Hello
I am not adjusting well . . . to life here on this planet.
I don't remember much of what happened before this. I am guessing that we didn't land softly.
Most of Day 1 was spent searching for savalgable stuff amoung the wreckage. To be honest there wasn't much here. Looks like the occupants of this place left quickly. I am guessing it has been some time since anyone has lived on this piece of land.
There was a child earlier today that passed by. I tried to communicate my situation.
I do remember there was some hand waving and shouting, the noise was awfull.
The child kept screaming and covering its eyes. I didn't have a clue. My head hurt so.
It gave me a head piece and something to cover my upper half. I am guessing that I was expected to give something back. All I had was myself so I held out my arms and reached for the child.
Failure. Communication rejected.
Later on some adult came by. They held out their hand and the noise out of their mouth was more friendly like. So I again attempted dialog with them. I must admit the white bubble helped some.
Again and again I motioned to my belly and waved my hands over my mouth.
They copied my every move. Strange. Soon we were all moving in a strange dance together.
One of the party, the leader I am guessing motioned me closer. Leaning in I could almost hear
a request. I drew near cautiously only to jump quickly back as noxious gas enveloped our self.
Everyone gaffawed. So I did likewise. I was obviously making progress or so I thought but soon found myself being subjected to a very personal attack.
I gestured my confusion. He poked me with a finger. I poked back. He pushed. I pushed back.
What happened next shook me to my inner most being.
When the dust settled. I found I was still on my feet. This didn't make any of them glad to stay in my company. Soon I found myself alone with only a box of something my nose tells might be edible. Another gift from these. I was so hungry by this time I ate all of it.
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On May 8, 2006 LIUBlueJeans wrote:
On May 8, 2006 Vlana wrote:
Very funny ! Hope you will go on.
On May 8, 2006 BBKZ wrote:
she looks so strange... but the story is great
On May 8, 2006 wrote:
The idea of an "alien" sim settling in and trying to blend in. I like it.
On May 9, 2006 tonkpils24 wrote:
cool
On May 9, 2006 gx30 wrote:
keep going!
On May 10, 2006 Tsp1414 wrote:
Funny!
On May 10, 2006 cr-art wrote:
On May 10, 2006 Albiel wrote:
Good start.
On May 11, 2006 cinyoung8 wrote:
Nice start could turn out to be a really neat story
On May 11, 2006 morneau_grl27 wrote:
Interesting story, very clever.
On May 12, 2006 D2Diamond wrote:
Nice start!
On May 14, 2006 cringo wrote:
I like the style too
On May 14, 2006 andrestrydom wrote:
Great story . It is funny .
On May 22, 2006 neenornina wrote:
Great idea, hope you continue
On May 22, 2006 SimEmma wrote:
Ahmm...... I don't know how to comment this story
On May 29, 2006 triss wrote:
interesting one. i'd like to know what happens next.
On Jun 7, 2006 S_Top wrote:
it was good
On Jun 20, 2006 Minti3 wrote:
Funny story.
On Jun 23, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:
i did not realize how short the story was! It was getting good! lol Please continue.
On Jun 28, 2006 spottsmom wrote:
Great story idea. You were really starting to get into it at the very end. sadly it was over??
The pictures could be a little better matched to the narrative. but You have lots of potential though.
On Aug 11, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:
5 points
On Sep 3, 2006 simsbabies wrote:
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On Sep 26, 2006 darqstar wrote:
Amusing, but it ended a bit abruptly.
On Oct 5, 2006 Mistress Useless wrote:
Longer would be nice.
On Oct 14, 2006 wrote:
very nice story!
On Oct 16, 2006 Small Town Sim wrote:
that was cute
On Oct 26, 2006 KatCat wrote:
Nice start...where's the rest?
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On Dec 2, 2006 civetinja wrote:
On Dec 4, 2006 kiwiana girl wrote:
cool story
On Dec 13, 2006 gilysse wrote:
I can see why you get a 2.8, people can't really understand your style, I think you worth a lot more than that.
On Dec 17, 2006 Sophistifunk wrote:
On Dec 20, 2006 Pete789 wrote:
Nice start
On Jan 3, 2007 manuela55 wrote:
On Feb 1, 2007 stripedpenguins wrote:
i dont get it
On Feb 2, 2007 wrote:
A little bit too short!
On Feb 19, 2007 hannahreg wrote:
Boring-Yawn
On Feb 19, 2007 hannahreg wrote:
Only joking-its kewl
On Feb 26, 2007 wrote:
hmmm, interesting start.
On Mar 25, 2007 Tantra wrote:
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On Apr 1, 2007 md198 wrote:
Good, but short.
On Apr 24, 2007 lildebbye75 wrote:
cute, great start.
On May 16, 2007 Cherylgass wrote:
very cool ... love the alien sim!
On May 17, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Very cute story.
On Jun 2, 2007 Foxychik925 wrote:
Nice start and really funny!
On Jun 5, 2007 wrote:
wierd
On Jun 24, 2007 MinnieID wrote:
Nice.
On Jul 5, 2007 shady411 wrote:
Short
On Jul 6, 2007 zul_94 wrote:
Offbeat, interesting, short but great!
On Nov 6, 2007 simgirl4evr wrote:
strange story
On Jan 20, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:
I enjoyed reading this, it was very intriguing yet strange at the same time. The pictures was awful, but I love your writing style. I will definitely search for more of your stories. Keep on writing...
On Mar 21, 2008 Srecana wrote:
nice! She is very interesting character!
On Mar 27, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:
Good job!!!
On Mar 27, 2008 Bury me deep inside your heart wrote:
Good job!!!
On Apr 30, 2008 arc1801 wrote:
On Jun 26, 2008 Angela! wrote:
On Oct 18, 2008 angelduckie wrote:
bad pictures, writing style is ok
On Oct 21, 2008 cutedazy wrote:
interesting...
On Oct 25, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:
brilliant...you are a fantastic wrighter...I love it
On Nov 2, 2008 saturrn wrote:
great stuff
On Aug 9, 2010 melaniecox wrote:
This is a good start to a story, please continue it.