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"But jealous souls will not be answered so;
they are not ever jealous for the cause,
but jealous for they're jealous.
It is a monster
begot upon itself,
born on itself."

From Othello by William Shakespeare

"But jealous souls will not be answered so;
they are not ever jealous for the cause,
but jealous for they're jealous.
It is a monster
begot upon itself,
born on itself."

From Othello by William Shakespeare
Despite my abandoned hopes, I was almost certain that I would learn the dark secrets of the Capp family. "Tybalt's condition might be nothing but an agreed sacrifice. But am I strong enough to break his silence?" I thought to myself. I didn't know for sure; but I thought I had a very good plan. So, I took a deep breath and approached the information desk at the Police Station. "I would like to see Sergeant Smith please," I said to the officer. Sergeant Smith was new in town, and I believed she might be the only person who would listen to me. After all, despite my numerous annoying calls and visits, she was still kind to me. "Sergeant Smith, can I talk to you for a moment? I know I promised to never bother you again but I have very important information to share with you." My heart pounded. "I hope this plan is clever enough to make him reveal the truth, otherwise I am in big trouble," I thought to myself as I walked to Tybalt's cell. As soon as he saw me, he said "Go away, Isabella. I don't want to talk to you." "You know Tybalt; you don't have to stay in jail for a crime you didn't commit. I know I can help you. I just want to talk to you about Hermia's crush on Romeo. Do you know anything about it?" I asked him. "You know what your problem is? You don't know where to stop," he said angrily. "Look Isabella, I can see you are a very determined person; above all I am sure that you are a very nice person. But you are getting way too involved with the matters that don't concern you," he said. "I am only trying to help you and your family. Don't you want to catch the person who killed your sister? I know you didn't do it. Don't you care at all?" "I just don't want to see anybody else get hurt. I gotta do what I've gotta do. Just leave me alone." Before I could reply, the door opened and Sergeant Smith came in furiously. "Isabella Bianco, you are under arrest for obstruction of justice and murder of Juliette Capp!" she yelled. "What a pity; your child will have to grow up without her mommy. I hope you enjoy the time you will spend in prison. I can assure you. It will be a very very long time," she said teasingly. After she finished her words, Tybalt shouted, "Stop it! Stop it I say! I already confessed to killing her. Why don't you believe me?" "Hermia came and told us everything. Hermia is ready to testify. She said she was there while Isabella was strangling Juliette to death." "That is a lie! Why are you doing this? Isabella is innocent. Please listen to me! Hermia is lying. I know who killed Juliette. And I will tell you all about it. I do not want anybody else suffer for the mistakes my family made." "I don't think this is going to change anything, but why don't you tell us everything you know?" the sergeant asked. "You were right Isabella, except for one thing. What Hermia felt for Romeo was more than a crush. She was obsessed with him. And she grew more and more so over the years. However, Romeo only loved Juliette. He worshiped her. There could not be any other man in this world more in love than him." "If you knew Romeo's love was sincere and honest, why did you say to Juliette that Romeo only wanted her for her money? Why did you want to break them up?" I asked him. "It is easy to answer that. I hate Monty's, each and every one of them. And I could not stand the idea that my sister was going to get married to one. I wanted to stop it before it was too late. But I would never kill Juliette or even a Monty. I am not a killer." "You say that you wouldn't kill your sister and you state that Isabella didn't do it, then who did? Tell me everything you know now!" "After Juliette saw Hermia kissing Romeo, she confronted her. I remember it very clearly. It was the morning of the garden party. The maid was setting the tables and Hermia was helping her. Juliette came out and wanted to talk to Hermia in private. So the maid left. But they did not see me watching them. They were screaming at each other. I got closer to hear it better," Tybalt said. "Juliette was mad. I could see the anger in her eyes. She normally never got angry. She was the kindest and calmest person you could ever meet. She was an angel, so kind and gentle. She did not deserve to die like that," Tybalt sighed. "Hermia, I know everything. Romeo told me how you've always been trying to break us up. You are my sister. How could you hurt me like this?" "For one thing, Romeo is lying to you, Juliette. Open your eyes. He loves me too. We have been having an affair for three years now," Hermia said in an ice cold voice. "You snake, you unimaginable snake! I am ashamed to call you family. I cannot believe you still insist on telling lies to make me hate him. Open your ears and listen! We are running away tonight and there is nothing you can do to stop us," Juliette screamed and ran away. "After Juliette left, I saw Hermia making two cups of coffee. Despite their fight, she was very calm and cheerful; as if nothing happened. She was too cool about this situation. It was very unusual, so I decided to watch her a little while longer." "She took a bottle out of her pocket and poured almost half of it into one of the cups. I did not know what it was, but from where I was standing, I could see that it was a bright pink liquid of some sort." "Next, I saw her taking the coffee inside. So I followed her. She went in Juliette's room. 'I want to apologize to you. I was such a fool. I regret all the terrible things I've done, and I've done many. You are my only sister and I love you. I don't expect you to love me and trust me like you did before; but I would like it if you could consider forgiving me and giving me another chance,' she said." "Juliette hesitated for a moment, but I knew she was going to forgive her. She could never hold a grudge. 'Look I made your favorite coffee,' Hermia said calmly." "Ohh, of course I can forgive you Hermia. After Mom died, you were like a mother to me. You were always there for me. How could I not forgive you?" Juliette said. "And a cup of coffee is just what I need right now," she said and took a big sip. "What is in it? It rather has an unusual taste," Juliette said.
