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Hey guys! Due to another game crash, I now introduce a new story - Lorelei. If anyone has some tips about preventing crashes please tell me so I could finally finish a story for once.

I wish you all happy reading,
- xoxo kanzen

Hey guys! Due to another game crash, I now introduce a new story - Lorelei. If anyone has some tips about preventing crashes please tell me so I could finally finish a story for once.

I wish you all happy reading,
- xoxo kanzen “…as we both look up the stars; I could feel his hands tightening its grip around mine. His breath, overwhelming…near, as it tickled the back of my neck. It was there and then, I knew that he would pro –“ …RING! RING! RING!

Stupid clock had no other use but to ruin people’s dreams! “What a wake up call,” says a very tired Zinnia. “I was in the middle of dreaming!”
 It was 8:45 am when the clock rang. It took about four snoozes to get poor, dozing Zinnia to get on her feet. The ring we just stumbled into was the fifth. “Why am I getting up early again?” She tried to recall in a rather complaining tone. “Right…got it…coffee first, then that.” After a quick shower, getting her paper, coffee and morning news, Zinnia checked her office at the basement to see if she had forgotten anything. The office was messy as usual, all filled with pending works. As well as her ‘supposed to be novels’ that never really reached their end; let alone a chapter three. “I guess I’ll have less time when Scott gets here,” she mumbled to herself with a sigh. “…can’t be helped. The little bugger’s got nowhere else to go.”

…RING! RING! RING!

“Ugh! What now?” She bursts out of frustration. Obviously she had enough of rings for one day. She picked up the phone. “Hello, Miyazama residence…” “What’s taking you? It’s 9:00 am!” A familiar voice shouted from the other line. “Hey, I just woke up, give me at least a couple more minutes. Have you eaten?” She asked, in attempt to quickly change the subject. “Yeah, got tired and hungry. I’m at old man Pop’s diner, near the bus station.” “Alright, alright I’ll be there to pick you up.” Fueled with coffee and an early morning shouting, she marched out the door and got into her car, checked the time once more; 9:03 am. “Plane arrives at seven, so Scott must be at the local bus terminal by eight.” She thought to herself with slight irritation to her own failures. “Hehe, the kid must be really mad at me right now.” She said with a chuckle and shrug. Once she arrived at Old Man Pop’s Diner, Zinnia looked all over and there she found a hint of blonde - Scott. It was obvious why she chose Old Man Pop’s despite that it’s expensive – it had Scott’s favorite home cooking. “Hey, baby sis. I’m really sorry,” she apologized before her sister bursts out first. “I didn’t get any good sleep lately and...” “Have YOU eaten?” Scott asked, totally dismissing her sister’s apology. “N-no. I just got up remember?” Without a word, Scott called the waiter and ordered a breakfast platter for her sister. “I’m loaded, just for today. You’re paying me back tomorrow.” She said as she faced her sister. “Yeah, alright, I’m sorry.” Zinnia said with a smile. “I miss mom’s cooking too.” On their way home they fought and argued – naturally. But all the bickering stopped when they arrived at Zinnia’s place. It was the first house she drew on her drawing board that turned into wood, brick and concrete – beautiful and dear to her. My eldest daughter, Zinnia – artist, sculptor, novelist and architect, was her father’s favorite. She was beautiful, talented and smart. Short tempered and lazy from time to time but she gets through. And my second daughter Scott – pessimistic and a little rebellious, she’s smart too but a little reserved. Her father didn’t favor her much since she’s always causing trouble, and somewhat gender-confused.

Shame I’m not in the living world anymore to comfort them. But I’m here to at least tell you this story...

Lorelei

May 6, 2009 by kanzen
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    25 Comment(s) posted so far

    On May 6, 2009 atangki wrote:

    Good start. \:\)

    On May 6, 2009 shaml_sim wrote:

    Great! \:D  Looking forward to the next chapter, a 5.0 from me \:cool\:

    On May 6, 2009 CamCo9 wrote:

    That was really good! \:\) CamCo9 x

    On May 6, 2009 Crazy_doodle wrote:

    Really Good! She has a really nice house \:\)

    On May 7, 2009 fionaivri wrote:

    I liked it! \:D

    On May 7, 2009 Yukosan wrote:

    5.0 Excellent start, can't wait to read more! and if your game crashes a lot, ( i don't really know what causes it, sorry ]; ) you could try saving the game often to keep from losing all your work? Just a suggestion, but once again, sweet story.

    On May 7, 2009 kanzen wrote:

    thanks for all the comments and help on my game crash ^^ Lorelei - I is submitted and may be up on the site tomorrow ^^

    On May 7, 2009 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    Really like this story I can't wait to read what happens next! LoL I was expecting Scott to be a guy, wow did that totally surprise me when you said she! Great story! I hope you'll b able to finish it all \:\) With your game crashes I'll gb you in a minute\:\) Luv the story 5!!

    On May 8, 2009 candy820 wrote:

    Great story. Waiting for the next part.

    On May 9, 2009 Nadakio wrote:

    Nice start. Keep it up! \:rah\:

    On May 9, 2009 UniqueSimplicity wrote:

    very interesting start. can't wait for the next part \:\)

    On May 9, 2009 MJxo wrote:

    Great story\;\)

    On May 10, 2009 jarlet wrote:

    wow, very great start and pics!I'm very curious what happens next! once again it was excellent!\:D

    On May 11, 2009 kayleesimsneros wrote:

    Well done! I love it! \:wub\:

    On May 11, 2009 gamelia wrote:

    Wow, nice story. I don't read many, but this is good. You have talent! And Zinnia is very pretty. \:D -gamelia

    On May 11, 2009 kanzen wrote:

    thanks ^^
     
    oh and btw, the next part is taking a long time to get uploaded TT^TT the third's a mother's day special but unfortunately due to the site's problems it didn't make it - well, please enjoy it even if it's super late DX

    On May 12, 2009 kanzen wrote:

    Note: STORY MOVED TO SIMS COMMUNITY FORUM.

    On May 13, 2009 cep1247 wrote:

    great chapter can't wait to read the next!

    On May 13, 2009 charray wrote:

    Great start! 5.0. Can't wait for more.

    On May 13, 2009 raaawr!_x wrote:

    carry on pleasee (:

    On May 24, 2009 roxycena wrote:

    Hey...about your "game crashes" if you have downloaded game mods from modthesims2.com it could be from them....I've had some problems too...They're not all compatible with my game so I had to delete one of them...And by the way,amazing story!5.0

    On Jun 2, 2009 Mangio wrote:

    Hope your game doesnt crash. Great story. I want to know more about her story.

    On Jul 1, 2009 DJ cicus wrote:

    That was brilliant! I`ll read the rest of the story sometime \:\) That house was really beautiful!

    On Jul 2, 2009 fredbrenny wrote:

    I read this first part. Great screens! The rest I'll read tomorrow...have a lot of catching up to do on my own guestbook...Love the story! 5.0!\:rah\:

    On Oct 29, 2009 martoele wrote:

    Yes, your other story made me wonder how this one will be and by reading this first chapter I know I'll be finishing the whole story...\:\)

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