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Heat not a furnace for your foe so hot that it do singe yourself.
--Shakespeare, Henry VIII
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27 Comment(s) posted so far
On Oct 15, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
nice story!
On Oct 15, 2006 josh1092 wrote:
great episode cant wait for the next one
On Oct 15, 2006 kaspers wrote:
WOW! WEL DONE!!!
On Oct 15, 2006 wrote:
Ohh I know what's going on! I think...
On Oct 15, 2006 LaurieR wrote:
OH! Hanging again! You keep leaving me there flapping in the wind. Another GREAT episode. Thank you.
On Oct 15, 2006 wrote:
Hmmmmm this has certainly got me thinking! Another great episode, thanks so much for writing them and sharing them all with us!
On Oct 15, 2006 rafaelwow wrote:
Exclent work!
On Oct 15, 2006 rchris_ness wrote:
Can't wait for the next one.
On Oct 15, 2006 wrote:
Ooh!There is a fire!!^-^ Anyways, I wish there was more! I really love stories, why can't you write more? You sarted with a bad start, but gradually, your writing got better!
On Oct 15, 2006 cireking213 wrote:
[Gasp!]
Bad start???
Well, yeah, lilypassion, that was my first story and was a spontaneous one inspired by pure game play. I didn't even care about plumb bobs and thought bubbles back then. It started becoming a serious story after the second episode. I really love these characters as I get deeper into the story. They seem so alive to me.
On Oct 15, 2006 LIUBlueJeans wrote:
No!!! I need more! This story is superb. You are doing a fantastic job. Keep it coming...
On Oct 15, 2006 lastarr wrote:
I love this story!!!!Well written!! Cant wait for the next episode.
On Oct 16, 2006 zlsuter wrote:
great story cant wait for more. keep up the good work
On Oct 17, 2006 filizk wrote:
Excellent shots, brilliant story. I love the interactions and expressions in the shots. Very well done. Waiting for more.
On Oct 17, 2006 newmansfan12 wrote:
great job.
On Oct 18, 2006 cireking213 wrote:
Episode 6 wasn't posted this round. I hope it wasn't rejected.
How do you know when story has been rejected?
On Oct 18, 2006 DeeKaye55_ wrote:
On Oct 20, 2006 wrote:
This is a really awesome story!
On Oct 27, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
I love how Raven was worried about her computer during the fire.
I would worry about mine too. lol Gimpy's is a good add-on character!
On Oct 27, 2006 drewsoltesz wrote:
This is a great continuing story...looking forward to more chapters...well done!
On Oct 31, 2006 shady411 wrote:
I love it all.so interesting. Cant wait to read more.
On Nov 17, 2006 kaytaa wrote:
wow!
On Dec 26, 2006 manuela55 wrote:
On Jan 20, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Thanks !
On May 17, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:
wooow,it is getting more and more intriguing...
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cant wait to read the next episode!!!
I love Jo-Jo outfit for the night out! hope nothing bad will happen her...
On Sep 23, 2007 md198 wrote:
Good old gimpy
On Mar 16, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:
Wow, some of your screenshots were amazing