"It's your favorite honey. You wouldn't refuse it after I took the trouble to make it for you, would you?" Hermia asked.
"No, of course not," said Juliette.
"Then, they set down, drank their coffee and talked about our parents. Juliette was so young when they died that she hardly remembers them at all. She always makes Hermia tell her stories about them. I watched them for a little longer, but after a while I thought every thing was back to normal, so I left." "I didn't see anything out of the ordinary until I saw Juliette writhing in pain that night. I knew then that Hermia had poisoned her. As Juliette fell dead on the floor, I saw Hermia laughing behind the bushes. After that I saw her running away. So I rushed after her. But before I could catch up to her, the police arrested me. Hermia had always been the pride of our family, but I was the disappointment. Grandpa would never expect such a thing from Hermia, and I did not want him to think that he failed in raising her, so I confessed to having committed the murder. After all, it is partly my fault. I should have stopped Juliette from drinking that coffee. I should have gone into the room and found an excuse to get rid of that coffee." Tybalt said. Before the sergeant said anything, I had to tell Tybalt that I was not really under arrest, but that this was a plan to make him talk. I did not want him to learn this from the sergeant. "I am sorry Tybalt. I did not want to trick you like that; but you would never tell me the truth," I said. I could see the disappointment in his eyes. He was deeply upset. He kept quite for a moment and then, turning to the sergeant, he said, "So you fooled me? You knew Isabella was innocent; but you made me believe that you were going to charge her with murder. That wasn't fair." "Do you think it was fair for Juliette to die like that? Do you think she would want you to suffer like that, while Hermia is out there having fun? Besides, we do not want innocent people in jail. That is not justice. But we don't have time to debate this right now. We have to catch Hermia."
"We need your cooperation. We think Hermia might be after Romeo. We searched your house, but she wasn't there. Do you have any idea where she could be?" asked the sergeant. Tybalt thought for a minute. "There are a couple of places she might be, but I am not sure. Let me call her cell and try to find out," Tybalt replied. "Hermia, yeah it's me. They let me out. They said they caught the killer. Where are you now? I want to meet you," he asked in a guilty tone.
When he hung up, he said "She is in the old church. She said she would wait for me there. I don't think she suspected anything."
"I am sending the special team right away, and I have to join them. You two have to come with me just in case I need you there; but you are not going to intervene in anything, OK?" Sergeant Smith said. When we arrived to the old church, Hermia was trapped inside with no place to hide or run, but she was not willing to surrender. We could hear her screaming that she was not going to come out until she talked to Romeo. The team leader already had a plan and said, "We have to take action, clear all civilians from the area!" The special unit was already inside the church, before we even understood what was going on. The next thing we saw was Hermia approaching us calmly. While Sergeant Smith put the hand cuffs on Hermia, I was filled with sadness that such a young soul could do so much evil. Hermia looked upset, but was quiet and calm. Just as they started to walk towards us, Tybalt burst into tears. "I am sorry Hermia; you must understand that I never wanted things to end this way, but I had to do what I had to do. You killed our sister. It's time you started facing the consequences of all the terrible things you've done." Tybalt cried. "How could you do that to me Tybalt? I was looking for Romeo to apologize. I was going to surrender anyway after I talked to him. But how could you help them trap me like this?" she asked. "You know our mom died giving birth to Juliette. She saved Juliette's life by giving her own. How could you kill the daughter our mother died for, our sister? And how could you let me stay in jail when I wasn't guilty?" Tybalt cried. "I'm sorry. Really." There were no other words to say. The air hung limply as if all the words and energy had been sucked out. I wondered what she might be thinking as she was taken to the police car. I didn't expect her to surrender so easily. I always thought she would fight back or find another way to turn things around. I almost felt sorry for her, but then I remembered all the terrible things we went through because of her childish jealousy and evil mind. After two months of worry and despair, I was relieved to see that justice prevailed. I had to go home to my family. "Sergeant, it's really getting late, and I'm exhausted. I need to get some rest. If you need me, you know where to find me," I said. When I arrived home, Rufus and Isadora were not there. That would give me time to prepare myself. I took a warm bubble bath, changed my clothes, and went to the kitchen to eat something. I couldn't wait to tell Rufus and Isadora the good news. But then I wondered if it even mattered any more. Just as I looked out the window in thought, I saw Juliette. "Oh God, how could that be possible. She is dead. I must be hallucinating," I thought. It looked like she was trying to tell me something. "Help me Isabella, help my Romeo," she said and disappeared.
I was in shock. I took a deep breath and ran outside.
Just as I reached the front door, I saw her again. "Juliette, is that you? You are dead. How is this possible?" I asked curiously. "Death is just the beginning of another life greater than this one, Isabella. This is just a reflection of my soul. My body is dead but my soul is still alive, and it is with everybody who loves me. I had to come back to save my Romeo. He is in danger. You have to help him. He is planning to kill himself. I don't want him to die like that. I want him to be happy, grow old and see every beautiful thing I missed out in life," she said pleadingly and disappeared again. I searched the whole house for her, but she was gone. I thought that I was finally going insane. "I'm starting to imagine things. I'd better do something about it," I thought to myself, so I decided to seek professional help, like Rufus had suggested. Just as I was about to the dial the local hospital's number, my phone rang. It was Dr. Davis. "Hey Isabella, I have some bad news for you. Romeo ran away. I tried to reach his family but nobody answered. I wanted to let you know. I have informed the police. They can find him," he said.

