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These are my parents standing in front of the house my dad built brick by brick. They're always so happy together and prefer each other's company to hosting a party.
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On Nov 10, 2008 jackieQ789 wrote:
wow did not see that coming
loved it will there be a part2 thanks for sharing
On Nov 10, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:
On Nov 10, 2008 narniana wrote:
On Nov 10, 2008 shelllharn wrote:
OoOoOoO a doll great idea
i can't wait to read the next part
On Nov 10, 2008 lilyjul96 wrote:
Loved it. BRAVO!!
On Nov 10, 2008 Etnik13 wrote:
Oh cool! It's sort of Pinocchio. It had quite an unexpected ending! Good job and the scenery was great!
On Nov 10, 2008 ProwlerTylo wrote:
Great story. Very creative, nice work.
On Nov 10, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:
Great star! Keep up the good work!
On Nov 10, 2008 emotionsrhigh wrote:
wow..what an ending! loved it
On Nov 10, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:
Didn't see that coming at all!
Please make another part!
On Nov 10, 2008 Little Cloud wrote:
Oh my god!!! That was really creepy
!!! It this a first part in a series? Cause it seemed like a very good start
. Can't wait for the next part
!
On Nov 10, 2008 mogan44 wrote:
What an awesome story! I love it! I loved my dollies. I just think this was such a great idea for a story, I hope you make more!
On Nov 10, 2008 sparklewand wrote:
Wow! That is so freaky
But it's good, hopwfully you'll continue the story!
On Nov 10, 2008 whitmartinez wrote:
On Nov 10, 2008 Nenehunni wrote:
O wow, what a clever twist, ill be waiting for the next part
Really nice screenies and great lots you used
Nenehunni x
On Nov 10, 2008 candy820 wrote:
Awesome! And like everyone else I didn't see that coming.
Such a sweet story.
On Nov 10, 2008 simboy161 wrote:
Oh wow
What a surprise, hope there is more
I thought she was adopted because there were no pics of her as a baby
On Nov 10, 2008 butteryy wrote:
Oh wow! I didn't see that one coming! Is there going to be another part? I hope so!
On Nov 10, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:
very nice story
On Nov 10, 2008 Pippa22 wrote:
Great story.
It is very interesting.
On Nov 10, 2008 ashleighlouise111 wrote:
amazing story, I so was not expecting that ! thank you for sharing! where did you get your croissant download from?
lurvve the story... and the croissant!
On Nov 10, 2008 FathomDesigns wrote:
wow, thats strange.......i have been in the process of writing a story almost just like ths for a few months....but thats alright. mine is different in a lot of ways
On Nov 10, 2008 fieldhckylova25 wrote:
lol wow, wouldnt have guessed that, part two??
On Nov 10, 2008 norabora95 wrote:
wow. lovely surprise! please write a part two! WOW.
On Nov 10, 2008 ginsim wrote:
Loved the story
Fab house as well
5.0
part 2?
On Nov 10, 2008 harvickgirl wrote:
On Nov 11, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:
Great idea!! Im really looking forward to reading more
On Nov 11, 2008 pink4vie wrote:
whoa! creepy, but great story so far!
On Nov 11, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:
Nice
On Nov 11, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:
Cool
On Nov 11, 2008 simelodi wrote:
loved it!! it was very unique!...and at the end i was like "wha?" but then i noticed the doll limbs and then I got it >__< great work! keep it up
On Nov 11, 2008 happyb8888 wrote:
Wow! What a surprise that was! Very creative idea!
On Nov 11, 2008 seksyhstefh wrote:
Wow that was really cool , i like your custom things.. they are pretty
On Nov 11, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:
On Nov 11, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:
lovely story
On Nov 12, 2008 charray wrote:
Great job on this story
On Nov 13, 2008 PenelopeT wrote:
Nice twist!
On Nov 15, 2008 Thera_M wrote:
Hey, the end just got me! I love the story so much! Cant wait for another part, hope it ll come. Please then let me know, Id be really gratefll!
On Nov 21, 2008 ~wyldchyld~ wrote:
Very unique!
Cute story!
On Nov 22, 2008 simsnina wrote:
AHHHHH! Pretty damn awesome! i really really really hope that there is a part 2 otherwise i may just cry
really good!
ily x
On Feb 2, 2009 damnanoir wrote:
WOW! i didn't believe it Oo!
she's a doll.. wanna see more about her!