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The construction of our cabin and Ima's labor were both unforgetable. I'd never known the human face could contort like that! And the lightning didn't help matters.
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On Sep 7, 2007 hiedibear75 wrote:
This was short....but it was mainly just as a "bridge" between the camping Campers and the cabin dwelling Campers. LOL The earlier parts can be found on my page by going to "all stories", I've got some others there as well; hope you'll like them.
Bear with me for any future parts......I've got a couple of story families going. LOL 
The story writing plus trying to finish the challenges keeps me busy in the sim game.
On Sep 8, 2007 icabal wrote:
An ok story, but the narrative needs a bit more work
On Sep 8, 2007 Wolfie13 wrote:
The story is okay, but is very short and could use a bit of work.
On Sep 8, 2007 hiedibear75 wrote:
As I said this is a SHORT BRIDGE between them camping in a tent and having a cabin.
If someone has read parts#1,2 I think it wouldn't seem as abrupt or strange(just my opinion).
On Sep 8, 2007 Karie wrote:
I see how the Camping stories all link together...short and sweet and all. Good job, especially since you lost all your downloads between the last story and this one!! A girl has to do what a girl has to do...
On Sep 9, 2007 Karie wrote:
p.s. awesome shots of your river and the lightning bolts!!
On Sep 9, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Great story, I loved it. Keep up the good work.
On Sep 10, 2007 LaurieR wrote:
You should have plenty of camping stuff to replace the lost items. Have fun! I'll be watching when I'm not stuck in hospitals!
On Sep 10, 2007 JLounge wrote:
Good work! A pitty it isn't a bit longer. You're doing well!
On Sep 10, 2007 muggelx1 wrote:
it is nice very good story
On Sep 10, 2007 Dr-X56 wrote:
BOO!! Great pictures, but not a good story. So i hope this was the 1st time making it.. Nice room's you got.. Look for my advice story!
Else i hope i see a better story soon from your side... Else.. im gonna make it for ya 
Will be soon out.. and yes it's for anybody and for the most perfects story writer's aswell..
On Sep 10, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
good job , it was a little short but i still liked it
On Sep 10, 2007 emmy27 wrote:
On Sep 11, 2007 mini_mike wrote:
good job bear as useal and also after losing you content on the story its a good job im sory but i needed to coment here asap as i might be loseing my account since i posted on some lil babies profile and it will be taken as flameing im sure but it needed to be done so i did it your best friend mini mike
On Sep 11, 2007 Dr-X56 wrote:
Well... looks like you got really good friend's, but they seem to have heart of stones.. It really hurt me very well, maybe it was the meaning? Anyway appoli for that, but instead of they write to me you should. You should have hurt me not them. Also i said Great pictures, but not good story. Nice rooms you got i also wrote.. Seems like this gonna be a discussion of some sort.. At least after the comment's i got from you friend's.. Well you can tell them this : everyone can comment a story either it's good or bad. And not always the commenter means what she/he says.. think about it next time somebody tries to hurt other without meanings... To the rest of you reading this and thinking I'm a ***hole... we all are ***holes.. nobody is perfect.
On Sep 11, 2007 mini_mike wrote:
well tuff tookas lol i apolagize for nothing and the gloves are way off now ......
On Sep 12, 2007 hiedibear75 wrote:
OK folks so very sorry for any aggravation suffered by having too put up with all of this stupidity. I will in ALL future stories make sure that anything I would have put as a 1st comment will be in the "liner notes" for those who are NOT bright enough or are just in too big a hurry too notice that the 1st comment is from the writer. I have NOT claimed to be a "wonderful writer", I have had some pretty good success with several stories however. For anyone reading or viewing the work of another......always keep in mind too pay attention to both what the author says about that particular picture or story, don't forget what YOU are saying. Do NOT be overly critical of one's work while being overly sensitive about your own....oh and don't make claims that are nothing more than an inflated opinion of one's own work. In lay terms (Don't dish it if you can't take it, and you get what you give.) Any member publishing on TSR knows or should that it is possible that 10's of 1,000's of people could potentially see their work(I know generally only a few 100....but there is that thought looming in the minds of many of us). I should go ahead and state that I have several disabilities. And my profound apologies too "Dr. X56". I'm only legally blind, have a moderate brain injury, and a spinal cord injury which necessitates a manual wheelchair. I don't have any problems comprehending that someone may take offense to being told "On Sep 10, 2007 Dr-X56 wrote: | Delete
BOO!! Great pictures, but not a good story. So i hope this was the 1st time making it.. Nice room's you got.. Look for my advice story! Will be soon out.. and yes it's for anybody and for the most perfects story writer's aswell.. Else i hope i see a better story soon from your side... Else.. im gonna make it for ya "(her 1st comment). I as I said will put things like"On Sep 7, 2007 hiedibear75 wrote: | Delete
This was short....but it was mainly just as a "bridge" between the camping Campers and the cabin dwelling Campers. LOL The earlier parts can be found on my page by going to "all stories", I've got some others there as well; hope you'll like them. Bear with me for any future parts......I've got a couple of story families going. LOL The story writing plus trying to finish the challenges keeps me busy in the sim game."IN the story itself. I don't want too make it hard for others with disabilities, as I do try to be sensitive too all disabilities. As I said my profound apologies to Dr.X56, I did not realize she had any cognitive or social disabilities.
On Sep 28, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
Lol, this story part seems to have the most drama. Not in the story, in the comments!
It was short, but seeing as it was good and just a bridge, I'll forgive you 
. Thanks for posting it! 
Caroline Marie
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On Nov 15, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Thanks for sharing !
On Dec 3, 2007 qvisn wrote:
Off to next part,
On Mar 17, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Aug 20, 2008 tambriah wrote:
loved it nice lightning shot too
On Sep 15, 2008 cutedazy wrote:
I love your stories!
On Oct 9, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:
oooo...such a good chapter...I wish I had more time to read the others I have missed...just enough time for one more
On Mar 3, 2009 maxi king wrote: