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Hello! This is my first story. I enjoyed making it and I hope you like it! Leave me a comment and let me know what you think of it!:)

Hello! This is my first story. I enjoyed making it and I hope you like it! Leave me a comment and let me know what you think of it!:) This is Mia Maddisson. She is a vegan and just moved to a village called Gloomy Vault. She also likes to listen to metal and go to good shows. Hell yeah, this new house rocks! It is much better outside than I thought it would be! Lets take a look inside too! Voila! A nice and big dining table. I like it! This is my kitchen. I love the oven! And even the fridge is brand new. Cannot wait to see my bedroom. Alright...the bed is kinda shabby but it will do. I like the painting. I even have my own garage. But I don't have a car yet. This is my bathroom. It is simple and clean. Just like me. I wanted to wash my hands right away in my new sink, cause the taxi which brought me here wasn't that clean inside. I felt already hungry. I decided to have some cereal. With soy milk. After the breakfast, it was time to find some kind of job for me. I have to pay my bills, you know. Now let me see... Oh, a job at an adventure career! I will take it. They said in the job ad that they need a person in a good fit, so I took out my training clothes and turned on some music. Suddenly I heard the doorbell ringing. I decided to take a look. There were bunch of friendly people. I was so happy that I already made some new friends here. And the guy named Lucifer Shredder (I am not kidding!) even found me funny! Back inside some of my guest were already making themselves comfy. Soon it was time to say goodbye. I took a nice bath and then I wanted to hit the hay. I slept very well in my shabby but lovely bed. And I was already excited about my new job. I was roasting some tofu for the breakfast. But it didn't turn out so well. When I was taking out my garbage, I noticed that my carpool was already arrived. I was embarrassed, since I was still wearing my sleeping clothes. I tried to hide behind the trashcan, but it was even more embarrassing, cause I am a grown up person. I changed my clothes and then sat in the car. The driver introduced himself as Larry and he was very friendly. I even had my own office at work! And I was working really, really hard... I got promoted and back at home I noticed already some bills in my mailbox. Tomorrow arrived and I went to work again. But I was back soon. I got fired. I shouldn't have played those computer games all the time at work. Suddenly a good idea popped into my mind what to do with the empty room I had in my house. I decided to adopt a kid. A boy named Rodney. Next morning I woke up early to clean up my house. Even my little oven was dirty already. When I was taking our garbage, I noticed the adoption agency car. My Rodney had already arrived. He seemed very lovely. I hugged him hard. And since I am a Virgo, I encouraged him to be clean:) Then I called taxi and we went shopping. We decided to go to the Sesame street. Rodney got a cool new haircut. And then I asked him for a dinner at a local restaurant. We ate a delicious cake and then called waitress for the bill. After the dinner we went to a lovely shop named "Clothes for you". I picked up some really kick-ass clothes for Rodney. And when he was visiting the toilet, I bought him a present. I also bought some fresh grocery. And then it was finally time to go home. I had some money left since my last promotion, so I set up a really nice room for my new child. And bought an used car. Ain't that bad, ay? I also replaced my old bed with the new and better one. I took my old bed to the animal shelter. Rodney was such a good kid. He helped me out a lot. He was attending the local school. Time flew by and suddenly it was time for Rodney's birthday. He has become such a handsome teen. I handed him my gift - a brand new mobile phone. "Thanks, mom!" Even his room looked more grown up. He was really thankful and prepared a tasty vegan stew for us. Only one thing bothered me. He was sitting ALL THE TIME in the MSN. In the nights... ...and right after the school. Did he have a girlfriend? He did not wanted to talk about it. But I was dating one guy named Leo. Well actually, we were pretty much falling in love. When I got back home and saw that Rodney was still in the MSN, I started to yell. All I got back, was silence. Soon it was time for Rodney's 18-th birthday. I hugged him hard and told him I much I care about him. When Rodney went to his b-day party at a local nightclub, I couldn't resist and invited Leo over. He had to leave soon, but we had some quality time together. I got a new job at the science career. One day when I got home, I heard some noices coming out from my bedroom and I decided to take a look. There was some action in my bed! It was RODNEY! WIth some GUY! And this guy...was LEO! "You sick bastard!!!" "GET OUT!" I was crushed. For hours. And suddenly I realized that my house was empty. Rodney had left. I ran outside to search for him. There was no-one. Where is he? Where is my child? That damn Leo!! I called the police right away. They were really fast. Officed Dean promised me to start the search for Rodney. I cannot believe all these things happened...and where is Rodney?

The Dark Side Of The Child

Jun 29, 2008 by jointhenavy
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    27 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jun 30, 2008 dunkićka wrote:

    Awsome story ! Everything was perfect until the end! That was a rael shock! \:rah\: I can't wait for another part! \:rah\: \:D

    On Jun 30, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    great! talk about a huge shock at the end! \:confused\:

    On Jun 30, 2008 jackieQ789 wrote:

    loved it thanks for sharing \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jun 30, 2008 nleslie wrote:

    Where did you get that neat bed? (that she donated to the animal shelter, haha!)

    On Jun 30, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    Hehe I liked the story. \:\) It was simple, but very funny. Keep it up! \:rah\:

    On Jun 30, 2008 jointhenavy wrote:

    Thank you all for commeting!!\:wub\:
    I got that bed from here: http://www.simsinparis.com/index.html

    On Jun 30, 2008 neo_genesis_girl wrote:

    That's a great story! I was like: le gasp!

    On Jun 30, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    wow \:\)

    On Jun 30, 2008 maryash wrote:

    love the end

    On Jun 30, 2008 wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: very good

    On Jun 30, 2008 Angela! wrote:

    \:eek\:

    On Jun 30, 2008 wrote:

    Surprising twist at the end...\:o

    It was a very funny and interesting story!\:rah\:

    On Jun 30, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:

    Nice chapter and a very shocking ending. -plyangel456- \:D

    On Jul 1, 2008 cutedazy wrote:

    \:rah\: OMG! I about fell out at the end. That's crazy!

    On Jul 1, 2008 wrote:

    \:D that wuz great keep the story coming

    On Jul 1, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:P \;\) \:D

    On Jul 1, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:

    dang....that was some desperate housewives drama right there\:rah\:

    On Jul 1, 2008 sims2sweetie wrote:

    \:eek\: wow. That was shocking! Good work mia shouldn't feel too bad about Leo-He was Fugly\;\)

    On Jul 1, 2008 FathomDesigns wrote:

    That was really great- and surprising. I see you used my fur is for petting shirt and was the grey one the tie one or the rainbow??? Can't tell...Anyway, 5.0 \:rah\: great job!

    On Jul 2, 2008 Samanthagreer wrote:

    OH MY GOSH that was a wonderful story kind of short but as they say short and SWEET!! 5.0!! \:rah\:

    On Jul 2, 2008 wrote:

    Nice story. The intro was sweet, but too long in my opinion... But the end of it was such a surprise! D8 What a psychotic family. XD

    On Jul 3, 2008 sammysoso wrote:

    WOW!What a suprise at the end!\:D \:rah\:

    On Jul 5, 2008 Kerry001 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Jul 5, 2008 kat795 wrote:

    5.0!!! I hope you continue the story!!!\:rah\:

    On Jul 5, 2008 LoveSesons wrote:

    I just LOVE it !!!!!!\:wub\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\: :P

    On Jul 17, 2008 simsaddict19 wrote:

    so good I can't wait to see where rodney is!\:rah\:

    On Sep 16, 2008 wrote:

    coooool story loved it !!!!!!!!!!! \:D

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