"I can't explain how, but I know exactly where to find him doctor," I said when I saw Juliette's ghost in my garden again.
Just as I thought he was in the old church. I found him wandering around in his pajamas. He walked unconsciously towards me. "Romeo, stop this nonsense! I have to take you to the hospital now. You need to be taken care of," I said. "Don't you see? I can't live without her. I can't breath, eat, sleep. I need to be with Juliette. Without her, the world is dead," he said, "the flowers wilted, the sun black, the wind empty."
"Oh Romeo, you are so young. Your heart will recover. It is too soon to die. Juliette would never want you die. Not like this, not now," I said.
"We all die in the end. What does it matter when, or how? Death is easier than a wretched, hopeless, joyless life," he murmured. "Now you are being a fool. Come on; we are going to the hospital this instant!" I said. He turned his back and moved away. "God knows I loved her so, and she loved me. How could I live without her beautiful face, her ivory embrace? Open your arms for me my sweet angel; I am coming to you," he cried and took a bottle out of his pocket, swallowing it all in an instant. It only took a moment for him to collapse to the floor. I didn't know exactly what he had taken but it was obviously some sort of quick poison, so I carried him to my car and sped to the hospital. I don't remember how much time passed while I waited outside the emergency room. I was hoping the doctor would give me some good news. I could not hold my tears back any longer, when the doctor came out and said, "I am sorry Isabella; we could not save him." His words were echoing in my mind. "We could not save him. We could not save him."
My heart was torn into pieces. I did not know what or whom to feel sorry for. The fact that I didn't stop him in time was eating me alive. "Why didn't I see this coming? What have I done?" I cried.
"You should stay calm Isabella. Go back home and get some rest. There is nothing you can do here. I finally reached Romeo's parents. They were out of town. But they are on their way back now. I think you should go and see your family, and stop blaming yourself. This was not your fault," Sergeant Smith said. I tried to comfort myself, telling myself that they would be together in the after life. "Their hearts will guide them until they are two angels caressing each other," I thought to myself. As I drove home, I hoped that Rufus and Isadora were not sleeping yet. I needed them more than ever. When I pulled over to the driveway, I saw that the garage was empty. Rufus's car was not there. It was almost midnight, and I had no idea where they might be. Slowly I turned the knob, and opened the door. They were gone. The house was empty. I searched the whole house, but there were no signs of Rufus or Isadora. I turned around and realized that there was an envelope, and a red rose waiting for me on top of our family album. Those were the only things that were left behind. I looked at it for a moment. I was scared to open and read what was in it, although it was obvious. I took a deep breath and opened the envelope.
Dear Isabella,
I could write down all the reasons I am doing this, but I am sure you know them already. You disappointed me and Isadora terribly. I am mad at you for ignoring us. I am mad at you for weeks and weeks of loneliness and for lying to me over and over, but above all, I am mad at you for putting our child's life in danger. I do not believe that you are competent enough to take care of Isadora. That is why we are moving to a place where she will be happy and safe. You know I loved you, and I know you loved me. But love alone is not enough to make a relationship work, is it? I wish there were a way to turn back time and undo all the things that separated us, but it's too late.
Do not look for us. We will start a new future and forget about all the terrible memories; I hope you do the same.
Rufus

