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I would just like to say that this story was inspired by The Fray.
Mostly by the song called "Trust Me" but it is an actual story.
It is a bit different in a way than most I have written. But still
the same in a way. I haven't been writing but suddenly felt the
need to. Anyways read on and well I hope you enjoy it. ^_^

I would just like to say that this story was inspired by The Fray.
Mostly by the song called "Trust Me" but it is an actual story.
It is a bit different in a way than most I have written. But still
the same in a way. I haven't been writing but suddenly felt the
need to. Anyways read on and well I hope you enjoy it. ^_^ It started just like every morning, just another ordinary day.
I walked into work and sat at my desk, stretched and bid a good morning to Liz.
"Well hello early riser, how are we today?" She looked around her screen and smiled.
"Hi Julia. I had to get in to finish what I had started last night, you know how I am."
I laughed, it was true, Liz was never good at finishing things soon, she procrastinated
quite a bit. But here it really didn't matter, as long as it was turned in on time. As she typed, she talked... she was quite good at that even if she had a deadline.
"So... Did you happen to see Nathan this morning? Looking pretty sharp if I may say so myself."
I blushed. I had seen him this morning and he looked fairly better with each look I took.
"hmm... from looking at your face, I imagine you did. Oh Julia, one of these days..."
But she quickly stopped, she heard footsteps coming towards the door. And of course, it was the one person I wanted to see.
"Morning Miss Day, Miss Hollands I expect alls well with the both of you."
"Of course Mr. Chase, you know what good workers we are." Liz said sarcastically.
He laughed and I smiled. "You can certainly trust us." I added.
"Well I just wanted to bid you two a good morning, its going to be a busy day."
And with that he left and walked back to his office. I quickly looked down, acting like I was working, I knew exactly what was coming next.
"Oh girl... you really have it bad for him don't you? mm-um-mm."
"I don't know what you're talking about. I was just being polite."
"Uh-huh. Nice excuse, trust me girl, I can tell and have always been able to tell."
"Oh! Is it that obvious? And if it is don't you think he'd have said something?"
My head started to panic... if it really was obvious and he could tell, would he
acknowledge it? Or just blow it off as a silly crush. Oh man oh man.
"No, not obvious enough for a guy to notice but enough for me to." She added quickly. The morning went by slowly, but I was able to avoid any thoughts of my boss.
That is until he came up next to me as I was putting some files away.
"Hi Miss Holland." I jumped, first with fright then with realization of who it was.
"Oh I'm sorry! I didn't mean to startle you." I couldn't reply, I wasn't very good
at being this close to him, it always made me dumbfounded.
"Are you okay? Miss Holland?" I smiled. "Julia, please call me Julia." I found my voice
"I'm alright Mr. Chase, you caught me off guard is all. Can I help you with anything?" "Well... Julia. You can call me Nathan, I prefer that anyways."
"Oh okay. Well... Nathan, can I help you with anything?"
"Yes, I have a client coming in and she's, well she's a special one."
My stomach tightened when he emphazised the word 'special'.
"And well when she gets here, please send her in immediately."
"What if your with another client? Should I still send her in?"
"Good question... well just call me when she gets here, her name is Mia."
I forced a smile, the best I could, "Of course Mr. Chase." He stood there for a moment as I went back to work.
I wasn't sure what to do, so I just ignored him best I could.
Until finally he spoke again, "Julia?..." Man, I wish he'd left.
"Yes Mr. Chase?" He frowned. "I thought I told you to call me Nathan."
"Oh right! Sorry Mr. Cha- er I mean Nathan. Sorry again." I blushed.
He laughed and then he looked as though he was about to tell me
something, until he was suddenly aware of Liz in the room. "Carry on ladies."
And he walked out. My heart dropped, of course... nothin out of the ordinary. And just as soon as Nathan left, Liz was right behind me.
"Oh my girl! Okay okay... I defiantly think he likes you!"
My heart quickened at the words but my head resisted all thoughts.
"Oh Liz, he did nothing of the such, just being friendly is all."
She snorted, "Oh so him standing there for awhile was nothing then?"
She had a point... that was a little out of character for him but still...
"Well, I don't know. I can't imagine what that was about."
"I thought he was going to ask you out for lunch! Wouldn't that be nice?" she winked.
I rolled my eyes, "Yea like that would ever happen. Lets just get back to work."
"Whatever you say, but my bet is that he's going to ask you out to lunch." The day went on and I waited for lunch time to come and save me.
But I couldn't shake off the thought of maybe having Nathan asking
me out to lunch, oh that would be so nice. Maybe I'd actually get to
know him... "Excuse me." I was quickly annoyed by the woman who
had interuppted my thoughts, that was until I looked up to face her. I was about to reply but my jaw only dropped.
I could only stare at the girl.. maybe woman in
front of me. She was easily the prettiest person
I had ever seen. And then the tightening of my
stomach came back but with a huge surge of
jealously, this was obviously Mia, the special client.
And as if she had been reading my thoughts, "Hi my name is Mia."
I heard Liz gasp in the background, she thought the same thing too.

You Need Me Less

Oct 18, 2008 by converse02
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    55 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Oct 17, 2008 converse02 wrote:

    Its short but its just an introduction... I forgot to put "to be continued!"\:D \:D \:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    \:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 Daishi wrote:

    Great start, looking forward to see what this Mia character is all about \:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    OMG! that is soo weird! It was inspired by the fray! I'm listening to them now. It's like some weird de ja vu thing\:wacko\:
    Great storY!!!\:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    ....I love the FRAY!...\:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    oops\:wacko\: I forgot to rate \:P I can't wait to read more of this story! Keep creating!! \:\)

    On Oct 18, 2008 narniana wrote:

    Love everything!!The story,the custom content,the quality of the screenshots...!!!5.0 Here of course!!!!\:\)

    On Oct 18, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Great start. Waiting for the next part.\:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    Great start! Can't wait for more!\:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    \:D\:D\:DGreat!

