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Hi,
my name is Elisa Bates,and this is my story,

Hi,
my name is Elisa Bates,and this is my story, We moved in Serapone Island right after my father passed away.My mother was torn by his death and decided she wanted to cut the bond to the place he died. Let me show you around, This is the front door,as you can see:p. Oh,here comes mom,well i guess you'll have to observe for yourselves throughout the movie our beautiful house. Hey mom,smile,oh come on,be straight -THat's better
-You think?
-My mom,Gretchen owns the mailroom departure store and a small bussiness that sells hand crafted toys,it's cute really. Dinner is ready.I love cooking,but recetly I ot a job in Gaming and am more concerned with technology that cuisine. It smells great,though,and maybe someday I'll have a big family to cook for. This is my front lawn.I love taking care of it,mowing it and everything else.NAture is awesome. one day...
"Yes...hi..Georgie?.." "HOW are you dear?OH We have so much to catch up on...yes,my mom has a bussiness now and I got a job as a button masher,yesmlil' Rudy is great..." "Still single unfortunatelymbut I'm in no rush,now about you?How's Margo?" "Oh...I am ....sorry to hear that,excuse me...oh...so...how else?You quit your job?World trip? That sounds amazing.I'd like to have your impulsive nature...although.....VISIT mee???Of course...in a week then...this is great...I'll...we'll be expecting you!..OK then...see ya' then...Byee." This is great,I thought,Georgie,my high school crush who didn't know I had a crush on,is coming next week in visit.And he quit his job...and...he wants to make a trip around the world...seeking exotic beauties whom cause I might not even get his attention.Oh this is silly...His wife just died,stupid...he's in no search of a new love....is he? The next day,mom made a strange request.
"Elie,I want to ask you something,I want to make a greeting party in my local for a special bussiness person and I'd like you to play the violin
What? Oh I forgot to tell,I play the violin since I was 5:)))
And I don't suck at it :D "I'd be a great favour I know but it would mean alot" "I don't know mom,I can play it but I guess this is really formal and stuff....can't you hire a band or something?"
"Well it's this friday and they're all booked" "It's ok if you refuse,sorry for having asked" "OHH...kayy... "Really?YOu can do this?"
"Yeah....good thing you told me,I still have to practice." Yeah and....George HAllmond called yesterday...Remember him? Geor.....Oh,Georgie....the one you had a crush on back in high school....and the one who stole your friendship with MArgo...or was it the other way around? It doesn't matter now,Margo died this year,not that it would matter or something,but he is planning a trip around the world an wants to visit me..us.
This is nice,Elie,when did you say this was? Next week.Isn't it great?
"Next weeeek?I told Salmer that I would visit him then.It's a 2 day journey and I don't know when I'll be back." "That's ok...Ruby will protect me;))"
 "Behave ok?"
"Moom,it's ok"
"I just don't want to see you hurt again like you did then." "Thanks for the concern,I think Id'll be ok." "Ruby...here boy" "Hey lil' wheel....you spin all day mousy?now here's a treat for my baby..." Talking makes me hungry ...Yesterday I got a haricut... OH....and this is my room....I guess it was the child's room before we purchased this house. AND OH....THIS IS THE END OF CHAPTER ONE.

The Bates Family ch1

Dec 28, 2008 by etheea
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    9 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Dec 29, 2008 shady411 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Dec 29, 2008 tykijones wrote:

    cute

    On Dec 29, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    Good start! I liked it! \:\) \:D

    On Jan 3, 2009 wrote:

    \:\) good!

    On Jan 5, 2009 etheea wrote:

    ___MY FIRST STORY____

    On Jan 6, 2009 luckyoyo wrote:

    Good story, pictures are great love the house, keep going.\:\)

    On Jan 7, 2009 alicia7tommy wrote:

    Yah, here I am as I promised(I said I would do the same for you in my story) to rate your story five stars and I did after reading it if coarse.\:rah\: You are so great.\:P I am going to your page to find any tohers you might have and to sign your guestbook.\:D See you there.

    On Feb 3, 2009 pinkbutterflies_84 wrote:

    cute story \:wub\:

    On Feb 5, 2009 charray wrote:

    Very good story \:rah\: \:\)

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