Beautiful story Jane, really loved the twist and the happy ending.
Shirley.
On Jul 23, 2007 wrote:
Amazing pictures
On Jul 24, 2007 wrote:
Hi.. I finally have had time to look at your story and read..
Great work, and it was really fun to see that you have used some of my outfits.. thank you... Anita 
On Jul 28, 2007 laivine_erunyauve wrote:
Great screenshots!
On Aug 1, 2007 albaby wrote:
WOW. AMAZING. I LOVE THE OUTFITS.
On Aug 3, 2007 Ajoya wrote:
What an AMAZING story!!! It was very heartfelt. I enjoyed every touching moment of it! I'm soooo glad that I stumbled across your page! I look forward to reading more of your wonderful work!
On Aug 12, 2007 wrote:
Had not been to your page for a long time so had a lot of catching up to do . Beautiful screen shots and a heart warming tale
On Aug 15, 2007 wrote:
Brilliant story and pictures
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On Sep 28, 2007 Zumaria wrote:
Just read this story!!! It was awesome!!!!
I love the clothes and setting. Did you design all of it yourself? I would love to get those clothes!!!
On Oct 18, 2007 wrote:
Very engaging and what lovely pictures
On Oct 24, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
Ah, how sweet! I thought for a moment that the prince and his girlfriend would elope, but it seems his father was an old softie after all and he didn't need to...
On Nov 7, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:
This story is awesome. You are a great writer, and your custom content makes the stories seem even realer. All of your stories deserve a 5.0
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On Jan 4, 2008 sweatshirtlover2 wrote:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
You take such beautiful screenshots.
On Mar 12, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Jun 11, 2008 evi wrote:
such a wonderful story!
On Sep 5, 2008 charray wrote:
Really nice story. Great job.