    On Oct 18, 2008 zul_94 wrote:

    Looks like this story might be very interesting!\:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 wrote:

    Glad to see another of your stories!!\:rah\: \:rah\: And it's a reallllly good one, so far! Can't wait to find out about this Mia...should I like her...or NOT?! Hahahahah

    On Oct 18, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:

    very good story\:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 Cheena wrote:

    very good introduction \:\) I look forward to reading the first chapter.

    On Oct 18, 2008 Nenehunni wrote:

    \:o short part
    Great start as with all your storys, can't wait for the next part to be out...
    Beautiful screenies and charaters
    Nenehunni x

    On Oct 18, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    very good intro loved it keep creeating and thank you so much for sharing your wonderfull storys with us xxx\:rah\: \:rah\: \:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 trolzgirl wrote:

    Very Good for an intro!\:wub\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 jennnnnie02 wrote:

    This is excellent! Your sims are so pretty! \:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 angelduckie wrote:

    Great start, want to read more \:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 wrote:

    Oh yea, the Fray is awesome!\:D And your story was beautifully written, very flowy..\:D \:D Can't wait for the next one!

    On Oct 18, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    Beautiful story! \:\) Rihanna´s gorgeous with red hair. \:wub\: And I think I remember that Nathan guy from your old story, am I right? \;\) At least he looks like him. I enjoyed your writing!

    On Oct 18, 2008 Etnik13 wrote:

    Great start!

    On Oct 18, 2008 Little Cloud wrote:

    Good start \;\) \:D \:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 maryash wrote:

    i seriously really really like this so far!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Your a great writer.\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 wrote:

    Love it! \:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 barbiensims wrote:

    Very cute! I love it! Can't wait for next part! \:wub\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 madeleine1994 wrote:

    the guy is ugly
    and who still listens to the fray?
    SERIOUSLY!
    \:rolleyes:

    On Oct 18, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    the guy is rlly cute! love the story too! \:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 mini me3393 wrote:

    I thought it was wonderful! It was short, but it really caught my attention! \:D

    On Oct 18, 2008 harvickgirl wrote:

    Great story! Where did you get Mia's hair? It's lovely!\:wub\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 ElizaSpinelli wrote:

    \:rah\: It was excellent! I'm excited to see what's next. Your sims are so beautiful! Where did you get Nathan's hair?

    On Oct 18, 2008 wrote:

    Its pretty good. Definently is good with the suspense. I liked it. \:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 saule1111 wrote:

    cool \:\)\:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 Ikitty wrote:

    Oh wow... \:D Very good. Looking forward to the next one. Amazing. What hair styles are Mia and Liz's hair? So nice. Jealous. \:rah\:

    On Oct 18, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:

    \:D Great start and very pretty sims!\:\)

    On Oct 18, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    oooo..I like it

    On Oct 18, 2008 emberfire19 wrote:

    i loved it

    On Oct 18, 2008 blackbutterflys wrote:

    mia! uh oh \:confused\:

    On Oct 19, 2008 plushies_lovergg wrote:

    Great start! I am deffiently going to read the next chapter. Also, going to look at The Fray after I finish listening to this other song.

    On Oct 19, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:

    lovely \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 19, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    Can't wait for the next part!\:rah\:

    On Oct 19, 2008 happyb8888 wrote:

    Excellent beginning! Maybe it's his sister\:\)
    Can't wait to find out! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 19, 2008 joxanth wrote:

    Can't wait to see what happens next! \:\)

    On Oct 19, 2008 charray wrote:

    Great start \:\) \:\) \:rah\:

    On Oct 19, 2008 whitmartinez wrote:

    \:rah\: I really liked this it was a great beginning and can't wait to read more.

    On Oct 19, 2008 emotionsrhigh wrote:

    LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it so far.. \:wub\:

    On Oct 19, 2008 SimStarStyle wrote:

    Where did you get Mia's eyes from, they're beautiful!? Great story so far! Although i did find it a bit confusing with the dialogue, I didn't know who was saying what for a moment \:confused\:

    On Oct 20, 2008 Salami95 wrote:

    It's nice,try to make every picture a little shorter please...
    Keep on with the good job!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 21, 2008 Livdude wrote:

    Nice start, can't wait for more!\:P \:D

    On Oct 22, 2008 Lovelylulu01 wrote:

    Wow awesome story and beautiful characters.. I adore it \:rah\:

    May I sak whree you get the skins from?

    Thankies

    Carry on making fab stories \:D

    On Oct 23, 2008 mogan44 wrote:

    I kept trying to click "next" and it wouldn't go anywhere lol I think that shows that I think it's great so far and that I already can't wait for the next part. Great writing and thanks!

    On Nov 6, 2008 sabsiix33 wrote:

    Great story and beautiful people \:wub\:

    On Nov 10, 2008 kurtnecolai wrote:

    \:eek\: WOW\:eek\: 1,000 views and around 50 comments!.....good job dude!!.....pretty cool for an 11screen intro!.....kewl.....\:rah\:

    On Nov 10, 2008 kurtnecolai wrote:

    forgot to rate! ^__^

    On Dec 26, 2008 TrishaDouin wrote:

    wow, i really really like this one.

    you should finish this.

    its a bit on the amazing side.
    \:D

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