TO BE CONTINUED IN ANOTHER STORY...

The Murder Of Juliette Capp - Chapter III

Jun 3, 2012 by filizk
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    On Oct 5, 2006 filizk wrote:

    With my special thanks to Carmypies, who was so kind to read and edit the third chapter. I cannot thank her enough for her contributions.


    I also would like to thank everybody who read the first two chapters. I wouldn’t have the courage to continue writing without your wonderful comments. I hope you enjoy the third chapter.

    On Oct 6, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:

    oh wow, I can't wait for the next chapter.

    On Oct 6, 2006 Euterpe wrote:

    Oh I enjoyed this one thoroughly!

    On Oct 6, 2006 vkd wrote:

    Fantastic story with brilliant pictures! I particularly like the fact there is a skeleton in one of the cells - lol- did they leave someone in there too long, take it they didn't get a fair trial! Great work, look forward to seeing more from you \:D

    On Oct 6, 2006 zlsuter wrote:

    great story cant wait for more\:rah\:

    On Oct 6, 2006 willowswand wrote:

    beautifully done, a treat for the eyes . looking forward to next installment\:\)

    On Oct 6, 2006 willowswand wrote:

    beautifully done, a treat for the eyes . looking forward to next installment\:\)

    On Oct 6, 2006 DIDA wrote:

    Nice story,fantastic pictures!I was surprised with the skeleton in the cell!That it was very creative shot!\:\)

