Hi! And welcome to the Applewind Legacy. This is my first attempt at a legacy, so bear with me. The story is told from the perspective of each heir and when the heir becomes a teenager, the story-telling will be passed down to them. Oh and by the way, I don't follow ALL the rules. I follow most, but if it get really incovenient, I may cheat a little. But to all you strict legacy people out there, I am not keeping score because that wouldn't be fair.
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On Sep 2, 2007 figaro_black wrote:
This went fast from nothing to a family. Great work!
On Sep 2, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
Yay! First comment! Good legacey, and I like the way on how you're gonna tell it! Keep it up!
On Sep 2, 2007 hazabaza1 wrote:
Noooo! I second late to first comment.
Well, as I said a few seconds before, it's great!
On Sep 2, 2007 wrote:
great story
On Sep 2, 2007 TellMeSomethingNew wrote:
Great psrt. I like the 'passing the torch' idea!!
4.5
On Sep 2, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
Lovely!! A real stunner!
On Sep 2, 2007 happyb8888 wrote:
Great job! I like the way you're doing the legacy. Nice screenshots! 5.0
On Sep 3, 2007 elopge wrote:
Wonderful!! Can't wait for more!
On Sep 3, 2007 jabire wrote:
On Sep 3, 2007 wrote:
Great job!!! I think the girls are beautiful, and goodness...both of them had 10!!! in playful/active
I don't know if I could handle it
I like the way you did it, and will defo be reading more!!!
On Sep 3, 2007 wrote:
Great story! I saw in some of the pictures, you have things diagonal. Just wondering if there is a cheat for that? :]] Thanks
On Sep 4, 2007 wrote:
It was really good, but if can I give a few suggestions to make it a bit better..
Well, for the pictures, I know that I would like it if they were a bit closer up(I never got to see the how pretty girls were up close!)
Also, maybe try a little more humour or add a small plot or something to the storyline, it keeps people interested.
You are very good at writing and I wouldn't spend my time giving tips if I didn't think it was worth it.
On Sep 4, 2007 xopipersgalxo wrote:
That was really good! I have a legacy in the works. It is the Collins family. i'm waiting for the oldest sons to become adults before I can post it though!!
On Sep 5, 2007 spacemouse wrote:
Good story, I loved it. Keep up to good work.
On Sep 8, 2007 goodie2shoes wrote:
Wooooooot! Another legacy! I think I'm gonna read the next part now!
On Sep 9, 2007 binky13 wrote:
I really liked this one.
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On Oct 26, 2007 joker52455 wrote:
I LOVED your story! How you did it in 1st person was the best
On Nov 12, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Great story !
On Jan 18, 2008 qasert wrote: