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Morelli and Daniella had always known each other ever since school and now they were still best friends as adults, they always liked to hang out and they still loved to have a game of checkers

Morelli and Daniella had always known each other ever since school and now they were still best friends as adults, they always liked to hang out and they still loved to have a game of checkers This changed when Morelli's twin brother became interested in Daniella Daniella started spending time with Theo rather then Morelli One day Theo took Daniella into the park garden then he proposed to her, Daniella was so happy as she said YES! Not to long afterwards Daniella and Theo had their wedding It was a small gathereing but all their close friends were invited Unfortunatly Daniellas twin sister Williow decided to show up also but this was no problem to Daniella who beat her in a flight even in her wedding dress! After a few days of married life Daniella was starting to wonder if it was really what she had dreamed of Theo was so messy and Daniella was expected to clean up all his mess After she had cleaned the livingroom twise that day she came back to find more mess on the floor
she cried as she saw it She got her apron on and told Theo to clean it up his mess After she had cleaned up the mess she decided to sit down outside but got yelled at by an angry Theo who had missed his favourite tv show because he had to tidy the livingroom up She hated to be told off but Theo She decided to call the her best friend Which was of course Morelli As she told Morelli what had happened Morelli was very shocked Daniella was so angry at Theo that she told Morelli she was going to change her image and she was going to be more confident she was going to stand up to Theo He tried to tell his brother but Theo would not listen Daniella decided to change her look she wanted to be more beautiful, she wanted to be more sexy and confident and this is how she turned out Theo was not too happy when he saw what Daniella had changed into She started thinking do i really want to be married? As it was starting to get dark the phone rang, Daniella ran and picked it up, it was Morelli and he wanted to see her She quickly ran out the door and made it to the park where Morelli was waiting for her, lets go to my house Morelli suggestivly told Daniella Lying on Morellis bed Daniella couldent belive what she had just done, but it felt so right! Suddenly the phione ran, Daniella answered it, Theo was on the phone asking for Morelli and her to come home because there was a fire! Daniella ran home to find fire in her kitchen, No fireman had showed up to help put out the fire Bravely Theo tried to extinguish the fire But ended up getting hurt, The grim reaper then flashed into the room, reveling a checklist Daniella begged grim to keep Theo alive As she won a bet the grim reaper vanised and Theo came into life again He hugged Daniella, Thank you for saving me he wispered He then turned and gave his twin brother a big hug too But what will still be done about this love triangle, will Daniella pick Theo or Morelli, or will this constant rivalry be there forever

(thinking of making a part 2 if this is liked please leave your comments if you liked this story)
p.s. sorry if my spelling in this story has been bad ...lol

Unable to decide

Jun 2, 2012 by chellefleur
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    22 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Oct 19, 2006 chellefleur wrote:

    hope you like it \:D

    On Oct 22, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:

    yes we like it!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 22, 2006 nea200pl wrote:

    I do like it as well! \:wub\: \:\) I'm going to wait for part II! \:wub\: \:\)

    On Oct 23, 2006 TheaDidia wrote:

    That was good! I think you should do a part two; I'd like to see what happens! \:\)

    On Oct 23, 2006 DIDA wrote:

    Nice story.\:\) I'm wait part two.\:\)

    On Oct 23, 2006 wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Oct 23, 2006 CASSIA238 wrote:

    Awsome story!\:rah\: I can't wait until part 2!\:rah\:

    On Oct 23, 2006 bflosweethart wrote:

    I love it i know i am kinda picky but i love how you do everything!!\:wub\: \:D \:cool\:

    On Oct 24, 2006 rafaelwow wrote:

    Beautiful job! \:D

    On Oct 24, 2006 rafaelwow wrote:

    Nice work! \:D

    On Oct 24, 2006 elizgrl_518 wrote:

    a part two would be good. Good story.

    On Oct 27, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:

    It was a fun read. Please make a second part.

    On Oct 29, 2006 wrote:

    \:\)

    On Oct 30, 2006 vkd wrote:

    Cool story, quite funny! I think she actually looked better before she changed her image!

    On Oct 31, 2006 zlsuter wrote:

    cool story cant wait for part 2 \:rah\:

    On Nov 1, 2006 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Fun, the idea to make Daniella change her look is good.

    On Nov 9, 2006 shady411 wrote:

    love the story...cant wait for pt 2

    On Nov 21, 2006 MoriaG wrote:

    i think she should stay with her husband and the brother needs to just be friends. how can he do that to his twin?!?! i like the way she looked before too.

    On Dec 5, 2006 jenncarr wrote:

    I like that she is going to stand up for herself\:rah\:

    On Jan 14, 2007 Pete789 wrote:

    \:D

    On Jan 22, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Great story !\:\)

    On Feb 1, 2007 Dead Rock wrote:


    Very cool.

    I think you should also do a part two,

    but then again i don't like all the

    chapters and part-two-threes, and etc.

    LOL

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