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This is the second and final part to 'Shattered Dreams'. Anna and Aime.

I have had great fun writing these stories , hope you enjoy.

This is the second and final part to 'Shattered Dreams'. Anna and Aime.

I have had great fun writing these stories , hope you enjoy. The first six months after my parents died were the worst months of my life. I was so lonely without them and lost without my twin sister Amie. I spent most of my days sorting out the sale of our family home. Its was too big for just Aime and myself. It was the kind of house that shouted out for a family to live in it . A family just like we had been. I decided I needed to do something with my life so I went off to University and this is where you find me. During my first year at Uni I threw myself into work... The more I worked the less time I had to think about how miserable I was... I met some of the other student that lived in the dorm and they tried to persuade me to go out with them . I didn't feel as if it was right to go out and enjoy life so I just stayed in . I think I became known as the dorm geek, always with my nose in a book. Little did they know why I felt this way... Every week I tried to contact Aime on her mobile phone but there was never an answer . It had been nearly an year since we had said goodbye. I had no idea where she was or what she was doing. I wanted to tell her that I had forgiven her and that she was not to blame for the accident and most of all I wanted to tell her that I loved her.. It was the end of my final year . My exam results were brilliant , I even made it onto the Deans list. I felt so proud and I even felt happy for a while . Perhaps there was hope , perhaps there was a light at the end of the dark tunnel that I had been travelling in over the past year... The following day I was waiting in the Deans office when I meet Kara. Most students had gone home for the vacation but Kara was staying on . She said her parents were going through a messy divorce so she was better off staying at Uni. We got on well .She reminded me of Aime. Kara suggested we went out for a pizza that evening, and I agreed. We had our pizza and headed off to a bar on the campus. I had forgotten how to have fun. Kara bought me quite a few drinks and I began to feel a bit unsteady... The next thing I knew I was up on my feet dancing , I hadn't felt so free in ages. Kara suggested we went on to a club off campus. I was getting the hang of having fun and off we went in a cab. I had never heard of "The Dungeon" not suprising really as I had spent my first year at Uni in my room studing... It was a dark dismal place but there seemed to be a lot of laughter coming from the building. In the middle of the room there were several bubble machines . Kara found a couple of spaces and told me to sit down and enjoy. The first few tastes made my head spin and I thought I was going to be ill. Kara said take a bit more, so I did. I felt light headed and I could have sworn the girl next to me was a flying cow!... I could't tell you what happened next as I don't remember a thing. I woke up on a park bench . Kara was nowhere to be seen I had no idea where I was... Night after night I was drawn back to the 'Dungeon' I just couldn't get enough of that bubble machine... That night I didn't even make it onto the park bench I just passed out in the basement bathroom. I needed help and I needed it fast... I was so ashamed of the stae I was in I went home showered and changed. I went for a coffee to clear my head . This student started talking to me as if he knew me . I thought maybe I had met him when I was out of my head on the bubble machine. I had decided I was going to see my tutor and ask for help... I was waiting to go and see my tutor when another student I had never seen before started talking to me and saying that I looked different with my new hair style, and what was I doing this side of campus. I didn't say any more as I was so ashamed of what I had done over the past few weeks. I spent a couple of hours with my tutor and explained everything that had happened to me over the past eighteen months . It was such a relief to talk to someone. He told me what sort of place the "Dungeon" was and what was in the bubble machine. How could I have been so naive , how could I have been such a fool. It made me feel sick to think that I could have ruined my life... It was soon time to start the new term . I had stopped going to the Dungeon a few weeks back and luckily was not tempted to go and use the bubble machine. I threw myself back into study and went to the library daily. I was getting quite used to the other students staring at me . I thought they knew what I had been doing over the vacation . One day a stranger came up to me and pointed to the other side of the library and said "I guess you must be twins"... I looked up and could not belive my eyes , was I hallucinating , was I being punished for abusing my body over the last few weeks. I had to pinch myself to make sure I was not dreaming... Aime? was it really Aime... It was Amie, she was as shocked as I was . We were even wearing the same shorts. We cried as we fell into each others arms. I was so afraid to let go incase I lost her again. We talked for hours. Amie had only been abroad for six months, spent all her money and sold her phone for the plane ticket back home . She had arrived home to an empty house and had no way of contacting me. She had started Uni the same day as I had..
Aimee kept apologizing for the way she had behaved with Jake. I said I had forgiven her months ago and all we needed to do now was concentrate on the future... Amie called a cab as there was one special place she needed to visit. Now that I had found her I was not letting her out of my site... We went to be with Mum and Dad . They would have been so pleased to see us together , sorting out our problems and thinking of the future. We stayed there most ot the night , still talking into the small hours of the morning... We are so glad we found each other again.. We will make sure that we will always be there for each other. A new begining, a chance for us both to get it right this time....

Shattered Dreams (Part Two)

Feb 15, 2007 by cariadbach
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    49 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 15, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:\) Thanks for taking time to read . Sorry if you are looking for Shattered Dreams part one . It seems to have disappeared off the story board . One of life's litte mysteries!

