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Cover! Babysitting Relief! Everyday after school, Paul and Razor took care of Paul's twin sisters. They liked doing it. The twins were, after all, so cute and cuddly. There were however some problems. "Oh my god, does that stink!" Razor proclaimed loudly. She was really starting to wonder if it was possible to take one more dirty diaper and still remain sane. In fact, both of them were quickly approaching the end of their respective ropes. "You know, I have an idea." Paul announced. "Why don't you and me go out somewhere?" "Wow, that sounds like a really nice idea." Said Razor. "Count me in." "Hmmmmm." Paul responded. "You do know how to make a boy happy." "You know." Razor remarked to the worthless nanny on the way out doing her best to be polite. "You could try actually doing your job instead of leaving Paul and I to do everything. Just a thought." Downstairs, Paul called a taxi for transportation to the nearest bowling ring. It was a pretty fair bet that fun was to be found there. "Oh bowling, I love bowling!" Razor had happily when Paul told her the news. "Thank you, thank you so much!" "Wow." Paul said slightly stunned. "I'm glad you approve, my dear. We are sure to have a great time!" So they got into the taxi and off they went to leave their troubles behind. "Your best table for two please." Paul said proudly to the hostess once they arrived at the ring. "For me and the lovely lady here." "Certainly sir." The hostess said in return. "I think you will be pleased with this!" Razor began to eagerly study the menu, her pretty eyes catching all the most expensive dishes.
"If I was rich, we could have a real nice meal." Paul remarked to himself a tad regretfully. "You know, this is sort of cheap of you, isn't it?" Razor remarked when the hamburgers arrived. "Maybe if you spent more time studying and less time fooling around you might have a bit more money." She said giving strongly advice to her pleasure-seeking boyfriend. "But studying is so boring." Paul countered. "Take that, maybe it will teach you." Razor said gamely throwing a hand full of hamburger right at Paul's head. "Oh, if that's the way you are going to be, then I think I'll just take your food for myself!" Paul giggled as he leaned over to steal a bite, enjoying their playing. When the meal was over, it was time for bowling. Paul sent up a prayer to the God's of black balls and white pins for a perfect strike. He took a deep breathe, threw his arm back and let it rip! STRIKE! Yay, what a great shot! It's was Razor's turn next and what do you know, she also got a perfect strike! "You know," Said Paul feel slightly sentimental as he reached over to touch his darling lightly on the arm, "this CD really has some sweet songs on it." Paul smiled sweetly thus inspired by the romantic music to caress Razor lovingly on her soft cheek. "You are so pretty, baby and I am so lucky to have you." "You really think so?" Razor asked moved by the tenderness in Paul's smile as she gazed back into boyfriend's brown eyes. "Yes I sure do." Paul said reaching down to hold her hands. "And you are probably right, I probably should spend some more time studying. It's important especially if we are going to have a family one day." Razor gasped happily in return. "Do you really mean that? Do you think we will be together forever?" "Yes I sure do." Paul muttered contentedly as he pulled his sweetheart into a tight embrace. "Oh baby, you smell so very good." A kiss is the only thing that could follow such a loving moment and kiss they did. "Thank you." Razor said with a big smile. "You really made me happy and I've almost completely forgotten about those pesky babies at home." Paul grinned back. "I do aim to please, my love. This is something we should plan to do more often." Paul was so excited that their date had gone well, he couldn't help but head over to the nearest couch to jump for joy! 'Boys.' Razor thought to herself, staring straight ahead as she tried to keep a smile off her face. When they got back home, a miraculous change had taken place. The babies had grown up into toddlers!

"Do you think it will be easier now?" Paul asked hopefully. "I don't know." Razor answered. "I suppose we will have to wait and see." "Well they certainly are cuter this way." Paul said with smile, cuddling his young sister. Cuter maybe, but I don't think it will be easier any time soon!

The End, for now.

Babysitting Relief!

Dec 14, 2006 by erica_jean
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    27 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Dec 15, 2006 wrote:

    Very nice indeed! Great storytelling \:\)

    On Dec 15, 2006 theheatmiserette wrote:

    Great writing. \:rah\:

    On Dec 15, 2006 LIUBlueJeans wrote:

    Very nicely done.

    On Dec 15, 2006 jemjamjar wrote:

    Fun Story, Just one question, what happened to the parents?

    On Dec 15, 2006 manuela55 wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Dec 15, 2006 gummypeaches wrote:

    Aw that was a cute story...hopefully there will be a second part\:D ...where paul and razor are engaged, or getting married\;\) anyways, great job!!

    On Dec 15, 2006 zlsuter wrote:

    great story but what happend to the parents cant wait for more \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Dec 16, 2006 MoriaG wrote:

    WoW. Great story, one question where was the parents or are there not any. loved the way they needed a break and had a date. i love the babies room, where did you get your cribs and the rocking horse? razor, i love that name, had great hair too. you did a good job, even having razor tell off the nanny, does she live there too.the ending was priceless, cuter yes, but so not easier. hahaha great job.

    On Dec 17, 2006 wrote:

    Hello love! Now I'm here! *Huggles* \:ph34r\:
    I see somebody loves my character. They ARE the best together, are they not? Absolutely adorable!

    On Dec 17, 2006 wrote:

    cute as\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Dec 17, 2006 tesasims wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:rah\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Dec 18, 2006 Wigwog wrote:

    \:wub\: ly!

    On Dec 19, 2006 wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Dec 19, 2006 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On Dec 19, 2006 Pete789 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Dec 20, 2006 white_sands wrote:

    cute story, but what about the parents?

    On Dec 23, 2006 wrote:

    thought that was cute \:rah\:

    On Dec 27, 2006 juliecheerleads wrote:

    Awww those two are such a sweet couple! Great story \:\)

    On Dec 28, 2006 x0.freshaddikt wrote:

    Pretty Nice Story

    On Dec 30, 2006 wrote:

    Great!!
    Keep it up \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 7, 2007 tarajow wrote:

    \:rah\:

    Love your story!

    On Jan 14, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:

    Babysitting for fun!

    On Feb 5, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Good story !Thanks ! \:\)

    On Feb 16, 2007 shady411 wrote:

    Cute story\:D

    On Mar 9, 2007 priestmere wrote:

    Cute story.\:ph34r\:

    On Jun 22, 2007 Olga2102 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jan 9, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\:

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