What happens behind closed doors? What sort of things are the families of Oasis Valley trying to hide? A newcomer to the neighborhood may be the one to unearth it all.
Welcome to the prologue of my new series. The prologue is meant to introduce you to the characters before Chapter 1 is released. I hope that this new story will have some of the mystery of my Chronicles of the Carr Family series and some of the drama of my Saga of Pleasantview series. Feedback is always appreciated. Enjoy the story!
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35 Comment(s) posted so far
On Jun 18, 2008 simelodi wrote:
WOW! new and interesting! i like it. to tell you the truth i couldnt tear myself away from it.
cant wait until the next part. keep up the GREAT work!
On Jun 18, 2008 enchantmentsisters wrote:
Thanks for commenting. Take a moment to visit my minisite and answer my poll for this story!
On Jun 18, 2008 nleslie wrote:
William's a Werewoooolf!
:P
Love the story, it's awesome. Please, please continue!
On Jun 18, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
great start! Looking forward to reading more!
On Jun 18, 2008 Irnouba wrote:
a bit long for a prologue, but you still kept the interest going, so, please continue!! they're either vampires or werewolf, yes?
On Jun 18, 2008 jointhenavy wrote:
I loved it!!! Something fresh and it was really interesting! Good job! Cannot wait for the chapter 1!
On Jun 18, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:
very nice story,i like it
On Jun 18, 2008 beckyleanne wrote:
Great story, i really enjoyed it. Would be great if you could let me know when chapter 1 is out
5.0
On Jun 18, 2008 mollymooh@insightbb.com wrote:
Haha my name is Molly and my mom's name is Cathleen. lol. Good story. please do another part.
-Nick J. is off the chain
On Jun 18, 2008 maryash wrote:
great beginning, really interesting so far
On Jun 19, 2008 Angela! wrote:
On Jun 19, 2008 arc1801 wrote:
On Jun 19, 2008 redwingsbeann wrote:
That was a great story! Hurry with chapter 1 and please let me know when you release it
On Jun 19, 2008 binky13 wrote:
This is probably one of my favorite neighborhood stories right now, I usually find them boring, but this one is quite interesting.
On Jun 19, 2008 amyells7 wrote:
Great start! CAn't wait to read the next part!
On Jun 19, 2008 maryash2 wrote:
wow, thats a lot of families!! Good job!!
On Jun 20, 2008 Lauren-Alicia wrote:
i can see u used boolProp. (with the vampire - if u need help to say get rid of the glowing blue fangs just ask) very gud start!!!!
On Jun 20, 2008 priestmere wrote:
Good job on your characters.
On Jun 21, 2008 sims2sweetie wrote:
On Jun 21, 2008 sims2sweetie wrote:
I know whats wrong with brad and william...But I don't want to ruin it 4 any1
I can't wait 2 read chapter 1!I'm sure it will be as good as the prologe!
On Jun 21, 2008 sims2sweetie wrote:
On Jun 21, 2008 enchantmentsisters wrote:
Chapter 1 has been released!
On Jun 21, 2008 hellynia wrote:
This is intriguing and definitely piqued my curiosity! Time to go read the rest of the series.
On Jun 21, 2008 leifofdel wrote:
Interesting, looking foward to more.
On Jun 23, 2008 joker52455 wrote:
Nice! I'll go and read the next one now, but first how do you get your pictures so clear? I have NO idea how to do that and my readers keep complaining about it!
On Jun 23, 2008 MissJay wrote:
Very interesting! You're sparked my interest once again!
On Jun 25, 2008 Fikcija wrote:
Can't wait to read more!
On Jul 9, 2008 rclmp wrote:
On Jul 18, 2008 stripedpenguins wrote:
coolness!!!
On Oct 25, 2008 charray wrote:
Very good story
On Feb 26, 2009 Little Seer wrote:
I found it very interesting. Going to check out the second part. Thanks for writing this. Cheers
On Feb 26, 2009 Little Seer wrote:
I found it very interesting. Going to check out the second part. Thanks for writing this. Cheers
On Feb 26, 2009 Little Seer wrote:
I found it very interesting. Going to check out the second part. Thanks for writing this. Cheers
On Mar 24, 2009 xpierceitx wrote:
This is a very strange comment, but I love Mary Anne's hair. Is it custom? If so, where can I get it?
And, of course, I love the story...I've read a couple of your stories and they are fantastic!
On Mar 26, 2009 shehadgaun wrote:
I'm very intrigued. Can't wait for more!