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Wakey, Wakey, sleepyhead!

"(groggily) Where's Rachelle?"

She's in the kitchen making you breakfast.

"Wow. She's such a good roommate."

(sighs in awe at his cluelessness) Jimmy, did you get lucky last night?

Wakey, Wakey, sleepyhead!

"(groggily) Where's Rachelle?"

She's in the kitchen making you breakfast.

"Wow. She's such a good roommate."

(sighs in awe at his cluelessness) Jimmy, did you get lucky last night? "You better believe it!"

Yeah, then she's not your roommate. You're playing by my rules; whoever you WooHoo with first you will be wit for the rest of your life. "(disappointed) what?! Aww!!!"

Don't "Aww!!!" me; I created you. You will play by MY rules, or I'll delete you. Besides, you're not the "playa" type.

"(childishly) I hate you! It's not fair!"

Who said life was fair? (panicked) OH NO!!!

"What?"

I sound like my mother!!! (walking to the kitchen) "Anyway, are they're any other rules that I must obey?"

Only one. You must keep having kids until you concieve one with your ears. That will be the true heir.

"Okay. Hopefully I'll get lucky." Rachelle: "Lucky with what?"

Jimmy: "Nothing." (A couple of hours later)

Whatcha makin'?

"I'm making an outfit for Rachelle. When she left the Tinker's, she left all her stuff there and doesn't wanna go back under any circumstan--"

That's nice. When are you proposing to Rachelle?

"(in a low voice) Yeah, about that. I don't think I wanna go trough with this."

You must! It's the rule! "I know, but what if she isn't what I thought she was? What if it turns out that I don't even know the first thing about her? (panicked) What if Rachelle isn't her real name?!"

Dude, relax! You like her, don't you?

"Yeah."

And I know she likes you. No, forget that, she LOVES you! Just go for it. "But what if she says no?"

Not to make it seem like it isn't soul crushing, but that's the worst thing that can happen.

"Okay, I'll do it. I only have one condition."

What?

"You can't watch."

Okay, that's reasonable. (eyes closed) Do it now! I'm not watching!

"Okay."

(listening)

Jimmy: "Rachelle?"

Rachelle: "Yes, Jimmy?"

Jimmy: "I know I've only known you for a couple of months, but it seems that I've fallen hard for you."

Rachelle: (hyperventilating) Yeah?

Jimmy: "I was wondering what you were doing for the rest of your life, because I know, whatever you want to do, I wanna be in it."

Rachelle: (choked up) "Oh, Jimmy."

Jimmy: "Rachelle Corrine Morris, woll you marry me?"

Rachelle: (starts crying) "Yes, of course!" Aww! Sorry this chapter was so short. I feel like such a hypocrite because I hate short chapters, but this seemed like a good place to stop. Next is the wedding!

The McKudon Legacy I: Part iii

Jun 11, 2008 by joker52455
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    8 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jun 12, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

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    On Jun 12, 2008 wrote:

    very good

    On Jun 12, 2008 wrote:

    very , very good

    On Jun 13, 2008 finsgirlie wrote:

    very good! i like the fact that there is more than one line per shot...nice job!

    On Jun 16, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

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    that was good short sweet and right to the point\:rah\:

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    On Oct 8, 2009 martoele wrote:

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