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I'm sorry that it's such a short story but I hope you like it and I'll try to get part three out within a week or so. Please comment and give some critisizm
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On Feb 17, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Feb 17, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
On Feb 18, 2008 wrote:
I think its a good story line- but a little jumpy- just dosent flow the best, but it truly is an interesting story line! and i love the alien babies!
On Mar 4, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote:
cute story cute babies