    On Feb 15, 2007 wrote:

    \:D Had been looking out for part two, well done and a happy ending. Where has the rating option gone!

    On Feb 15, 2007 wrote:

    \:D Glad they found each other and all was well loved it. Shame I cant rate:

    On Feb 15, 2007 15RabbitLane wrote:

    yay! bubble machine! lol \:wub\: wuved it! \:P

    On Feb 15, 2007 ILikeNickzButt wrote:

    i loved it, cant wait for more \:D

    On Feb 15, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:

    Yeah...where is the rating option?

    Great story, though. I would of rated it 4.0! Good work

    On Feb 15, 2007 heyunome11 wrote:

    I loved it!!\:D
    \:rah\:

    On Feb 15, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    The missing rating option is really annoying! I ran into some server problems late last night, maybe this is related to them.

    And I know what you mean about missing stories! I've blown mine up several times!

    Anyway, great story! Wonderful plot!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 16, 2007 enchantmentsisters wrote:

    Thanks for sharing. I wish I could read part 1 but other than that great job! \:D

    On Feb 16, 2007 Dead Rock wrote:


    Awww, great story!

    Hey, for some reason i can't see a ratings thingy.

    Oh, well : 4.5

    On Feb 16, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    hey the rating option went o well ill rate it myself 999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999.9999999999999\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 16, 2007 Palina wrote:

    Thanks so much for your creativity and for sharing!!!\:cool\:

    On Feb 16, 2007 gummypeaches wrote:

    great story!!!\:D \:D

    On Feb 16, 2007 SuzanHuniBuni wrote:

    AWESOME!!! 10 kudos! Shame on me but it was hilarious when she woke up on the park bench and then in the basement bathroom. Her sister selling her phone for a plane ticket and starting uni the same day as Anna was an excellent touch. Excellent job!
    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 16, 2007 wrote:

    cool! \:D

    On Feb 17, 2007 NiomiJay wrote:

    nice i\:wub\: its \:rah\: and\:cool\:

    On Feb 17, 2007 MoriaG wrote:

    i am so glad that they are friends again,

    On Feb 17, 2007 EmJay1986 wrote:

    Wonderful story! Great job! I really love your work!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 17, 2007 liddymouse wrote:

    That was fantastic! Sob, so sweet

    On Feb 17, 2007 wrote:

    \:wub\: Love the story even though I couldnt read chapter one. Keep up the good work\:D

    On Feb 17, 2007 wrote:

    \:\) Realy liked this one well written.

    On Feb 18, 2007 glitterlrig wrote:

    \:D \:D that was a nice story...i loved shattered dreams 1 aswell thank s for your effort!!

    On Feb 18, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    I'm going to have to leave a second comment here after rereading. The plots have really tightened up since you started, and the screenshots are gorgeous! I hate to see this one end!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 18, 2007 Alyosha wrote:

    this is so sweet... I like the story so much that it leaves me sad that its the last part... hope you make more! Keep it up! \:D

    On Feb 18, 2007 Silvenight1 wrote:

    Great story. I am impressed, keep up the good work.

    On Feb 21, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    cute story! \:P

    On Mar 9, 2007 SimsBarbie wrote:

    Ending up on the park bench and basement bathroom was funny. Good story.

    On Apr 2, 2007 wrote:

    Loved it

    On Apr 2, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Apr 6, 2007 wrote:

    sorry I missed part one\:rah\:

    On Apr 7, 2007 wrote:

    Loved it , where is the 1st part\:rolleyes:

    On Apr 15, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: you rock!

    On Apr 27, 2007 jerif wrote:

    \:D Great job!!!! \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 15, 2007 wrote:

    Sorry I missed the first part but it was still good\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 15, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\: Glad they found each other, im a twin\:rah\:

    On May 15, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On May 15, 2007 wrote:

    Been looking for part one everywhere then I read your profile\:o

    On May 15, 2007 wrote:

    Yea I looked for it too\:wub\:

    On May 16, 2007 wrote:

    A happy ending for both\:wub\:

    On May 16, 2007 wrote:

    Shame you lost part one, I still enjoyed it though\:rah\:

    On May 16, 2007 wrote:

    Liked the bathroom scene

    On May 16, 2007 wrote:

    did not realize that I could read all your stories on one page.Some very sad yet funny sceenes\:rah\:

    On May 16, 2007 wrote:

    \:wub\: Sweet, loved it\:P

    On May 16, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:o Sorry I lost part one , pressed a wrong button somewhere along the line , still a novice when it comes to computers.\:P

    On May 18, 2007 wrote:

    Last one today, cause Im suposed to be revising\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 31, 2007 wrote:

    shame i missed number one\:rah\:

    On Jun 1, 2007 wrote:

    Half way through before I realised there was a part one, still good\:rah\:

    On Jun 1, 2007 wrote:

    Just found your page , going to read all your stories\:rah\:

    On Jun 1, 2007 wrote:

    been reading a lot of your stories , like them all\:rah\:

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