    On Oct 6, 2006 slime wrote:

    omg he left but atleast they r married in heaven and as zombies\:rah\:

    On Oct 6, 2006 nea200pl wrote:

    Great chapter, as usual! \:wub\: \:\) And now I'm waiting for another parts - I need to kow is Isabella going to be happy?! Five stars from me. \:wub\: \:\)

    On Oct 6, 2006 gulbet wrote:

    great ending to a great story.i am hoping you will continue the story,otherwise i will miss rufus very much\:\( \:D

    On Oct 6, 2006 josh1092 wrote:

    great chapter\:\) even though that was a sad ending \:\( i hope romeo and juelliette have a great afterlife anyway

    On Oct 6, 2006 sandybvv wrote:

    oh my god.. poor isabella!!! i just love this story!!!! well done!!! great pictures as always!!!

    On Oct 6, 2006 wrote:

    Wow that was great, as usual your story is fantastic, Poor Isabella so much heart break for her, still it makes a great read! I can't wait for you to write some more! \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 6, 2006 LilyoftheValleyICE wrote:

    D: what a dramatic ending!! I love it XD You did a great job with this! The murder is solved! I kinda figured out it was Hermia, but you still wrote the story wonderfully, so it was a good read. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!\:D

    On Oct 7, 2006 busmusen wrote:

    Por girl..... ca wait to read the rest...\:rah\:

    On Oct 7, 2006 miagirl340 wrote:

    yay,new part!

    On Oct 7, 2006 tcancel wrote:

    Great job, can't wait for the next story \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 7, 2006 veronica_234 wrote:

    cant wait 4 the next part\:rah\:

    On Oct 7, 2006 MoriaG wrote:

    Great story!!! I love the dead Juliette!! And the letter was great, how did you get her to hold it like that!! you have wonderful pictures, i am sure it took alot of time to get it set up but it looks great!

    On Oct 7, 2006 Emerald_Lexus wrote:

    That was such a sad ending..can't wait for the next chapter..\:wub\:

    On Oct 7, 2006 gothiclynn wrote:

    Wow , I'm just glad Tybalt didn't kill Juliette . Great story like always !\:D

    On Oct 7, 2006 Lidia wrote:

    Great! I can hardly wait for next one, hope with a happier ending.\:D

    On Oct 7, 2006 evetsangel wrote:

    Great chapter..except how cruel Rufus was in the end.

    On Oct 7, 2006 kellik wrote:

    \:rah\: awesome story, cant wait for the next one, keep up the great work

    On Oct 7, 2006 CASSIA238 wrote:

    Fantastic story!\:rah\: I can't wait until the next part!\:\)

    On Oct 7, 2006 wrote:

    Wow, this was really good, although the ending was really sad

    On Oct 8, 2006 carmypies wrote:

    I love the final product! You did another great job with the story and the photos. I can't wait for the next story! \:\)

    On Oct 8, 2006 wrote:

    It was great! As in I LOVED IT! Can't wait for the next part.\:wub\:

    On Oct 8, 2006 ssjjcrane wrote:

    Herima was so mean. How could she?!!!!! I think it was unfair that Rufus left.She was just trying to help!

    On Oct 8, 2006 jeyca wrote:

    So sad *sniff*

    On Oct 8, 2006 little_ruby wrote:

    Very good job, with great twists to keep it suspenseful. \:\)

    On Oct 8, 2006 lia2223 wrote:

    Another Great Chapter! Can't wait for the next part. \:rah\:

    On Oct 8, 2006 wrote:

    Poor Isabella. Afetr all she does for other people she still can't help herself \:\( Brilliant story though. I thoroughly enjoyed it as usual! Can't wait to find out what happens next chapter. \:rah\:

    On Oct 8, 2006 heavenleigh24 wrote:

    wow, you end the mystery, but give us another storyline to follow. Can't wait!

