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A few weeks after the twins grew up, they blossomed into super-teenagers, each becoming an expert in different fields.

A few weeks after the twins grew up, they blossomed into super-teenagers, each becoming an expert in different fields. Sebastian's an overeachiever. He's an A+ student and has taken an internship at nursing home. According to a Citywide exam, he's one of the brightest kids in Harmona. Serena is a self-proclaimed "starving" artist, and a excellent one at that. Some of her wor has been critiqued as genius. Her work has one many awards. Don't believe me? Here's some of her work. Booker is an extraordinary musician who has mastered the violin, the piano, and the guitar. He plays anything and everything; he's even wrote some songs on his own. He's at the top of his school's Gifted Musicians Program and has played at the Harmona Amphitheater. Last, but CERTAINLY NOT least, Brenna is an outstanding chef. When it comes to cooking, she can turn a sow's ear into a mouth-watering three-course meal. Her culinary skills not only got her a job at a five-star restaurant-- she's the sous chef. It's at this time that I know I must leave you.

"Yay!"

Thanks.

"I'm just kidding. Why?"

Well, today, they pick up their scolarship money and go to college. You need to make this decision now. I'm sorry it's so sudden.

(depressed sigh) "Okay."

So who's your heir?

"I'd have to pick...... Sebastian. I'm closest to him."

Okay. Now, you must not tell him what's happening.

"Umm, okay." I should go now.

"Yeah, me too. I have to go to work."

I guess this is goodbye. "Yeah.... goodbye."

THE END

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The McKudon Legacy I: Part vii

Jul 18, 2008 by joker52455
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    13 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jul 19, 2008 Maritwatery wrote:

    OK then, here is a comment for you: That house looks very nice, did you build it yourself or where did you get it from?
    Oh and please make the stories a bit longer. It's easier to keep up with the reading then IMO. Thank you \:\)

    On Jul 19, 2008 PAP3RxH3ARTS wrote:

    Commentoid #2 : I like it , it is one of the very few legacies I enjoy, I find it hard to keep up with most , even in the 2nd generation. Yet , you have 4 kids, but I understand it completely. I love your legacy \:D

    On Jul 19, 2008 Buckeye428 wrote:

    That is a pretty sweet sweatshirt he was wearing.

    I liked the line "turn a sow's ear into a 5 course meal." you have a good sense of humor.

    Make your stories a little longer. You stories flow well and are an easy read so going a little longer won't seem like much to the reader.

    On Jul 19, 2008 redtheprep wrote:

    so goodd,,

    On Jul 19, 2008 finsgirlie wrote:

    it was kind of hard to tell who was talking when but it was a good story! \:\)

    On Jul 22, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Interesting story. Thanks for sharing. \:\) Nice house. \:cool\:

    On Jul 23, 2008 Herzen & Blasen wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Jul 23, 2008 13bleedingmascara13 wrote:

    \:\)

    On Jul 27, 2008 tiffanydenise69 wrote:

    so short r u gonna keep going or was this truly the end?????

    On Aug 2, 2008 gtsimsgirl12808 wrote:

    are you going to add more to it? and great house.\;\)

    On Aug 9, 2008 jezabela wrote:

    really good \:rah\: \:cool\:

    On Nov 14, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    Awsum story!! I love the story!! AWSUM! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: !!! woooo I'm running out of things to say AWSUM!!!!!!

    On Oct 8, 2009 martoele wrote:

    Good for you...

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