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Jimmy: "Hi. My name's Jimmy."

Girl: "Hey. My name's Rachelle. Rachelle Morris."

(chuckles) Let the date begin!

Jimmy: "Hi. My name's Jimmy."

Girl: "Hey. My name's Rachelle. Rachelle Morris."

(chuckles) Let the date begin! Jimmy and Rachelle talked about a lot of things. Her cooking:

Rachelle: "I'm a chef, and I can safely say I've never tasted a crepe suzette like this."

Jimmy: "Really? Thanks! And that must be so cool, being a chef."

Rachelle: "It has its perks. By the way, I apologize for my appearence. I was cooking for the lunch rush, like, five seconds ago."

Jimmy: "That's okay."

His love for movies:

Jimmy: "My favorite movie has to be Supercool."

Rachelle: "I love Supercool! I love that guy Ewan's voice, it's so cute. I could listen to him talk for hours."

Jimmy: "What about me? Could you listen to me talk for hours?"

Rachelle: "You? Not so much. (Jimmy frowns; Rachelle laughs) I'm joking." Their jobs:

Rachelle: "I just didn't want to be behind a desk all day. I wanted to have a job that keeps me busy and allows me to run around."

Jimmy: "Wow; I wanted a job where I wouldn't have to run around! (they laugh)" They watched Supercool afterwards. Evening snuck up on the two and soon it was time for Jimmy's night shift.

Rachelle: "Bye, Jimmy. I had a great time."

Jimmy: "Me too. Bye, Rachelle." The next day, after taking a nice (snickers) bubble bath-- (laughs hysterically) I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU STILL TAKE THOSE!

"Hey, shut up!"

(Wiping tears away from his eyes, still chuckling) Okay. Okay, I'm good. Anyway, after that, Rachelle called him. Jimmy: (answers the phone) Hello?

Rachelle: "Hi, Jimmy. It's Rachelle."

Jimmy: "Oh! Hi, Rachelle! (whispers) how did you hnow it was Rachelle?!"

Lucky guess.

Rachelle: "What?"

Jimmy: (abruptly) "Nothing!"

Rachelle: "Anyway, I just wanted to know, if you're not busy, of course, if you...would..."

Jimmy: "If I would..."

(awkward silence)

Both: "Go on another date with me?!" Jimmy: "Yes! I mean, (in a suave voice) yeah, sure."

Stop trying to be cool.

Jimmy: "Did I ask for your commentary?!"

Rachelle: "Who are you talking to?"

Jimmy: "Nobody."

Rachelle: "(suspiciously) Anyway, how does tomorrow sound? I know it's a bit sudden, and I understand if you already have plans, but--"

Jimmy: "No, that's fine! I'll see you at...8:00?"

Rachelle: "That's good. See you then. Bye."

Jimmy: "Bye." (hangs up). Jimmy is starting off his day with a hearty bowl of mud, which he has put on this pottery wheel, that he made me waste $1,000 for, to help him relax.

"It's called throwing pots. I've discovered its powers to calm the nerves and relax the body."

Have you ever tried listening to music? It probably relieves stress a lot better than pottery, and it makes you look like you have your own teeth and naturally brown hair.

"No, that's okay. I feel better already." (An hour later)

"Ta Da!"

(snores) Wha?

"I'm done!" Um....nice, I think. After work (he had gotten a promotion), Jimmy went to check the mailbox for bills since the flag was up. What he found was a love letter. "And it smells pretty!" (reads letter:)

For our second date,
I'll be there at 8,
Please do not be late
'Cause I cannot wait <3

Rachelle ; )

(Jimmy sighs romantically) She loves me. (Several hours later and a half hour before the date)

(Jimmy making kissing sounds)

What are you doing?

"I'm practicing."

Practicing what? The things you can do to get slapped? "Well, what do you think I should do if your so smart, Mr. Big Voice?"

Act like yourself, I guess? (nervously chuckles)

(sarcastically) "Well, that was helpful." "How do I look?"

Terrible. No, I'm just kidding, you look great. Are you going to use the cologne you got at the store?

"Yeah. Hopefully, it makes me seem more attractive."

(under breath) That would take a miracle. A second later the doorbell rang. It was Rachelle. Before Jimmy had a chance to say "I thought we were meeting up at the Blue Flamingo", she collapsed in his arms and let out a deep sigh.

Jimmy: "What's wrong?"

Rachelle: "It's a long story."

Jimmy: "Why don't you sit down and tell me about it?" Jimmy: "Do you want some coffee?"

Rachelle: "No thanks; I'm allergic to coffee beans."

Jimmy: "Wow. You don't know what you're missing." Jimmy: "So tell me, (sips coffee) what happened to get you so upset?"

Rachelle: "Well..." Rachelle: "I was living with the Tinkers, Stephen and Wanda. Their daughter, Melody, went off to college, and I was able to live in her room as a boarder. Although Steve and Wanda seemed like a really happy couple, but Wanda was paranoid about Steve's relationships with other women. She also had these random moments where she just would flip out on Steve for no good reason. I ignored it; I had to to keep a roof over my head." "Today everything changed. Wanda saw Steve kiss my hand." "She started screaming at Steve about some supposed 'secret relationship' between us (not true), and that she knew all along." "Then she slapped me, calling me a homewrecking piece of trash." "I tried to tell her that she was wrong; that there was nothing going on between us, but she insisted that Stephen and I were seeing each other behind her back." "It broke my heart to see her throw Steve out; he was innocent of her accusation." He pleaded with her for what seemed like hours, but she would not budge." "As soon as I saw him leave, I knew it was time to go." Aww! That's so sad! (sniffle) Rachelle: (stands up) "Jimmy, can I ask you a favor? Feel free to say no."

Jimmy: (stands up, makes sour face) "Were you going to ask if you can stay here until you find your own place?"

Rachelle: "Yeah. It'll only be for a couple of days." Jimmy: "Well.....Okay." Rachelle: (leaps into Jimmy's arms) "Oh, thank you soooooooo much!"

Jimmy: "No problem." To celebrate Rachelle's moving in, they watched "Supercool"... Although I don't think they were paying attention to the movie. (turns red) Okay....I'm gonna go. I feel like I'm invading their privacy.

The McKudon Legacy I: Part ii

May 28, 2008 by joker52455
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    7 Comment(s) posted so far

    On May 30, 2008 babygrl12345 wrote:

    Love it, very funny and creative!\:D

    On May 31, 2008 Carina94 wrote:

    great job

    On Jun 12, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks !\:\)

    On Jul 27, 2008 tiffanydenise69 wrote:

    nice\:D

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    [Glitterfy.com - *Glitter Words*]
    really good

    On Oct 1, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    \:D Very funny! Keep up the good work!\:rah\:

    On Oct 8, 2009 martoele wrote:

    It really is a funny story.:P

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