    On Oct 8, 2006 cireking213 wrote:

    Excellent! I prefer stories where the characters are active instead of just standing around. \:rah\: \:rah\: \:D

    On Oct 8, 2006 wrote:

    Sad time around the town jail

    On Oct 8, 2006 pamberger wrote:

    \:rah\: I just read all three chapters...that was a great story, I loe the screen shots...as heavenleigh24 wrote, can;t wait for your next story! Keep up the good work! You have a fan!\:D

    On Oct 8, 2006 wrote:

    This story from part one has been the best story ive ever read n iam really sad about Rufus and Isadora and i hope she finds them in the next chapter until then though BRILLIANT!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 9, 2006 rchris_ness wrote:

    Great story. Can't wait for the next part.

    On Oct 9, 2006 wrote:

    I loved it! The pictures were beautiful and the plot was extremely interesting. I can't wait to read more from you.

    On Oct 9, 2006 darqstar wrote:

    Really great story!

    On Oct 9, 2006 wrote:

    It was a wonderful end to the mystery of the murder. Poor Isabela, though!! \:\(

    On Oct 9, 2006 frogger1617 wrote:

    Great job, It Brings in a mix of emotions. First your glad that the murder was solved, then sad about romeo. then sad for isabella and har family, in some ways you cant blame rufus for being worried but then be mad at him because you understand what shes going through. anyway great story i cant wait ti read the next story.

    On Oct 9, 2006 laura199108 wrote:

    Great story\:\)

    On Oct 9, 2006 babsbunny72 wrote:

    \:rah\: primo read!!!!!!!! cant wait to see what happens next

    On Oct 9, 2006 wrote:

    I love these storys \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 10, 2006 queenbina wrote:

    i'll keep watching and reading\:D

    On Oct 11, 2006 BBKZ wrote:

    What can I say? This is one of the best Sim-story I've ever seen. Fantastic work. You used all these prison stuff in great style. Your imagination is really gorgeous! Thank you for sharing and.. keep making new stories!! \:D

    On Oct 12, 2006 wrote:

    Can't wait until next part gets out!

    On Oct 12, 2006 oldmember_roloken14 wrote:

    yeah good story
    I can't wait for the next chapter
    Excellent

    On Oct 12, 2006 Gibson Twins wrote:

    Lovely please make a next chapter if you don't I will be sad

    On Oct 13, 2006 Lovella-ya wrote:

    Cool story!!! I like it very much!!! Thank you!

    On Oct 13, 2006 savanabonita wrote:

    Thanks for that story! It is realy, realy interesting\:rah\: You did a great job \:wub\:

    On Oct 13, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:

    AWWWWWWWWWW!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 14, 2006 carol84 wrote:

    Wow, one great story finally. Poor Isabella, I hope you continue to write about Isabella. Very nicely done story, It must had taken you ages to finish this story. Your hardwork brings out awesome story, good job once again Filiz. Absolutely 5.0 from me.\:rah\:

    On Oct 14, 2006 wrote:

    good story I read all three thamnks\:wub\:

    On Oct 17, 2006 pepp_pattie wrote:

    very good story.\:D

    On Oct 18, 2006 newmansfan12 wrote:

    Good story but sad...\:\(

    On Oct 18, 2006 alicia256 wrote:

    Fabulous job!\:\)

    On Oct 21, 2006 livka wrote:

    interesting...\:rah\:

    On Oct 21, 2006 VIKZY wrote:

    I love the story and the chapters before thanks for brining us such a well done story. Look forward to more from you.\:rah\: \:D

    On Oct 21, 2006 figaro_black wrote:

    This is an amazing story. And the pictures! \:wub\:

    On Oct 23, 2006 kransp wrote:

    \:rah\: great job, you must have put a LOT of time into putting all three chapters together so well.

