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"Oh my goodness, this can't be...." gasps Starr. "Tyela, you are dead! How could this...."
"Ah! ah! oooohhh!!" Tyela let out another painful cry.
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23 Comment(s) posted so far
On Mar 3, 2007 Palina wrote:
Very amazing story!!!!
On Mar 3, 2007 wrote:
good story
On Mar 3, 2007 trolzgirl wrote:
that was an amazing story!
i like it
On Mar 3, 2007 clcewest441 wrote:
Awesome
On Mar 3, 2007 xtessax34 wrote:
That was excellent, keep up the good work on any of your future stories
On Mar 3, 2007 murmaid wrote:
omg tht was wikid , did hse actuali have triplets or not if she did was there somne sort of cheat that mader her have them because the only cjheat i know is to make her av twins which is Forcetwins
On Mar 3, 2007 monrae001 wrote:
Great work. I was wondering if Starr had gotten pregnant earlier. THAT would be a plot twist.
On Mar 3, 2007 bec71 wrote:
Very suprising story!Please make another chapter?PLEASE?
On Mar 4, 2007 C-Deuce152 wrote:
Climactic twist and a happy ending. My kind of story
On Mar 4, 2007 wrote:
Both one and two, amazing stories, thanks for sharing. Ps: Where did you get the hair and everything, I've been searching for them for AGES!!!
On Mar 4, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
Nice twist! Keep it up!
On Mar 4, 2007 wrote:
the toddlers are so cute how did you get triplets i didnt know that was possible or did you download a thing so that happens
On Mar 5, 2007 enchantmentsisters wrote:
Great story (part one and two).
I'm glad it ended happy. What happened with Starr though?
On Mar 5, 2007 kolkol7 wrote:
Awww! So how did you get triplets??
On Mar 5, 2007 wrote:
And the mystery is revealed! I liked this story- thanks for it!
On Mar 8, 2007 glorynichole wrote:
Good story but what happened to Starr, maybe you can make a new chapter about how her life is now, )maybe a mysteriuos pregnancy?) just thought
On Mar 8, 2007 Jubilant wrote:
I can not believe he accepted her lie so easily. I wouldn't have. But then it is a happy ending. I never expected that she staged her own death.
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On Jun 12, 2007 Llyriel wrote:
Aww, I'm happy for them. I don't think Starr deserved him anyway. He was mean to Tyela when she got pregnant, and she did something nearly unforgivable! They definitely are perfect for each other, the meanies. ^_^ Starr should find someone better!
On Jun 27, 2007 vmceldrew wrote:
awesome story! one of the best i've read! keep up the good work and if you decide to do another stroy let me know! and how did u get those triplets?
On Jun 9, 2009 charray wrote:
Very good part!!!