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So Violet has been kicked out (yet again) and is now staying in the market square, but then a mysterious stranger appears...

So Violet has been kicked out (yet again) and is now staying in the market square, but then a mysterious stranger appears... Night had fallen quickly and I was getting more tired by the second. I was contemplating going back to Mum but I didn't think she'd appreciate it. "Isn't it dangerous for a pretty girl like you alone at night?" A voice slithered past my ears making me shudder, "Something could happen,"
"Who said that?"
A man appeared from around the corner of the building, he had long her like Edgard had. He had a strange wild aura around him, I shuddered again.
"You're not from around here are you?"
"What's it to you?" I snapped, he laughed,
"Fiery, aren't you? I'm Roan, Roan Flint. What about you?"
"Violet." I said guardedly.
"Pretty name," He said, "I'm starving. Ooh, leftovers!" He started walking over to waste baskets full of food,
"I don't think you should be doing that," I said warningly,
"Why? It's not stealing if its been thrown away,"
He picked up an apple and bit into it,
"Mmm, I haven't eaten in ages!"
"Stop thief!" A merchant shouted, Roan groaned. Just out luck. "Well we better start running," He said, and we ran. We ran to the edge of the square, the merchant hot on our heels. I tried to pick up my pace but I couldn't. Roan yelled at me to hurry up. "STOP THIEVES!" The merchant screamed. The merchant caught up with us. The merchant tripped up Roan, he tried to pick himself up but more men were upon us. One grabbed me by the waist and hoisted me up.
They roughly shoved us into a cart and carried us away.
The men threw us inside a cell and locked the door. Roan went to sit on the sorry excuse for a bed and I went and sat next to him.
"You just had to eat the stupid apple didn't you?" I said venomously, "Now were're stuck in here,
"It was worth it though," He said, "If I hadn't I'd be like this guy within a week," He pointed at the skeleton. I leaned in to look at the skeleton. It was tied to the wall with metal chains, I shuddered. "That will be us within a week if we don't get out of here!"
"No it won't," He said, "They'll put us in the stocks and the peasants will throw rotten fruit at us. No biggie,"
"How can you be so calm when you put us in here!"
"Hey, if you hadn't hurried up they wouldn't have caught us," He said, "So don't act all high and mighty,"
"Hmph" I said,
"Any way," He stood up and went by skeleton, "There is a way out,"
"How?"
"Going down the drain," He said, "I'm not sure where it leads, but its worth a shot,"
I looked at the drain, it looked way too small to fit through.
"I'll never fit through there," I said frowning, he shrugged,
"Your choice."
I thought about this for a second,
"Okay," I said
"Right," He said, he lifted up the drain lid and took his shirt and boots off and slid down the drain. I checked for any guards looking, I took my dress and shoes off and followed him down the drain.

The Other World (Part 3)

Jul 21, 2010 by OliBean123
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    #3 On Jul 22, 2010 RatRaceRob wrote:

    Violet is quite the trouble magnet \;\) Wonder where they'll end up now-- grats on the feature! \:cool\:

    #4 On Jul 22, 2010 martoele wrote:

    I'm curious to know where this all takes her to. \:\)  Congratulations on having the story featured! \:cool\: ~ Margo

    #5 On Jul 22, 2010 mrssatty wrote:

    I like this story alot.  Congrats on being featured!\:D

    #6 On Jul 23, 2010 Illandrya wrote:

    She just can't seem to catch a break, can she? Wherever she goes, trouble is waiting for her. She probably doesn't see that she has much option but to follow this man who's already gotten her in deeper than she ever thought possible. Looking forward to reading what happens next.

    #7 On Jul 26, 2010 Mangio wrote:

    I wonder why Roan didn't apologize, after all it was his fault. Wonder where the drain goes \:wub\: Off to the next chapter

    #8 On Jul 28, 2010 mogan44 wrote:

    Her life is full of adventure, that's for sure!

    #9 On Dec 23, 2010 isarpgista wrote:

    I'm loving this story!!! \:D

    #10 On Dec 25, 2010 wrote:

    great story

    #11 On Feb 18, 2011 bluesshoteyes wrote:

    Great story. Keep it comming!

    #12 On Dec 8, 2011 KitsuneElric wrote:

    I have fallen in love with this sory \:\))))))) \:wub\: \:o

     
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