    On Nov 4, 2006 wrote:

    hi filiz abla.I read your story it's amazing\:rah\:

    On Nov 6, 2006 TabbyDragon wrote:

    Amazing story, but it's a little unfair what happened to Isabella. Her husband should have stayed with her. But overall a great story. \:D

    On Nov 17, 2006 natwang wrote:

    Great story...the pics are awesome

    On Dec 1, 2006 zomsha. wrote:

    Very good story \:D

    On Dec 21, 2006 clcewest441 wrote:

    5.0!! That was awesomely wonderfully terrifically awesome! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Dec 21, 2006 manuela55 wrote:

    \:cool\:

    On Jan 16, 2007 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks !!\:\)

    On Feb 4, 2007 Rejected.one wrote:

    This was WONDERFUL!\:rah\: I enjoyed reading this story soooo much! I just can't wait till the next story! \:rah\: \:wub\:

    On Feb 13, 2007 crazyarsekid wrote:

    I loveee your stories. Wow, you are great. Keep it up! \:rah\:

    On May 12, 2007 AnniKayna wrote:

    wow.
    amazing.
    the plot was fascinating as usual,and the screenshots were just perfect.
    after Hermia's arrest,I wuold have bet that it was finished!
    I didnt expect at all Juliette's ghost or Romeo's death. \:\(
    nice idea,to depict them both as zombies!!! \:D \;\)
    the leaving of Rufus and Isadora wasnt so unpredictable,instead! \;\)
    I really,really,really loved this serie!! \:wub\:
    you do really write beautifully \:wub\:

    have a very pleasant day! \:P \:\)

    On Jul 13, 2007 simolen wrote:

    Those were the best stories I have ever read IN MY LIFE. I could really feel Isabella's confusing thoughts! (Should I help them? Should I mind my own business?) I am only in the 6th grade and I understood that story. It even made me cry once. Oh and Juliette dying was sad. She was always my favorite character and so was Romeo. I was so happy to see them united in the afterlife. Oh and I am so furious with Hermia right now. I used to like her. Now she has become my worst enemy. But I have to give you props. YOU inspired me. My stories definetly aren't as good as yours but I'm trying. Oh and how did you make such beautiful background? Such beautiful people? Such beautiful words! I wish I was like you right now. You have become my best role model. I'm sorry if I'm going on and on but I can't help it! All three stories were so beautiful. By the way where did you get those great downloads from?? Here? Anyways I would like to thank you and I'm telling you I've read those stories 5 times already and now is gonna be my 6th! Keep up the great work!! \:rah\:

    On Jul 13, 2007 simolen wrote:

    I LOVED THEM FOR THE 2ND TIME. I ENJOYED THEM THOROUGLY. FROM THE BEGINNING TO THE END I LOVED THEM! I love the romantic parts and the mysterious parts. WOW I don't know what to say...WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW! The pictures were awesome and I sware I got into everyone's shoes in the story. I am a very deep thinker for a young girl and I cried and cried throughout the story. By the way I am so proud of Tybalt. I have always been a 100% dreamer and I daydream about that story 24/7 it was so good. I could actually feel Romeo's pain. I could feel Isabella's thoughts. I could feel Tybalt's misery and I could feel Herma's jealousy. Of course I still hate her tohugh \:mad\: But I LOOVE the sotries! \:D \:rah\:

    On Jul 13, 2007 simolen wrote:

    I'm sorry to bugging you all but i can't stop spreading my feelings for this story. Plus that story made me look at death better. I was terrified inf dying before I read this story. Then I noticed Romeo was right. Death is far better than living a sad, boring, joyless life. Plus heaven is always great (I love you God!) As I was saying thanks for inpiring me, filizK. My stories are TONS better now!

    On Jul 13, 2007 simolen wrote:

    OK, OK this is the last thing I'm going to say....


    YOU GOT A WITHOUT A SHADOW OF A DOUBT 5.0 FROM ME!!! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 5, 2007 wrote:

    nice story

    On Mar 30, 2009 Kvetoslava wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Sep 17, 2010 micamariani wrote:

    Owww, I so love this!!!!

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